Naruto's Fetish (Remastered) | By : BigE2955 Category: Naruto > General Views: 126576 -:- Recommendations : 5 -:- Currently Reading : 6 |
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Third chapter. Things take a turn here, so get ready for that one. A few replies to some of the reviews I got, and then we can get started.
ANON - Homer's Doughnut, - You might think that your review was oversaturating, but I read every word of it. Honestly, I kind of just rushed the ending of the original - not that I was tired of it, but I felt it was just getting more and more tough to continue with the plot that I'd gone with. It sucks that you didn't like Himawari. Now, I'm not just dismissing your advice - but I've already written the chapter that introduces her. She'll be featured in this story, but in a different role than she was in the original, so maybe that'll help a bit. A couple of your ideas are pretty good too... don't be surprised if they're included later in the story, ;).
ANON - Esayes - There's going to be a clear seperation between Naruto, and Naruko. I'd like to include Sakura a little more in the story this time around, but the fic is going to be focused more on the Uzumaki family and Sasuke (with Sarada probably being included later on) then anything.
Now that those are out of the way... let's get started!
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Sasuke tipped back the mug of coffee he was drinking from, draining every last drop of the warm brown liquid.
“Tired?” Naruto asked, a smile on his face.
He looked at him sleepily. “Like you wouldn’t believe.” Sasuke murmured. “Fuck… remind me to never to let you take me to a bar again.”
Naruto laughed. “I feel fine,” he said rather boastfully.
“Fucking jinchuriki asshole.” Sasuke grumbled, massaging his temple. “Whatever. What did you need me for anyways? A mission? Or…” He groaned. “Did Boruto disgrace some monument again?”
“No, no… nothing of that sort.” Naruto said. He cleared his throat. “Fox, Dog, if you would please give Sasuke and I some privacy.”
Two ANBU appeared from seemingly out of nowhere - melting directly out of the wall.
“Hai, Hokage-sama.” they chorused in unison, before disappearing in matching puffs of smoke.
Sasuke frowned. Clearly, something was up.
“I have to ask you a question, Sasuke.” Naruto said, standing up. This wasn’t the lonely little boy he had known back in the academy - no, this was the Nanadaime Hokage, who he had fought gods and demigods alike with. “And I would like a good answer.”
His frown merely deepened. “Alright,” Sasuke said cautiously. “Ask away.”
Naruto took a deep breath. “With Hinata-chan…” he said. “I have to ask. Why have you been holding back?” A pause, as Sasuke stared at him, a puzzled look in the Uchiha’s mismatched eyes. “I… sent a clone, to make sure that you had gotten home alright.” Naruto continued. “And.. I’ll admit it, he was a bit of a peeping tom. But on the couch, really? You and Sakura-chan couldn’t have gone to the bedroom?”
“You watched Sakura and I-?” Sasuke started.
“Calm down.” Naruto said, raising a hand. “I didn’t stay for the entire thing… but, I saw enough. More than enough.” A sly grin spread across his face. “You’ve been holding back, when you’re with me and Hinata.. Why?”
Sasuke rubbed the back of his neck rather awkwardly. “Well…” he said. “I don’t want to… break her.”
“Break her?” Naruto said, echoing his words. The blonde tilted his head to the side in curiosity, staring at Sasuke.
“Back… back when I was with Orochimaru, in Sound…” Sasuke began. “He wanted to make sure I was suitably… ‘relaxed’.” The Uchiha paused, grimacing slightly. “Orochimaru had access to plenty of women, and he threw many of them at many - one after the other. I was… young. Full of hate, and anger, and rage. I didn’t care. I just… went fucking wild. I fucked them as hard as I wanted, when I wanted… and I went a little too far.” He closed his eyes. “Let’s just say… I broke them. For any other man, for anything aside from me.”
Naruto waited patiently, until he was sure Sasuke was done with his monologue.
“So… what?” Naruto said. “Are you afraid that you’re going to break Hinata-chan?”
After a moment, Sasuke reluctantly nodded. “I know how much you love her. I… wouldn’t want to do anything that I’d regret.” he murmured.
Naruto chuckled. “Hinata-chan’s strong, Sasuke.” he said. “And… it’s just not going to be the same, if I know that you’re holding back.” He grinned. “So… when you come over tonight, go fucking wild.”
Sasuke blinked. “Are you kidding me?” he said.
Naruto gave him a hard look. “Do I look like I’m kidding, Sasuke?” he said. “Do I have to spell it out for you, teme? When you come over tonight, I want you to fuck my wife. With everything you’ve got. Understand?”
Sasuke stared at him for a long moment. “... are you sure about this?” he asked.
