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Final
Straw

By: Kuroi-Yasha

Chapter 4: Aoikaze
Lie!
Lie to my face.

Tell me it ain't no thing, that's what I wanna hear.

Take, your lie to the grave.

That's what an old friend told me look what it did for him.
- 3's
and 7's by Queens of the Stone Age
Silence reigned over the dank corridors. Even the
usual dripping sound of water was mysteriously missing and gave the depressing
area an even more foreboding atmosphere. It was here that twin globes of fiery
crimson stared down at the shaking form of a blond haired boy. Neither spoke,
one from the fear and shock that was currently rampaging his system and the
other from mere disinterest; as a powerful demon the Kyuubi no Youko was not
impressed. The blond that had imprisoned him must have been stupider than the
Kyuubi had imagined. Despite his utter hatred for the man that had imprisoned
him, he held a grudging respect for the man that had defeated him.
This child however�
The Fox let a snarl escape him as a tail shot
through the bars of the seal and captured the quivering boy. Again the boy
began to scream, a horrible frightened shriek more fitting of a banshee or
perhaps a bat-youkai than a mere human child. Ignoring the screams of the
frightened child he slowly enveloped him more with the furry appendage.
Reacting out of instinct the young Naruto did what almost anyone in his
position would do, he bit the tail. The action was about as effect as a flea
biting an elephant, in his defense young Naruto did posses some sharp teeth.
Squeezing slightly harder than necessary the fox gave the child the message that
he did not particularly enjoy being bitten.
�Silence your pitiful cries whelp!�
More out of fear and shock that such a creature
could speak than actual obedience, Naruto clamped his mouth shut. Again the
Kyuubi squeezed his young container, except this time a rush of warmth flooded
through the boy.
Outside the medics could only marvel in
horrified awe as the poison that they'd slipped into the comatose Naruto's IV
began to seep out of his skin. They didn't marvel long as the ANBU guard
quickly restrained them.
Inside, the Kyuubi growled at the medics
underhanded attempts to kill his host. As a demon lord he did not fear death,
but he'd be damned if he was going to be killed while his host's body was
defenseless. Having taken care of the problem the kitsune-lord released his
container before turning his back and slinking back into the confines of his
cage.
�Begone from here whelp, you have no business with me
and I have none with weaklings.�
�WHO ARE YOU CALLING WEAK KEGAWABORU?! (Meant to be Fur ball,
my dictionary sucks though so this might be wrong.).� The blond yelled more out
of instinct at being insulted than actually caring about dealing with the
fox-lord. His brazen insult of the demon did not go unnoticed though and the
fox instantly rounded on the boy.
�YOU DARE INSULT ME NINGEN?!� The fox-lord
bellowed as he unleashed a blast of killing intent at the rebellious blond.
�Despite
the power and hatred that washed over Naruto, he managed to hold his ground and
stare unblinkingly at the furious youko. �Yeah I do, and I'll insult you all I
want you bastard kitsune! You killed a lot of people and my parents too! Now I
find you stuck in me so I'll yell at you all I please!�
To say that the Kyuubi was shocked would be an
understatement, yet he showed none of it as he turned a critical eye towards
the furious blond child. Leaning down to be at eye level with the tiny blond,
crimson met azure. �Very well kit. What do you want?�
Naruto looked at the fox in surprise before
focusing on the demon lord. �I want to know everything. I want to know why you
attacked, and why you're inside me.�
The fox stared at the boy before rising and
turning, then slowly walking into the reassess of his cage. �Your idiot of a
father locked me inside of you during the attack. As for attacking your village
I did it because it was in my way.�
The young boy could only gape with shock at the
information the demon had given him. His father did this? Then that meant,
�I-I'm the Yondaime's s-son?�
The Kyuubi only chuckled at the blond, �Yes,
that fool sacrificed himself to stop me as his final gambit. Much good it did
him: everyone loves him but hates you.� Naruto could only lower his head as
the Kyuubi's eyes reemerged in the cage. �Some father huh?�
The jab had its desired effect as Naruto glared
at the fox, �SHUT UP! YOU'RE JUST MAD 'CAUSE OTOU-SAN KICKED YOUR ASS!�
The kitsune merely snorted as it turned from the
young blond for the third time. �Regardless, I've grown tired of your
presence.� The fox's footsteps could be heard as he retreated, �Oh, and
I'd keep your heritage to yourself if I were you. Never know who will want to
kill you. Your father had many enemies� much more in this village than in
others. Have fun�� Naruto could only stare into the darkness as the
Kyuubi's laughter filled his mind as consciousness began to return.
