Gay Day | By : oraday Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 1111 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
[Unbetaed]:Will repost just as soon as it is betaed.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
Gay Day 3:Kyuubi walked out of the Haunted House, clutching his stomach as he continued to laugh. “Man... Did ya' see those... Those twelve-year-olds?” he asked between pants and giggles, “we scared the shit out of them.”“Hm, the groans and gasps that were coming from hell knows where probably contributed to that as well,” Itachi mused out loud as he snaked his arm around Kyuubi's waist.Kyuubi snuggled into Itachi's side as the two walked along. “You know, I think those groans and shit sounded like Neji and Gaara. I bet they were having sex. Naruto says they go at it like bunnies. He's the one who got them together. He's always noticing things that will make people happy and he always tries to help them with that. I think he really likes your brother though. It's not just a case of makin' him happy, I think Naruto's trying to make himself happy too. Do you think your brother's good for him?”Itachi paused to think on his answer. Kyuubi had actually engaged him in conversation throughout the day, and it wasn't one-sided. Kyuubi would blather on for a while and then pop a random question that Itachi had no choice but to answer with something other than his customary, ambiguous 'hn'. Itachi finally thought of an appropriate reply. “He better be.”Kyuubi groaned lightly. “Aw, com'on. That's not an answer. Tell me, what's Sasuke like? Is he nice or is he a brat?... Tell meee, ” Kyuubi whined.Itachi rolled his eyes. Sure, it was uncharacteristic of him, he wouldn't normally waste energy on such an useless action, but Kyuubi really did warrant such a reaction. Itachi could guarantee that he had talked more in these past two hours than he had in his entire life. It's not that he minded conversing, but no one had ever wanted to talk to him, or they were all too intimidated to approach him. Then again, whenever he initiated a conversation with anyone, it failed. Kyuubi must just be very talented at this... Conversing. “Sasuke can be selfish. He's been more isolated than I have. He's never had a real friend.”Kyuubi paused. “Huh? How is it possible that he's never had a friend?” It's not that he couldn't relate, he hadn't really had a true friend either, since everyone was always adverse to interacting with him, but he couldn't figure out how why a prestigious Uchiha would not have had friends during childhood at least.“Sasuke idolized me when he was younger so he always thought of everyone else as inferior. By the time he grew out of it, our parents were dead and he just gave up on the world, consuming himself with anything that could keep his mind off the loneliness, I suppose.” Itachi had never talked about this. He reasoned that he was largely responsible for the way Sasuke had turned out. Though he had tried to make sure Sasuke socialized; exposing the younger Uchiha to such characters as ex-assassins, perverted professors he'd met in college (when he was 15), and crazy family friends was probably not the best thing to have done. Then again, that was all Itachi could really do...“Hm... You don't gotta blame yourself for it. Sasuke's gonna be fine.”Itachi wasn't blaming himself. He was just acknowledging his responsibility regarding the matter. It wasn't as if he felt guilty.. Much.Kyuubi smiled at Itachi. He could understand what Itachi was feeling. He always blamed himself for everything that was wrong in Naruto's life, because it really was his fault. Well, no one that mattered ever told him that, actually they usually refuted his belief... But that was besides the point. Fact was, he was responsible for Naruto's loneliness, just as Itachi felt he was responsible for Sasuke's loneliness.Itachi grabbed Kyuubi's waist and lead him to a cotton-candy stand. He bought some blue cotton-candy for Kyuubi and then pointed in the direction of the hot-dog stand across from them. Sasuke and Naruto were sitting with two guys, a raven and a guy with purple-ish hair... The two guys they were sitting with were making-out and Sasuke was holding Naruto's chin and leaning in closely... And then the two teens were kissing!“Wah!!! My little brother,” Kyuubi yelled. His irrational protectiveness for Naruto kicked in and he started to move towards the two with the intent of separating them. He couldn't let his little brother be devirginized!Itachi felt Kyuubi shift and then move away from him. He reflexively tightened his hold on the red-head so as to prevent him from getting away. Kyuubi turned his face towards him and their eyes met. Itachi held Kyuubi's gaze and quickly leaned down to capture his lips.Kyuubi gasped in surprise and almost dropped his cotton-candy when he felt Itachi's lips against his own. At that moment, Itachi slipped his tongue inside to taste Kyuubi. Kyuubi forgot himself then and tilted his head up so he could get closer to Itachi. He felt Itachi turn him around in his arms and then press him into his body. The two melded, lost in their kiss.Itachi massaged Kyuubi's tongue with his own. Kyuubi's tongue was pliant and wanting, it seemed. Itachi was only too pleased to explore the red-head's mouth. His hands began wandering and they reached Kyuubi's hips. He became aware of slender fingers treading through his hair. Itachi felt the vibrations of Kyuubi's moans and he grunted in response. Just as he was going to start rubbing his groin against Kyuubi's, they were interrupted by a short, raven-haired girl.“Ahem. If you're not going to buy anymore cotton-candy, can you please move?”“Tatsuki-chan! Do you have the cotton-candy? I got the hot-dog!”The raven, Tatsuki, turned to her orange-haired companion with the hot dog. She leaned over the stand, looking for the person who ran it. “Eh... Sorry Orihime... The cotton-candy man is taking a nap.”
