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Disclaimer: *a
record playing device reads out the disclaimer while the author is in a fierce
fist-fight with the estranged muse*

Chapter Summary:
And so, another long-winded conversation with the enigmatic Kyuubi is in store for Naruto.
More Kyuubi/Naru!

~~

He was back here again. That depressing
chamber of his mind. Naruto stood up and placed
his hands akimbo, not minding his nudity this time.

�Bastard fox! I would like to get
some sleep y�know!�

No-one answered him but his own echo, Naruto frowned, looking around his surroundings. And like
last time, he couldn�t see shit. He was still standing in a weakly-lit circle
and there seemed to be absolutely nothing but a black void beyond his feet.

But�it felt somewhat different. Obscure darkness still
surrounded him and it appeared to be pulsating, charged with some form of energy
as if it were alive. Feeling a small spark of alarm within him, Naruto strained his ears in an attempt to hear whether there
was anyone next to him. All he could catch were the sound of dripping water and
after that, an industrial noise of distant metal clanking against each other.
The eerie combination caused the alarm to increase, uncomfortably twisting his
stomach into knots.

Drip. Drip.

�Demon! Where are you!�

Clank. Clank.

�I�m really not in the mood to deal with your bullshit!�

Nothing. It was truly unnerving.
Unconsciously he hugged himself and childishly wished for a blanket to huddle
underneath. Long, arduous moments trickled by and Naruto refused to settle onto the nondescript floor. He
continued to stand there, occasionally scuffling his feet before raising a leg.
Gingerly he stuck one big toe out into the unknown as if testing whether the
water was hot enough. Immediately the teenager pulled his foot back, fearful
that dark was going to leap out and bite him. How embarrassing for his ninja
pride.

There it was. The muted sounds of
footsteps. They stopped for a second and started again, drawing
closer.

�The metal effects are probably the workings of the cogs in
your little brain,� Said the booming voice that reverberated in all
directions.

The footsteps carried on, bare soles slapping onto the cold
surface and Naruto felt a tad triumphant when he could
pinpoint their location. The fox was encircling him, it seemed. Moving from his left before halting behind him.

�What now?� Naruto demanded
tersely. �What game are you going to play this time around?�

�No game,� the fox answered smoothly. �So I take it my little
advice worked?�

�Gah, you tell me. You were there
butting in and telling me what to do the whole time. Probably jerking off like
the pervert you are.�

The creature sounded a little incredulous. �Did you not enjoy
it?�

The blond closed his eyes briefly, trying to stop the guilt
from overtaking his face. What was the use, the demon knew exactly what he was
thinking. Guilty pleasure to the maximum.

�Was it not what you wanted?�

�Don�t you know how bad I felt each time he kept calling me
slut?!� Naruto shouted, twisting around to direct his
words into the blackness where Kyuubi was supposedly
standing. �Do you think I want him to use me like some�some fuck toy or
something?�

�Were you complaining?� How the hell did the demon manage to
get in front of him?! �I was prompting you that one time. You could have just
ignored me like you usually do but instead you followed your precious Sasuke�s game. Did it not work? Did he not touch you?�

�And that fucking hickey! Who told
you to give me that hickey!� The screeching ensued. �How dare you-�

Clank!

The unexpectedly loud sound of two metal pieces colliding
against each other raced through the chamber like a thunderclap, effectively
silencing the boy.

�That fucking hickey, as you so eloquently put it, was the
catalyst,� the demon hissed vehemently. �If I had not generously provided you
with it then he would not have acted like he did.�

Naruto�s fingers dug into his arms
painfully and swore under his breath, stubbornly keeping his gaze downcast. �I�m
not a slut. I haven�t even kissed anyone. Properly I mean. All the girls find me
revolting or something. No-one ever takes me seriously. It�s either Uzumaki the dunce or Uzumaki the
demon-fox.� He sighed, now talking in a saddened whisper. �He�s right you know?
I�m nothing. I don�t deserve to be loved. Maybe I should let him use me and
throw me away �cause it�s probably the most I�m going
to get from him. Abuse still counts as some form of attention, right? Or do
everyone a favour and jump off a cliff.�

The Nine-Tails expressed its disapproval of Naruto�s defeated speech by slapping the boy in the face in
the oddest of manners. There was a �swoosh� and a concentrated burst of air
hit Naruto�s cheek with the full force of a gale. The
demon began to snarl, contempt lacing each word.

