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Kicking the Habit	By : KohakuShadow Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 1312 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Kicking the Habit

Chapter Four:
The Replacement Technique

“Naruto, what are we doing at the sweet shop?” Shikamaru
sighed when the blond dragged him inside the candy store. He'd
calmed down somewhat, though he was still edgy, but Naruto wouldn't
let go of his wrist lest he escape, which made this even more
embarrassing.

“I told you, it's plan B!”

“What, exactly, is plan
B, again?”

Naruto didn't answer right away, telling the woman behind the
counter, “We'd like to buy 200 lollipops please.”

“We what?!” Shikamaru declared as the woman packaged them
up. “What are you planning to do with that many lollipops?”
This did not bode well...

“It's the replacement technique!” Naruto declared, paying
for the candies and removing one from the bag, unwrapping it, and
sticking it in the Nara's mouth when Shikamaru opened it to speak
again. The Nara almost choked. “Basically, instead of
cigarettes, you can have lollipops! So whenever you want to smoke,
you have a lollipop instead.”

Shikamaru took the lollipop out of his mouth so he could speak. “Are
you trying to kill me? If I eat that many lollipops I'll go into a
diabetic coma.”

“A what?” Naruto, you're so special—and by that we
mean in the head.

Shikamaru sighed. “Never mind,” he said. “You
already bought the damn things, so I guess I'll try it for a day or
two, but I think this has got to be the stupidest idea I've ever
heard.”

--

By three thirty the next day Shikamaru was glaring at a
coconut-flavored lollipop as if willing it to spontaneously burst
into flame.

“Hey, Shikamaru,” Naruto said. The Nara didn't answer,
he was too busy glaring at the white hard candy. “Hey,
Shikamaru,” Naruto repeated a bit louder.

Shikamaru lifted his eyes to stare flatly at the other nin and throw
the lollipop back into the ceramic bowl he was keeping them in in
disgust. “What is it?” he asked.

Naruto grinned, “Chouji would be really jealous if he knew you
got all these sweets to yourself, huh?” he asked impishly,
trying to lighten the brunette's mood a bit, arms coming up behind
his forehead casually.

Shikamaru normally would have at least the good humor to call the
blond nin an idiot. But he normally wasn't two days into a
nicotine-free lifestyle and hating every second of it. “This
isn't working,” he stated, barely managing to chuck the entire
bowl of lollipops at Uzumaki Naruto's conveniently target-shaped
head. “If I eat another one of those damn things I'm going to
vomit.” He gestured coarsely at the bowl.

“Hm...” Naruto answered, crossing his arms over his chest
and nodding his head thoughtfully. “Maybe candy wasn't the
best idea. We should replace the replacement! But with what?”
He stuck his chin out and rubbed it as if deep in thought.

Shikamaru's brain went into overdrive. If he could think of something
that would drive the blond away, then he could do the 'cowardly'
thing and quit this whole quitting process, buy a pack of cigarettes,
and be back to life as usual by dinnertime. And he thought he came
up with the perfect thing. He smirked slightly and said, “I may
have an idea,” standing up and moving around the counter, and
planting an almost violent kiss on the shorter nin's lips!

Naruto's blue eyes went wide with shock before, much to the Nara's
distress, he grabbed onto Shikamaru's green vest and pulled him
closer, returning the kiss a little too eagerly! When their
lips parted, the Nara looking rather surprised, Naruto looked away,
face flushed, and licked his lips. “I knew I should have met
you first,” he said quietly.

The strategic genius found himself at a loss as to both what Uzumaki
Naruto meant, and what in the hell his next move should be. “Come
again?” he asked uncertainly.

Naruto shifted awkwardly, then answered by pulling the startled Nara
down into another kiss. This one was more of a shy gesture and
Shikamaru found his heart beginning to race in a manner he thought it
might never do again and he found himself responding to the gesture
gently before they parted again.

“I meant...before Sasuke,” Naruto admitted, not able to
look the Nara in the eye. Shikamaru's eyes widened in surprise.
“...if I met you first, maybe we would have both ended up
happier,” Naruto muttered shyly. “I always thought, that
Shikamaru, he's a really dependable, nice guy. I always thought
whoever ends up with him is pretty lucky, even if he is a lazy
ass.”

