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COLD 4 SHOCK
August 4th 2011
AUTHORS NOTES
AU of Manga chapter 452 onwards- A very different meeting between Naruto and Team Samui creates a different reaction from Naruto.
This fic is a Naruto/Samui pairing, Drama/Humor/(kinda) Romance fic.
'This' means someone is thinking.
Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki, Katon Jutsu.
Horizontal ruler (a line across the page) means a page break or timeskip, may be a few minutes, may be a few hours...
-X- means a scene change, i.e. we start with Sakura and Sai in a clearing, then we go to Naruto and Samui in her apartment- a scene change from a street to an apartment.
This story started out simply as Naruto/Samui smut. Later I came up with the idea of using the background to look more deeply at Naruto's childish (and often deluded) outlook on the world, his delusions regarding Sasuke and his dysfunctional relationships in general. This is meant to be dramatic as well as kinky and humorous.
Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non profit-I am making no money from this.

"What... did... you just say... Sakura-chan?" Naruto stood in the snow with shock on his face. The gathered ninja stood around with various looks on their faces; Kiba and Kakashi looked bored, Lee looked astonished, Yamato looked like he'd just stepped in some dog shit, Karui and Omoi looked amused (both expecting a catfight). Samui looked annoyed.
"What I said, Naruto... is that I love you!"
'That's the most unconvincing thing I've ever heard!' Samui became increasingly annoyed as she lost the next two minutes of her life listening to the pink haired ninja regurgitate a speech involving feelings, distances, people, hearts and weather, topped off by the most awkward hug she'd ever seen.
'At least get enough contact to feel each other's body heat you amateur!'
Nobody bought the act, not even Naruto. His angry response caused Sakura's true purpose to become clear to all; she had come to remove her reckless team mate from harm's way.
'Well at least I can give the pink idiot credit for trying to get Naruto out of danger- even though she's done it in an incompetent and embarrassing way.' Samui criticised in her head.
She saw a tattooed, feral looking young man whisper in Sakura's ear- it must have been something the pinkette didn't want to hear because she stomped on his foot possibly breaking toes. She stormed off like a little girl throwing a temper tantrum. "Fine! I'm going home!"
'Yes, you do that.' Samui almost said aloud. Unknowingly she had edged slightly closer to Naruto during the argument.
"What? No cat fight?" Karui groused ignoring an annoyed stare from the rest of the group.

"Sai...what are you doing here?"
A few minutes had passed since the irate Sakura had stormed off followed by Kakashi, Kiba, Akamaru and Sai. Except that Sai seemed to be back.
"I'm a clone. I need to tell you the truth that Sakura couldn't tell you. She didn't come here to confess her feelings to you-"
"Really? I was completely captivated and moved by her truly heartfelt words." Karui rudely interrupted.
Sai ignored the Kumo Nin but wondered what she and her comrades were even doing there.
"Konoha has chosen to eliminate Sasuke. It's been decided by the Hokage, the Jonin council and even by your classmates."
Naruto couldn't bring himself to be shocked by this news. Technically Sasuke had declared himself a traitor three years ago when he defected to Orochimaru. He had dug himself an even deeper hole when he attacked the 'Rescue team' sent two and a half years later. Joining an organisation that had committed acts of war and terror against all nations of the Elemental lands (including Konoha) was the final straw- Sasuke had to die, and to maintain what little credibility the Leaf had left it had to be them that dealt the killing blow.
There simply was no choice now.
Sai continued; "She thought she'd lessen your burden by giving up on Sasuke and claiming to love you. She probably thought you didn't want to hear the truth."
"Hmm... I wonder how far she'd go to convince Naruto..." Omoi mused completely ignoring the polite conventions of society.
"Hand job, maybe once in the sack. I don't see her going beyond lame vanilla- aack!" Karui suffered a slap upside the head from Samui cutting off her lewd spiel.
Naruto looked downtrodden, apparently oblivious to the critique on his team mate.
'We're lucky he seemed to have zoned out again... I don't need another fight.' Samui didn't want to bail her team mates out again.
"And there's something else... I think Sakura herself is planning to kill Sasuke."