�You are pathetic, brat. Weak. Cowardly. Do you honestly think that I enjoy being trapped
inside you for the remaining of my existence? Imagine! The great Kyuubi no Kitsune wasted after its
human vessel decided to commit suicide. How
humiliating!�

The ninja had fallen to his knees, hand against one stinging
cheek in disbelief while the demon continued to lash out with its verbal tirade.

�I refuse! I refuse to be killed just because YOU cannot
handle the pressure. The world is definitely not all peaches and cream. You, out
of all people, should know that by now. Because of me, you have the potential to
become the most powerful shinobi in the lands. Fine! I
can tolerate you wishing to protect this village. But
why? Why?! They have given you nothing but grief since you were born. To
this day, the reason still eludes me. But what I will not tolerate is your self-pitying. I will NOT tolerate being trapped in a
self-pitying, weak vessel. The Uchiha is right. You
are too emotional.�

�I�m human, damnit!� Naruto cried out miserably. He was trembling, squeezing his
eyes shut so he wouldn�t give the demon the satisfaction of seeing him weep.
After a second of successful restrain, he tiredly pressed his thumb and index
finger against the bridge of his nose, warding off an upcoming headache. �How do
you expect me to feel? I�m not like you. I actually have a heart!�

Engulfed in darkness, the demon�s voice sniggered cruelly.
�That is one of your biggest shortcomings. Your humanity.� A
pause. �Here.�

Something was tossed at him where it landed with a dull thud
next to his right kneecap. The blond stared blankly at the small object. He
blinked once. Then twice.

�It�s a doll,� he said stupidly. �Of
Sakura.�

Indeed it was a rag doll of his female teammate, quite
well-made and adorable as such, held together with dainty crisscrossing
stitches.

�Your brilliant powers of deduction never cease to amaze me,�
the demon commented dryly.

Naruto chose not to answer back.
Instead, he picked up the toy and carefully turned it around in his hands,
studying it with a raised eyebrow. �So�how will this help me? Do I give it to
Sakura to appease her and hope she forgives me for calling her a bitch? Isn�t
she a bit too old to play with dolls�I think?�

�You fool. No, this item is not for that girl with the
nauseating pink hair. Personally, I thought you did rather well with your little
outburst earlier today so this is to congratulate you. Think of it as something
to aid your tiresome predicament.�

The bewildered teenager held the doll up high in the air by
its delicate mitten-like hand. �So it�s for me? Kyuubi, tell me, have you completely lost your mind?�

The same arm that was poised expectantly above his head
holding the doll was grasped by the wrist, without warning whatsoever. The
rag-doll was dropped. He was flung face-down from the force before the invisible
pull dragged him out of the safe circle of light and straight into the black
obscurity. The cool floor began to burn the side of his ribcage from the excess
friction, earning more than a few foul curses. He then collided with
something�or rather someone who caught him quickly.

When Naruto managed to gather his
bearings once more, he discovered that he was nestled snugly against that same
someone. Thighs flanked his waist, arms wrapped around his shoulders
securely.

�Fox�?� he ventured, lifting his cheek where it had been
resting against a bare chest.

�Yes�the fox.� Its voice had again filtered down to that
satin, male tone

�What the hell was that? Couldn�t you have just gone over
there instead of dragging me over here like a sack of potatoes? And I can�t see
anything!�

�Mmm, but I like it like this.�

It was�too dark. It hurt his eyes as they attempted to
accustom themselves to some form of illumination. He couldn�t even see the body
he was cuddled up against; everything was so black. Not even Sasuke�s eyes were like that- if he looked at them from a
certain angle, he could spot a gleam of shadowy grey reflect off the irises.
Blindly, he looked around for at least something to focus on but there was
nothing. The previous spotlight had vanished and now dots of undetermined colouring began to dance dizzyingly before his vision. He
gave up and just shut his eyes to numb the aching.

�But...I can�t see you. I want to see what you look like as a
person, not a fox. All I�ve seen is your arms,� the blond grumbled.