~-~-~-~
'Get your head out of your ass kit and watch
where you're going!'
Startled, Naruto was shaken from his reminiscing by the
harsh bark of a tree as his body forcefully introduced itself to the ancient oak.
'Memo to self� kill the fox.' The azure eyed boy grumbled as he slowly
rose to his feet. In all truth he was just taking out his anger on his
resident, and it was unfair to blame him for his own unawareness, but it made
him feel better to blame someone other than himself. A sudden explosion and
spike of chakra informed him that he'd gotten closer to the battle than he
would have liked. Gazing over the seas of Wave he caught sight of what he
believed were the Konoha-nin that were currently protecting one �Tazuna the
bridge builder�. The mist was thick, but was clearly caused by a jutsu.
Smirking, the golden-haired youth's features sharpened a bit
and became slightly more feral, but the changes were very inconspicuous to
someone who didn't know him well. Slowly, the fog began to disappear from his
view as his eyes took on a crimson hue to allow the figures on the bridge to come
into view as if he was no more than 10 yards away rather than the kilometer he
was. There were more present than he'd expected; there were five visible males,
one being the Demon of the Blood Mist, Momochi Zabuza. The other four he did
not know, but their headbands indicated that they were Konoha-nin. He could also
make out the outline of who he assumed was Zabuza's target being protected by
one of the younger males and one of the three visible females.
'Pink eh? I wonder�' All
perversion aside however the blond could see movement in two different
directions. To his left was Zabuza who was currently engaged in combat with who
he assumed were the team leaders of the Konoha-nin. To his right he could see
a� well� Naruto sweat dropped as he saw what was suppose to be a battle? 'Looks
more like the black haired one is getting his ass handed to him by the Hunter.
I wonder why the other two aren't helping him.' The answer became obvious
when the Hunter-nin gave a particularly fierce blow that knocked the
raven-haired youth a great deals away and was followed by a loud screech of �SASUKE-KUN!!�, as the other two
simultaneously attacked the green wearing Hunter. These two, it seemed, were
fairing better and were indeed somewhat of a challenge for the masked-nin as it
was forced to draw a series of thin senbon needles. This put a sort of hamper
on the brown haired ninken. The blue haired female was unaffected however as
she skillfully dodged the masked-nin's deadly projectiles and proceeded to
engage her opponent in a fierce display of masterful taijutsu.
'Beautiful�'
That was all that came to his mind as he watched the battle.
The blue haired woman moved with the finesse of a dancer; she would dip, curve,
and bend out of the way of her opponent. Likewise, the hunter was a refined
fighter whose movements could only be described as sharp but certainly not
choppy with too much rigidness; it was almost like the quick snaps of thin ice
being broken which made prediction of movement difficult. This truly was a
match of skill and power; he felt he could have watched this battle for days,
even months and not regret the time that passed. Unfortunately all good things
must end, and as such the match was quickly decided as the masked-nin unleashed
a very complex kekkei genkai that involved elemental manipulation and
surrounded the blue and brown haired Konoha-nin in crystalline mirrors of chakra
infused ice.
