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BITCHED!	By : modeac Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Hinata Views: 103387 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 5
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BITCHED!

CHAPTER 3: HOW MANY'S A CROWD?

AUTHORS NOTES

AU take involving characters and concepts from the Naruto 6: Road To Ninja movie. The timeline is just before the Invasion of Pain arc as the supposed timeline of the movie makes no sense. Reality 1 is canon Konoha, Reality 2 is alternate world. This fic is a Naruto/AU!Hinata pairing. Warning; Femslash, group sex are present in this chapter!

'This' means someone is thinking.

Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki, Katon Jutsu.

Horizontal ruler (a line across the page) means a page break or timeskip. It may be a few minutes, it may be a few hours...

-X- means a scene change, i.e. we start with Sakura in a clearing, then we go to Naruto and Hinata in the street.

Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non-profit-I am making no money from this.
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Merry Christmas 2015!

Reality 2, Konoha, residential district…
A totally humiliated Uzumaki Naruto lay on his front on a medical bed, his pants were down and his bare ass was exposed to a green light as a medic nin friend of Hinata's worked repairing the damage from the nights… whatever it was when a gorgeous psycho kunoichi puts a fucking pike on her crotch and rams it so far up your ass that it shreds your intestines.
"There! As good as new Menma-kun." Spoke the doctor, a cute and bubbly redhead called Yakushi Tayuya. Naruto had questioned if she had a brother called Kabuto and the redhead had looked deeply concerned.
"Oh no, how hard did Hinata-chan hit you in the head Menma-kun?" The redhead had asked concern in her deep brown eyes.
Naruto pulled up his pants and sat up on the bed, eyes crossing as a lollipop was held out in front of him by the widely smiling doctor. Naruto stared at the medic a moment, there was something familiar about her, physically at least, she had pinkish-reddish hair that ran down to her buttocks in the longest braid he had ever seen, brown eyes full of heartfelt feeling and a beautiful face constantly alive with emotion; concern, anger against Hinata, amusement. Naruto took the lollipop quizzically. He'd been to doctors a lot but none of them gave him sweets before.
"I need to talk to Hinata-chan, you should be alright now Menma-kun, ask if you need anything, okay?" She smiled and bowed and Naruto was struck by just how pretty she was when smiling and not wracked by concern for her patient or stealing angry glances at the door to the empty waiting room Hinata occupied.
He watched her stroll off watching her red braid as it swayed about behind her.
-X-
Tayuya entered the waiting room with Hinata who sat, hands clenching into her thighs, normally sparking eyes dark.
"Is he-" Hinata started.
SMACK!
Tayuya cut her off by slapping the feared kunoichi across the face.
"W-what the fuck?!"
Before the shocked jonin level ninja could react the redhead took Hinata in a tight hug.
"I repaired the damage. He'll be alright."
Hinata stared into space disbelieving before sniffling and tearing up.
"T-thanks… Fuck!"
Nothing was said for a long moment, then…
"Nata-chan, Menma loves you, when are you gonna figure that out?"
Hinata said nothing, just remained in the redhead's embrace.
"After what happened to your family… it's hard for you to trust anyone. You treat people like crap thinking only those who are true of heart will stick around… but even for those who love you there's only so much someone can take before… something breaks…"
"Like Menma's fucking intestinal tract for instance." Hinata joked weakly.
Tayuya slapped her upside the head. She was the only one who could get away with such things against the infamous Byakugan princess.
"Stop. Being a psycho bitch. With your hot, uber-sweet boyfriend."
"Interested in Me-chan, Ta-chan?" Hinata joked trying to switch topics.
"You know what I'm interested in Nata-chan." Her eyes dropped down to Hinata's clearly outlined cleavage inside her tight shirt. Hinata snorted remembering her 'experiments' with Tayuya that had almost destroyed their friendship.
"Seriously though, apologize to Menma." She demanded looking stern. Or trying anyway. She was about as menacing as a kitten.
"I don't apologize. I'm Hyuga fucking Hinata!" She scoffed back.
"Oh what? You HBIC rating will go down if you apologize to the only guy in town who puts up with your Bitch queen of the hill routine?"
Hinata growled something illegible, then responded; "Can't I just give him a blowjob? Without biting?"