�Oh�? Piqued your curiosity has it?� A soft
chuckle. �Soon, my darling little mortal.�

Naruto pouted and reached up,
fingertips touching a collarbone. He moved his arm to the right, in hopes of
finding a face. The Nine-Tails stopped him by clamping down on his wrist with
its own hand, bringing it back down slowly. �Not now. Later I will allow
you.�

Naruto was not pleased.
Sarcastically and unsuccessfully, he mimicked a heavy, clipped accent. �So,
O�Great One. What words of wisdom will you part with,
this time?�

�Do not mock me,� the immortal entity snapped.

Well, fine! The ninja fell silent and with an irritated sigh,
let his head drop against the other�s chest. He sniffed. Funny, the demon had no
scent whatsoever. But it was warm and he was comfortable. And he was feeling
rather sleepy; the closed eyelids made sure of that. It felt so nice to be
snuggled up in someone�s arms like that�even if the arms did belong to the bane
of his existence. It felt�strange, for he had never been snuggled, but still
nice.

�So what�s up with that doll huh?�

�That is something to help with my plan. I am going to
experiment with something and I do not need that Haruno girl in the picture. So I have a trick up my
sleeve.�

Naruto frowned. Sakura was like a
sister to him, despite her faults and he would do anything to protect her. He
growled out warningly. �Fox�if you hurt her in any way�.�

�I assure you�� Confident fingers brushed through his ruffled
hair, smoothing the strands down reassuringly. �In all honesty, I would have
liked to disembowel her and feast on the still steaming entrails�but with you in
control, I cannot. Unless you give me permission, that is. Now, what I am
suggesting is applying a little ancient magic with the doll.�

�Eh?�

�It is a special technique lost through the ages. No harm
will befall her but it will detain her from ruining things.�

�But what does that have to do with a doll?� Naruto asked uncomprehendingly.

�I will show you later.�

He would have noticed something suspicious in the demon�s
words about that so-called plan and experiment but was swiftly distracted by the
fingers stroking his hair. Enshrouded in darkness, he could only rely on
physical touch and his sharp sense of hearing.

�My poor, poor child. Remember, that
whatever happens in the future, I will be always here to comfort you. I will
help you and advise your every step. Put your trust in me. After all, not only
am I looking after my own wellbeing but yours as well.�

Kyuubi�s haunting, seductive voice was lulling him into a
pleasing feeling of security. He welcomed it; even if it was all taking place
from within his mind. By now he didn�t care. It soothed the normal maelstrom of
his troubled thoughts and left him with blissful emptiness.

�I am pleased with today�s progress,� the fiend said after a
few thick moments of silence. Pointed nails lightly scratched the small of Naruto�s back, causing him to moan appreciatively. �I take
it the next step is to teach you the finer points of fellatio?�

�What�s fellatio?� the boy murmured against the hairless skin
of the demon�s chest.

�What you call a blowjob,� was Kyuubi�s slightly exasperated clarification.

�Oh �okay...� A brief pause. �Come
again?�

The demon chose not to reply. Instead, it shifted Naruto�s position in its arms. The teenager found himself reclining backwards on the demon�s spread, naked lap.
And then did he realize their nudity. Again. How could
he have missed that glaringly obvious factor?!

�Fox� what are you up to now�?� Naruto half-groaned, not relishing the possible consequences
that could, no scratch that, would be brought up afterwards.

�My, do not be suspicious of me. I am going to give you a
verbal lesson on oral pleasure.�

�Why would I need to be taught that? Why are you such a
pervert?!�

�Why not? You will need to be
somewhat experienced with the Uchiha. More
importantly, this is something to pass my time. It is amusing seeing you squirm
like a fish out of water when you are aroused,� was the demon-fox�s cool
response. �Now�lay back and let your imagination take control. I will explain
the main points in-�

�So you�re going to talk about how to give a blowjob? You�re
not going to show me? Gee, you really do like hearing yourself talk don�t you?�
Naruto retorted sassily, suddenly having a desire to
prance around boasting how he had gotten a blowjob from the mighty Kyuubi.

A poorly stifled snort of frustration came from the creature.