“Was that last part really necessary?” the shadow nin
complained, not quite able to step back to a more friendly distance.

“I just mean, you need someone to depend on too sometimes.”

When Naruto looked up at him again with those big blue eyes of his
Shikamaru felt his heart swell up until it felt like it might burst
out of his chest. “You can't bully a guy into quitting
cigarettes in three days,” he said.

“I'm not going anywhere, are you?” Naruto answered,
leaning in a little without noticing it. He'd actually been drawn to
the Nara for a while, he just never noticed it because there was also
Sasuke, and he'd met Sasuke first. No matter how much Naruto thought
about it, that's what it felt like it all came down to—some
weird twist of fate that made him wonder 'what if?'

Shikamaru found himself fixated on Naruto's lips and the way they
moved. They were having a 'moment'; his brain knew it, but his body
couldn't stop it as he absently answered, “Right now, I can't
think of anywhere else I'd rather be,” and pressed his lips
against Naruto's in the third time in as many minutes and the tension
that had felt as if it etched itself into his bones melted away when
the blond's arms wrapped around his shoulders. His pulse began to
race. It was completely different than being embraced by Asuma,
kissed by Asuma. Naruto was shorter than he was and his arms seemed
thin and fragile, but Naruto still felt somehow right in his
arms. He blamed it on the 'moment' and just enjoyed it for what it
was, tongues tangling until breathing became an absolute imperative
and they parted just enough to breathe against each other's lips.

Naruto looked at him uncertainly for only a moment before leaning up
a bit overeager to begin another kiss. Shikamaru couldn't help but
find both that oft concealed fragility and childish over-exuberance
rather charming and managed to catch himself on the counter before
they both toppled to the floor. When they broke for air again
Shikamaru had the presence of mind to breathlessly pull back, holding
Naruto at arm's length.

Naruto's eyes widened and in his defense declared, “you started
it!”

“I know,” Shikamaru said, having sense enough to look a
bit embarrassed. “But if we don't stop now, I'll have to
finish it.”

Naruto's eyes widened in understanding. He grew up around Kakashi and
Jiraiya, so even if he was a ditz about a lot of things, he still
understood what the Nara was trying to tell him. He wasn't sure how
to respond because he wasn't sure how Shikamaru would take what he
wanted to say. 'To hell with it,' Naruto decided. He'd never
been one to hold his tongue anyway, and said tongue wasn't even
remotely satisfied with just a few candy-sweet kisses. “If you
don't finish it, I will,” he insisted, pushing Shikamaru a bit
too roughly against the counter and pressing against him. He didn't
like seeming needy and desperate, but damn it, he needed
Shikamaru, right now.

Shikamaru grunted as his spine hit the counter. “You'll finish
me if you aren't careful,” he complained.

“Sorry,” Naruto said, but couldn't keep himself from
grinning up at the Nara. He'd never done anything like this before
and it was strangely liberating.

“You don't sound sorry,” Shikamaru griped, looking down
at him, but finding he couldn't quite keep the hint of a smile off of
his own lips. When did Naruto become so cute? Shikamaru had never
noticed it before.

“I'm sorry,” Naruto said. “That I hurt you, but
not that I captured you.” He grinned impishly.

That comment prompted Shikamaru to reverse the situation, moving
quickly to pin Naruto against the refrigerator, hands captured above
his head. “Captured, am I?”

Naruto smirked and leaned his head in to lick a sultry line along the
Nara's jaw and suckle his earlobe between his lips. His leg lifted
so that he could rub his thigh between the taller nin's legs. Both
gestures startled the Nara rather obviously, and he shuddered. He
didn't consider himself a pervert, but he definitely had a healthy
interest in intimacy, and even that touch, after six months of only
his left hand and a vibrator to keep him company, he reacted a little
too strongly to Naruto's attention. “I've captured your
attention at least,” the blond whispered in what was probably
supposed to be a sexy voice against the moistened flesh before taking
the lobe between his teeth again and beginning to rub his thigh more
firmly between Shikamaru's legs.