Indeed, the man running the cotton-candy stand was laying on the floor. That he was taking a nap wasn't necessarily true considering he seemed to have passed out around the time Itachi and Kyuubi began making out.Orihime pouted in disappointment. She had finally convinced Tatsuki to try hot-dogs with cotton-candy and now Tatsuki-chan would have to miss out on such a great combo because the cotton-candy man was taking a nap. It was so unfair.Kyuubi noticed the girls' predicament and decided to help. “You can have mine. I haven't eaten any of it.” He extended the cotton candy towards them.Itachi frowned, slightly insulted by the fact that Kyuubi had no qualms about giving up something that Itachi had bought him. Then again, Itachi considered, Kyuubi was probably just so altruistic as to give up something he revered. Itachi looked at Kyuubi's face and noted that the smile there became strained as he handed the cotton candy to the black haired girl. Smirking, he leaned down to whisper in Kyuubi's ear. “I'll buy you another one later.” Without the least bit of hesitation, he gently swiped his tongue across Kyuubi's ear; fully enjoying the shiver this caused.“Thank you so much!” Orihime gushed at Kyuubi. “Now Tatsuki-chan can taste hot-dog with mustard, ketchup and cotton-candy.Tatsuki hid her grimace expertly and let a smile grace her face. At least her smile wasn't completely fake since she really was happy that Orihime wasn't sad anymore. She smiled even more so when Orihime gave her a tiny kiss on her lips before lacing their hands together and leading her to a nearby table.Kyuubi leaned against Itachi as he waved goodbye to the two girls. He smiled and let Itachi lead him away in search of another cotton candy stand._________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Ah, Gaara!” Neji exclaimed, running his fingers though strands of rough, red hair.Gaara smirked and looked down at Neji. “Bit too hard?”Neji smiled and shook his head. “Nah, it felt good.” He suddenly flipped Gaara onto his back and laid on top of him, placing meticulous, searing kisses on Gaara's collarbone. He touched every inch of Gaara's naked body that he could reach, trying to sensitize Gaara all over.“Oh! To-touch more. There!” Gaara arched his back, desperately trying to rub his nipples against Neji's chest. He managed to make some light contact, but it wasn't enough. Thankfully, though, Neji never denied him anything and the brunette's mouth was at the semi-hard nub within seconds. “Yes, there!” Gaara encouraged Neji.Neji smirked, taking the nipple between his teeth and tugging on it. He shifted his leg and began to put pressure on Gaara's cock. He groaned as Gaara began to shift up and down, rubbing himself against Neji's thigh.“Neji,” Gaara growled. He felt ambivalent when Neji raised himself up to grab the lube. He liked that things were moving along but having to wait was agonizing. Gaara cheered mentally when he heard Neji pop open the lube.Neji pulled Gaara's hips into his lap. He began to rub Gaara's entrance with his lube coated fingers, mesmerized by the ruby red color of the opening. He wanted to lean down and lick it.“Hyuuga,” Gaara snapped as he thrust against the probing fingers. “If you don't push something in me, I'll fuck you raw!” Gaara's scooted his hips upwards, trying to reach Neji's member and rub against it.Neji conceded and scooted closer as well, allowing his cock to come into contact with Gaara's ass. He moaned as he felt Gaara shudder against him. He couldn't hold off any longer either so he quickly coated himself with the remaining lubricant on his hand and slowly entered Gaara. He held Gaara's hips back as the redhead trying to impale himself completely. “Fuck,” Neji moaned as the head of his cock pushed past that tight ring of muscle. He angled his thrust downwards and drove in completely, letting himself fall forward over Gaara.Gaara wrapped his legs around Neji's back, near his shoulder blades, thankful for his flexibility that allowed him to be comfortable in such a position. He hummed in appreciation and ran his hands along the small of Neji's back. He began to kiss Neji's neck, the kisses escalating to sucks and nips that left red marks in their wake. He let Neji take his time with moving, content to just rhythmically tense up so he'd sporadically squeeze Neji. With Neji hovering above him, panting wantonly, he really didn't mind waiting.Neji began moving, not wanting to cum before Gaara and liable to do so if he waited any longer. He grabbed Gaara's cock with one hand and teased a nipple with the other. He briefly felt Gaara smile against his neck before the redhead opened his mouth to let out low, breathy groans of appreciation.