Coming Up F'in Roses | By : Shaylilin Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 3595 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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A/N: I know it's a little late for his birthday, but damn it, I was up until 2 AM trying to get it done and I got up at 2:30 AM the day before to take my husband to the train station. I figured since it was just his birthday in the story, I could try to write something for his birthday, but it's only 9 hours late here so yeah.
Review Responses:
ItaNaruLover: I could never be bored by good reviews. :) I'm glad you think I'm keeping Itachi in character even with all the sugar. I'm trying, though perhaps not always succeeding. I like the fluffy stuff. It's going to change eventually, but I don't know when exactly. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Kirai: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you like the story. I hope that you continue to enjoy it.
Nejislady: I love sick talk. My husband makes fun of me for it all the time, when I'm sick. Naruto really wants to go farther with Itachi, but he's kind of nervous (understandably so) of finally giving himself to someone. I'm not sure who all will wind up in this story. Besides a general idea and a plan of attack, I don't have any more story in my head. It sort of comes out while I'm typing. I guess I'm trying to say my stories are more of a surprise to me that gets revealed as I'm writing it than a preconceived idea.
Ero Sennin: My husband had inflamed lungs and while we were in the ER for that, the doctor told him that because he's skinny he has a higher chance that his lungs will spontaneously collapse. I wish they gave out hospital rooms like that, too but then health care would be even worse off than it is now. I've only been to the ER twice. Once when I put my engagement ring back on too soon after having my son and fingers were still kind of swollen and I had to go get it cut off, and for my husband. BTW, if you go in with severe chest pain, they bump you ahead of just about everyone. I like the whole public sex thing, so that might appear more frequently as the story goes on.
Naruto's Birthday Present: Interlude
Naruto smirked as he lay on his couch that evening. He wanted to go to Itachi, but he knew Itachi was staying at the hospital. Iruka had called the hospital a few minutes ago to see how Sasuke was doing. Naruto couldn't stop smiling. All he could think about was Itachi pulling him into that alleyway and the way Itachi's fingers had felt against his swollen cock. He bit his lip to hold back his moan and forced himself away from thoughts of Itachi before his half a problem turned into a whole problem.
Iruka walked into the living room. "I didn't have a chance to give you your actual present on your birthday because it hadn't come yet." Iruka smiled as he sat down next to Naruto. "I was so happy when the state gave me the okay to adopt you, legally. I realize it was literally a day before you turned 18 and you wouldn't need a guardian anymore, but I have loved you since the moment you moved in with me. You were everything I could have ever wanted in a son. I didn't want anyone to go through the lonely existence I went through, especially you."
Naruto smiled at Iruka. "What's my present?" He grinned like an imp as Iruka shook his head and laughed. "I mean, continue."
Iruka chuckled and smiled before catching site of Kakashi. He made Naruto stand up and grabbed the dishtowel he had brought with him and covered Naruto's eyes. "It's a surprise, Naruto." He led his son out of the house and toward the street. "I know you aren't big on driving cars, but I have seen some of the things you've been eyeing."
Naruto bounced up and down as he let Iruka drag him along. "Did you get me a car?"
Kakashi laughed. "As if. You'd have it trashed in a day."
Naruto pouted. "I would not." He sighed. "Well, if it's not a car, then why am I outside?"
Iruka smirked. "You'll just have to wait to find out, Naruto." He led the blonde to a spot directly in front of his present. Iruka and Kakashi had been planning this since Naruto turned 18. There was no way they would deviate from the plan now. Iruka handed Naruto a key and chuckled at the squeal of delight. He pulled the blindfold from Naruto's eyes.
Naruto looked at the hot wheels toy with annoyance. "I can't even fit in this thing. You two are total tools." He crossed his arms and pouted. He thought for sure they were giving him a car.
Iruka pretended to be really hurt. "I just wanted to get you something nice that you couldn't have in your childhood. I'm sorry you don't like it, Naruto," he started sniffling and Kakashi pulled him to his chest. "If you don't like it, we can take it back and you can spend your hundred dollars however you like."
Naruto sighed. He didn't want Iruka upset. "No, that's all right, Iruka. I can actually think of a couple things Sasuke and I can do with this." He put a beaming smile on his face. "Thanks, Iruka!" He wrapped his arms around Iruka's shoulders.
Kakashi sighed. "Okay, really girls, let's break this up. It's kind of sickening."
Iruka groaned. "Kakashi, you promised to be nice right now." Iruka turned toward Naruto and smiled. "Okay, Naruto. I promised myself that if I ever got to adopt you, you'd have 15 years of loving, heart-felt birthday presents to make up for the missed birthdays in those horrible foster homes and the years you were just my foster son and not my son. I know I always got you something, and it was usually nice, but these are extremely special presents."