Everyone reacted in astonishment and disbelief.
"What is she crazy? That... nurse can't fight that powered up freak. It's like a pink, emotionally frail goldfish picking a fight with a pumped-up, yet effeminate shark."
"Why the hell are you here again?" Yamato shouted in Karui's ear nearly bowling her over.
"We're watching the happy couple." Omoi gestured towards something before getting the second slap upside the head of the day from Samui.
Before things could degenerate further, three newcomers leapt in; Godaime Kazekage Gaara, Jonin elemental specialist Temari and Puppetmaster Kankuro.
'The Kazekage and his siblings... I'll take anything over this...' Samui thought as the three groups of ninja stared each other down.
-X-
Not far away...
"You'd take a hostage... after your talk of self sacrifice?"
Uchiha Sasuke, Shimura Danzo and the Kunoichi known as Karin stood on the wreckage of Mumei bridge. Scars of the battle were everywhere.
Sasuke's whole body had been damaged by his reckless use of the Kinjutsu known as Susanoo; he was trembling and spasming, he struggled to grip his Chokuto blade, a few strands of his hair fell out. His skin felt like it was burning while his innards felt like freezing. Multiple cuts on his body weren't healing- in fact they seemed to widen and bleed more profusely.
Danzo was also hurting- he'd lost an arm; it had mutated out of control and become a tree. They don't prescribe Painkillers for that.
The leader of Root now hid behind a squirming human shield he clutched with his remaining arm.
"It's... not my own life... I'm worried about..." Danzo gasped out, truly sounding on death's door. "This is for Konoha... for the ninja world... I can't die now..."
His mismatched eyes changed, becoming fanatical rather than the cold focus he had maintained up until now. "I'll... do anything... to survive... I... am the only one... who can change this world..." He gasped out.
"This girl will be sacrificed for that." He straightened up as he said those words. His whole life was about sacrifice.
"Sasuke... help!" Karin squealed around Danzo's near choking grip on her throat.
"Don't move... Karin." The Kunoichi felt relieved at those words.
'No doubt Sasuke's about to unleash some super Jutsu he's been hiding for such an occasion.'
Those were the last thoughts she ever had before she was impaled by her hero's Chidori sharp spear; the blade of electricity pierced through her heart killing her instantly. Sasuke didn't have enough chakra left to drive the attack through the woman then straight through Danzo, however the voltage striking out from the Jutsu flowed through him, burning the Root leader internally, damaging nerves, heating his blood to dangerous levels and rupturing organs.
"Karin... you're nothing but a burden to me if you can be taken hostage so easily..." The dead Kunoichi couldn't hear him, it was impossible to say if her deranged, blood soaked killer understood that. The corpse of the former Oto Ninja fell, lifelessly, her stylish glasses shattering upon hitting the stone bridge floor face first.
Danzo stood unmoving. For a moment it looked like the bandaged, enhanced Ninja would continue the monstrous battle.
SKLUUTCCCHHH!
Suddenly his chest exploded in blood and ink. Four sets of blocky seals erupted from his hideously warped body.
Uchiha Madara instantly knew what the obscene spectacle was; "Get away from Danzo! This is the Ura Shishou Fuuin Jutsu!" Sasuke leapt back best he could with his wounds while Madara phased through the floor as the space before them was torn asunder by the Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique...
-X-
A few miles away...
In the nearby forest, curiously void of snow, four ninja raced through the dense foliage.
"Don't you think you should have told Naruto the truth?" Rock Lee asked.
Sakura didn't waver. "There's no way I could tell him. He'd never understand why we have to do this."
"You underestimate Naruto... he's- gnnn!" Kakashi stumbled to the ground pressing a hand down over his left eye in clear pain.
"Are you all right?" Sakura asked moving in to give aid.
The copy Ninja held up a hand- telling Sakura to keep her distance. "I'm just tired... and an old injury's acting up..." 'It's getting worse... overusing the Mangekyo Sharingan during the battle with Pain... and the fact that my body isn't designed for this power in the first place...'