�Demons as great as me do not orally stimulate insignificant,
pathetic humans such as yourself, brat. It is insulting to our pride. As for you
practicing on me�I am not in the mood for sloppiness, gag-reflexes and scraping
teeth. Perhaps one day I will oblige you�after impressing me with destroying a
village or two and plenty of experience from the Uchiha. Right now, you definitely did not earn the
privilege.�

One arm was wrapped around Naruto�s
torso while the other slithered down to playfully pull at the wiry curls
stemming below his navel. He chewed on his bottom lip and allowed his head to
drop back against the demon�s shoulder. �Please tell me you�re going to finish
the job this time. I hate waking up with morning wood and cold showers just
don�t cut it anymore.�

�Just shut up and listen! I can just leave it like this and
let you make a fool of yourself like you always do!�

�So you�re actually training me to be Sasuke�s sex toy?! Where�s this so-called pride of yours?
Fuck man, dress me up in nipple tassels and a g-string
while you�re at it eh?�

The claws momentarily tightened on the ninja�s pubic hair as
a warning, causing his eyebrow to twitch. The demon�s voice was softly hissing
again like an angry snake, short puffs of breath hitting his ear with each
sentence.

�Do not even dare compare yourself to
me. Forget your morals, boy. Forget honour. And
most of all forget your idealistic romantic notions of a happy ending. Life is a
ruthless game and as a human, you will have to fight dirty to survive. Even if it means pretending to be a whore to the Uchiha for your pitiful conquest. Be grateful that I
am helping you or else you probably would have remained a sobbing, suicidal mess
on your own bed, not even worthy of being my vessel. Am I clear?�

Reluctantly, Naruto nodded. In all
his bravado, he knew that right now his demon was in charge.

�Now,� the Nine-Tails breathed pleasantly, all traces of
anger wiped clean. �Are you ready to listen quietly?�

Again, Naruto nodded. He squirmed a
bit, feeling highly uncomfortable in his position. Naked. Sitting in an equally naked demon�s
lap. Going to receive advice on giving a
blowjob. In his mind. It all seemed absurd.

�My dearest boy, do not be embarrassed. After all, I know you
inside out. It is just me. Your inner demon.� Kyuubi appeared amused, causing Naruto to flinch by licking him lightly on the cheek. �You
must be enthusiastic. Make him feel as if orally stimulating him is something
you relish, something you wish with all your heart.�

Naruto bent his leg, bumping it in
the dark with what appeared to be the fox�s own knee. Quickly, its hand pressed
against his thigh, pushing it further apart. His breath hitched as he felt a
warm, dry palm wrap around his hardening shaft.

�Think of your mouth as a sheath for his manhood. Mimic the
movements as you would pleasure yourself. Like so��

The palm moved leisurely up Naruto�s length and down in demonstration. In response,
Naruto pushed his hips up slightly. He noted absently
that the demon�s hand was soft and it felt a little bit different. Sasuke�s palm was smooth and calloused from the constant
weapons training.

�You will probably not help yourself with the excess saliva
but it does not matter. What you lack in experience, you can make up with
enthusiasm. Remember, while you have your mouth wrapped around him, to be
mindful of your teeth. Do not suck your lips in as if you�ve sucked in a lemon,
but allow the fleshy insides of them to rub against him.�

One of the clawed fingers traced a large vein before rubbing,
teasingly, right underneath the head. The blond snaked an arm around the demon�s
neck, hand threading through locks of silken hair. He allowed a soft groan to
escape, already feeling the faint tremors of pleasure flow up his body. It was
the words, the suggestive words that came out of Kyuubi�s mouth. Naruto�s
overactive imagination was already forming images, adding to the experience he
had earlier with Sasuke and the light touches he was
receiving now. The pleasure transformed itself into an intense heat, flaring at
his lower regions.

�Some men like it when you lick them there. Tongue action, my
boy, do not forget that. Or if you want to be even more adventurous��

The hand moved completely from his cock to cup his sac
instead, cradling it gently. The extended digit ran further downward, brushing
against what Naruto embarrassingly thought of as �down
there�. He promptly stiffened at the touch.

�Fox�� he weakly protested.

�Squeamish?� the creature taunted. �I will not do anything,
do not worry.�

As promised, the fingers left that area but Naruto found himself in another new predicament. Strong
hands gripped him from underneath the armpits, straightening his body and
turning it around so he could straddle the demon�s lap. Again, the boy opened
his mouth to say something and was silenced by a thumb pressing itself against
his bottom lip.