Naruto nodded and grinned. This was year 1. He still had 14 more presents to go. He vaguely wondered where Iruka got the money for these presents, but Kakashi answered that question next. "Don't worry about whether or not Iruka spent his life savings. He always took care of you with his own money. These presents were bought by the system that fucked you over so many times. He took his stipend each month and put it away, he was going to give you the money when you turned 18, but then he'd invested the money, and let's just say, you've still got quite a bit in savings."
Naruto's jaw fell open. He quickly rebounded. "What's the next present then?"
Iruka laughed at Naruto's child-like enthusiasm. He knew the best present was the one waiting in the garage for Naruto. Iruka took Naruto's hand and led him around to the backyard. Naruto smirked at the sandbox with the big red bow across it. "That's awesome. I always wanted a sandbox!"
Kakashi laughed. Now that Naruto knew he was getting age appropriate gifts for every 'not Iruka's son after your parents died' birthday, he was much more energetic about the presents. He was the one to hand Naruto the next present. It was wrapped up in balloon wrapping paper. He smirked. "Great! I can't wait to unwrap it." He tore into the paper and giggled like a little girl when he saw the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle staring back at him. "Awesome."
Iruka pulled him to the picnic table on the porch behind the house. "This one is for birthday 7."
Naruto took the purple wrapped package and smiled. When he unwrapped it, it contained a DVD of all the Charlie Brown movies that were made. Next was a whole set of Transformers. Then he got a large art set. He got video games, then the entire Goosebumps series. For his 'twelfth' birthday, he
got a computer. Thirteenth birthday brought him an Xbox. His fourteenth birthday was an Encyclopedia set. The next present was a card with $250 in it. For his sixteenth birthday, he received a watch, some clothes, and a 30GB iPod. For his last birthday he got the complete Smashing Pumpkins collection. Naruto smirked. "These presents were all fantastic Iruka." He hugged his father before turning to Kakashi and wrapping him in a tight hold, too.
Iruka smirked and pulled the blindfold out again. "Humor me once more okay, Naruto?" Naruto nodded and smiled as Iruka led him through the backyard, through the house, out the front door, around to the side of the garage, and through the garage door. "Okay." Iruka took a second key
from his pocket. He had Kakashi pull the sheet off Naruto's present before he stuck the key in Naruto's hand.
Naruto squealed at the feeling of another key in his hand. He bounced impatiently as Iruka pulled the blindfold off again. Naruto squealed in an even higher octave. He threw his arms around Iruka and squeezed tightly before turning around capturing Kakashi in just as crushing a hug. "Oh my god! I cannot believe you guys got me a fucking Harley!"
Iruka sighed. "Watch your language."
Kakashi chuckled. "You had to expect it sooner or later, 'Ruka. He probably swears around his friends all the time."
Naruto blushed. "Sorry, Dad. I shouldn't talk like that in front of you."
Iruka shook his head. "Eh, I know you're just excited."
Naruto grinned madly. "Yeah I'm excited. I always wanted a motorcycle over a car, and I wanted that motorcycle to be a Harley. I'm so happy I could cry." He saw the helmet on the seat and laughed. It was black and had orange swirls. He knew it had to be in reference to the time he colored his hair black and attempted to do blond highlights, which ended up looking like orange swirls. "Can I take
it out?"
Iruka nodded. "I'll be worried if you don't come home by 1:00 AM, just so you know."
Naruto laughed and nodded. "Of course, Iruka." He shrieked and hugged each man one more time. "I'm so excited."
Kakashi laughed. "We couldn't tell." He and Iruka smiled as Naruto put the helmet on and started his motorcycle for the first time. Naruto had gotten his motorcycle license with the intent to buy a motorcycle with the money from his job, but he always ended up spending it on things like swords and CDs and movies with friends.
Naruto hollered as he rode the powerful bike down the block. He had to wait until Iruka couldn't see him to really see what the bike was capable of, but he loved the power under his legs. He smirked as he decided to head to the hospital. He figured Itachi would be staying with Sasuke for the night, and maybe he could convince his boyfriend to take a ride with him. He realized he didn't have a second helmet and drove to the nearest bike shop. He knew there was a Harley store near the hospital. He'd window shopped there often when he was pretending he was saving up money.
Naruto parked his bike and pulled his helmet off. He walked into the shop and smiled at the owner. "Hey, Naruto. I see you got Iruka's present."
Naruto grinned. "Yeah. I love it! Don't tell him but I let her go out on the interstate for a little while. She handles beautifully."
The owner laughed. "So what can I do for you?"
Naruto turned toward the wall where the helmets were. "I need a helmet for Itachi. Do you have something in a really deep blue?"
The owner nodded. He pulled out a helmet from behind the counter. It was dark blue with Itachi's family crest on the side. Naruto smirked. "Iruka had that made, didn't he?" The owner nodded. "Is it paid for all ready?" Another nod. Naruto smirked and waved before running back out to his bike. He put his helmet on and stuck the other on his arm for Itachi. He was too excited to figure out what else his bike had, like storage.