'Kit� that isn't natural� I sense�'
The blond nodded to his inner-demon as he watched as the
Hunter-nin proceeded to impale both Konoha-nin with several senbon, downing the
brown haired boy with a well aimed needle and disabling his canine companion by
forcing the boy to use his own body as a shield to protect the small dog. The
blue haired girl however refused to give up and was currently dogging needles
to the best of her ability and attacking the mirrors of ice, doing slight
damage from the blasts of concentrated chakra that she released in bursts from
her palms. 'Jyuuken.' Naruto frowned as the word came into his
head, how did he know the name of an attack that he'd never seen before?
Casting that thought aside however it was clear that the blue haired kunoichi
had no chance of defeating the masked hunter anymore, and it was only a matter
of time before it was over. 'I've got to save her. I can't let her�' He
froze as the thought passed through his head and was processed. Why should he
care what happened to this girl? He didn't know her, and there was really no
point in revealing himself ahead of schedule to save some kunoichi that he did
not know. So� why do I feel�' His thoughts however came to an abrupt
stop as a spike of chakra came from his left followed by the sound of thousands
of chirping birds and a radiant blue flash of lightning.
'Chidori: Created by morphing one's chakra into
positive and negative currents, resulting in an electrical discharge. Taking
said discharge one increased the amplitude of the charge by forcing an even
more powerful negative burst into it, keeping it reinforced and stable with
occasional and controlled pulses of a positive charge. Current chakra required
to execute attack: 10 percent normal, 2 percent youki.'
That was even more mystifying. Now, not only did he know the
name of the attack and how to perform it, but also the amount and type of chakra
he needed to perform it. Now all that was missing was the hand-signs and he'd have
virtually copied the move. 'Kyuubi?' He questioned, but received nothing
but a dark chuckle in response. Deciding that it was probably for the best if
he questioned the fox later, he focused on the current problem. The
silver-haired Konoha-nin would kill Zabuza within the minute which would in
actuality help his plans, but he knew the hunter would interfere and get
himself/herself killed, and he just couldn't have that. 'Such talent would
be wasted� not to mention�' No, he'd have no choice but to intercept the
attack and deflect it. The problem however was that he couldn't be revealed as
he was right now because if he did, all of his plans would be completely
in-salvageable and there would be no point in returning to Konoha.
'Heh, you're in quite a bind kit aren't you?'
The blond scoffed at the kitsune-lord, 'Hai, but I don't
suppose you'll be able to help me would you?' There was silence following
his plea/request. He was just about to give up and cancel his plans when the
demon spoke.
'Why don't you use him?'
Naruto's eyes widened at the fox's question. 'Baka! There
is no way I can� I don't even� How am I�'
The fox's dark chuckle was all the reply that he received as
a sharp pain erupted in his head and flashes of memories and other vision's ran
thru his mind. 'A gift� use it well kit. And remember, the ones that hold the
eyes of the thief are what I want. Kill them all; for remember, despite being
unattainable, the cloud's will always be at the mercy of the wind.'
Slowly the blond rose as he felt two other large chakra
entities make themselves known. 'Arigatou�'
~-~-~-~
It was almost over. It had been a hard fought battle, but it
seemed that they finally had the upper hand. Zabuza and his Hunter-nin
accomplice had given them a tough time, tougher than it should have actually
been considering that they outnumbered them three and a half to one. Despite
that odds, it seemed that quality was clearly in their opponents� corner.
Regardless, they were only human, and as such had made a fatal mistake: they
had become overconfident.
�IT'S OVER ZABUZA! CHIDORI!�
What happened next was both unprecedented and unimaginable
in their respective rights. As the deathblow came within inches of the Demon of
the Bloody Mist's heart, it was abruptly stopped as thick threads wrapped
themselves around the Hatake's wrist and sharply pulled him away from his
target and into a razor-like tail that severed the unfortunate nin in half. Or
it would have at least, had the gray-nin not used a hastily executed Kawamari
jutsu and had an unfortunate barrel take his place. Even so, the Jounin could
not prevent the grunt of pain that escaped him as a large amount of his
lifeblood began to leave him from the large gash that ran across his abdomen
joining the identical, but shallower, wound that had lead to Zabuza's would be
death.