“Then let's see if you can keep it,” the Nara answered,
releasing the blond's hands, but only to take one again and give the
shorter nin a little tug into motion, leading him into the bedroom.

Naruto blushed, finding the hand holding unnecessarily romantic. It
drove home what they were about to do and it sent a horde of
caterpillars crawling through his belly and exploding as a mass of
fluttering butterflies all over his suddenly prickly, over-sensitive
skin—intimate regions not excluded.

By the time Shikamaru tossed him to the mattress, Naruto was already
comfortably aroused, if not completely erect. When Shikamaru pulled
out his hair tie and dropped it on the dresser, shaking his head and
letting those long tendrils of hair fall out of their usual bound and
prickly state and began to shrug out of his vest the blood seemed to
rush to his nether regions, transforming his minor state of arousal
into a raging hard on.

Shikamaru noticed the way Naruto's pants were tenting at the groin as
he made his way over to the bed and quirked a brow. “Well,
you've always been excitable, so I guess this is to be expected.”

Naruto blushed, opening his mouth for a sarcastic retort when the
Nara leaned over him a bit and pressed his palm against the orange
bulge. Anything he might have been about to say flew out of Naruto's
head as a sharp cry escaped and he bucked against Shikamaru's hand.

The eager response to such a small gesture was a serious turn on and
Shikamaru felt the warmth that had begun to pool in his groin tighten
into rough coils of burnt energy in his balls. Any hesitation he may
have been feeling flew out the window and he knelt down at the end of
the bed, not waiting long at all to move his hand from the blond
ninja's groin to his hip, and leaning in to lick the orange cloth.

Predictably, Naruto's hips bucked and another cry/moan escaped at the
Nara's teasing, but Shikamaru's hands firmly holding him against the
mattress were more than enough to keep him steady as he teased the
member thoroughly, even going so far as to such the tip of the bulge
into his mouth, cloth and all.

“Sh-Shikamaru!” Naruto gasped, eyes squeezing tightly
shut. Who knew the Nara was so damn good with his mouth! He'd
gotten so riled up that if he didn't stop soon, Naruto was sure he
was going to cum in his pants, which would be embarrassing for a
number of reasons, including, but not limited to the fact that the
Nara had only been teasing his member so blatantly for two or three
minues.

“Hmmm?” the Nara deliberately asked around the member,
sending a ripple of vibration through the shaft as his hands slid up
under Naruto's shirt to touch the bare skin of his stomach.

Naruto, much to his embarassment, bucked and climaxed far too early.

Shikamaru moaned a little, tasting a
hint of the blonde's semen seeping through the cotton. He had a
feeling this would happen the second he laid eyes on the bulge, and
it was worth the teasing to see the embarrassed flush on Uzumaki
Naruto's striped cheeks. 'He's become so damn cute...'
“Now that I've captured
your attention,”
he said with a lazy smirk, slowly pulling the pants and boxer shorts
down over Naruto's hips and tossing both garments aside, watching the
blond shiver as the cool air hit his intimate regions. “...I'm
going to finish what we've started.” He cupped Naruto's cheek,
tilting his chin up for a deep kiss as his other hand kept itself
quite busy unzipping and removing the blond's jacket.