“Hah. G-good?” Gaara asked, wondering if Neji was feeling the same as him at the moment.Neji took a moment to answer, his reply breathless and choppy. “The... best. Gaara.” Neji was trying his damnedest not to spill his load. The position they were in made Gaara feel so tight and he could feel every little movement Gaara made. He took in large breaths of air, trying to hold off his climax just a little longer.Gaara was faring no better than Neji and was unable to hold on any longer. Neji breathing against his ear, stroking his cock, and ramming into him was too much stimulation and he tensed up, releasing his seed over his abdomen and Neji's hand.Neji groaned in pleasure and let go. He didn't even have anymore energy to continue thrusting into Gaara as his orgasm washed over him, leaving him exhausted and sated when it ended. Through pure strength of will and conscientiousness, he managed to roll off of Gaara so as not to suffocate the smaller male.Gaara, however, didn't want Neji off of him so he pressed himself up against the brunette's side and waited to be held. He didn't wait for more than a second, however, as Neji instantly wrapped his arms around Gaara and drew the redhead's legs in with his own.Suddenly, the sound of approaching feet reached both males' ears and Neji defensively held Gaara closer against him, willing himself not to tighten his grip in anger. A flashlight shined over them and Neji scowled, ready to pummel whoever was stupid enough to interrupt his time with Gaara.The idiot with the flashlight spoke. “I can't believe this. You two again?! I just cleaned up the mess I made from last time!” He didn't sound so much exasperated as he sounded excited.Gaara, who seemed completely unaffected by the security guard's presence, whispered to Neji, “clean me up, Neji.”Neji chuckled and carefully pushed Gaara down onto his back, trying not to expose any part of the redhead's body. He didn't want that anyone else seeing Gaara's naked figure. He placed a kiss on Gaara's collarbone before heading south to Gaara's limp cock. He began licking at the base and moved upwards as he cleared the skin of all traces of Gaara's cum.Gaara drew his hand over his mouth, knowing Neji wouldn't appreciate it if the security guard saw his parted mouth moaning in pleasure.It wasn't long before they heard a thud indicating that the security guard had fainted once again. Neji smirked up at Gaara and continued licking away until Gaara' was fully cleaned and subsequently erect.The two decided that another round was in order and quickly proceeded to join their bodies once again for a quickie, not caring about anyone but each other._________________________________________________________________________________________________
Naruto clutched Sasuke's arm to his chest as he laughed uproariously. Normally, after going into a haunted house, he'd be scared shit-less and grabbing onto Kyuubi while trying to hold back his tears. This time, however, he was letting the tears flow freely as he laughed and laughed.“Oh god. My belly!” Naruto gasped as he tried to calm himself down, giggling sporadically in between breaths.Sasuke sighed, but he was internally cheering at the hold Naruto had on his arm. “I can't believe they did that.” Sasuke was a little disappointed though. When he'd found out about Naruto's fear of ghosts while they were talking about the haunted house, he had immediately dragged Naruto over here in hopes of getting an armful of a frightened Naruto in need of comforting. Those two just had to ruin it though.“Gah! I can't believe it either! I mean, I knew Gaara could be an exhibitionist and Neji will always go along with it, but wow! I mean, did ya hear the security guard?” Naruto let go of Sasuke and placed his arms akimbo, a frown on his face as he puffed up his chest and deepened his voice for his imitation. “You two again?! I just cleaned up the mess I made from last time!” Naruto began laughing again, bending slightly as he hugged his stomach.Sasuke smiled, glad that Naruto was enjoying himself. He quickly steeled his face, however, when he noticed Neji and Gaara walking towards them.