Kiba turned away from the clearly in pain Kakashi. He took several sniffs of the air to confirm what he already knew; "I've found Sasuke. That mask guy is there too. That direction. One kilometre ahead." He pointed to an unseen destination.
Sakura made her move. She knew what had to be done...
-X-
Mumei bridge...
Uchiha Madara looked around at the destruction Danzo's last gambit had wrought; his jutsu had created a sphere of blackness, everything within the sphere had been absorbed into Danzo's mutated, mutilated corpse to share its fate; death.
"That jutsu would have sucked you into his corpse to die with him... he must have set it to go off when he died. That wa- aaccckkk!" Madara froze and began to shake. The heavy trembling became violent convulsions.
"What's wrong?" Sasuke asked not really caring.
"Nothing- bad food earlier." The masked man disappeared in a swirl of reality with Danzo's corpse before Sasuke could probe further- the elder Uchiha knew Sasuke would kill him if he knew how weak he actually was. The ancient Uchiha reappeared in a very different place...
Uchiha Madara now stood in the sterile half laboratory- half morgue within Sangaku no Hakaba (the Mountains' Graveyard) that he called his sanctuary. He removed his gaudy orange mask to breathe easier.
He grimaced in anger as he saw in the reflection of highly polished metal, the reminders of his battle with the First Hokage; his original right arm had been torn clear off, his once handsome face had been carved up leaving a mess of scars and stitches to be hidden by various masks through the years. Most unforgivable of all, his priceless left eye was pierced and later gouged out by the unnatural, seeking vines of Senju Hashirama...
Pushing aside the painful memories, Madara found what he came for; he stumbled to a large, dark grey construct that looked like a coffin.
He opened it to reveal a human in an induced coma lying as motionless as a corpse. The unconscious figure was wrapped from head to toe in medicated bandages covered in sealing script, a breathing mask supplied air while IV drips supplied nourishment. Besides the sound of breathing there was no way to tell the human form was alive.
Using specialised syringes and pumps built into the coffin he extracted chakra and blood from the long time captive. The material was mixed together inside a solidly reinforced steel and glass syringe in a proverbial Witches brew that had kept Madara alive despite huge injuries and advanced age.
"You've increased the dosage. That's dangerous." A voice called out.
Madara cursed as he didn't sense Zetsu's entrance.
"This serum is the only thing keeping me alive. Leave, watch over Sasuke." He commanded.
"If you say so." The bizarre plant man disappeared into the floor.
He pressed the syringe into his neck and stiffened in pain as the potentially lethal mix entered his system.
It felt like every cell in his body was about to explode, that his skin would burn away, his muscles would burst, his bones snap again and again until they were as unrecognisable as his face. His vision cut out, blurring into blinding light, his brain felt like it was on fire- all thought except the agony disappeared.
If he could think beyond the pain he would be glad Zetsu had left to watch over Sasuke and wasn't here to hear his deafening scream of agony...
-X-
Gaara and his bodyguards/sibling had left after informing Naruto of the latest act of Sasuke's 'dig the deepest grave possible for myself' crusade; by murdering several Samurai guards and assaulting the Gokage, Sasuke had just committed acts of war against the lands of Lightning, Earth, Water, Wind and Iron. There truly was no option but to dispose of the rampaging Uchiha now.
"I'm going after Sasuke! He's still in the area, he's weakened and has to be taken down before he hurts anyone else."
"I will go with you." Samui stated.
"Naruto has to return to the village." The killjoy known as Yamato insisted.
"I'll go with Naruto alone. You need a witness to prove Konoha's commitment to eliminate Uchiha Sasuke." Samui figured that Yamato didn't like the two on three odds and didn't trust Kumo Ninja not to wait until he and Naruto had weakened themselves against Sasuke then opportunistically move in and finish them.
"I agree. Let me do this Yamato-teichou."
Yamato had a bad feeling about this, but trusted his judgement in Naruto.
"All right. I'll stay at the Inn with... these two." He just about suppressed a grimace at the thought of being left alone with Samui's irritating comrades.
As Naruto and Samui took off, the Wood user took one last sneaking look at the departing busty blond trying to figure out what she was actually up to, and if Naruto would be able to deal with it.