Immediately post-orgasm and slightly
dazed, even if Naruto wanted to give him a bit of a fight he
couldn't, and he didn't want to moving his shoulders and arching his
back to help Shikamaru strip him down to the black t-shirt he was
wearing underneath. Shikamaru didn't wait, still exchanging heated
kisses with the blond, to slide his hands up under said t-shirt,
taking it with him as they slid up the skin until it was bunched up
at Naruto's armpits. His fingers spread out, thumbs finding Naruto's
nipples and rubbing both roughly. Naruto's answer was to moan into
the kiss and buck up against him. He wasn't hard again, yet, but the
Nara knew it would be hardly any time at all. When they broke for
breath again he sat back on his knees and peeled his own shirt off,
tossing it to the side. The fishnet he wore beneath it quickly
followed before he leaned over Naruto again, rolling his hips so that
his heated erection rubbed against the Uzumaki's flaccid member. It
wasn't flaccid for long. He could feel it beginning to bulge against
his black pants already, and didn't think he minded at all that he
was going to have to do laundry after this adventure. In fact, he
had a feeling the more laundry he had to cram into the load, the more
successful an adventure it was. Probably the only time in his life
that the Nara didn't mind cleaning up was after sex. Now we all know
why his apartment was so much tidier when Asuma was around. Maybe
Naruto could bribe Shikamaru into doing the dishes with kitchen sex.
Heh. But that's getting a bit ahead of ourselves. Shikamaru stole
another hungry kiss from the breathless blond's mouth. Tongues
tangled as if they wouldn't be satisfied unless their partner was
choking on the versatile muscle in their mouth. Groins bucked eagerly
against one another. It was lusty and clumsy and over-eager as they
moaned into one another's mouths, but Naruto was only so patient
before he began to claw at the Nara's pants to try to expose him.
Having no success pinned beneath the brunette, he flipped them over,
startling the Nara, and taking advantage of the minute conquest to
strip the Nara of his remaining garments.

It gave them both a moment to gather
their swirling thoughts. But really the only thing on Naruto's mind
as Shikamaru, naked now, slid back on the mattress to sit more
comfortably against the headboard was the thick erection nestled
between the Nara's legs. “Geez, Sai would never say you
have a small dick,” he complained, feeling his manly pride
slightly battered, even as his arousal swelled.

“Don't talk about other guys when you're in bed with me,”
Shikamaru griped. “I'll take that as a compliment though.”

“Good,” Naruto answered,
stretching out on his belly. “Because it was definitely
a compliment.” He lifted a hand to stroke the Nara's engorged
flesh, pulling a soft moan from Shikamaru's lips, which got louder
once his own sucked one of the brunette's heavy balls into his mouth.
He moaned around it, his innards almost aching with how much he
found he wanted it. When he'd been with Sasuke—that short and
extremely disgruntled relationship—the two had constantly
fought over who would be on top. There would be none of that with
Shikamaru. Even though he knew the Nara had been submissive to
Asuma, it somehow went without words that Naruto would be on the
receiving end of this encounter, and for the first time in his life
he wanted to be. The
thought of Shikamaru's member thrusting hotly inside of him was
almost enough to make him release again, and he shuddered with the
Nara when his mouth wandered up the shaft, exploring with lips and
tongue and teeth and savoring every hiss and moan that escaped the
Nara's mouth. He'd never really been into blow jobs—with
Sasuke, and the few one night stands he'd had with Kiba and Sai and
the two or three-night stands with Neji, it had been a chore that he
wanted to get over with as quickly as possible. But Shikamaru...he
felt like he could give Shikamaru oral for hours without getting
tired of it. He swirled his tongue around the head, lapping up the
precum escaping as Shikamaru grit his teeth and fisted the pillow
beside him, and took as much of the shaft as he cold into his
self-proclaimed big mouth. He couldn't fit it all but started
bobbing his head anyway.

The Nara was certain he was losing
his mind. He'd gotten blow jobs before, plenty of them, but he had
never been sucked off
so eagerly. If there was such a thing as a ramen-flavored popsicle,
Shikamaru was sure this was exactly the treatment it would get. On
the one hand, he wanted to let the blond ninja suck him off like this
all day, on the other, he knew he wouldn't stand up to but a few more
minutes of being so intimately spoiled. “Enough,” he
rasped roughly, pulling the blond off of his cock with a bit of
a hair tug.

“That hurt,” Naruto complained, licking his lips, hands
still exploring the Nara's saliva-slick cock.

“Sorry,” Shikamaru answered. “But it was urgent.”
He got up from the bed, making Naruto frown a bit, wondering what
he'd done wrong. The blond had nothing to worry about. Shikamaru
moved around the bed and pulled a half-empty tube of lubricant from
the nightstand before climbing back onto the bed behind the blond. He
was going to have to make quick work of this because he couldn't wait
long, after that blow job there was just no way in hell.

