Holiday Revenge | By : PhoenixInnocence Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male > Naruto/Sasuke Views: 2762 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 2 |
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or it's characters. I make no profit from this story. |
I don't own Naruto and I make no profit from this story.
Thanks to all of you that reviewed! ^_^ Unfortunately I had so many reviews that to respond to all of you would cause me to go over my author's note character limit. I've responded to each review on my forum page, the link will be at the end of the story. This story is beta'd by the amazing MisatosPenPen. Thank you ^_^There was a numbing sense of pain, dull and faint; like it almost wasn’t there. What was most prevalent was the sense of shock. Sasuke heard Naruto say ok and watched him leave, but he couldn’t believe it. He didn’t want to believe it. Today, of all days, wasn’t meant to end this way.
“Sasuke?” Sasuke turned, just realizing it was raining as he blinked droplets from his eyes. Shikamaru and Ino were standing there, clothes beginning to soak through with rain and the most puzzling look on their faces. “Sasuke?” Shikamaru repeated. “H-huh?” Sasuke asked, his voice quivering. “Are you ok? What happened?” Sasuke shook his head, staring momentarily down the street where Naruto had disappeared. He couldn’t answer, because he didn’t really know what just happened. ‘Naruto said ok’, he thought to himself. But it didn’t make sense. Why would he say ok? “Sasuke?” Ino all but shouted. Sasuke shook his head distractedly, mumbling, “I have to go.” Ino and Shikamaru watched Sasuke walk away, Shikamaru’s hand around Ino’s elbow, stopping her from following. “Let him go,” he said. Ino bit her lip, worried. “What has Sakura done?” she whispered. “I don’t know.” “Well, I’m going to find out!” she snapped. “You can call Itachi and warn him.” Shikamaru was already ahead of her, his phone to his ear waiting for the pick-up. ‘Hello’, Itachi answered. “Sasuke just left school; without Naruto.” There was a moment of silence while the meaning sunk in, followed by a soft sigh. ‘What’s happened?’ “Sakura,” Shikamaru replied. The phone clicked, but not before he heard Itachi’s response, ‘damn’.
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