“You missed the part where he fainted after Neji licked the cum off my dick,” Gaara said with no change in his tone or expression. Neji blushed, but tried to feign innocence.Naruto made a face as though he had just eaten something sour. “Geez Gaara, too much info!” He chuckled as he made his way towards Gaara and patted the red-head on the back. “But that really was great. I wasn't even scared at the end.”Sasuke glared at Gaara who had a smug little smile on his face, probably due to the fact that he had a hand in making Naruto laugh like that. Neji, who had his unreasonably possessive moments, actually glared at Naruto, whose arm was languidly hanging over Gaara's shoulders as he chattered about something or other.Sasuke glanced at Neji and smirked slightly, thinking that he might have an ally. “Hyuuga.”“Uchiha.” Neji took his glare off of Naruto, scowling at the blond's inherent friendliness and his closeness with Gaara.Sasuke walked up to Neji, crossing his arms as they both watched Naruto and Gaara. “It seems that you don't like Naruto around your boyfriend.”Neji stopped scowling and threw a bored glance at Sasuke before turning back to Naruto and Gaara, smiling at Gaara's small grin and those jade eyes that were turned towards him. He shook his head. “It's not that... They're best friends and I'm used to it. Sometimes though...” Neji drifted off as he noticed Gaara's smile turn into a smirk and those eyes began filling with mischief and stared right at him. He was so lost in Gaara's gaze that he didn't notice Naruto was whispering in Gaara's ear. He gulped as Gaara walked towards him; Neji's imagination making him think that Gaara just happened to be swaying his hips although he wasn't.Naruto saddled up next to Sasuke, an impish grin on his face. “Ne, I think Gaara seriously likes it when Neji gets all possessive. He likes pushing his buttons. Ha, I bet they're gonna go back to the Haunted House later!” Naruto began laughing again, trying to stop long enough to wave at Neji and Gaara who were walking in the direction of the nearby Ferris Wheel. “So, where do you wanna go now?”Sasuke laced his fingers with Naruto's own and began to walk in the opposite direction, Naruto following him. “Well, the Ferris Wheel is out. Neji and Gaara will be doing who knows what there and I want to save it for later anyways. We can't go to the Animal Arena, because Goten will release all the animals, if he hasn't already. The Tunnel of Love...”“Aw, Sasuke-chan, you wanted to go to the Tunnel of Love? That's sooo cute.” Naruto snickered in good humor.Sasuke smirked. “Dobe. I just thought you'd like to go there... Wait. I know where we could go. You'll like the Aquatic Center, won't you?” Sasuke paused, looking around for a guide sign. He found it and realized they were going in the right direction; the Aquatic Center was near the Animal Arena.“Oooh, cool! It'll be totally awesome! We can look at the dolphins and the sea lions. Oh, we gotta see the penguins. They waddle funny! It reminds me of when Iruka-sensei made Kyuu wear a pregnant-belly thing that weighed a ton. Ah, he had to waddle for the whole week that he wore that!” Naruto began laughing, lost in his memories.Sasuke arched an eyebrow, wondering what the hell Naruto was smoking. “Why did Iruka make Kyuubi wear a 'pregnant-belly'?”Naruto, quite covertly if you ask him, wrapped his arm around Sasuke's waist as he explained. “Well, he wanted to teach Kyuu a thing or two about safe sex. Kyuu kept on complaining that condoms sucked 'cause he couldn't have real rough sex and he said that it was okay because he wasn't a girl so he wouldn't get pregnant and all the girls he went out with were on the pill anyways. Iruka-sensei kept on reminding him about diseases and all, but he just ignored it." Naruto squeezed Sasuke's side and began making random swirls with his fingers, pausing in his explanation for a second. "So then, me and Iruka-sensei and Gai-sensei attacked him in the middle of the night and we put the pregnant belly on him and we locked it on him with chains and everything. He even had to shower and go to work in it. You know, that was almost two weeks ago and he hasn't had sex since. He's totally gonna jump Itachi.” He looked up at Sasuke and grinned innocently when the Uchiha arched an eyebrow at him and gave a pointed glance to his groping hand.Sasuke sighed, not really having anything to say about the 'pregnant belly ordeal', mostly because he was too distracted by Naruto's hand to think of anything to say. In any case, it seemed that when Naruto would go off talking for that long, the blond didn't actually expect a reply unless he asked a question at the end. Then again, probably for conversation's sake, Naruto had mentioned something about Itachi just now... What was it? Damn that hand! Oh, Kyuubi was gonna jump Itachi because he was really horny. Noticing this, Sasuke quickly formulated a reply. “Even if your brother jumps my brother, Itachi won't give in. He's too cold to try anything.” Having known Itachi for his whole life Sasuke felt so sure of that.Naruto waggled his eyebrows, almost condescendingly, and said, “We'll see. Five bucks, 'member?”