�Yare yare! It would seem that the Copy-nin Hatake Kakashi
is as resourceful as they claim.�
�Yes, it is no wonder he is worth eight million ryo. I was
weary of whether or not this expedition of yours would prove fruitful, now I
can see that my time was not mismanaged.�
All the combatants on the field paused in their respective
fights to gaze upon the two intruders who had effortlessly downed the one
warrior that was the hope and bane of their current missions. They were an odd
pair indeed. The one that had tangled the silver-haired Jounin was tall, with a
mask that covered his face similar to that off Kakashi's, but had more of a vampire-ish
appearance. His eyes were a dark crimson, and his head was covered by a large
straw hat that barely revealed what could only be another mask beneath the
first one. The other was shorter, with a hunchback. Like his companion he also
wore a mask, except this one had more of the appearance of a muzzle built for a
human. His fiery red hair was the second most detail that drew notice to him
while the first was the large tail that had emerged and disappeared quickly
after being used. The only thing they both had in common were the twin set of
dark cloaks with red clouds, and the same identical straw hats.
�Despite this, new occurrence� bare in mind that we are here
to capture the child with the kori kekkie genkai (Ice Blood Limit). After we
have achieved this, feel free to indulge yourself in gathering your� trophies.
Is that clear Kakuzu?� The hunchbacked red head questioned.
Scoffing, the taller one, Kakuzu, nodded as he advanced on
the Hunter-nin. �Hai. I'll get the brat, you just deal with the rest of them
Sasori.�
Before even so much as a breath could be taken, the mirrors
that surrounded the Hyuuga heiress and the incapacitated ninken were shattered
revealing a sprawled and dazed Hunter-nin. 'Baka� na� (Impossible)' The
same thought ran through the heads of the Hunter, the Prodigy and the Avenger.
Leaping back to its feet, the Hunter quickly unleashed a furry of senbon at the
tall supposed abductor. Like they were nothing more than annoying flies rather
than razor sharp implements of death the crimson-eyed Kakuzu batted them from
his path as he unleashed a string of dark threads.
'Zabuza-sama� gomen. It seems that this is the
end�'
�KAITEN!!� A protective barrier of pure chakra
was all that saved the young Haku from certain capture. �N-nani�?� Slowly, as
the barrier receded, the dark haired Hunter-nin was able to turn and face her
savior, the blue haired Hyuuga heiress. �Why? Why did you save me?�
Haku couldn't keep the surprise and shock hidden when in
response the panting Hyuuga female gave a small smile. �Well, doesn't the
saying go: 'My enemy's enemies are my friends'?�
�Hai, but I don't think that has any meaning in this
situation.�
�Heh� I guess you're right, but hey, if anyone is going to
beat you, it's going to be me. Got that?� Haku was speechless, never before had
she been shown such kindness, with the exception of Zabuza-sama that is. Slowly
a small smile graced Haku's hidden features.
�Hai. Let's do our best��
��Or die trying!�
~-~-~
'Kuso! Why now?!' The
young tokubetsu-jounin cursed as she was forced to evade another whip from her
cloaked adversary, Sasori. 'This guy� he isn't normal.' Cursing herself
again as she barely avoided certain death by the skin of her teeth she leapt
back a safe distance before she began to blur thru a series of hand signs,
�Suiton: Taifuu no Ryuu!( Water Style: Dragon Typhoon)� Gathering the water
around her, she hastily unleashed a torrent of dragons at the mysterious, but
dangerous nuke-nin that impacted with a tremendous crash, completely destroying
a section of the bridge. As the dust settled from the attack, there was nothing
left of the cloud wearing nin other than shred's of his hat. Letting out a sigh
of relief the young jounin made a hasty beeline for her injured senpai and the
currently incapacitated Zabuza.