Naruto couldn't stop the huge smile that was crossing his face as he rode the elevator to the fourth floor. He knew that stupid pink nurse wouldn't stop him this time, but if there was a new nurse, he wasn't sure how that would go over. He just about ran out of the elevator as it stopped on the correct floor. He hurried down the hall toward Itachi's room when a doctor in a white lab coat stepped out from behind a desk. "Visiting hours are over. I'm sorry, but you can't be here."
Naruto blushed when Madara popped up from behind the desk. "I was just coming to grab Itachi for a minute."
Madara smirked. "Haku, this is my nephew's boyfriend." He eyed the helmets. "So what's with the helmets?"
Naruto's eternal grin regarding his motorcycle returned. "My dad bought me a motorcycle in celebration of my birthday and his finally getting the adoption approved."
Madara nodded. He grabbed Haku's hand. "I'm not done yet. You get back to work, and I might think about giving you that candy you wanted."
Haku's eyes glinted as he grabbed Madara and pulled him back behind the desk again. Soon Naruto heard the sounds of Madara moaning. Trying his best to ignore it and remove the blush from his cheeks, Naruto sprinted down the hall toward Sasuke's room. He knocked on the door softly. When he didn't hear anything, he pushed the door open slowly. Itachi was asleep in a chair next to Sasuke's bed, obviously taking an evening nap. Sasuke was sound asleep.
Naruto moved around the bed and carefully reached out for Itachi. "'Chi," he whispered. "Wake up, 'Chi."
Itachi fluttered his eyes opened and blinked a few times when he saw his blonde. "Naruto?" Naruto
chuckled at Itachi's sleepy, confused voice. "Did something happen?"
Naruto shook his eyes and held his index finger to his lips and tilted his head toward Sasuke. He held his hand out to Itachi and moved them out to the hall. When they were in the hall, Naruto smirked before kissing Itachi softly. "I have a surprise for you." He held out the blue helmet, blushing when he heard Madara cry out that doctor's name.
Itachi shook his head, but took the helmet. "What's this for?"
Naruto grinned again. "It's a surprise. Will you come with me?"
Itachi shrugged and wrapped his arms around Naruto's waist for a moment. "You know that the answer is yes. I can't be gone too long though. I don't want to be gone when Sasuke wakes up."
Naruto nodded and pulled Itachi behind him. He blushed as he saw an obviously flustered Haku sitting beside an obviously sated Madara. Naruto shook his head and ran into the waiting elevator. Itachi chuckled. "You really are such an adorable innocent boy."
Naruto smiled and snuggled against Itachi's chest. "Not as innocent anymore." Itachi groaned remembering their time in the alley not all that long ago. Naruto smirked as the elevator arrived at the ground floor. "That has to wait though, 'Chi. I'm so excited. I have to show you." He was all ready putting his helmet on. "Put yours on," he said as he drug Itachi toward the parking lot his baby was in.
Itachi shook his head, but put his helmet on anyway. He loved when Naruto got so excited about
something that he had almost childlike innocence. Itachi stopped in his tracks when he saw his
beautiful blonde throwing a leg over a very gorgeous, very expensive looking Harley Davidson. "Nar,
what? When?"
Naruto laughed and the gleam in his eye was contagious. "Iruka and Kakashi got it for me. They gave me the most wonderful birthday presents today, but I don't want to talk about it, 'Tachi. I want to take you for a ride."
Itachi bit his cheek to keep from making a sexual comment and nodded. He finished strapping his
helmet and climbed up behind Naruto. He snuggled against the blonde's waist and held on tight. Naruto smirked. "Know how to ride one of these?"
Itachi sighed and shook his head. "Yes, Naruto. I've ridden a motorcycle before." He felt Naruto's cheer of joy as he pulled the bike onto the street. Itachi couldn't help but catch Naruto's smile of joy. They drove around for about half an hour before Naruto pulled back up to the hospital. Itachi laughed as he got off the bike. "Thanks for the ride, Naruto. I expect to see you much more frequently, now that you don't have to take the bus."
Naruto smiled and pulled Itachi in for another kiss. He sighed. "Get back to Sasuke. I'll see you next weekend if nothing else. If Sasuke's not feeling up to school, I'll probably come by with his assignments." Itachi nodded and kissed Naruto one more time. "I love you, 'Chi."
Itachi smiled. "I love you, too." Naruto watched as Itachi walked back up to the hospital, twirling his helmet around his finger. Naruto smiled before putting his helmet on and turning back towards his house. He screamed again with the freedom of his gift. He couldn't wait to thank Iruka again. This was the most thoughtful present anyone had ever given him. Then again, next to Itachi, Iruka was the most thoughtful person he knew.
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