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Meikyū Chōeki no Jutsu	By : passiveaggressor Category: Naruto AU/AR > General Views: 24653 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 4
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Author's Note:
In response to Bob's review, I would like to make a few statements. Firstly this story is how I thought the series could have been improved. The fact that some of this comes in the form of skintight rubber and various implements of bondage is not to be commented on. Next, Really, The problem is this...
God Naruto is how he SHOULD have been in the first place. A lot of writers power up Sasuke to stupid levels to work with how Sasuke is ‘always’ more powerful than him, despite the fact he doesn’t have a bijuu, he just has copycat eyes. For me to nerf Naruto, or give Sasuke a bunch of slaves that are better than Naruto’s crop, that doesn’t sit well with me.
Lastly while Naruto won’t be able to curbstomp every enemy in the story, he will be able to do so to a lot of them, and rarely with his skills or weapons.
I have read some of the stories where Naruto gains a bunch of Kekkei Genkai. Naruto himself will not be the recipient of any such powers. All he will be given are what he has already. An affinity for sealing jutsu and kitsune-related powers.
A friend of mine is writing a Naruto story where he gives a tail to each of his precious people, and has Tamaki as Sasuke’s most precious person in exchange, with her bearing one of the two-tailed cat’s tails. No powering up Naruto or Sasuke, but powering up Hinata, Sakura, Tenten and others instead.
And I had every intention of having other male main characters appear... However since this kinda follows the manga, they wont appear for a while. This isn’t a story about Naruto gaining power from what he gains, but gaining that which Kishimoto seems unable to give him... A fair deal and his just due.

Naruto was on Cloud Nine right now. He’d got a date with Hinata’s undoubtedly-as-hot sister, Neji had taken Hinata back home, but that wasn’t too bad, but it made sure his jutsu would remain unfound for now. However, when he got to his apartment, he found it broken into and Yoko missing. “What the fuck!?” He said, finding a kunai embedded in the door, with a note reading, ‘Bring the Hokage’s secret scroll to the forests outside Konoha and come alone or I do something bad to your kitsune... Hell, All I’d need to do is tell them that the fox brat turned a girl into a kitsune and you and the girl would be dead.’
Naruto had to laugh at the irony of that statement, since the girl he HAD turned into a kitsune was currently back in her bedroom, and probably corrupting her sister with some very graphic stories about what she did while staying at her boyfriend’s. If their father found out quite how far he got with her, admittedly, he’d STILL be dead, but not for the kitsune thing. That’s part of why he’d been discussing Hinata’s family with her during the pre-examination hours.
He did a set of handsigns, creating a very acceptable fake of the ‘Secret Scroll’, except with meters of BDSM porn in it instead of the precious jutsus. He mused that it WAS something that would be kept secret, but not the right kind of secret. He then felt a tug in his mind, and found himself stood next to Kamen Sensei. “Whoever that kidnapper is, they’re a idiot. I want you to create as many clones as you can, then focus on Yoko, before doing these handsigns. It’ll work better than the scroll by far.” Kamen Sensei said, “It’s called Yume Tejun no Jutsu, but you don’t need to ever call out the name. Don’t use it with Hinata yet, for obvious reasons. Let’s just say, if you had a girl tagged with your mark on the other side of the Elemental Countries. You think of her while doing this jutsu, and you’ll cross the entire distance in the blink of a eye, and appear within 10 metres of them.” he said confidently. “Eh? That’s amazing Kamen Sensei!” he said, summoning up a cadre of Foxfire clones, and starting the jutsu.
Outside of Konoha, Yoko felt really angry with Mizuki. Her, the Kyuubi-no-Yoko, treated like a normal everyday girl. It was bad enough that she’d found out most of her tails were purely caused by what chakra she had doing a illusion on her, but now she’d been kidnapped by someone who was accusing Naruto of turning her into a kitsune with the power of the Kyuubi.
‘Someone mustn’t know what Yoko means...’ She chuckled, straining against the ropes that bound her for the umpteenth time. ‘Damn... That Mizuki can sure tie a mean knot. I can barely breathe.’ Yoko thought as her captor came into view. “Better hope he shows kitsune, or else.” said the Instructor, drawing a large throwing star and turning as a rustling sound came from the forest nearby. “Did someone order ramen?” A red-haired man said, walking up to him with at least two bowls of steaming hot chicken ramen in a box, “I distinctly heard someone say that there was ramen needed in this clearing.”
“What the hell?!?” Mizuki said. “Hey, I just deliver the stuff man, I don’t take the orders. Now that’ll be 1200 ryo, or I’ll accept 3 masu if ya got the rice t’spare.” The man said, Mizuki getting out a small box and measuring three days of rice into a bag, before handing it to the man. “There you are, I can spare the rice, no problem.” Mizuki said, confidently. He could probably spare a entire koku of rice, he didn’t need it.
“Thanks, enjoy your Ramen.” said the man leaving the bowls on a large, flat rock and walking back into the forest. Mizuki had barely put away his masu box when he heard a rustling again, Yoko noticing Naruto behind her with a finger to his lips as Mizuki found himself paying yet more rice to deal with a delivery of some dango, followed by some cinnamon buns. “How much rice do you think we’ll need for two or three people to live in my place do you think?” He breathed into her ear.