The blonde smiled. “I’m sure.” he said.
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Her husband was being unusually quiet, something that Sakura readily noted.
“Is… everything alright, baby?” Sakura asked.
Sarada had long since moved out, and the two had the house all to themselves. Sasuke sat on the living room couch, a glazed look in his eye as he flicked through channel after channel on the television.
“No.” Sasuke said, being surprisingly honest for once. “There’s a question I need to ask you.”
Sakura raised a cool eyebrow. “What is it?” she asked.
“Did I…” Sasuke began. “Did I go too far?” A pause. “With… you know, the sex. Did I go too far with you?”
The pink haired woman was well aware of just how much firepower her husband was packing compared to other men. He had taken her virginity - her first true kiss, her first everything really. And for the first few years, it had been plenty.
He had been out on his mission, stopping by from time to time - saying hello, and perhaps giving her a session of lovemaking if his schedule afforded it. But… there had always been a barrier. Something that held him back.
And then, he had returned home, soon after he and Naruto had saved the world from those members of Kaguya’s clan, at Sarada and Boruto’s first chunin exams.
The floodgates, quite literally, had opened.
Sasuke, for all of his coldness shown to the outside world, was an animal beneath the sheets. And now that he had no worries about leaving her, he was unrestrained, untamed, and most importantly, always ready to go.
Even now, she remembered the long nights of pounding. Her pussy, her ass, her mouth… none of them had been spared Sasuke’s wrath. Incredibly large loads had been packed tight into each and everyone of her holes. Not a single inch of her body hadn’t been in contact with his seed at some point.
She was helpless to resist as he did what he wanted to her… at least, if she had even wanted to resist. Sakura had let him do everything. Facials. Kage Bunshin gangbangs. Handcuffing her to the headboard and fucking her into a coma.
Too far was an understatement. At this point… six years after she had been introduced to the true beast that lay within her husband, she was completely and utter addicted to him - to his cock, to his cum.
“Honestly?” Sakura said, a hand on his shoulder. “Yeah… you probably went a little too far.” After all… it probably wasn’t normal to have withdrawal symptoms if she went just a day without a load shot deep into her twat. “But… I wouldn’t change what we have for anything in the world.”
Sasuke glanced at her.
“Naruto… he knows that I’ve been holding back with Hinata.” he said. “And he wants me to go all out with her.” A pause. “He caught you and I… erm… last night.”
Sakura threw her head back, and actually laughed. “That’s all he saw?” she said. “Kami, what we did last night was tame compared to the stuff we usually do, baby.” She grinned. “You’ll be fine. Just up the ante by a little bit, and I’m sure Naruto won’t be able to tell the difference.”
“Are… you sure?” Sasuke asked.
“Positive.” she said.
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Sasuke had always been incredibly proud of his self control. He was decades off from the boy who had so recklessly thrown himself into battle after battle - today, he was a man. A well collected one, albeit one with a lot of baggage that he preferred to keep hidden.
And yet… something, at any time, could set him off. Now, he wouldn’t go on a murderous rampage or anything of that sort, but Naruto knew that if Sasuke got angry, he’d have to requisition a few training grounds in the village to be completely rebuilt from the ground up. And that was on a good day.
Tonight, it was an unlikely candidate that caused him to lose his temper.
Sasuke was well aware how important foreplay was. And over the years, he had developed his technique - to the point where he could play his wife like a well tuned fiddle. Hinata… required some alterations, but a lot of it was still the same.
And so, here he was, straddling her. His enormous member resting on her thigh, two of his fingers pumping in and out of her snatch, his mouth hard at work nipping at and teasing a rosy nipple.
Hinata felt… defeated.
Oh, how she had tried to fight. But her body had long since given up on her, instead choosing to lay everything bear for the well hung Uchiha.
But… she couldn’t give up this easily. Even if her body was giving up - her spirit refused. She would fight with everything she had... and as of right now, all she had were her words.
“You… you asshole.” Hinata whispered, whimpering as he slid his member up and down her glistening slit.
Sasuke raised an eyebrow. “Sorry?” he said, tilting his head to the side. “I didn’t quite catch that… Hinata-chan.”
“The only…” Hinata ground out. “The only reason I’m doing this is for Naruto…”
“Hmm.” Sasuke hummed. “Is that so?”
“You’re… you’re pathetic.” she murmured, her voice hoarse. “And… and scared, too.”
Sasuke chuckled. “Me? Scared?” he said, an incredulous on his face.
Hinata inhaled deeply, as he continued to tease and prod her. Juices trickled freely from her slit, running down her thigh and filling the room with the pungent smell of her arousal.
