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Criminal	By : laurenloogie Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 1432 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Chapter List
- 1-massacre
- 2-ruthless
- 3-tsukiyomi
- 4-obvious
- 5-barracks
- 6-bind
- 7-luck
- 8-heat
- 9-break
- 10-grief
- 11-thin
- 12-creep
- 13-switch
- 14-rant
- 15-battles
- 16-capture
- 17-undisclosed
- 18-drugs
- 19-snake
- 20-infiltration
- 21-color
- 22-escape
- 23-used
- 24-possession
- 25-cold
- 26-trap
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"Hey Kisame?"
"What?"
The two men were tangled together at the base of the tree, hands groping flesh. "I may not have been... completely honest with you about something," the blonde confessed, his face hot.
A smirk played across Kisame's lips. "You feel like now's an appropriate time to tell me?" he asked. Deidara's fingers were shoved down the swordsman's pants, sliding over his hard shaft. The chilling tale of the Tsukiyomi had melted away, leaving a profound, raw lust in its wake.
"Well.." the blonde stammered, marveling that his fingers couldn't meet around the girth of Kisame's cock. "I've never actually..."
The swordsman fitfully unfastened his pants, grinding his hips a little, until his cock was loose of the fabric. It was the same slate blue as the rest of him, albeit an indigo flush at the tip, and it looked absolutely monsterous in Deidara's slender, pale hand. The daylight was revealing every detail that the night had concealed but it was only turning the blonde on more. Kisame's cock was gorgeous, almost alien, jutting from a neat triangle of midnight-blue pubic hair.
"I've never gone all the way with anyone before," Deidara finally blurted. He was blushing so fiercely it was making him dizzy. "Until last night, that is..."
Kisame smirked then laughed outloud, shocking the blonde - he'd been expecting a gasp of surprise or maybe a dumbfounded silence. "I knew it," the swordsman said, grinning so wide Deidara could see all his jagged teeth. "It was pretty obvious," he added as his hand slid further up the blonde's shirt.
"What was obvious?" Deidara huffed. He bit his lip when Kisame's fingers found his right nipple, pinching it lightly.
"Um... Everything," Kisame said, distracted. He lifted up the blonde's shirt and ran his tongue over Deidara's nipple in the wake of his fingertips, taking it lightly in his sharp teeth until it was rock-hard. "You were... really nervous," he murmured. He ran his fingers over the blonde's stitches with a mild curiousity before finding his left nipple, rubbing it with his calloused thumb.
"Of course I was," Deidara sighed. He wanted to be irritated but he was too horny - his cock was painfully hard, straining against his pants. "You were only taking my virginity..."
Kisame paused from biting Deidara's nipple for a second to let out another snort of laughter. "I lost my virginity when I fucked a woman," he mused, glancing up at the blonde with a scythe-like grin. The blonde sighed and shifted awkwardly, diverting his eyes.
"Screw you, Kisame..." he muttered. "It's not the same when you're gay."
"Hey," Kisame growled, planting something in between a bite and a kiss in the center of Deidara's chest. "If it's any consolation, you're the first man I've been with."
"I knew it," Deidara panted, squirming under the swordsman's touch. "It's... pretty obvious..."
"Ya right," Kisame chuckled, smirking. His hand wandered down to the blonde's erection and grasped it firmly through his pants before sliding up and down the shaft with what Diedara had to admit was an expert touch. "You don't have to lie to me..."
"Ugh... screw you..." Deidara moaned. There was no doubt that Kisame was an experienced lover, regardless of gender - the swordsman's confession had actually surprised him. He was playing Deidara's senses like a virtuoso. The blonde gasped breathlessly when Kisame unfastened his belt and pulled out his cock, stroking it with his rough fingers.
"Well honestly," Kisame mumbled, eyes fixated on Deidara's cock, "I thought I'd be nervous, too..." He smirked, shooting the blonde a sheepish look. "But being with a guy seems to... I dunno... come naturally to me. Guess that makes me gay, heheh..."
Deidara grinned, bucking his hips a little as Kisame's fingers teased the head of his dick. "Nothing really bothers you, does it?" he asked.
"Nope," the swordsman stated. "If being with you makes me queer, so be it." He kissed the blonde's neck, grazing it with his teeth, then moved up to his jawline, nipping the skin lightly with each kiss. Deidara groaned, squirming uncontrollably. He had always been obsessed with Kisame's sharp teeth, fantasing about them in various perverted ways, and the feel of them sparked a long-standing fetish. When the swordsman lightly bit his lower lip, he cried out breathlessly and crushed their lips together so hard it hurt.
"Damn," Kisame growled - he paused the kiss briefly to move the blonde onto his lap, lifting him like he was light as a feather. Deidara moaned a curse and squirmed, his cock rubbing up against the swordsman's. He looked down, biting his lip... the sight of Kisame's stiff blue cock against his was one of the horniest things he'd ever witnessed. "Wanna fuck?" the swordsman panted, roughly squeezing the blonde's hips.