Tayuya put on a thoughtful pose. Hinata was almost sickened by how cute she looked. "There's an idea. Do something for Menma, something purely for his enjoyment-"
"I… can't do… submissive… that needs…"
"Trust? You don't trust Menma?"
Hinata didn't answer.
"Do you trust me?" Tayuya asked.
'Oh fuck. I hate it when she does this…' "Yes." Hinata grated out in annoyance.
"Then I have an idea of something that keeps you in control but gives Menma a treat.
She smiled evilly.
Hinata felt a chill go through her body, girls as sweet as Tayuya should never smile evilly.
-X-
Konoha, reality 1…
Child of heroes Haruno Sakura and Namikaze Menma were looking around the bizarre different world they had been transported to. Both were separated and had wandered the village for hours before meeting up with each other and realizing only they two were unaffected by the madness they saw around them. Different Hokages, Gai acting like Kakashi, Shino consorting with bugs, Ino being a bitch… it all made no sense.
Menma had just gotten finished explaining the multiple universes scenario to Sakura.
"What is important is we get back home." He stated.
"Okay, but why did we specifically get pulled to this place? We never hang out, you're always with your parents or…" She paused worried. "…Where is your psycho bitch owner anyway?"
"Please don't speak of Hinata-chan like that. And… we're… on a break." He said uncertainly. Sakura hissed in contempt, given who his family was he couldn't understand why Menma was so spineless.
"Break? You mean the killer princess will break your neck if she finds out you stated more than five words to another girl? That overbreasted ogre needs to chill out."
"Please don't speak of Hinata-chan like that-" He repeated and Sakura cut him off in disgust. She hated spineless compliant men, like that girly ponce Sasuke…
"What do you see in that psycho? I mean besides a huge set of tits and a bubble butt so big you could show a wide screen movie on it?"
An angry Menma was about to respond when…
BOOOM!
Explosions rocked through the village; grotesquely warped and gigantic centipede summons appeared from activation smoke and thrashed about crashing through wood and concrete like a serpent through sand, crushing homes and the families within them without hesitation.
The pair of shinobi charged into the carnage.
-X-
Reality 2 Konoha, Yakushi residence…
Naruto was walking around the room reading charts and wondering where Sakura-chan was when the door opened and revealed… two Hinata's?!
One of the Hinata's spoke up, she stood in a formal stance; "I apologize for earlier today Me-chan, I have an idea on how to make it up to you. Please lay back on the bed." This Hinata spoke with a submissive tone and Naruto briefly thought it was his Hinata (the non-psycho, non-assraping one) but discarded the idea when he realized the real? Other? Hinata would never be caught dead in that revealing outfit. They both wore tight white shirts and shorts so tight fitting and lacking in fabric that they were about as effective in modesty as some conservative swimsuits.
Still in a confused daze he obeyed the requests and lay back on the bed. The two Hinata's approached, the submissive sounding one sat on a chair in front of her identical twin.
"Okay Me-chan, watch carefully." The one behind smiled in an evil, lewd way.
'Okay, I'm guessing the one behind is the psycho…'
The front one squirmed, looking nervous, uncertain. So much like the Hinata he knew (not sexually of course).
The one behind had a look of predatory confidence that both frightened and aroused Naruto. She placed her hands on her doppelganger's shoulders who continued to look frightened and uncertain.
Looking lewdly amused, Dom!Hinata reached around sensually and removed Sub!Hinata's top.
Sub!Hinata spluttered and looked anywhere except her doppelganger or the gaping Naruto as her top was removed revealing large, perfectly formed breasts seemingly rebelling against the sports bra that surely strained to contain them.
Sub!Hinata turned red reminding Naruto of his Hinata while the girl above her smiled wider at her mirror's embarrassment.
Dom!Hinata's hand flowed up and down her breasts and Naruto's eyes widened further seeing just how large Hinata's breasts actually were. She grabbed a pair of handfuls of boob flesh- far more than a handful even open handed. Dom!Hinata stuck a finger between her pale mounds of flesh and her whole digit disappeared into the valley between her mammaries. She repeated with her thumbs before harshly pulling the bra down to Sub!Hinata's wide-eyed shock.