“You’re… you’re still scared of the village.” Hinata murmured, in between the groans and mewls he elicited from her. “Scared of the people. You’re afraid- afraid that people will recover what you’ve done… that they’ll remember the people you’ve killed.”
Sasuke drew back slightly, both he and Naruto - who was sitting beside the bed in his chair - staring at her, wide eyed.
“And… you’re afraid… that Sarada-chan will find out.” Hinata continued. “About your past.”
“That’s enough.” Sasuke growled.
“You think that she’ll realize what you are - a killer, a murderer, a-”
“That’s enough!”
“A thug, a nukenin, a-!”
A hand clamped over her mouth.
Sasuke took several deep breaths, to cool the rage that was swirling deep, deep inside him.
“I’m… I’m not that person anymore.” he murmured. “But… you’ve pushed me.” She was too weak to push him off. One of his hands held her mouth shut, while his other hand helped to line up his enormous member with her snatch. There was a glint in his eye, that both terrified and aroused her in equal measures. “I tried to be nice. I tried… I tried to make this easy for you, Hinata. But…” He chuckled darkly. “But, I’m going to enjoy this… far more than I should.” Sasuke said, his voice dripping with malevolence.
The Uchiha glanced at Naruto, who looked right back at him.
And then, the blonde gave him a curt nod.
Sasuke smirked.
With a small pump of his hips, he slid inside of Hinata’s hot and wet cunt, her inner walls expanding immensely to accommodate his immense size.
“You think I want to do this…?” Sasuke whispered, his hot breath tickling her ear. “Oh, I’d have been perfectly fine never having to know about Naruto’s little cuckolding fetish. But here I am. And…” A slight chuckle. “Here you are, Hinata. Flat on your back… your legs spread, a big, fat cock inside of you. You try to pretend as if Naruto can compare - but you and I both know that he can’t.”
She muffled something around his hand, that sounded pretty much like - “Fuck you.”
He laughed. “Oh… it doesn’t matter how much you deny it, Hinata.” Sasuke murmured. “Because I’m about to prove it to you.” Inch after inch, slid inside of her, packing her full.
Something absolutely horrifying dawned upon her.
He wasn’t thrusting inside of her. He wasn’t rocking his hips, teasing her breasts or her clit - no. All he was doing… was slipping himself inside of, deeper and deeper until their hips were pressed tightly together. For a moment, he paused, merely staring down at her with that arrogant look in his eyes. And yet, all she could feel was him, her walls struggling to hold his girth, her womb itching - crying out for his warmth.
Then, he began to pull out of her, until only the mushroom head of his enormous member was left wedged into her slit.
Sasuke merely examined her for a brief moment, a smirk on his face.
And then with an absolutely brutal, earth-shattering thrust, he tore her in two. One vicious pump of his hips, and every single inch of his mammoth cock was instantly stuffed into her - the tip bumping against her cervix.
Stars appeared in Hinata’s eyes. A muffled cry escaped the ex-Hyuga, her back arching as she came, her walls rippling around his member.
She had cum. All it had taken was one thrust, and he had hit everything inside of her, from her G-spot all the way to her cervix. His member twitched, and she shuddered, as a ripple of pleasure tore through her body.
He removed the hand clamped tight over her mouth, instead using it to grip her hips tightly.
“P-please…” she whispered. “Please, n-no…” Her pleas, however, fell on deaf ears.
Sasuke began with a slow and steady tempo. Every thrust was methodical, built to slowly wear her down.
He was so big inside of her. So thick, so hard. She tried to talk - but she couldn’t. Only moans and gasps escaped her lips,
Things didn’t stay slow for long.
Sasuke hooked his legs over hers, his arms wounding tight around her torso. He leaned down - until their chests were pressed tightly against each other, her breasts squashed against his chiseled muscles. Their faces were so close, that Sasuke could feel every single one of her shuddering breaths as they escaped her lips.
He showed no mercy, and Hinata expected none.
Vicious thrusts rocked her, thick slaps echoing throughout the room. He was brutal. Ruthless. There was nothing she could do as he pounded her.
Oh how she tried. She tried so hard to fight back - but this time, it was useless. Words failed her. All she could do was moan and gasp, to cry out as Sasuke’s fat cock filled her again and again. “Oh kami…!” she ground out, her fingers clawing at his back. “S-stop… please…! You’re… you’re too big!” Every roll of his hips. Every little movement was built to both please and tear her down at the same time. “You’re breaking me!”
Sasuke, predictably, offered no response.
Hinata craned her neck slightly, pale eyes pleading Naruto for aid. And yet, he did nothing. He just sat there - jerking himself off to the sight of his wife being viciously pounded by his best friend.