“Right.” Sasuke smirked, thinking that he couldn't actually lose this bet.“Eh? Where are we? Shouldn't we be at the fishy place by now?” Naruto let go of Sasuke's waist and made a full turn to literally look around.Sasuke looked at his surroundings and noticed that they were no where near the Aquatic Center and were instead near the park's center where all the kiddie rides were located. “Fuck. We must have passed it earlier... There was a turn we were supposed to make.” He grabbed Naruto's hand and began walking.
“Oh. Oops.” Naruto jogged to Sasuke's side. “I guess I distracted you too much, huh?” He smiled cockily.“Not really, dobe,” Sasuke responded as he pulled Naruto closer to himself when he noticed the crowd was getting significantly larger as they neared the Aquatic Center. He hoped there wouldn't be a long line; he hated the bitchy people that got pissed when he used his Fast Pass to avoid the wait.Naruto merely chuckled at Sasuke's reply and tried to keep up with Sasuke's quick strides. When they finally reached the Aquatic Center, they found that there were only about ten people lined up and they would probably get in with this group. Naruto whooped happily and ran to the line dragging Sasuke behind him. “Ah, we're here! I heard they have blowfish! I hope we get to see one that's puffed up. The only one's I've seen like that were stuffed. I wanna be able to puff my cheeks with them!” Naruto began puffing his cheeks up, trying to show Sasuke what he was talking about.Sasuke shook his head as he stifled his chuckles and rubbed Naruto's head. “We'll see one, I promise.” Sasuke had never been more happy to make a promise than he had been at that moment because of Naruto's joyous reaction. The gaping mouth that was outlined with a smile and those happy wide eyes were an exorbitant award for such a simply act.Naruto whooped again and threw his arms around Sasuke. He wasn't so much happy about seeing a puffed up blowfish as he was happy that Sasuke had been kind and considerate enough to listen to him and not make fun of him. Every time he had mentioned his blowfish wish to his friends and family, he had been mocked, even if in a teasing manner. Sure, it was a silly little desire, but that was the point. Silliness aside, they really shouldn't have made fun of him for it. Naruto kissed Sasuke's neck and whispered, “thanks.”Sasuke briefly nuzzled Naruto's hair with his nose, effectively hiding his smile from the rest of the world. “You're welcome,” he whispered back. He noticed the line had begun to move and so he squeezed Naruto, returning the hug, before letting him go. “Let's go see those blowfish.”Naruto grabbed his hand and smiled. The two went into the Aquatic Center, oblivious to everything around them except each other and the large sign at the entrance that indicated where each marine animal was located.They walked to the designated area, Naruto with a big smile on his face and Sasuke with a comparably smaller but nonetheless brilliant grin. When they arrived at the blowfish tank Naruto immediately pressed his face to the glass and puffed up his cheeks. Even though they both got scolded and kicked out of the Aquatic Center for touching the glass, it was so worth it when Naruto—after using his Teary Begging Uzumaki Eyes complete with prayer hands—finally convinced Sasuke to join him in the cheek puffing.Yeah, Sasuke's smile and the kiss after that had been completely worth everything, Naruto thought._________________________________________________________________________________________________
It was finally noon and after having waited for four hours, Chouji was finally going to compete in the Food Eating Contest. His friends were dispersed in the crowd, cheering him on while they waited for the competition to begin.“This is so awesome. I bet Chouji'll win!” Naruto animatedly declared.