Naruto started to turn around to see what the Nara was up to, but
Shikamaru pushed him back against the mattress, before resuming the
action of uncapping the bottle. “Lift your hips,” he
said. It was more of an order than a request, and Naruto's eyes
widened a bit, always startled by the Nara's authoritative side, but
finding it kind of a turn on. He did, arching his back and pulling
his lower body up onto his knees. He shivered when he felt the cold
lubricant drip down onto his ass and trail down his crack. “Ah!
Cold...” he complained.

“You're a big boy,” the Nara answered, amused. “Deal
with it.”

“Nowhere near as big as you,” Naruto answered.

“You seem to have a fixation on my cock,” Shikamaru
smirked, dragging two fingers down the crack, and smoothing the
lubricant over his anus.

“That's because I want to feel you ram it into my asshole so
badly,” Naruto blurted, blushing at his own words. He really
needed to stop agreeing to read Jiraiya's dirty books before he sent
them to the publishers. But well, since Jiraiya had started writing
some yaoi lately they'd become a lot better! At least that was
Naruto's opinion.

Shikamaru's fingertips paused and he shuddered. He never thought of
himself as someone who was interested in talking dirty, but when he
wanted to ram into Naruto so badly those words were almost as intense
as the earlier oral molestation of his tense member. He pressed the
tip of the tube of lubricant against Naruto's hole and let it press
in a bit, squeezing what was left out of the tube.

Naruto moaned, arching his back
harder as he felt the cold gel squirt inside. The tube fell away and
two of the brunette's fingers immediately followed, plunging deep
into Naruto's ass. Both men moaned, Naruto at the sensation of the
fingers entering his barely prepared but eager hole, and Shikamaru at
how hot and tight said hole felt clamping around his fingers. His
groin throbbed as if demanding 'okay! My turn now!' but he had to do
at least a little better than this. Naruto was so tight.
If he wasn't stretched Shikamaru would end up really hurting him. He
scissored the fingers, tearing an eager, lusty moan from Naruto's
lips and with only a bit of delay plunged a third finger inside,
thrusting and wanting to apologize for being so rough with the blond.

Naruto didn't need said apology
though. Just as he was opening his mouth to apologize and ask if he
was alright, Naruto glared over his shoulder at the brunette and
declared, “Nara Shikamaru, if you don't stick your dick inside
right now I will never
forgive you.” He knew it
would hurt, but he couldn't wait a second longer! If Shikamaru
didn't stick it in he was going to end up shoving the Nara against
the mattress and impaling HIMSELF on that thick rod.

Shikamaru apparently didn't have to be asked more than once though.
He used his hands to spread Naruto's cheeks and managed to say, “Just
remember that you asked for this.” The blond didn't have a
chance to answer before the Nara's large cock speared deep into him
in one firm stroke. There was a brief jolt of pain that raced up his
spine, but it was nothing in comparison to the intense pleasure that
rocked through him, leaving him gasping for breath as his mouth
opened into a silent moan.

There was nothing romantic about this needy sort of sex. Once
inside, Shikamaru couldn't force his body to still long enough to let
his current lover adjust, nor could he take it slow. He immediately
started thrusting long, hard, and deep, fingers digging into Naruto's
hips deep enough that the blond, though he hardly noticed the hands
on him now, would probably have five oval bruises purpling on each
hip in the morning. Naruto, likewise, would probably have cursed the
Nara out for taking his time. He bucked back against the intrusion
as much as Shikamaru's firm grip would allow, which wasn't much,
lifting himself to his hands for more leverage as they slapped loudly
and moistly against one another until Shikamaru groaned out his name
and coated the blond's innards more than thoroughly with his seed.

Feeling Shikamaru's hot climax tilted Naruto over the edge, without
his groin having been touched at all, climaxed harder than the first
time, spilling his seed all over the comforter as he cried out
loudly. They fell against the mattress, crushing their lips together
in a kiss no less hungry for having had their hormones sated.

“If this is the replacement for my cigarettes, I might not have
any trouble kicking the habit after all,” Shikamaru joked
breathlessly.