'It'll be fine... Naruto's come a long way, and he's smarter than anyone thinks... hell, a bigger concern is avoiding a fight with these two I've been left with... I should be able to do it as long as they keep their mouths shut.'
"Why are you staring at my Captain's ass?" Karui's annoying voice called out.
'Goddammit!'
-X-
Naruto raced through the forest using Sage mode to track Sakura's chakra. Samui following by his side. She was curious about the physical transformation and abilities he had revealed but knew not to ask. Things were... complicated with the blond Leaf ninja at the moment, and she didn't want those complications spilling over into her duty as a Kunoichi of Kumogakure.
Naruto grimaced as he sensed a dark, twisted, corrupted chakra pulsing violently. It didn't even feel human. Sakura's brighter, steadier chakra was heading straight towards it-alone.
'It must be Sasuke overusing some Kinjutsu he got from Orochimaru! But where the hell is Kakashi-sensei and the others?'
"We have to move faster! Sakura's closing in on Sasuke!" His sensor jutsu cut off as he spent the last of his Nature chakra, he couldn't stop to gather more so focused on moving forwards at faster speeds- so fast he left the woman following him behind.
"Wait! Don't go in there alone!"
-X-
Sakura's plan to deal with Sasuke flashed before her eyes;
Her improvised plan had been going so well; she had had left her comrades behind- she was actually astonished she had managed to take out Kakashi-sensei with her knockout gas.
'He must not have recovered from the fight with Pain... he was complaining about headaches earlier...'
Of course all her planning had faltered when she actually found Sasuke...
"Sasuke-kun..." Sakura's eyes widened as she sensed the hatred radiating off the ravaged, bloodsoaked Uchiha like a blinding, suffocating mist with crushing weight.
'It doesn't feel like the old Sasuke-kun... Is this really the same person?'
"Why have you come before me this time?" Sasuke demanded like some angry warlord talking down to a worthless peasant.
"Sasuke-kun..." She stuttered. "I- I'm abandoning Konoha... and coming with you."
"You wouldn't gain anything by following me... what are you plotting?"
"I'm not plotting anything... I- I've always regretted not going with you when you left Konoha!"
Sasuke stared at her unconvinced.
'Dammit does anyone believe my acts?'
"I'll do whatever you want me to do. I don't want to have any more regrets..."
Sasuke stared at her, bloody eyes narrowing in rage. "Do you know... what I want? I want to destroy Konoha! That's what I want..."
Bright green eyes widened as Sakura fully realized who- what was really standing before her.
"Would you really betray Konoha for me?"
"...Yes... if... you say so..." Sakura stammered.
A sword was driven into Sakura's gut.
"You're a lousy liar."
The impaled girl changed colours, melted into a trickle of brown muck.
'A Mud Clone? Why didn't I see it? I didn't see it! My vision is degrading!'
The real Sakura burst out of the ground. Sasuke leapt back amused by the attack despite the agony racing through his body.
"I'm here to stop you Sasuke!" The pink haired medic declared.
Sasuke smirked. Not the confident (some would say arrogant) smirk Sakura remembered, but mad looking.
"You? Stop? Me? Don't be absurd." In his eyes the girl was more of a joke than Naruto; at least he had the Kyuubi and massive chakra to compensate for his various shortcomings. This... cheerleader... this glorified nurse... had nothing.
Sakura clearly didn't agree, she hurled smoke bombs to the ground in front of her, hiding her in blinding black smoke.
Standing his ground awaiting her (no doubt pitiful) attack, Sasuke actually felt insulted. 'She thinks she can fight me alone? How insulting...'
THOOM!
A massive explosion erupted from the smoke. For a millisecond Sasuke thought Sakura had tried to Kamikaze him with a vest of explosives and screwed it up. This thought stopped as he was launched into the air as the earth beneath him exploded.
His eyes zeroed in on pink hair as Sakura- standing in what appeared to be a crater- the centre of the destruction, hurled kunai with letter bombs attached. Sasuke knocked the projectiles out of the air with shuriken squinting to see the blurry projectiles.
He looked back at Sakura and realised he'd lost track of her in the split second needed to deal with the bombs.