Sasuke just shook his head as he continued to stand behind Naruto, his arms wrapped around the blond's waist. He had seen the list of competitors and Goten's father was one of them. If Goten could eat ten buckets of chicken and sixty hot-dogs as a snack, how much could his father eat?Naruto craned his neck as he felt Sasuke moving. He couldn't tell if Sasuke was agreeing or not. As he turned he noticed Iruka and Kakashi walking in their direction, and was duly distracted. He waved wildly and called out to the pair, not realizing that the two had already noticed him. “Hey, Iruka-sensei!!!”Once Iruka had reached Naruto he smiled and replied, “hey Naruto. How has your day with Sasuke been so far?”“Oh, it's been the best! We went to the fish place and he even puffed his cheeks at the blowfish with me.” Naruto turned in Sasuke's arms and hugged the raven haired teen. He was still ecstatic about Sasuke's behavior.A smug smirk graced Sasuke's face as he hugged Naruto back. He was devious and audacious enough to squeeze Naruto's ass. Naruto only blushed cutely and smiled before retaliating with a grope of his own that made Sasuke's eyes bug out.Kakashi and Naruto laughed at Sasuke's expression while Iruka tried to stiffle his chuckles. Sasuke began to scowl, but he was quickly appeased when Naruto gave him a peck on the lips.“Holy shit Raidou! I never thought I'd see the day when Uchiha Sasuke would let someone touch his sacred Uchiha ass,” Genma muttered around an over-sized toothpick.This time both Sasuke and Naruto scowled, Sasuke's hold tightening on Naruto.Raidou just languidly leaned against Genma and graced the perverted man's neck with a kiss, foregoing any comments.Kakashi noticed how Genma wasn't moving erratically as he was wont to. Iruka sent him a warning look and shook his head; a gesture to warn Kakashi not to ask. No one needed to hear an explicit account of all the things Genma and Raidou had done to make them both relatively tired.“Anyways,” Iruka calmly changed the focus of the conversation, “everyone else is over at some tables that Ino saved. Front row. We're only missing Kyuubi and Itachi now.”“We should go back to the tables,” Kakashi added, looping his arm around Iruka. “Kyuubi will want to be at the front...”“And Itachi will get him there,” Sasuke added. The group waded through the crowd, Iruka and Naruto apologizing intermittently as they accidentally bumped into people.When they finally made it to the front, they noticed that although Itachi and Kyuubi weren't at the tables, they were nearby, a couple of tables down.An orange haired girl cheered loudly as she hugged the raven haired girl next to her while hopping excitedly. “Yay, go Ichigo!”The raven haired girl would have cheered as well, but she just smiled blissfully, enjoying the comfort of the bosom she was being pressed into.Kyuubi, having recognized the striking orange hair, waved at the two girls. The more energetic of the two—Orihime-chan, Kyuubi recalled—enthusiastically waved back.Orihime greeted them warmly. “Hi! Thank you so much for the cotton candy. Tatsuki-chan liked the hot dogs so much that we ate some more when the cotton candy man woke up!”“That good, huh?” Kyuubi grinned in amusement. The girl reminded him of Naruto a little.