Hypnosis | By : Saitochan Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female Views: 23505 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 3 |
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Woo-hoo! Reviews, sweet, sweet reviews! I just can't get enough of them. I'm really glad you've liked this story so far, and believe me, it gets even better. As I said before, there's going to be four girls in the story (or maybe five, if I can think of something really sexy to do with Shizune). They will be Anko, Ino, Sakura and Temari. Hmm... well, maybe not exactly in that order. And please don't hate me for all those cliffhangers... I just figured they keep you guys coming back for more :P
Concerning the whole Jutsu/Technique thing... How perceptive! I didn't really think anyone would notice that tiny detail. I don't really know about you guys, but I find the regressive count-and-pendulum-induced hypnosis unbearably dull, so I decided to throw in a much simpler and faster way to hypnotize people. It may be less orthodox, but I find it really plausible (though not in the real world, of course), and besides, it helps me keep the storyline flowing steadily, instead of writing a dull paragraph along the lines of: "Your eyelids feel heavy... your body feels numb... when I count to ten you'll fall into a deep trance..." Am I right? What do you guys think?
Finally, I can't believe nobody thought of a story like this before. I mean, it's not so far-fetched, is it? Well, at least I'm happy I was able to come up with something no one has ever done before. Enjoy!
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Hypnosis
Chapter 5 - Trial, error and Checkmate
There was a reason Anko had been acting strangely. Why she had pressed her body against his, why she had ran her hands over his toned chest, and why she had said all those teasing words and sexual remarks. Though it was impossible for Shikamaru to know, the purple-haired ninja walking next to him had been sex-starved for weeks, mainly since most men considered her way too wild to handle, and even the most trained shinobi had trouble keeping up with her. Shikamaru was about to learn (the hard way) that while she might not be the most powerful kunoichi ever, Anko wasn't someone to be taken lightly, especially when it came to sexual affairs.
Both Chuunin walked to a nearby park, which was all but deserted due to the late hour. Shikamaru motioned for the kunoichi to sit down on a bench, and then stood in front of her. "So, what's this technique all about?" asked Anko curiously. From the moment she had learned about the special techniques of the Nara family, she had been absolutely fascinated by their ability to control shadows at will, and she was always entranced by the shadow's fluid and silent movement when she got to see the Jutsu in action. Anko's interest was growing, as she was hoping Shika's new technique was as interesting as his family special ability. And knowing Shikamaru, this had to be one hell of a Jutsu to make Konohagakure's laziest ninja get off his ass to practice it.
"Well, it's rather hard to explain" began Shikamaru. He couldn't just tell her he was going to begin tinkering with her mind, but he couldn't leave her in the dark either, even if his knowledge about the matter was still very limited. "I guess it's sort of like a Genjutsu. I haven't tried it on anyone yet, but I think I already got the hang of it" said the shadow shinobi as he took a deep breath and prepared himself. *OK, here goes...*
"I need you to relax and clear your mind" he said as he began focusing his chakra, and after giving Anko a few seconds to do as he said, Shikamaru kneeled in front of her. "Now, look into my eyes..." He said in barely more than a whisper, as his jet-black orbs met her dark-brown ones. Then, quick as lightning and making use of all his chakra-controlling skills, Shikamaru shot a little of his own chakra from his eyes into hers, just like Genkaku had taught him to. As soon as his chakra reached her brain, the shadow shinobi used it to shut off Anko's consciousness according to the foreigner's teachings, though it took him some effort to do so.
Afraid her lack of consciousness would render her body totally limp and she'd fall to the ground, Shikamaru shot forward to hold Anko, but much to his surprise, besides her muscles relaxing a little more than they already had, the purple-haired Chuunin closed her eyes and remained sitting as if nothing had happened.
After checking she was really unconscious, the Nara Nin took an instant to savor the triumph he had accomplished. He had just hypnotized someone! If he had succeeded at this with only a few hours of teaching, who knows what he could achieve by the end of the week? A very unusual feeling rose inside Shikamaru, as his usual laziness was crushed by his sense of accomplishment and his overwhelming desire to master Genkaku's technique.
However, that instant of triumph was short-lived, as it suddenly dawned on Shikamaru he had not yet learned what to do next. What if there was a special method to wake up hypnotized subjects? What if he couldn't wake Anko up? Should he go to Genkaku and ask him to undo his mistake? That would be pretty much telling him he had used his teachings without his permission, and who knows how his sensei or the Hokage could react to this. *Damn it Shika, get a hold of yourself* he scolded himself as he tried not to panic. *There must be a way to sort this out. I must think, I must remember...*
Joining his hands in his usual thinking position, Shikamaru tried hard to remember what little he knew of hypnosis. He scanned his memories concerning Genkaku's tiring lesson, his warning before he began with the teaching, and finally, what he had managed to learn from spying on the Hokage and her lover. After a little thinking and hypothesizing, the shadow shinobi had regained his cool and was ready to try and get out his problem. He couldn't just admit a mistake this big to his sensei right after the first lesson, so he was going to learn through trial and error. Not the safest way, but much better than confessing.