"I don't think my ass can handle it," Deidara murmured, grinding his hips. "It still kinda hurts..."
"If you had just relaxed-"
"I know, I know..." He kissed the swordsman again, moaning as their tongues fucked. When their lips parted he was so horny he already felt on the verge of orgasm. "Just... lemme suck your cock instead," he panted.
Kisame grinned crookedly. "Okay," he said, doing little to hide his excitement. "You know... if you really want to..."
Deidara's response was just a horny smirk as he wriggled off the swordsman's lap and laid himself down in the grass. Oral sex was one of the things he actually had some experience in.... there were a few Iwigakure shinobi probably questioning their sexuality to this day because of it. He propped himself up on his elbows and grasped the base of Kisame's shaft, blushing fiercely. "I haven't done this in a while," he murmured before tentatively running his tongue over the head.
The swordsman just smirked, grinding his hips a little in anticipation. Deidara licked the head again then slid his tongue up and down the shaft. Having control over Kisame's orgasm ran a thrill down his spine and when he finally put the head in his mouth, he was jerking himself off with his free hand. He sucked the head lightly, relishing in the breathless moans that met his ears in response, then slid his lips down until he could feel the tip pressing against his throat. Kisame's cock so thick it was straining his mouth - he had only swallowed a third of the length and he was already close to gagging.
"Heh... just relax," the swordsman growled. Deidara groaned, his face hot, when he felt the swordsman's fingers graze over his neck, rubbing his throat gently. "Take a little more," Kisame prodded. The blonde closed his eyes and slid down further, feeling the tip pierce into the tight passage of his throat. The urge to gag was intense but Kisame's fingers massaging his neck were somehow suppressing the feeling. He wondered how many girls the swordsman had coaxed into deepthroating... but for some reason the thought turned him on. He took it as a bizarre sort of challenge to prove to Kisame that he was better than a girl.
Blushing, he slid down further, doing his best to relax as his throat tried to compensate Kisame's thick cock. The swordsman sighed and bit his lip, then placed his other hand on the back of the blonde's head. "Fuck..." he moaned. "You're tight." His fingers twined through Deidara's hair as the younger man persistantly worked down further and further until his lips met his fingers at the base of Kisame's shaft. His throat felt as though it might tear and he couldn't breathe, but he was so turned on he could barely stand it. Kisame's prick was much larger than anyone else's he'd deepthroated... painfully so... yet there was just something so intensely erotic about forcing it to fit. When the swordsman roughly pulled his hair and began to guide his head up and down, he obeyed with unbridled enthusiasm, a shiver running down his spine.
"Damn, Deidara..." Kisame was bucking his hips, trying to restrain himself as he thrusted into the blonde's mouth. "I'm almost there..." The blonde's response was a muffled moan - he was already close too, fucking his hand in rhythm with the swordsman's thrusts. Kisame's hand had tightened around his throat, constricting it even further, and the fingers twisted in his hair were pulling it so hard it was forcing tears out of his eyes. His face felt hot, his lungs were burning for air, and when he felt the swordsman's cum coat his throat, his orgasm came on so powerfully it clouded his vision. He moaned, shuddering uncontrollably as he spilled his seed... when Kisame pulled out his softening cock he could do nothing for a minute but dizzily hang his head and gasp for air. He looked up and saw the swordsman leaning back against the tree, panting and holding his dick.
"Heh... fuckin' hot..." Kisame sighed, a grin sliding over his lips as he buttoned up his pants.
"Yah," Deidara murmured. "That was... insane..." He rolled onto his back and rest his head on the swordsman's thigh, lifting his hips as he fastened his belt.
"Yah..." Kisame wiped a tear from the younger man's cheek then gently placed his hand on his head. Deidara sighed contentedly and closed his eyes, enjoying the way Kisame's fingers absently stroked his hair. For a while neither man spoke... after such intensity, the silence was welcoming.
"Damn..." Kisame sighed. Deidara blearily opened his eyes... he had nearly fallen asleep.
"What?" he asked.
The swordsman was looking away, a mildly puzzled expression on his sharp features. "It's just weird," he murmured. His gaze swung down to the blonde.
Deidara felt himself blushing. "What's weird?" he asked.
Kisame shrugged, his fingers still running through the blonde's hair. "I don't know," he stated. "I guess... I just like you, that's all."
The blush on Deidara's cheeks deepened. "Heh... really?" he said.
"It wasn't supposed to be funny," Kisame growled.
"Oh... no, it's not," Deidara said. He scooted a little closer, resting his head in the swordsman's lap. "It's just awesome... that's all." He looked up at the sky... the sun was sparkling through the canopy like glitter. It was still only early afternoon... they could afford to hang out for a few more minutes. He closed his eyes again, feeling strangely at peace.

*AUTHOR'S NOTE* Meh. Dick sucking scenes are hard to write. Um... next chapter there'll be some more Akatsuki members and... i dunno. Some madness, heheh. And by the way, lemme know if you see any spelling mistakes. I'm writing this on wordpad... so no spell check.
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