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Chapter Summary:
Naruto has a lovely chat with the ever cryptic
demon fox. Some Kyuubi/Naru
here.

A/N: I just
wanted to point something out. I really don�t know where this story is going;
it�s just one night I found myself on a roll after a year of hiatus as a fanfic author (it was inspired by an art piece I�m currently
working on atm). In fact I produce these chapters in
one session between the times of 3am and 7am (I�m a part-time vampire, didn�t
you know?!) But a warning: I can be very sadistic and therefore, if necessary, I
will brutalise some characters� personalities so I can
get the end result that I want (yah don�t worry, there�s gonna be smut). In fact, I�m not trying to keep anyone
strictly in character at all; this is many years after we first see them and
man, I knew I was way different than I was 5 years ago. Keep in mind that this
is fanfiction and my mind does tend to wander a
bit�well okay, a lot so I can�t afford to cater to everyone�s tastes.

Oh sod it, just enjoy this chapter *wide grin*

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�Why won�t you let me die!�

�Fuck, fuck�damn demon!�

�It�s all your fault, fucking fox!�

Naruto kneeled on his bed, in the
middle of the night covered in sweat. In a fit of rage, he threw the kunai he
had been gripping against the wall. The weapon pierced the ratty Ramen poster he
had since as long he could remember but the boy was too livid with his
unsuccessful attempts of suicide to care. He stared down at the blood-stains
littering his sheets. Each wound he inflicted on his wrists healed up instantly.
When he had tried to pierce his chest or neck, an undetectable force would halt
his actions and paralyse his arms. That damnable fox
was not letting him die.

�You�re selfish, demon�� he muttered, wiping tears of
frustration from his eyes with the back of a trembling hand. Didn�t Kyuubi understand how no-one could possibly cope with all
those misfortunes piling up? The Sasuke incident was
really icing on the cake.

�No you are the one being selfish, brat,� the demon rumbled
in the inner recesses of his mind as an answer. �Do you think I�m going to let
you forfeit my existence because of your pathetic self-pitying�?�

Naruto had a retort ready. It never
made past his lips as his eyelids grew heavier and his vision begun to spin
dizzyingly. He blanked out.

When he did finally open his eyes, he realized that he wasn�t
in his room. Naruto found himself naked, surrounded by pitch-blackness of a chamber
that seemed to have no walls�or if it did, the darkness obscured everything. The
only light source came from above, directly over his head. It was very dim
however and didn�t do much difference. Straining his ears, the boy could hear
the distant sound of water dripping.

�Where did you think you were?� came
a disembodied voice.

Oh of course. He wasn�t captured by enemy ninja. He was in
his own head. No wonder he didn�t feel cold.

�What the hell do you think you�re doing, demon?� Naruto growled between clenched teeth. He drew himself up
into a comfortable sitting position, modestly covering himself up by leaning
slightly forwards. Then he gasped and scuttled backwards.

The demon had materialized itself before him in all its
nine-tailed glory. It was the size of a rather large dog but still was imposing
all the same.

�W-what the fuck! Where�s your
cage!?�

Foxes weren�t supposed to grin like that, wide mouth filled
with sharp, menacing teeth. The foxes Naruto had
glimpsed during his years looked like harmless animals but of course, this was
no ordinary fox. It was not cute or fluffy. The red gaze covered every inch of
Naruto as it eyed its host as if he was a delicious
morsel.

�You are in my domain, boy. Did you not think that I, the
greatest demon these lands have ever seen, could not manipulate the seal a
little for my own benefit?�

The creature began to pad on silent paws around the
now-frightened youth. It continued to talk, the guttural voice rolling over him
in threatening waves. �In your mind, you can feel everything as if they are
happening in reality. You can even get hurt. Did you know that?�

As if to emphasise its words, a
beautiful red tail curled around the blond�s waist. He
held his breath and sucked in his stomach while the soft fur brushed against his
skin.

�What�s your point?� Naruto asked,
after exhaling. �I can�t be bothered to hear you prattle.�

�Why, you are here so we can talk. Is it not customary in the
human world when one feels ill, he seeks the counsel of a doctor?�

The host snorted at this. �You�ll only make me want to kill
myself, not make me feel b-be�tter��

His voice trailed off. The tail had withdrawn and was
replaced by two bare human arms, embracing Naruto from
behind. They were devoid of any hair but the fingers were topped with impossibly
long nails�no, nails shouldn�t be that long and sharp. Talons would be a more
appropriate word.

�I�m here to comfort. To explain a few things and quite
possibly�advise you on your next actions towards that Uchiha brat.� The demon�s rough tone had smoothed down into
a noticeable male voice.

Naruto to put it simply, was
flabbergasted. The limbs around him tightened their embrace and pulled him
backwards in a leaning position so now he could feel a warm chest forced against
his back. What was the demon up to now?