She grinned behind the gag as Naruto untied her, quietly slipping away with her as Mizuki paid for yet another delivery of ramen. “What?! Again?!” he snapped, looking at the same red-haired deliveryman. “What? Again? You’ve got no delivery from us...” The man said, pointing to the empty rocks, Mizuki finally noticing Yoko had disappeared. “Dammit! Where did the kitsune go?” He snapped, only to hear the deliveryman say some kind of jutsu that he didn’t recognise, and he fell to the ground, his arms and legs bound. “So, Mizuki, How was my clone jutsu?” Naruto’s voice said from the deliveryman, as he withdrew a sealing scroll from the box, “Time to go see the Hokage, traitor...”
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Sarutobi was quietly shocked. Naruto had revealed a attempt to steal the secret techniques of Konoha, and had managed to scam the thief into supplying the boy enough rice to actually get him a potentially varied diet. “And it only cost me a few thousand ryo. I used my supper as supposedly goods to be delivered to Mizuki’s location, and well... The guy fell for it long enough for him to lose his bargaining chip.” Naruto said, keeping some details vague.
Mizuki had been executed in a public display the morning after Naruto delivered him, and Sarutobi was debriefing him. “Well Naruto, you did the village a fine service. The traitor was executed as a example to people who might use the Kyuubi’s presence inside you to attempt things like that again.” said the Hokage, looking at Naruto from across the desk. “I’m just glad the scroll is safe.” replied Naruto. “Good news is that the examiners, using your fight with Neji, approved your promotion.” Sarutobi said, sliding the forehead protector across the desk, “Without Mizuki coloring them against you, it wasn’t hard for them to come to the decision.”
“So... You mean?” Naruto began, looking from the headband to the Hokage. “Yes, you passed. Congratulations on your graduation... Genin Naruto.” Sarutobi said, helping Naruto put it on, “Now, I think you have a couple of young girls who need your attention... Hiashi was slightly against it, but he’s so happy about the leaps and bounds in which his older daughter improved thanks to you that he personally signed off on you dating, and later potentially marrying, both girls with his blessing.”
Naruto grinned and stood up, bowing to the Hokage before striding out of the room. This was excellent news indeed...
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The walk home was too long in his opinion, he was practically shaking with anticipation at telling Hinata and Yoko the good news. He opened the door to find everything neat and tidy, all traces of Mizuki’s raid gone. Naruto looked around for Yoko but saw no trace of the kitsune anywhere. “Hide and Seek huh?” he said with a chuckle, moving over to the hallway closet and opening it.
“Hmmm not there...” Naruto mused, closing the door and cheing the other rooms one by one until he came to the bedroom. “Ready or not, here I...oh my...” he trailed off, his jaw dropping at the delicious sight in front of him.
Yoko and Hinata were kneeling at the foot of the bed, their heads bowed respectfully. The kitsune was dressed in an black and orange latex french maid outfit, complete with cap, stockings and stiletto heels. Her arms were encased in a leather singleglove, her ankles cuffed and locked to the ring at the bottom of the glove. A large orange ball gag was seated in her mouth and drool dripped from the corner of her mouth to drip between her exposed cleavage.
Hinata on the other hand was wearing a lavender cat-ear hairband on her head and a mask of the same color that covered everything below the eyes while depicting the face of a kitty. She was wearing a set of lavender paws that covered her hands and feet and extended all the way past her elbows and knees. A lavender corset was wrapped lovingly around her waist and she sported a cute kitty tail sprouting from between her ass cheeks.
But Yoko and Hinata were not the sole occupants of the room, for on the bed were two struggling female figures. Both were wearing rubber suits with one in hot pink and the other in deep purple. Their wrists and ankles sported cuffs which were locked together in the classic hogtie position. Both of the girls were wearing hoods that hid their features from view and posture collars around their necks. A ribbon had been lovingly wrapped around the bedposts from which hung a sign that read, ‘HAPPY GRADUATION MASTER.’ “Hmm...” Naruto said, running his hands over the pink one, “Hinata, Do you have a spanking paddle? I think one of these two girls deserves to understand that you get what you give sometimes...”
The pink suited girl suddenly froze, as if knowing exactly what was coming, and exactly what he meant. She’d hit him, she’d belittled him, and, right now, she was in the perfect place for him to give her it back twice over with impunity. She felt the hard, flat surface of the paddle slide over her ass, Naruto saying, “What a tempting target... You were always hoping Sasuke would be the ‘one’, when he never cared about you...” before the paddle moved to stroke her chest, and he continued, “Such flat, lifeless breasts... Killed by you thinking he liked girls like that. Good job I have enough rice to get you back on a good diet.”
Sakura struggled harder on the bed, ‘He’s not serious is he? Naruto isn’t really gonna make me his slave...’ she thought. “Neko, Kyuubi, Would you say this pink-clad slut is worth anything to me?” Naruto continued, “All I see is a boy without a penis, not a girl. And I only like nice girls who give themselves to me unconditionally... Not violent boys who beat up on me all the time. I’m not that kind of guy. Although it does explain why she thought Sasuke would go for her...”
The two grinned behind the gags and shook their heads. Naruto nodded and looked at Sakura. “So... Ready to admit to what you really are bitch? You are NOTHING, no-one and nobody... You could have made a very nice girl, and might do after some serious remedial work... I MIGHT have made you my girlfriend, once, but now... you’re a asset to me, except you’re negative equity if anything... No-one wants you, not even me, unless you do one thing...” Naruto said, moving close to her ear, whispering, almost inaudibly, “Be a girl for me.”
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