“Actually, they were,” Tatsuki replied. Her voice sounded completely sincere.Kyuubi chuckled. “I guess I'm gonna have to try one.”Orihime gasped in delight. “Oh, we have some extra! You can have one right now. They're still warm. She turned to the table and opened up a takeout box. She grabbed a hot dog with a napkin and put some ketchup and mustard on it before handing it to Kyuubi.Kyuubi looked on with dread as Orihime put a large clump of cotton candy over the hot dog. She noticed his apprehension and asked, “do you not like mustard or ketchup?”Kyuubi didn't have the heart to refuse her so he quickly shook his head and took a large bite of the hot dog. As he chewed his lips quirked into a genuine smile and he began to hum in appreciation. “Oh wow,” he spoke around his bite, “this tastes great! Oh god, you gotta try this Itachi.” Kyuubi turned around and pushed the hot dog to Itachi's lips. “Com'on! It tastes so good. I'll kiss you if you try it,” Kyuubi offered.Itachi pondered the proposition and decided that if it did indeed taste good, it would taste even better coming from Kyuubi's mouth. “Feed it to me.”Kyuubi shrugged and pushed the hot dog against Itachi's lips again. “Okay, open wide.”Itachi pulled back slightly and shook his head. “Not like that.”Confusion crossed Kyuubi's face. “Then how?”“Don't drop it,” Itachi said before taking a small bite out of the hot dog and kissing Kyuubi. The red-head gasped, thankfully, which allowed Itachi to push the food and his tongue into Kyuubi's mouth. Kyuubi was right, it did taste good.Their kiss was cut short as cheering erupted all around them and the crowd got on it's feet. The contestants were being called to the stage.“Please welcome our second contestant, Takeru “Tsunami” Kobayashi!” the announcer said.(1) “I'm sure the crowd today reveres him for his hot dog eating abilities and his special technique of getting them wet before swallowing!”Kyuubi laughed, grateful that Itachi had taken the last bits of hot dog out of his mouth before their kiss ended. Ah, he wished he could be with Naruto right now. His little brother never got dirty jokes and he would always ask poor Iruka to clarify. Iruka's stuttered explications always ended up in making both him and Naruto blush as he and Kakashi laughed.Itachi allowed himself a chuckle as Kyuubi laughed into his shoulder. The red-head's immaturity was liberating in a way._________________________________________________________________________________________________
(1): Takeru Kobayashi has won the Nathan's Hot Dog Eating Contest six times. He came in second last year (prob. because of a major jaw injury, but that's just my opinion). He really does have a technique where he eats the 'frankfurter' part first and then dips the bread in water. I simplified it in description for the sake of a dirty joke. I hope he never finds out.
So... Anybody still reading? Well, I'm sorry this is so late. I'll try to do better next time.Uh, I have a new fanfic out though. Housemates... It's SasuNaru(Sasu). Check it out if you haven't already.Review Replies:
LegaraLover: Thank you for the review. Sorry I didn't update, soon. Heh, it's practically been a year. X[ Hopefully, I won't take so long with the next one.
sapphirexkat2: Hi! Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the pairings; they're all pretty much my favs, so... I'm sorry I took so long with the update. I'm glad you enjoyed Trunks and Goten's appearance. I will indeed try to fit in gay pairings from other anime, brief as it may be. I'll take suggestions though^.^ Sorry I took so long with the update, but I will hopefully get the next chapter out sooner. Thanks again for the review.
sadistickiss: Hi! Thanks for the review! It's cool about the yuri. I don't really read much of it either. It's great to meet a fellow DBZ lover. I'm a huge fan. There will definitely be more SasuNaru! I can't lay off that pairing. XD.
Cindy: Hey! Thanks for the review. Seriously boosted my ego there. Thanks for that. You ROCK too! ^.^
airhead622: Hiya!!! I loved your review. Thank you. I hope you'll enjoy the tiny bit of yuri I added. I'm gonna try to add more. Anyways, I hope you enjoy this chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it.