Dom!Hinata gently pulled Sub!Hinata's arms behind her forcing her mountainous chest forward.
"Oh yeah. You like showing off these awesome tits to Me-chan don't you?" She hissed sensually at… herself.
She pulled her submissive twin's bra all the way off, leaned over her shoulder and began suckling on her tits upside-down.
The submissive Hyuga kept quiet but grit her teeth as a female tongue swirled around her nipples while calloused, but still feminine hands snaked over her flat, now heaving belly.
Naruto leaned forward involuntarily as the gorgeous pair writhed against each other, Dom!Hinata bending over and feasting on Sub!Hinata's tits before withdrawing leaving the seated Hinata looking breathless and dumb and red as a tomato.
Dom!Hinata forced Sub!Hinata back onto a second medical bed- the compliant Hyuga lay submissively as the identical master covered her tits with more saliva. She convulsed as her body was worked on. Nipples erect, Dom!Hinata's talented mouth teasingly moved further and further down her breathtaking form. If Naruto's mouth could have opened wider it would have.
Behind a wall Tayuya watched mesmerized as Hinata unbuckled and pulled off her submissive shadow clones short shorts further revealing the most perfect legs she'd ever seen. Legs Hinata proceeded to lick and suckle on.
Dom!Hinata went to work between the clones legs. The Hyuga matriarch was ambivalent about what she was doing- she didn't consider herself a lesbian- other than some 'experiments' with Tayuya-chan and it felt really weird to be eating herself out. Looking up 'her' body, through 'her' incredible tits while that idiot Menma watched. Still… she did so and groped those awesome melons over the table. She heard the clone gasp and moan as she licked.
'You better appreciate this Me-chan or the next thing I shove up your ass will be the size of a fucking redwood!'
The dominant Hinata disengaged then suggestively sauntered past Naruto's gaze, her hips swaying seductively and butt rippling breathtakingly.
One Hinata straddled the other (Naruto couldn't keep it straight) the one on top pressed the lower Hinata's large tits together forcing the huge bosom higher up off the curvaceous body it was attached to and began licking up and down her cleavage before burying her face between the tits.
They were so big the Hyuga's entire face submerged from view and for a second Naruto got the stupid idea of someone dying from being smothered by boobs.
The Hinata below got into it and leaned her head up and kissed her twin, hands groping all over.
One Hinata straddled the other forcing her waist between her twins spread legs. She leaned over and smothered her mirrors face in her tits before withdrawing and licking and kissing down her body, to between her legs.
Naruto stared, even after all the perverse spectacles he'd seen courtesy of the damned pervy sage and the onslaught of the past few days... this was... like nothing he could describe. So he just stared dumbly as the two hottest bodies he'd ever imagined writhed together just out of touching distance...
As one Hinata kneeled on all fours, the other bent over her body and tongue fucked her while rubbing her butt. They both kneeled on the bed, bodies swaying and slapping against each other, kissing.
While the submissive twin was on her knees, the dominant Hinata wrapped her arms around her hips locking her hands on her back and pulled the compliant kunoichi back while she pushed herself forwards driving her face so far into her clones backside her nose entered the submissive's anus and her tongue stabbed deep into her pussy.
The true Hinata's tongue flickered to and from her mouth at blur speeds like a hummingbirds wing while Dom!Hinata's fingers clamped down and twisted on Sub!Hinata's clit, eliciting a squeal and very nearly dispelling the jutsu construct.
She fingered her sub, not with a finger, but four at once- in and out so fast Sub!Hinata's butt rippled like jello in an earthquake. She rubbed the jiggling butt with her free hand as the fingerfucked clone gasped and gaped.
The dominant Hyuga clearly was experienced in this activity as she continued rubbing and pressing on her clones clit and sexual regions, her hand moving at blur speed, impossible for Naruto's saucer sized eyes to follow.
Gripping by long, lovely locks of hair, the pair got into what the dumbstruck Naruto assumed was a sex position; their groins connected, each had one leg under, one over on the other. Leaning back and holding onto the bed they lay on they began violently thumping their dripping pussies against each other so hard Naruto winced and jerked back at the slapping noises. Breasts flew and butts jiggled as the pair cried out staring at each other. Something snapped and they lunged at each other kissing each other and pulling each-others hair as they continued slamming their crotches together at vicious pace and power, the once one sided molestation becoming passionate, reckless, Sapphic love.
