Pile Of Lemons | By : NaruHinaSakuFan1 Category: Naruto > General Views: 30750 -:- Recommendations : 9 -:- Currently Reading : 31 |
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Chapter 4
His sexy new tool!
_-_-_-_-_Takes Place Right After The Last Chapter Left Off_-_-_-_-_
_-_-_-_-_A Short Walk Later_-_-_-_-_
Slicerness: God dammit... I say I won't be rewriting anything anymore and I go and rewrite most of this chapter and am already starting on the next.
I lacka discipwin... Anyway, if anyone has any questions or suggestions, or even just some advice for me (something I would really enjoy hearing, I'm kinda flying blind here in regards to what you people like), just send me a PM. I have a story over in the Sekirei sub-section of the Anime/manga section, so you can reach me through that or simply type my name in the search tab up at the top of your screen. I should be the only name on the list if you type in slicerness. I'm all OG and shit like that. XP Ok everyone, give a big thank you to NHS if you like this. Cuz I sure as hell can't think up original stories by myself. I'm just rather good at modifying (or heavily modifying) what's already there. So without his source material this wouldn't be possible. So give the guy a break. Seriously, I read the reviews he's gotten. The first chapter was eye-bleedingly bad yes, but theres no need to be a prick. At least he does his best. Unlike the rest of you lazy story-less /b/tards out there. P.s. In addition to sending to sending me questions, suggestions, or advice you can also send me any fetishes you would like to see included in the re-write and i'll try to work them in. no promises for the more bizarre stuff but i'll do my best. Also, tell me if you would like to remain anonymous while doing this cuz otherwise i'll give you a shout out at the end of the chapter. I personally would not like any of my kinks said online but I know I also like getting recognition when I help sculpt a story. Aaaand I'm rambling. I'm gonna start on the next chapter before I bore you all to sleep with my inane rantings. C y'all in a day or two.While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
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