�KATSURAGI!!�
That was all the warning she got before she felt something
pierce her body. �N-nani�?� She questioned as she looked down at the intrusive
piece of metal that was poking out of her abdomen, �Oh�� Were the last words
that escaped her lips before she collapsed onto her knees shortly before impacting
with the ground. 'G-gomen� Na-ru�to�'
�Well, that's one down. Hm, a virtually crippled man, and an
unconscious one, I seem to have received the shorter end of the stick.
Regardless, now I shall merely eliminate you and Zabuza-san and collect the
reward from Gato. That should shut Kakuzu up for a while.� Sasori mumbled as he
approached the downed ex-ANBU. �It is a shame to kill one such as yourself in
such a dishonorable manner completely unbefitting of a man of your former
caliber. You have my condolences.� Slowly the red-head raised his tail as he
prepared to deliver his death blow. �Sayonara, Sharingan Kakashi.�
'Obito� Sensei� Outo-san� gomen.'
CLANK
�Keh, you talk a lot of smack for a weakling.� The Zanbatou
wielding missing-nin taunted as his blade was all that stood between Kakashi
and an early grave.
�Oh? Still able to move? I admit I might have underestimated
your tenacity. However�� The charcoal haired kiri-nin received no warning.
Again another fighter on the bridge was caught off guard and looked down to see
a second smaller tail impaled thru his chest cavity, �Your stupidity is second
to none. And to think Kisame held you in such high regard� oh?� The ex-Suna nin
raised an eyebrow as a large gash appeared on his chest. Stepping back Sasori
examined the damage done, in the end it was no more than a shallow wound, but still�
�It'll take more than that to�� Zabuza never got to finish
as the words died in his throat. 'What, happened�?' Was the last thought
that ran thru Zabuza's mind as his head slid from his shoulders. The dark eyed
Sasori merely glared at the decapitated body that slowly fell to the ground,
�Confident banter is reserved for the victor.� He growled as he kicked the
severed head of his former opponent to the side. Turning he eyed the now
downcast Hatake.
�Well, let us resume where we left off, ne?�
�You� you're a monster. A blood thirsty murderer. Do you
feel nothing for the life you ended?�
�Hm? Are your gray hairs not just for show? If I recall, I
killed two people.� Turning his head to the side, he caught slight movement.
Taking his chance, the young Jounin quickly put distance between himself and
the homicidal blood-head, �Hm, it would seem that you are correct. Regardless
I'll deal with her after I take your head, after all our organization does
require funds.�
�Organization? Who do you work for? Aren�t you Gato's?�
�Hm? Oh! You mean the fat one. I found him unpleasant and
underfunded, so we dealt with him. No I don't think it matters who we work for
or with, as long as I achieve my goals, then I will eliminate all that
interfere.�
�Goals? You're not after the complete domination of the
elemental countries?�
�Such a cliqu� goal. No, my goal is much simpler: 'The
Perfect Puppet'. And what better to use than a human? I wonder how well your
body will endure.�
�M-Monster! You're worse than trash; creatures like you don't
even deserve to be called human anymore!�
�You may call me as you see fit, regardless, I did what I
had to in order to ensure that my goals were accomplished. Was he not the same?
Are you not the same? In the end we are nothing but tools, but like tools there
will always be superior ones.�
�You're despicable. I� I won't let you get away. YOU'LL PAY!
CHIDORI!� The silver haired nin roared as he leapt at his opponent with
a newfound determination.
�Baka, so be it, join Zabuza in hell!� The red head growled
as he fired several clawed and spiked appendages and projectiles at the
charging gray haired Hatake.
�DIE!!� Both
combatants yelled as their attacks collided. And a blur of blue and yellow
stood between them.