Both Naruto and Tayuya watched mesmerized as the two Hinata's scissored each other, both sexy voices gasped as identical levels of heat and moisture emanated from sex organs colliding with each other in the leg interlocking position.
The dominant (original) Hinata grinned, eyes predatory, the submissive gasped, eyes pleading.
Something changed; both felt the rubbing friction, and suddenly both began engaging in bouncing against each other, nearly a blur from the speed.
The hungry, ravenous looking Dom!Hinata held the compliant clone in her grasp fingering her as she slowed the 'bounce rhythm' as she called it.
The violent thumping led to twin orgasms; Sub!Hinata grabbed her dominant in a hug-like embrace crying out in mind clearing orgasm.
-X-
Naruto gulped as the pair of Hinata's approached him, holding each-others hands and kissing as they crossed his body at either side of him.
Two pairs of very sensual hands rubbed him.
One Hinata, Naruto didn't know which, took his face and kissed him. He jerked sharply against the now-conjoined face as he felt a warm, hot mouth wrap around his throbbing cock. He almost choked between the sensations of two tongues; one in his mouth wrapping around his tongue, the other rubbing up down, left and right around his cock, and his body spasmed as the two woman tended to him.
The cock-sucking Hinata withdrew her mouth and gently sat on Naruto's dick, the other turned away from Naruto, giving him a face full of ass and reached around to pull the seated girl's hair back into a ponytail. Sensually, she rubbed the impaled woman's shoulders.
The perched Hyuga's face lit up in joy as she began to rock back and forth on top of the male. She began speeding up- rubbing her hands across her breasts as though showcasing the amazing mounds to the male beneath her.
Sub?Hinata stepped up and rubbed Naruto's shoulders. She leaned over the red male, her dangling boobs nearly obscuring her face.
The seated Hinata went faster and harder, bouncing up and down and squeezing her tits together.
Behind a nearby wall, Tayuya grimaced as her friend's pathological violence started to reassert itself as Hinata put her hand on Naruto's throat whispering something no doubt threatening to the overwhelmed teen male.
The riding of Naruto became more intense; pushing up and down on Naruto's cock- nearly releasing it and coming down to completely swallow the meat landing with a smack.
As Naruto looked back and forth between the two Hinata's one of them slapped him- playfully.
'Don't slap him Nata-chan….' Tayuya grimaced. 'Be gentle. Be-' A loud SMACK! Made the redhead jump. 'Oh for goodness sake…'
Trapped on the bed, Naruto lay with as much movement as a rubber sex doll as two gorgeous woman rode him; one smothered his tomato-red face with her huge, soft tits that molded upside down over Naruto's face.
One Hinata circled over Naruto rubbing all over his face with her bosom. The other Hinata continued riding Naruto, though now she too bent over twisting at his nipples while smirking at Naruto and hissing what she considered bed talk at Naruto, some words muffled when soft bosom flesh covered one of his ears.
"Yeah, you just lay there and take it Me-chan. Take my tits and thank Kami you're this lucky..."
The Hinata titfucking Naruto's face suddenly lunged up straightening herself and letting Naruto suck in air. She faced the seated Hinata who also sat straight with an evil smirk on her face.
Naruto jerked as he felt the bed shift and saw the Hinata who had nearly suffocated him with her tits step up onto the bed and stand at either side causing Naruto eyes to nearly pop out of his head looking up between Hinata's legs at her dripping opening.
With a snort of approval she sat down on Naruto's face, his nose up her ass crack and eyes sucked into her swelling glutes like matter into a black hole when two hands of the other Hinata reached around and grabbed hold of the magnificent ass that trapped Naruto's gaze; fingers sank deep into the soft, unblemished flesh, released, letting the flesh spring back then squeezed in again as amazed blue eyes watched.
Naruto's voice was muffled by the volume of flesh (butt-cheeks) on his face- the weight was crushing even though Naruto doubted Hinata was putting all her body mass on him.
"Me-chan! When a woman sits on your face you're supposed to lick, suck and maybe nibble a bit. Get to it!" Only Naruto's panic filled eyes were visible as he obeyed, sticking his tongue out inside Hinata's body. He winced in shock, then confusion as he discovered he liked the taste of the juices coming from the crazy woman.