She came again and again, at the behest of the man who was on top of her. He was just… fuck. Her voice was turning hoarse from how much she moaned and groaned. Her fingernails had left red marks running up and down his back from when she had clawed at him in ecstasy.
Her body had a mind of its own, as her hips bucked against him.
Mismatched eyes locked with pale ones. She couldn’t tear her gaze away from those beautiful violet rings, or those wondrous obsidian depths…
With one last thrust, he burst through the barrier of her cervix, the mushroom head of his enormous member crashing into her womb.
There was a moment of stillness, as Sasuke’s onyx eyes continued to bore into Hinata’s.
And then, he came.
Thick ropes of his seed spurted from the tip of his cock, slamming against the back of her womb. She didn’t scream. She didn’t cry out. Hinata merely went limp, as Sasuke packed her to the brim with hot and sticky cum.
She felt so… full. So complete. She could feel the jizz traveling along the length of his rod, before being deposited into her fertile womb. His seed was thick, powerful, claiming every bit of her womanhood, all of her femininity, and drenched her in the essence of his manhood in the place where her children had been born from.
Much to her credit, she didn’t pass out. But, for nearly ten minutes, she entered a dazed state - overcome by all of the sensations running through her. Her eyes rolled back into her head, and she would twitch every so often, her face twisted and her arms and legs sprawled out around her.
“Naruto, for the last time, you can’t put three dozen genin in the middle of a desert, and let them have a battle royale. That’s fucking stupid.”
“Damn it! Every time I want to do something cool for the Chunin exams, you and Shikamaru always shoot down my ideas!”
“They’ll kill each other, moron.”
“We can put like cameras on them or something, and interve-”
“No.”
What… where… where was she?
There was an incredible warmth inside of her. She shifted slightly - and a moan spilled forth from her lips, as something thick and gooey sloshed about inside of her.
Pale eyes gently fluttered open.
Her vision blurred from the sudden influx of light. With more than a little effort, she sat up.
It took a moment, but Hinata’s eyesight eventually cleared. Her belly was distended slightly, as if she was in the early stages of pregnancy. She leaned forward, gasping, at the thick and pungent globs of cum that dripped steadily from her gaping snatch.
And then, she remembered. She had tried to fight back, to push him and his cock away with hurtful and vicious words… and he had counterattacked. He had taken his fat cock, stuffed it into her cunt, and had came deep inside of her.
“O-oh f-fuck…” she whispered.
“Hinata-chan!” Naruto said cheerily. He and Sasuke were dressed - the Uchiha sitting on the side of the bed, Naruto still in the same chair. The blonde stood, striding up to the bedside. “Do you know who I am?”
She stared at him, wide eyed. “M-my h-husband…” Hinata stuttered.
“What’s four plus nine?” Naruto asked.
“T-thirteen…”
Naruto turned to Sasuke. “See!” he said. “I told you that she’d be fine.”
Sasuke shook his head slightly. “I guess I stand corrected,” he said, climbing to his feet as well. “Alright… well, if she’s fine, then I’ll go ahead and leave then. See you, Naruto.” His gaze flickered to the ex-Hyuga, and he shot her a wink. “Hinata.”
And then, he walked out of the bedroom, closing the door softly behind him.
Naruto had peeled off his clothes once more in an instant, and then, he was upon her. “Fuck…” the blonde whispered, his hands running up and down her curvy body. His erection was hard, and throbbing - and uncaring of the copious amounts of cum leaking from his wife’s cunt, he jammed his cock in there.
Hinata was still in a daze, and yet she pushed back, wanting to please her husband. It didn’t take her that long to cum, although (Her face flushed in shame.) she wasn’t sure whether it had been Naruto that had driven her to orgasm… or the feeling of Sasuke’s seed rocking against the walls of her womb.
Even as Naruto unloaded inside of her, there was no chance for his pathetic load to break through the wall that his friend’s cum had formed.
And that night, they slept as they always did. Naruto was the big spoon - and she, the little spoon. His arm was wrapped loosely around her torso, fingers dangerously close to touching the still distended skin of her stomach… which was packed tight with the jizz of another man.
Naruto’s snores filled the room, a sleepy smile on his face.
And yet, Hinata stayed awake long into the night. Her eyes stared at the wall, the woman shuddering every now and then as a particularly large glob of Sasuke’s seed dripped from her slit.
She had her husband. She had two beautiful, amazing children. She had many friends that she would give her life for. Perhaps it was because she had been exposed to it so recently. Perhaps it was the constant reminder of his essence being inside of her. But that night, all she could think about was the enormous cock of a certain Uchiha.
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No, she isn't broken yet. But expect a big change to happen in the next chapter, so stayed tuned for that.
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