�B-Baka na� Y-You're dead!�
�Sensei��
There between both combatants holding both attacks
millimeters from impact stood a tall blond man, his sun colored hair tossed
about in unruly spikes and cold aqua eyes that radiated power. Gone was his
signature cloak and headband, replaced instead with a protector with a whirl in
its center, his cloak a darker black that matched that of Sasori, but with blue
swirls and curves another whirl again in the center of the back of the cloak,
giving the impression of a rampaging storm. Slowly the frosty eyes of the blond
turned to face Sasori.
�Akatsuki, surrender at once and leave or I shall be forced
to eliminate you prematurely.�
The words that the blond spoke were soft, yet laced with
undeniable threat and power. Deciding against tempting fate at the current
distance, the ex-Suna nin leapt back from his opponent, �Oh really? Pardon me
if I don't believe�� Again the underhanded red-head lashed out at his
unprepared opponent; this time however, instead of impacting with the target,
the red-haired Akatsuki member was met with a bright flash of yellow and was forced
to use a mizu-bunshin to avoid his premature death as a violent perfect sphere
of pure chakra decimated his clone. 'K-kuso� this� this is�' Jumping
clear over the blond and landing in front of his stitched together ally, he
quickly kicked aside the pathetic stalling technique of the Uchiha, the Aburame
and the trembling Haruno.
�Kakuzu! We leave now! Forget the child we must report to
Leader-sama about this new development!�
Cursing, the thread-nin cast a look around for at least the
head of the decapitated Kiri-nin, but finding it out of reach settled for his
blade.
�Akatsuki.� Both members froze as a flash of yellow appeared
in front of them, �Take this message to your leader: 'Even the largest of
clouds is no more than a slave to the mighty wind.' Your days are numbered, Aoikaze
(Blue Wind) has come.�
~-~-~-~
The battle had reached an unexpected (and anti-climatic)
conclusion, but not an unwelcome one. After giving his warning the Yondaime
disappeared without so much as a word, leaving a confused and somewhat
depressed Kakashi. So far, the young faux-Hunter was taking the death of her
master and father figure quite hard, and it had taken the combined effort of
teams seven and eight to stop her from killing herself. That had also been a
slight surprise in and on itself; no one had really expected for the skilled
hunter to be a huntress. Hinata and the mostly incapacitated Katsuragi had
taken a huge offense to the news. None the less, things went back to there tense
normalcy between the Uchiha survivor and the Hyuuga princess, leaving a
confused Haku who was told that she was better off not knowing.
Finally, a week later, the time had come to leave with a
slightly saddened group of Konoha-nin and a gloomy ice-princess as she had been
dubbed by Kiba after he had not so subtly tried to hit on her and received a very
well placed kick in return. Looking back at the village, one Katsuragi Yume
sighed sadly as she followed the her temporary team and allies to the gates of
the bridge after being given a celebration for freeing Wave from the iron fist
of Gato. 'So you weren't here after all, huh Naruto-kun?' Sighing again,
she forced a smile as the Hyuuga heiress showed her the flowers that the people
of Wave had given them when she ran into the firm form of her senpai (and former
secret crush) Hatake Kakashi.
�Kakashi-senpai? Is something the�?� A sudden crashing of
glass to her left startled her as she turned to see a pale Hinata.
�Hinata-chan?�
�I-it's a dream��
�What is it�? Hinata-chan, Hatake-senpai?�
Peering around the stiff Hatake, Yume caught sight of a dark
black and silver outfit.
�OHAYO!�
The voice caused all who knew it to freeze because there
before them, smiling, was a young man. His untidy blond hair was set in spikes
that flared all around his head, his crystal clear azure eyes were shining with
happiness with thin scars on his cheeks that resembled whiskers running on the
edges of his face. Truly, nothing had changed about the boy except for a few
feet in growth and his dark outfit, and the strange forehead protector he wore.