�Hush. Do not think of anything and let your senses flow��

The youth�s hands raised themselves in the dark, faltering as
if he didn�t know what to do with them. Boldly, he settled them down lightly
onto the demon�s head. Fingers gingerly slid down where they cupped strong
cheekbones.

�Fox�� Naruto whispered softly,
squirming uncomfortably when he felt something hard poke him in the stomach. �I
want to see your face.�

�Then open your eyes, mortal.�

And so he did. And then squinted
slightly. A pair of dimly glowing eyes stared back at him, dangerously
close to his face. They were coloured a malevolent red
and seemed to promised an eternity of sinful pleasure. It was all he could
see.

�Is it not nice�? To be embraced like this?�

A hand pushed itself between their bodies and Naruto winced at the nails scraping his skin. By now he was
sure of what was pressing against him; the demon�s own rock hard cock. Still, he
didn�t protest or attempt to break free. His parasite was right- it was nice to
be embraced like that. He wasn�t about to let that opportunity go, even if it
was just a needy dream. Another shift of hips occurred and the hand brought both
their erections together, conjoining them in a possessive grip. It felt so
familiar�yet simultaneously so foreign.

�In all honesty�you should trust no one but yourself. And me. Trust me, Naruto.�

�No.�

�Why not? Have I ever wronged
you?�

�Hah! Don�t play innocent with me, fox. It�s because of you
that I�m doomed to live�like�� The fiend had one hand on the boy�s slim hips,
claws digging into the soft flesh of his buttocks as it forced him to pitch
forwards, grinding slick lengths together in the other firm hand. The sensation
was incredible. ��ah� like�this. Because of you�
I�mmm�I�m hated for something that isn�t my fault��
Naruto sounded breathless, voice roughened with lust.
��why did you attack�Konoha anyways?�

�It seemed like fun at the time,� the demon answered calmly.
�Do not blame me. Blame your precious Fourth Hokage
for choosing you as�heh, the saviour of the village. How noble of him. It is, indeed,
laughable.�

Naruto didn�t bother to hide his
insulted tone. �What you have preferred someone else other than me? Is that what
you�re saying?�

�Boy, I would rather not be sealed in anything. But to answer
your question, I suppose the Uchiha would have been
nice. He would have allowed me to take over since he strives for power so muc-�

�Shut up!� The youth yelled loudly. It was unfair. Everything
was against him. Even his own demon. He waited for the
echo to die down before speaking again. �Face it, you�re stuck here with me
whether you like it or not! Like me, you don�t have a choice either! So shut
up!�

Narrowed, red eyes floated in the dark, dancing before his
limited sight. They flashed intensely but remained silent. Instead, the
Nine-Tails� hand continued to push into Naruto�s hips,
this time harder, and he choked down a cry of indignation in exchange for
pleasure. The intimate feel of another�s burning-hot flesh rubbing against his
own�it felt too good�so unreal. Palm sliding upwards, smeared precum lubricating its movements. Naruto�s head
lolled forwards, breathing quickly degenerating into harsh pants.

�Have I ever wronged you?� the creature repeated in a
deceptively tender voice. �Have I not helped you? Have I ever denied you my
power? When you were close to death, when you were angered,
when you needed me most. I have always been here, keeping you strong,
enhancing your senses and healing your wounds.�

Naruto�s gaze was glued onto the
eyes. He could not tear away from them. Transfixed, he watched them as they
watched him back intently, boring a clean hole right to
his very soul. Beautiful, they were; the black slits that acted as pupils
merging with the gleaming irises that seemed to bathe him in their scarlet
glare. He was moving on his own initiative now, rocking himself against the
other just to get more of that shameful feeling. He wanted more. He needed it
badly.

�Trust me. Trust me and no one else. I am constant in your
life. I will be here always. Listen to what I have to say. Is it not time to get
what you want? The others owe you nothing! Snatch what you desire, and because
of me, you have the power to do so!�

As Naruto desperately pushed his
body against the demon�s, the hand that was previously
on his hip placed itself on one of his wrists. It skimmed up his own hand,
closing over it and singling out his index finger. The boy vaguely felt a
slight, painful tingling, reminiscent to whenever he grew claws during fits of
rage, but he paid no heed to it. All he desired, at that very moment, was the
feel of the demon�s cock against his own. He barely registered the fact that his
hand was being moved in erratic movements, drawing patterns in the air.