Remembering the way Genkaku had spoken to the Hokage while she was unconscious, Shikamaru spoke clearly and firmly, hoping he wouldn't make yet another mistake. "Mitarashi Anko" he said. "Can you hear me?"
A simple "Yes" was all she said, but the Nara Nin felt a great relief wash through him when Anko's lips moved and her voice, though deprived of the kunoichi's usually cheerful tone, reached his ears. *Sigh... that's good, at least I didn't turn her into a vegetable* thought Shikamaru as he considered his next move.
*I wonder if I can order her to do something like Genkaku did?* thought Shikamaru. There was only one way to find out. "Anko, could you... raise you right hand? Please?" he said tentatively, and the hypnotized kunoichi lost no time obeying. "OK, now put it down" said the shadow Nin with a little more confidence.
For the following five minutes or so, the black-haired Chuunin experimented by giving Anko various commands, starting by the most basic things like standing up, opening her eyes and walking, up to the more difficult ones, like controlling her chakra to walk up a tree or hitting a target from afar with a kunai. After a while, Shikamaru had a pretty good idea of how much control he had over Anko. *This is awesome!* he thought with glee as the purple-haired kunoichi made a perfect bull's-eye from a really considerable distance in the target he had prepared.
After a bit more experimenting, Shikamaru realized he could give conditional commands ("When I clap my hands, you will jump on you left foot"), and as he remembered Genkaku had done and undone the Hokage's trance with a mere snapping of his fingers, the Nara Nin began to consider the possibility of giving permanent commands. *Now, if he could hypnotize the Hokage with just snapping of his fingers, then maybe...*
"Alright, sit down on the bench" he said while he stopped clapping and the hypnotized kunoichi stopped jumping. Once she sat down, Shikamaru wondered if he could induce her trance through a permanent command, like Genkaku had done. That would certainly make things much easier, should he ever need Anko to do something for him.
It had to be something simple, something he could easily remember, yet not simple enough for her to fall into trance by accident. A pleased smile crept over Shika's face as he thought of something. *Right now, she's at my mercy. If this was a game of shougi, I'd say...*
Pleased with his choice, he opened his mouth and said: "Now Anko, every time I, Nara Shikamaru tell you the word 'checkmate', you will fall into a deep trance". He figured it was safe enough, since it wasn't a word heard too often, and if she was hypnotized only when he said so, the chances of Anko falling into trance by accident were cut down to a minimum. *Ok, now I have to wake her up to see if it worked*
Mimicking the words Genkaku had used to awake the blonde Hokage, the black-haired Chuunin prepared to wake up Anko. "Now, when I count to three and snap my fingers, you are going to wake up. Are you ready? One... Two... Three..." Shikamaru snapped his fingers and Anko blinked a few times before regaining her consciousness.
She looked at him in expectation, and said: "Well? Are you doing this technique of yours or what?" An amused smile crept over Shikamaru's face. Was it possible she didn't remember anything? "Come on, let's get this done quickly so we can go dancing" said the purple-haired kunoichi impatiently.
The shadow shinobi let out a chuckle. "Well, well, aren't you an impatient one" he said with an amused tone he rarely used. "Don't worry, I'm almost done. I need you to tell me what you felt"
Anko looked at his in surprise. "What I felt?" she asked simply. Shikamaru nodded. "I already used my technique on you, so I need you to tell me anything you remember about the last five minutes". Anko closed her eyes while she tried to remember, and with a little effort, little fragments of Shikamaru's distant voice and flashes of her own body moving on its own came to her. It wasn't much, since she couldn't remember the Nara's exact words, and the images were so distant and blurry they seemed more like a dream than anything else, but she still told the shadow shinobi everything she remembered.
"Hmm. Good" mumbled the black-haired Chuunin. Now that he knew her trance had been similar to a dreaming state, he had other things to check. "Alright Anko, I'm almost done. Please stand up" he said plainly, and when she was on her feet, Shikamaru clapped his hands. Anko jumped on her left foot, just as expected, but since the command to do so came from deep within her own mind, her body's reaction to the clapping didn't seem strange to her.
The lazy Chuunin felt like laughing out loud. This whole thing seemed too good to be true. As Anko shot him an impatient glare, he smiled at her and said, almost apologetically: "Don't worry. I only need to test one last thing and we can be on our way. Could you please sit down again?" The purple-haired kunoichi was getting tired of Shika's attitude, ordering her around without any explanation and smiling and chuckling whenever she did something. She sat down and as she looked at him with a slight annoyance in her eyes. "Hey, would you mind giving me a little explanation? I'm growing tired of acting as your little guinea pig"
"Don't worry" answered Shikamaru with a smirk. "I'll explain everything in its due time. But in the meantime... Checkmate". Once again, Anko's body relaxed and her eyes closed while she fell into a deep trance. The shadow shinobi allowed himself to laugh as he felt once again a sense of accomplishment wash over him. *Well, I don't see what's with all the mystery around this. This hypnosis thing is actually rather easy* he thought with confidence as he stared at Anko.