�Hey guys, it�s nice to meet cha'! My name is Naruto
Uzumaki, also formerly known as the Nine-tailed demon Maverick of Konohagakure.
It's a pleasure to be traveling back to that hell hole with all of you! Please
treat me better than they did or I'll have to gut you like fish!� The kind
smile never left his lips, but his eyes took on a darker hue. Naruto had
returned.
Kuroi-Yasha: Well, that's it for chapter 4. I
know, not that great of an ending. Well, actually this is the sixth time I've
re-written this chapter, and I'm still not happy. But I'm out of time, and I
can only hope you guys enjoyed at least part of the chapter.
I'd like to take this time and thank all the
people who gave me such wonderful reviews as well as respond to some of them.
So firstly lets get thru with the responces,

Perpetual159 (AFF.net): All is well, don't worry,
I should have told you that I had taken your offer and not just randomly sent
it to you. Its alright though, because I have a great beta currently, but I'm
glad that you read my story anyways and eventually remembered. So no harm done,
hope you enjoyed the chapter and hope to hear more from you soon.

ShouraiChan (AFF.net): Holy crap! I can honestly
tell you you did indeed scare the crap out of me. When I first ready the
begining of your review I was certain that I had gotten my first flame, and I
was thinking 'I can't believe it! I got my first flame on what I thought was
my best chapter! Do I really suck that bad?' And then I got really
depressed and was about to close the window, but I figured, 'What the hell,
if someone didn't like it, then maybe atleast they can help me make it a bit
better.' and so, I read the rest and was emensely relieved when it turned
out that you had actually loved my story, so ShouraiChan, Domo Arigatou!

Miheran (MM.org): Thank you very much for the
review! Yes, I tried to give Hinata an almost entire makeover, however she is
still the sweet Hina-chan, just with a whole lot of bad-ass-ness to make things
more interesting. Actually i based this Hinata off of a girl who use to be
kinda mean to me when I was little, but I never really understood why. MUCH
LATER I found out that she liked me, and that was why she was mean. Still made no
sence, but I guess attraction is kinda like that isn't it? Anyways hope you
enjoyed the chapter!

Kyuubi123 (FF.net): YES!! PEOPLE LOVE BADASS
HINATA!!! SHE WILL OWN ALL NOOBS!! Ahem, actually...yeah...random moment there.
Well, I'm glad that you continue to support my story and love my characters.
Thank you for your review! Hope to hear from you again!

NiebieskiLis (FF.net): Again, I am so glad that
people love the new and (semi) improved Hinata. Cause I like her regardless of
her shy nature, actually that's what makes me like her period. Anyhow, I hope
that this chapter made you happy, and I hope to hear from you again. Thanks for
the feedback!
CunningFox (FF.net): Heh, yeah. Sorry you have to picture that, but
unfortunately that is who our new Hina-chan is. Don�t worry she�ll use other
phrases, but I like turd the most. Its degrading, but still lets her keep her
dignity. I� can�t promise she�ll stop
using it, but I�ll try using it less. Thanks for the review!
Now, just because I didn't reply to you doesn't
mean that you are any less important; WolfLord04, EDelta88, PsyCHo, Dusk
Raider, kyuubiNaru1990, Selonianth and blackraven1412BR. I'd
like to thank you all for your kind words and your support, as an author
nothing means more to me than the praise and kind words of readers. THANK YOU
ALL SO VERY MUCH!!

Now, next chapter will be up in about (you
guessed it!) a month. Unfortunately I am a ungodly slow writer and am very
prone to writers block. However if I get lots of reviews I shall force my sorry
lazy ass to write faster and longer. Next chapter will be at least 5k words, so
you won't be disappointed and I'll also include a nice little intro as always. Well
next chapter will be all Naruto �and
Hinata, and Naruto�s long awaited return. Also I'll give an explanation on
Naruto's power and other fun stuff. �See
you all soon!
Ja Ne!
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