Naruto grinned stupidly and crawled on top of the brunette, pushing
some long brown hair away from the Nara's glistening brow. “I
think that can be arranged. You just have to tell me when the craving
is too bad.”

They shared another, less rushed kiss and Shikamaru let his hands
drift down Naruto's spine until they reached his rear end and gave it
a bit of a squeeze while they lingered in the kiss—both having
gone too far until now without any real contact or affection. He felt
his seed dripping out of Naruto's rear end over his fingers and
swallowed when the blond moaned against his mouth.

“I'm definitely craving right now,” the Nara said, giving
him another firm squeeze.

Naruto straddled his hips more properly and took both of their
recently spent members in hand, beginning to stroke them together.
“Hm, we'll have to do something about that,” he answered,
though they both knew cigarettes weren't even close to what the Nara
was craving. They had sex three more times before falling asleep
tangled messily in one another's arms, and when they woke up sometime
in the middle of the night, they did it again and, hungry, fumbled
naked into the kitchen, where the Nara made some instant ramen for
the both of them, which somehow turned into Naruto sucking him off on
the kitchen floor.

Shikamaru didn't know when he'd become such a pervert, but the more
he fucked Naruto, the more he wanted to fuck Naruto again. He was
sure he blond wouldn't be able to walk for two days after this
episode, but any time he asked if his new lover (apparently) was
alright, Naruto told him he healed quickly and demanded rougher
treatment—harder, faster, or both.

People often say that sex and love have nothing in common, but
Shikamaru was fairly sure there were times when that wasn't true.
Sex revealed aspects of people you didn't know existed, and the more
hidden facets of Naruto he discovered through their intercourse, the
more infatuated by the blond he became. Laying exhausted on the cold
tile of the kitchen floor, Shikamaru stared up at the edge of that
damnably huge bowl of lollipops as Naruto yawned against his
shoulder. “...the hell am I supposed to do with all those damn
things?” he muttered.

“Chouji will be back from his mission soon enough,”
Naruto answered.

Shikamaru smirked a little and said, “and I'm supposed to be
the genius.”

“Well, nobody's perfect,” Naruto quipped, though if you
asked him right now he would say with total confidence that Shikamaru
Nara was damn close—if only he could kick the smoking habit and
do dishes once in a while.

Shikamaru's answer was to silence him with a kiss. When they parted
again he said, “we should go to back to bed.”

“Yeah,” Naruto answered, but neither man moved again for
a very long time.

~The End~

Yes, it's a COOKIE. In Chapter 3, Shikamaru was singing
a song. I will write a one-shot pairing of your choice (no
Orochimaru, no Sasuke, and no Akatsuki though) to the first person
who can give me the proper name of the song and the series it's from.
If you're right, you can also choose a pairing from either Naruto, or
the series in question. Email answers to sakaki@otakumail.com,
subject “KTH Cookie”.

We have a winner! Cookie closed. The answer is 'Moon on the Water' from the anime 'Beck'.

To
Reviewers:

You'll
have to forgive me for not thanking you all personally for your
support this time. It's 3 am and I'm TIRED. Basically, you all rock.
A few of you said chapter 3 wasn't that bad, maybe it wasn't, but it
just wouldn't go in the direction I was shooting for. Since it landed
so far off mark I just felt really horrible about it. I feel like I
was really off my game with this story after, uh...chapter 1. I ended
up having way too many distractions and I just couldn't focus on it,
so as entertaining as the pairing is for me, I'm glad I'm finished.

Prpl
Grl gets a special shout out just because she's so awesome, and
because you said we switched roles—that's probably true
somewhat, but in reality I always prefer to read a story over pwp
(except sometimes you're really in the mood to just read a smutty sex
scene, but I mean as a general rule), it's just that well, let's face
it, this is AFF, so that's like free reign to be completely shameless
in how graphic I want to be. Haha. So even if I'm writing pure smut
for the site, that doesn't mean I don't like to read a well thought
out storyline. I'll check out your pwp when my brain regenerates a
little though.
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