Behind the wall Tayuya gulped and began fingering herself as she saw two Hinata's grope and kiss each other as they gyrated on top of Menma. She could only imagine the eyeful Menma got of Hinata's near liquid shimmering butt as the shadow clone (or real one she didn't know) groped and slapped the pale bubble butt.
She watched as her best friend/crush and doppelganger kissed passionately, the one on Menma's cock bouncing up and down like a pistoning machine while the one on Menma's face made only slight movements of her hips as the male beneath her licked and sucked on her lower regions.
The two most gorgeous bodies in Konoha pressed together and Tayuya thought;
'What I wouldn't give to be Menma now… lucky fool doesn't… no he really loves Nata-chan…'
Growing bolder Naruto began probing deeper inside the psychotic kunoichi with his tongue, slithering against her inner walls like a snake, the jinchuriki learnt by doing and over the next few minutes figured out quickly what Hinata liked and disliked. The girl was not subtle in her hints to the male she squashed, reacting to Naruto's ministrations by powering her wide hips up and down, right and left even rotating clockwise and counter-clockwise, grinding on her boyfriend's face smothering him in ass and pussy.
Then suddenly the gorgeous female on Naruto's face flipped around.
She held onto Naruto's hair as she rocked her hips back and forth on Naruto's face looking down on him. Her mirror image reached around kissing her from behind and groping her tits to the breathless Naruto's astonishment. That skilled hand went down to Hinata's crotch manipulating her clit and causing her to cum soon after.
"RRRRRR! FUCK!"
The Hyuga matriarch growled out as her internal muscles contracted around the shocked Jinchuriki's tongue releasing sexual fluids onto his overheated face creating a small river of sexual juice inside Naruto's mouth where it stayed a moment.
"Gulp it down, Menma! I wanna see you enjoy it!" Naruto didn't know which of the crazy Byakugan ladies said that but obeyed, swallowing the warm liquid in several hard gulps, he found that it tasted… good.
"You like that Me-chan? Is swallowing my release the best thing you ever tasted? Huh?" A hand tugged on his hair nearly tugging strands out and behind the wall Tayuya wanted to facepalm.
'Well her being gentle and accommodating lasted about five minutes… maybe we can work on it…'
The domineering Hinata was in the familiar position of being seated atop her Menma, riding him at her pleasure, controlling him, she moved her hips up and down so that the blonde's huge rod got an inch from leaving her beautiful volcanic tightness then he sat herself back down fully with a SLAP! She repeated this at her pleasure. Again. And again. And again establishing a pattern of bouncing up and down while her copy watched, she looked forwards to the memory transfer when the shadow clone dispelled.
Hinata's thighs alternated between wonderfully soft and steel hard as Naruto's whole body ragdolled under the riding; including his head which did nothing to blur his view of the extraordinarily hot psychopath who seemed to be trying to shatter his pelvis.
Tayuya watched this torn between rubbing herself off and wanting to run out and slap Hinata's crazy head off.
She stared mesmerized at the magnificent, depraved goddess; her unearthly lavender eyes, her profoundly full round breasts slapping up and down. The sweat running down that sinfully curvaceous body… attached to that clumsy goofball who could do nothing except lay down and take her body giving as much effort as an inanimate sex toy.
'Forget it, I'm gonna slap Menma. Idiot.'
She watched in wistful desire as her love interest blurred atop Menma probably feeling half angelic pleasure, half trip-hammer assault as Menma screamed in ecstasy into the crotch that still lay over his face as the superfast fucking shook even the floorboards beneath the bed they were copulating on.
'Good thing ninja beds are reinforced to deal with jutsu backlash…'
Menma's muffled cry of orgasm didn't so much tear as vibrate out of him;
"A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-AG-G-G-G-G-G-GG-GG-GG-GG-GG-GGG-GGG-HHH-HHH-HG!"
"Well that's gotta be the stupidest orgasm I've ever heard." Said one of the Hinata's snidely.
After a moment of watching Menma try to snap back to reality after being royally fucked, the riding Hinata leaned back and placing her hands on the blond's legs to commence a teasingly slow grind on the overwhelmed male's cock while the other shouted loudly;
"Hey! Wake the fuck up Me-chan! We're not done yet!"