The red eyes situated in front of him grew larger as they
drew closer, suddenly swooping towards him. Hair tickled his nostrils as sharp
teeth mischievously played with his earlobe.

�Repeat after me, boy. Will you do that for me?�

�Uhhh�huh?
Repeat�what?�

�Do not worry your pretty little head over that. Just do as I
say. Trust me. It is only for your own good�� Lips trailed down the curve of his
neck and the soft palm tightened around their arousals, quickening its
movements.

A chant belonging to some forgotten, archaic language were
being murmured close to his ear and Naruto was too far
gone to realize what the hell he was mouthing back. The unfamiliar words felt
heavy on his tongue and he sucked in his breath, pushing everything away to
concentrate on his quickly approaching climax. He was close�so close�

His world flashed white.

Blearily, the teenager opened his eyes with a low groan. It
took him a full minute to focus onto his immediate surroundings; everything
seemed so blurry. Slowly, slowly his brain kicked into gear as his senses
cleared. He was in his room. Okay, he woke up. No more fucking around in his
mind with that insane fox, thank the Gods. He was lying face down on his bed,
arm dangling off the edge of it. There was a sticky wetness in his boxers and
somewhat, he sighed in relief. At least he wouldn�t have to take another cold
shower this time.

But something still wasn�t right. The dangling hand was in
pain, consumed by a crazed itching which usually accompanied the accelerated
healing that the demon provided him. Slowly, Naruto
lifted it up and widened his eyes in astonishment. His fingernails were broken,
some right to the tip. The badly damaged ones were stained with dried blood.

�The fuck�?�

The blond threw himself to the side of the bed and just
stared. A circle of odd, crude symbols were scratched into the wooden floor. A
summoning circle of such, it appeared. And resting in the center of it, was a pink-haired rag doll. He began to panic when he
noticed that one of the stitches on the toy�s left leg had been pulled out.

�Fox!� he mentally roared. �What did you do to Sakura?!�

�Hmph. Nothing at
all. You can go visit her later if you wish,� the voice in his head
answered.

Naruto was determined to get an
explanation but after a couple of minutes of yelling in his mind, he gave up.
The fox wasn�t going to answer him any time soon and he could already feel a
frustration-induced ache seeping into his temples. The ninja quickly pulled off
his boxers and made himself towards the bathroom. After
a brief, freezing shower where he nearly choked himself by practically sloshing
the toothbrush down his throat, he ran back to the bedroom.

He paused in the middle of zipping up his Chuunin vest over a dark, orange t-shirt, reluctantly
allowing yesterday�s events flood back. Shit, that fucking
training session. What the hell was he going to tell Sakura? Did he even want to
risk her pummeling him to death with her fists? And most importantly, how could
he even apologise after what he did? Still, none of
that mattered. He had to go over there to see whether she was okay or not. The
heavens only knew what the fuck Kyuubi made him
do.

�I suppose I could tell her I wasn�t thinking straight. Tell
her that I didn�t mean it.� Naruto mumbled to himself. He pushed back the wet strands of
his hair so he could tie the forehead protector properly. �Maybe even stop by
Ino�s shop and get her something. I mean it was a bad
day yesterday, she�ll understand right?�

Slowly, he turned around to glower at the Sakura rag-doll as
it sat innocently next to his bed. The bright, green buttons stared back at him
in accusation. �You let that demon trick you!� It seemed to say. �It�s your
fault!�

Impulsively, Naruto grabbed the
stupid thing and tossed it into the cupboard, away from sight. He left the
apartment, decision already made.

TBC

~~

Oooo Kyuubi you�re so naughty! C�mere
give us a kiss eh? *gets claw marks instead* Oh well,
can�t say I didn�t try. Here�s the review
responses!

MidnightMoon: Glad you found the chapter enjoyable
and I apologise for the late update!

Tenohikari: yay for
Kyuubi! He�s such a yummy fox *grin* Thanks for the
review!