MiniMew: Hi! Thanks for the review! Ha, I am a huge grammar and spelling Nazi so I can't help it. I'm not so great at describing just yet, but my beta is a huge help with that. Thanks for all the props though. I'm glad my neurosis is beneficial in some way. Ah, I totally don't mind being on an adoration/stalking list. I'll be adding you to my list as well. Thanks again for the review^.^
Reno's_Lover: Yay! You liked the NejiGaara. I'm totally happy about that. Thanks for the review. Uh, the two OC's you're reffering to... I assume you're talking about Trunks and Goten? They're not OC's and they're actually from another anime, Dragon Ball Z. Just for disclaiming sakes, I don't own those characters and they're not my creation. I am incredibly flattered that you could think I made them up. Thanks again for the review. I absolutely loved it^.^
Artemis: Hiya! Sorry I didn't update soon. I'll try to do better next time... But thanks for your review. I really appreciate it and it made me giggle.
innerchild: AH, I seriously admire you and all your advice was incredibly useful. I will be adding the pairings that you suggested. I thought I'd work into the yuri writing with a paring I was actually familiar with. I haven't actually seen Gundam or Inuyasha past sporadic clips, so I have little knowledge of the characters. I researched, however and I'm really glad that you suggested those pairings 'cause I ended up liking them; especially Kagome and Sango. Thanks you for all your help and your review. I really appreciate it^.^
Okita1209: Hi! Heh, it's weird, replying to a review from ya'. Gah, I feel so bad that I took so long with this chapter. You're seriously a great beta. Thanks you!
Nomme de Plume: Thank you! Gah, every time I get a review from you I freak. I'm a big fan of your stories. I'm glad you enjoyed Sasuke and Naruto's kissing scene. It was prob. my favorite scene in that chapter. Goten and Trunks do have their powers in this. I dunno if I mentioned it either, but thanks for asking. It isn't really going to play much of a part in the fic, but I figure that if a Kamehameha is ever needed, it can be done. Ah, Goku will be making an appearance. I love his goofyness too much to avoid it. I think he and Naruto and he would hit it off too. Thanks again for the review^.^
Carola-chan: Hiya! Thank you for the review and the cookie! Ah, I'm glad you like pervy Genma. It's FastForward's fault that I love 'im so much. I think I'll be able to add a nice Kotetsu and Izumo moment. I gotta stop focusing on Neji and Gaara so much. Ah, I did write another fic where Kyuubi was Naruto's brother. It's called Fraternity. Um... I think I've read about three or four fics that have Kyuubi as Naruto's brother. Ha, I've got a bad memory too so I have the feeling there's more that I've read and just can't remember. :P Well, thanks again for the review. I'll try to update sooner next time.
tova: Hey! Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy this chapter as well^.^
Danii The Muse: Thank you so much for the review. I feel so flattered. :]
animehead: Holy shit! I can't believe you're reading this. With you, it's three of my fav. authors are reading this. Heh, I've only read a couple of your one-shots, but I love ya'. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Kai: Wah! Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like it^.^
kkk: Ha, funny name... Thanks for the review. I'm glad to meet another NejiGaara fan.
ursweetheartless: Thanks for the review! I love the way you've described my fic. Made me giggle. I'm glad you like this fic. It's my outlet for all the angst out there. I'm such a wuss so I can't take angst well, but all the good fics have angst so... Heh. Anyways, thanks again for the review^.^
666life666equals666yaoi666: Hi! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the NejiGaara and the SasuNaru. It's nice to know that you enjoyed scenes with my fav. pairings. Thanks again for the review^.^
XoXgaaraXoX: Hi! Thanks for reviewing. Ha, you reviewed a day before my update. Lucky I guess. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my other stories. It's nice to know you're reading. :D
While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
All works displayed here, whether pictorial or literary, are the property of their owners and not Adult-FanFiction.org. Opinions stated in profiles of users may not reflect the opinions or views of Adult-FanFiction.org or any of its owners, agents, or related entities.
Website Domain ©2002-2017 by Apollo. PHP scripting, CSS style sheets, Database layout & Original artwork ©2005-2017 C. Kennington. Restructured Database & Forum skins ©2007-2017 J. Salva. Images, coding, and any other potentially liftable content may not be used without express written permission from their respective creator(s). Thank you for visiting!
Powered by Fiction Portal 2.0
Modifications © Manta2g, DemonGoddess
Site Owner - Apollo