After a few moments of enjoying the success of his little experiments, Shikamaru sighed. "Well, a promise is a promise..." he said as he prepared himself to wake Anko up and let her take him dancing. He would have preferred not to, since it was unlikely she'd take a no for an answer, especially after agreeing to help him practice the hypnosis. However, as Shikamaru was giving the order for her to wake up when he snapped his fingers, a sudden thought popped up in his brain.
There was absolutely no reason for him to go dancing when he could convince Anko to do something else. After all, he was the one in control right now. But... what could he do to make her forget about the dancing? Could he order Anko to forget something?
After a few seconds of thought, Shikamaru decided that, no matter how easy it seemed, or how much he had advanced in a single day, if he was going to play with someone's memory, he should at least get some practice first. Surely, Genkaku could tell him the right way to do it, so there was no need to do something so reckless.
While Shikamaru continued to think about his next order, he slowly realized that all of Anko's sexual teasing, along with what he'd seen between Tsunade and her lover had caught up with him. He hadn't even noticed when it happened, but his cock had hardened so much it was difficult to ignore, and all the sexual stimuli of the day had left his whole body aching for release. And of course, having a sexy kunoichi under his complete control helped fill his mind with rather naughty thoughts.
Doing his best to fight his urges, the shadow Nin glanced at the hypnotized Anko, sitting calmly just a few feet from him. For an instant, Shikamaru relished the thought of having his way with the unconscious kunoichi, but he quickly cast that thought away. Doing such a thing would be dishonorable, not to mention what Anko could do if she ever found out he took advantage of her while she was totally helpless. But... maybe there was another way.
When he first thought of hypnotizing Anko, the only thing on his mind was to win some time and avoid going dancing with her. But now she was at his mercy, ready to follow his every order, and before he knew it, a wicked plan had already formed in his mind. Just a simple order, and there wasn't even anything sexual about it. But whatever happened afterwards was up to the purple-haired woman.
Licking his lips in anticipation, Shikamaru began to speak. "Anko? Do you hear me?" The kunoichi gave a soft 'yes' as all reply, and the black-haired Chuunin felt a lump form in his throat as he tried to carry out his plan. After a deep breath to calm his nerves, he finally got the courage to speak up. "Anko, listen to me. When you wake up... you will think that I, Nara Shikamaru, am the sexiest man in the whole world". There, he said it.
*Alright, it's done* thought Shika as he finished talking. *And now, to see the results... Here goes...* He slowly raised his right hand and after counting to three, he snapped his fingers. Just as she was told to, Anko woke up and blinked a few times as she looked around.
Shikamaru was nervous. Had his command worked? What was going to happen now? No way to know. As Anko glanced around, he felt his own heart beat so hard he feared she would hear it, and of course, he could also feel another part of his body beating and throbbing with the same rhythm. When Anko finally turned to see him, she took more than a few seconds to run her eyes up and down his body. As he tried to relax and look much like he always did, calm and a little bored, Shikamaru was able to notice the way her expression slowly changed.
After watching him in silence for a while, her eyes had acquired a strange gleam and her face expressed something he just couldn't place. It wasn't the cheerful expression he had seen earlier when she decided to go dancing. No, she was staring at him differently this time, kind of like when she began teasing him; an expression both of playfulness and of a predator having found a prey. *Alright, whatever happens, happens* thought the shadow Nin as he spoke once again.
"OK, I'm done" he told Anko with a casual voice. "You still want to go to the disco, right?" As if she had been lost in her own thoughts, the purple haired ninja blinked dumbly a few times and then nodded, but not a single word left her lips.
Shikamaru let out a sigh of defeat, though he was smiling to himself. Anko wasn't one to run out of words, ever. Her silence was a clear sign that something about her had just changed. "And I'm guessing nothing I say will change your mind, am I right?" said the shadow shinobi holding back his enthusiasm and acting bored like he usually did.
After a few seconds of silently considering Shika's question, Anko gave out a soft chuckle. "Well kid, I don't know about you, but going to the disco doesn't seem such an appealing plan to me anymore" she said with a soft voice, somehow deprived of much of the joviality and cheer she normally spoke with, but filled with something dark and mesmerizing, a hint of lust and desire. "Want to reconsider going out for a drink?"
"Well, you just said it yourself. I'm still a kid" said the shadow shinobi while he crossed his arms and a tiny smirk crept up his face. It seemed his plan had worked. Now all that remained was to determine just how much he had achieved, and of course, how much he could enjoy himself while finding out. "I doubt there's a bar in Konoha where underage ninja are allowed to drink"
The devilish smile that Anko gave him was enough to send a chill down his spine. "You know, there's no need to go to a bar" she said while standing up and walking closer to Shikamaru. "I got some booze at my place" Both ninja stared at each other for a while, one expectantly and the other disbelievingly. "So, what do you say? You up for it?" said Anko at last. Shikamaru smirked. How could he refuse?
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Oh, crap! Another chapter and still no lemons! But don't worry, they'll come, I just need to focus and get my writing mojo working.
Anyway, sorry for making this chapter shorter than the other ones, and for not having any action on it, but I figured I'd post it now to keep you guys hooked up while I gather my ideas... though it might take a while. Oh well. Next chapter will have lemons! Hooray! Wait patiently for it!
Thanks for reading!
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