Scottishfae: I find nearly all the Naruto characters hot so� you and I can be total losers
together! Hey nothing wrong with getting turned on by 2d characters right?
*shifty eye look* �Yep, you�re right. Naruto was
talking to Mr Fox while Sasuke was holding him against the tree. And I totally agree
with you! My fingers just itched to slap the monitor while I watched that
episode where Kakashi passes Naruto off to Ebisu. *laughs*
Those colognes of Uke and
Seme cracked me up when I first saw them on sheezyart. Mmm Urahara is hawt� damn there I go
again. Anyways, thank you ever so much for reviewing and I hope you enjoyed this
chapter!

Ayonoi: You know�mentioning that Kakashi seduction scene hrmm�
*ponders* has me thinking. (I have this little uke
voice in my head pleading �onegai sensei!� over and
over again, argh!). But yeah, I really wanted to write
that blowing up scene. It made me feel better after rewatching some of the Naruto
episodes. I kept dwelling on the fact how Naruto is
often ignored in his team and passed off as an idiot (I always thought it was an
act because the boy has some really funky mood swings from being clueless to
serious to furious). And as for SM�well you�re right. Words sometimes, have a
bigger effect than whips and chains *wink*. Thanks for the review!

Kayoko: No, thank
you for reviewing!

Enj: Why, thank you! I do try my best with
my language.

Vampia Zee: Ohh
don�t worry abt the whole SasuNaru NaruSasu thing. I gave up
on it lol. Mmmm dirty Naruto *watches him wrestle naked with Sasuke in mud* .. erm AHEM. Anyways, as you can see
in the above chapter, it was Naruto with Kyuubi telling him what to do half the time. Thanks for
reviewing!

Silverlook: Mmm don�t
know abt angst, but I can tell you that this story
will have plenty of smut. Will that do? *happy grin* thanks for the review!

Hogo-chan: I�m really extreme with updating.. sometimes I update after 2 days,
and sometimes I update after 2 months. Hopefully I�ll be able to update at
regular intervals. *curtseys* glad you�re enjoying my humble fic!

Just me: Here you
are, another update. Hope you enjoyed it!

Sansty_san: lol *pushes
the sugar discreetly away* If revenge can be counted as him making Sasuke his, then yeah! Thanks for reading my story!

Rainbird: Half of it wouldn�t be without Kyuubi butting in. Mmm foxy demon. Thanks!

Lady: oh ho ho ho, I don�t want to know what
will happen to you at work when the full-blown lemon comes out. I don�t know
what plans Sasuke has for Naruto, so I guess we�ll have to wait and see! *grin*

Dragonkitty: Ahh.. the main reason for that is
because I was writing it from Sasuke�s POV. And Sasuke is just horny and in denial (he really REALLY wants Naruto you see) *gets
hit on the head by Mr Kishimoto* *sigh* Ah well. Ta for the review!

Yami_hikari: Yes! Hope you�re satisfied with the
Kyuubi/Naruto bits in this chapter. Thanks for taking
the time to read my story!

Ryuukotsusei: Oh my *blushes* thank you! But you
know, with the previous years of me writing as a fanfic author, the only thing I ever produced was pure smut.
(though yaoi is relatively a
�new� thing, considering I have more experience with het stuff) God forbid me think up a plot *snigger* If I
wanted to do that, I would have posted a story on ff.net *another snigger*. I�m
not sure what do with Kakashi. Shall I have him get
tempted by Naruto sexiness, do you think? Oh
decisions, decisions! *wide grin*

Gothic_marshmallow: Well, it�s no mere coincidence that
Sasuke is really SasUKE
*giggle* Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it *happy grin*

TeshiKaitou: Happy you found this chapter hot
*laughs and hands you tissue* And I appreciate you
adding my story to the recommended section! I was like woah, oh my gosh! *hugs* thank
you!!

SnyperKat: Thanks for enjoying my fic! Kyuubi is cool isn�t he?
*huggles the fox but gets her head bitten off in the
process*

Youmahime: Hah I kept getting Jiraiya in character tests myself! But hey, I�m a perv too so�actually I�m really sexually depraved now that I
think abt it. Ta for the review!

Bella8618: Kyuubi plushies! *snatches them
quickly* Yay for angst... but I�ll try not to overdo
it. Thanks for reading my story!
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