The Uchiha felt a presence to his left and turned to see his former team mate charging him with an impressive amount of chakra charged up to strike.
'She's actually trying to kill me...'
Sakura suddenly stopped. She drove her fist into the ground shattering the stone for meters in all direction like cheap glass, the shockwaves from the punch knocked Sasuke off balance. Sakura threw more kunai at him- this time her opponent neutralised the projectiles using Chidori Nagashi- the Uchiha cursed at being forced to use advanced Jutsu on such an inferior opponent.
'So that's her game. Knock me off balance with a power punch then use explosives to take me out from a distance.'
He charged Sakura, intending to strike before she could activate another punch. He would have used Genjutsu but Sakura was avoiding direct eye contact with him, no doubt to avoid the Sharingan's hypnotic effect- assuming he could use it- using Susanoo had damaged his eyes so badly he couldn't even see clearly anymore.
Sakura swung at him with another punch, and missed, Sasuke's blade went straight through her neck.
Again, Sakura collapsed into mud.
'This bitch is annoying me now. I really hate people who spam clones!'
Sasuke turned, seeing Sakura standing holding up a piece of paper- that exploded in a blinding light.
"YAAAAHHH!" Even with his eyes ability to pick up light badly diminished the pain was extraordinary, like someone had driven red hot daggers into both eyes and twisted when the points pierced into his brain.
Fighting through the agony, the blinded Uchiha lashed out with his Chidori Current believing Sakura would throw more explosives at her. Instead she threw poison gas bombs at him. The Uchiha heard the distinctive sound of the poison containers exploding and hissing.
Sakura saw Sasuke take a breath of her poison and begin shuddering and choking. She stood watching, her heart breaking as her former crush collapsed and shuddered in pain as the lethal substance collected in his lungs.
"I'm so sorry Sasuke." She pulled out her Tanto and charged at Sasuke wanting to end him painlessly.
The Uchiha turned right at Sakura. The trembling and gasping stopped.
Sakura froze as she felt something sharp and cold pierce her chest tearing through muscles, and bone and entering her heart.
"You're still annoying..."
Those were the last words Haruno Sakura heard as she died with the blade of the one she once loved piercing through her body.

END PART 4
AUTHORS NOTES
Big departure from canon here; Karin (who I consider a pointless character) is dead, Sakura is dead. The story will increasingly deviate from canon from here on out.
The purpose behind this chapter is set up for future chapters. Part of this is to portray a dark and violent world where people actually die in battles- which has been hard to believe in the current manga since the Mass resurrection no jutsu at the end of the Pain arc.
You may be wondering why Kakashi didn't make it to the fight. Originally I intended for Sasuke and Kakashi to face one another in battle; Sasuke and his Chidori variants, versus Kakashi and Raikiri variants I created for this fic. I abandoned this idea when I couldn't find a plausible and satisfying way to explain Sasuke fighting five Kage level Ninja (even though he'd be dead several times over if Gaara, Zetsu and Madara hadn't interfered).
Kakashi's degenerating Mangekyo Sharingan- the idea originated from finding a way to explain how Kakashi could be taken out by Sakura (it could never happen if he was 100%). Kakashi's condition in this fic is that he is going blind in his left eye and is suffering severe chakra network and nervous damage.
I skipped most of the Danzo/Sasuke fight because it isn't relevant to the story (it is a Naruto/Samui story in the end). That, and I am not and will never, write the nonsense known as Izanagi (several other examples of Sharingan Godmodding won't enter this story as well).
Samui isn't going to get sucked into a giant Gourd like in canon (that was one of the most blatant examples of fridging I've ever seen). The Gold and Silver Bros probably won't even appear. The zombie army probably will though.
Samui will take part in the upcoming training arc. It won't resemble the one in canon- I didn't like Naruto meeting his mother and finding out he descended from a clan who were Ninja royalty, with a unique combat style, connections to the line of Hokage (on both sides of his family) and what essentially was a Kekkei Genkai. I've read too many mediocre fanfics where that was the plotline- after Naruto stumbled across a scroll left carelessly (and conveniently) lying around.
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