'Taking it easy' for a minute, Hinata helped (grabbed and yanked) Naruto to sit up, the blonde felt his head pulled into her breasts. His head was pressed against the huge and marshmallow soft mounds.
"Suck 'em Me-chan." Naruto obeyed and nervously began sucking and licking on her huge and heaving breasts. Hinata shifted position and locked her ankles together behind his back as she continued to ride the ensnared teen now sucking on her boobs.
She rubbed her more than ample bosom all over his face as he clumsily tried to buck his strong hips in time with Hinata's more graceful and smooth body.
"There you go Me-chan. Go with it sweety. Fucking give it to me baby!"
Hinata continued to hiss at the teenager trapped in the grip of her powerful legs affectionately stroking his face as she mercilessly rode him. Tensing briefly, the jinchuriki leaned into the caress, she reached down with her other hand and gave a part of Naruto's cock shaft a bolt of chakra.
Naruto went cross-eyed and shrieked as he came. "EEEEEEAAAAAUUUURRRRRKKK!" Sending a fountain of cum from his overused member and straight up into Hinata's extraordinary body as she continued to ride him.
The stream of cum flooded into her, and she smiled reveling in her control of Menma's body. The Hyuga princess felt the familiar surge of power as her womb filled with the cum of the only male she bothered to notice.
"There you go… a nice ride pony…"
Naruto was too exhausted to wonder what the psycho kunoichi was babbling about, he just leaned dreamily into Hinata's embrace.
"I'm not done with you yet..."
The domineering woman unseated from Naruto and both began working his dick; one Hinata rubbed her hands up and down Naruto's shaft (it was big enough and Hinata's hands small enough) while the other handled and massaged his balls, tapping energy centers to bring Naruto closer to release. The pair sat at Naruto's sides flanking and trapping him between the two terrifying dominas.
"Look at the size of this cock. As wide as a fucking tree trunk."
The other Hinata slapped Naruto across the face.
"We gave you a compliment. Respond fuckwit."
"Uh... th-thanks? I- I mean... thank you Hinata-sama!" Naruto fearfully blurted out.
Naruto hissed as Hinata picked up the pace, pumping his cock up and down so fast Naruto feared his cock was going to be pulled off or ignited into flames, while fingers kneaded his balls playing the male body like a piano before crying out as hands came down to slap the ballsac (though fortunately nowhere near a full power Hinata bitch slap- she didn't want her Me-chan gelded after all).
Naruto jerked in pain and shock as the Hinata's dominated him; terrified and turned on by the twin looks of almost crazed joy and predatory lust on the Hinata's faces.
There was a cry of pain, orgasm and Tayuya suddenly wondered if her parents were in the building.
-X-
Konoha, Reality 1...
The being known as Pain looked out over the now ablaze Konoha, he had recently severed the last bond to his weak past by killing Jiraiya. It had been harder than anticipated with three of his paths beings destroyed, one lost completely via being vaporized by the toad sages massive rasengan. And the elder ninja had shown extraordinary resilience by fighting back from death itself and attempting to relay some kind of message to his comrades. But to no avail, Pain had killed both elder sage toads and slain the legendary Sannin. Knowing that it was only a matter of time until the leaf learnt of Jiraiya's death he made plans to personally capture the nine tails jinchuriki himself and destroy everything that got in the way.
'It is power that determines who is right, and there is no one with the power to stop me…'
END CHAPTER 4
Next chapter; Menma vs the six Paths of Pain, Hinata ignores Tayuya's advice and goes right back to bitching Naruto…

AUTHORS NOTES
That was the AU version of Tayuya, she was adopted by the Yakushi family in this.
AU!Sakura is kinda like canon Sasuke, may or may not do much with her in this.
AU!Naruto (Menma) is a less confrontational (submissive) version of Naruto- he has never had a reason to force people to notice him as since he has parents and a few others he doesn't really care what others think of him. Don't think that because he has a submissive nature that he's not dangerous, threatening people close to him is his berserk button and Menma is far more powerful than canon Naruto is (although I don't take anything Naruto does after going to Turtle Island as canon as the power-ups are unforgivably lazy and badly executed).
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