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Strange Hotels	By : ninjagirl Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 959 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Chapter List
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Warning- This
chapter is not as good as it could have been but I really just wanted to get it
out of the way and post it cuz I have the next 5 chapters finished and I can�t
post them till this is done� so I have angst problems and the smut *sorrowful,
pathetic sigh* . I will probably redo and repost later. Maybe� anyway read.

CHAPTER
3 (Somewhat angsty smuttiness. Of
a sort.)

Miles away and days
earlier in a dark hotel room two figures writhed on a single queen sized bed.
One was a rather feminine blond of about average height with bright blue eyes,
while the other was tall with a lean, athletic body, dark hair, pitch black
eyes and a face any model would envy. The blond, gasping and moaning, arched as
he squeezed his blue eyes shut, while the darker male watched with cold black
eyes as the smaller teenager rode him in dazed motion. A while later the blond
turned on a small lamp on the nightstand, then laid down on the bed chatting as
the other got dressed.
�That was
incredible!�
��
�I wish all my
customers were half as good as you.�
��
�I mean when you
did that thing with your tongue, I honestly thought I was going to melt.� Even though you don�t seem very satisfied, thought
the blond. We�ve been doing this a couple
times each week for a month now and not once have I seen him get excited or
even the tiniest crack in that cold exterior of his. We just come here same
time, same place and screw in the dark. But hell what am I bitching about? I
get fucked by the sexiest man I have ever laid eyes on and am paid well for it.
Hell him, I�d fuck for free� if money wasn�t so damn useful to have.
�Sure you don�t
want to go for another round, sexy?�
�Your money�s on
the nightstand� was his only response before the man walked out the door.
*�� *�� *
The air was warm as
the man walked away from the room. It was a beautiful night with no clouds and
brightly shining stars. The young man stared at the sky.
Konoha is probably seeing the same sky
as I am� and I�ve manage to inflict the perfect wound on the only person I would
share this with. He
leaned against a sign post. Through our
loneliness a bond was formed that seemed to defy all expectations and through
that bond the pain that both of us had felt seemed to have abandoned us but,
true scars never really heal and when I broke that bond� we developed newer,
deeper scars. I destroyed the only true bond I had left, with the only person
who understood and shared my pain. �I betrayed
his trust.� /�m such a fucking cowa-.
�You must think I�ve lost my touch if you think I can�t sense you�� the man
stated flatly. ��Orochimaru.�
Immediately a man(1) dropped from a nearby tree.
�Oh, I would never
think that of you, Sasuke-kun.�
�Then what are you
doing here?�
�Making sure you
were safe, of course.�
�As you can see I�m
fine.�
�Of course,
Sasuke-kun, but I just worry so when you�re not near.�
�Don�t mock me,
Orochimaru. Tell me why you�re here.�
�Well actually I was wondering,� Orochimaru hissed
slowly. �when you first started screwing this guy, did they just randomly ship
him off or did you actually request to be sent someone with the same physical
attributes as Nar-� Before he could even get the name out, Sasuke had him up
against the building wall by the neck.
Orochimaru smirked,
�I guess that answers that question.�
Sasuke glared at
him, his eyes red and spinning, then growled �I want you to call your dogs off
and then I want you to stay the hell out of my sight!�
�Such
a bold request Sasuke-kun.
But you forget� I own you.�
�My life is my
own.�
�That very well
might be the case but your body is mine(2).� Then he
grinned and derisively whispered. �Tell me this. When you keep the room dark
like that, do you really feel like it�s Naru-chan
under you instead of some blond whore?�
Sasuke increased
the pressure on Orochimaru�s neck(3).

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(1)
ok look dammit. I refuse to do a
description for this man. We all know what he looks like and I�m keeping him
just as freaky and creepy as the original. Now to those who haven�t read the
manga or watched the anime� I�m sorry (why are you reading this fic?) I refuse.
Look this is all you need to know about the man. He looks human, has long black
hair and has a sword stored in a really strange spot. Think freaky snake man
and you just about got it.
(2)
Not
like that, kiddies.
(3)
Uh-uh.
Don�t even get your hopes up. Orochimaru ain�t even going out like that (lol).
�
Authors
note: I�M SORRY� I should just throw
myself and my computer out the window. My smut sucks. But I tried! My first sex
scene in my first fic and I chickened out. This should be a fond memory for my
future self, but instead I�ll look back, shudder, find the nearest computer and
burn it in effigy. I�m just not angsty enough. I mean if somebody I knew fell
down the stairs and broke a leg, I wouldn�t go and say �The world is a black,
black pit of despair and all elephants secretly wish to be a thin mongoose.� No
I would � I would laugh. At some point I�m sure I would call a paramedic but my
point is I tend find things funny before angsty. Anyway I�ll try to do better
next time. Sorry�

Beta
Note: �. OMG�. I think I might just have to hit her if she comes up with
anymore things that are supposed to be angsty that are funnier than anything
she�s said that�s supposed to be funny�. That�s all.

Authors 2^nd
note: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Vio-chan don�t be like that.
*snuggle* *snuggle*

Beta 2^nd
Note:� �_� *goes and gets her daggers�*

Authors 3^rd
note: Look dammit. If I wanna be angsty then I�ll be angsty. The sky darkens
and the howl from my chinchilla�s soul pierces the universe.

Beta 3^rd
Note: uh huh�see what I mean right? Anyway onto the next chapter already!

Rin�s 1^st
Note: don�t worry, no judgmental-ness on the sex scene..
its better than me.. I tried to DRAW a sex scene.. couldn�t finish it� *dies from
laughing* SMITE!!!

Authors LAST note: What, are all my friends writing notes in my
fanfic now? What is this to you guys, a slam book!?!
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