�Are you surprised?� the entity breathed right next to his
ear. �Allow me to tell you some basic facts about demons. Are you ready for your
lesson? Listen carefully.�

�Let me go! I know you! You�re evil�there�s no way in hell
you�re going to try and help me without some motive!� The youth demanded hotly
and attempted to break free but to no avail. The arms held him fast with an iron
hold.

�You do not know anything about me, mortal brat!� Kyuubi snapped with a hint of impatience creeping into its
voice. �Sit still, and listen!�

Naruto frowned but obeyed, feeling
highly suspicious. The demon continued its easy drawl.

�Demons, my boy, are an embodiment of mankind�s sins. Greed, wrath, sloth, gluttony, spite, selfishness�and most
importantly lust, to name a few. We thrive on these negative emotions and
lash out to destroy everything that is�positive. Hope. Love. Compassion. It is a balance to
keep the world at check. Are you following me?�

The boy nodded.

�Good. But what we really excel at is manipulation. We are
shape-shifters, able to take on whatever form we wish. To seduce man and push
him into an endless spiral that resulted from his greed and lust, in whatever
aspect of those words. As you can see, I am in a shell of a human male right
now.�

�So what are you? An it or a he?�
Naruto pursed his lips a bit,
his initial suspicion had now changed into morbid fascination.

�We demons have no gender. Would you have preferred�this?�
The demon�s baritone voice now melted into the voice that should belong to a
beautiful woman. Naruto blinked and looked down. The
arms holding him had shimmered briefly and slimmed down into a more decidedly
more feminine shape. The talons were polished into a deep red, as if dipped in
the very same innocent blood Kyuubi had spilled over
the centuries.

�Oh�gods��

�As you see, my dear boy, it does not matter. Male, female or
animal�whatever it takes to complete our goal,� the fox explained with an
alluringly sultry accent that caressed the side of Naruto�s face with seemingly invisible tendrils.

The ageless being shifted behind him and the blond froze
before blushing hotly. He could acutely feel full, soft breasts with firm
nipples dragging themselves up his spine. What was that perverted demon
thinking, having them both in the nude like this?!

�Damn fox�I ask you again, what�s your point in this�?� Naruto swallowed a lump in his throat, not believing how hot
everything around him began to feel. To his horror, he could sense the faint
stirrings of an arousal. Demon or not, the breasts pressed behind him left a
deceptively real impression.

The fiend laughed, and like Sasuke�s, it was beautiful. The tinkling of crystal wind
chimes swaying gently was how Naruto could only
describe it as. �I do apologise. How could I forget
that you are a mere teenaged boy with little or no control over his body?�

�I so do have control over my body!� the said teenager
protested loudly.

�I�m sure you do.� One foreign hand apparently didn�t think
so and it trailed down to his inner thigh where it pointed almost accusingly to
his half-hard member. Naruto promptly pouted at the
demon�s triumphant discovery.

�But�if it puts you more at ease�� Kyuubi�s voice had once again deepened in mid-speech.
Thankfully the sensation of breasts disappeared. �Is that better?�

�Yeah�thank you.� Oh jeeze, he was
now being polite to the stupid fox.

�I am happy to know that you have manners�yes, before you
ask, I know what you are thinking�I live in your mind after all.�

�Well isn�t that just nice?�

�Now, will you allow me to continue?�

�Yeah, get this over and done with. I�m actually curious to
see where you�re going with this��

�Dearest Naruto�do you not know
that you are an extremely attractive boy?�

The blond narrowed his eyes. Where did that come from? �No
I�m not. People can�t stand the sight of me. Are you feeling alright? First you
want to pass off advice and now you�re complimenting me?�

�Yes you are. Quite striking in
fact.�

�Yeah right. If I was hot then
Sakura would have dated me a long time ago. Sasuke�s
hot. Not me.�

He heard the Nine-Tails snort contemptuously. �Forget that
irksome wench. She is not worth your time�besides, your
attraction for her has long since dissolved.�

The hand that was resting on his thigh lifted itself,
pinching his chin with strong fingers. Out of thin air, Naruto saw the vague outline of a simple mirror being formed
right in front of him. As the object solidified, his face was pushed upwards so
he could stare at himself in the reflective surface.

�See for yourself.�

A visage encased in smooth tanned skin stared back at him. It
only made the large eyes, bluer than any sky, stand out more. Over the years,
the round face had narrowed down to reveal delicate cheekbones. Even his mouth
did not seem so wide anymore; the lips were now rosy, still glistening when he
had licked them last. His golden hair was still spiky but longer, falling into
his eyes and giving him some stupid out-of-bed look.

Naruto wasn�t one to admire himself
in the mirror. He barely looked at it, almost afraid to but used the excuse that
it simply wasn�t a manly thing to do. The youth knew that he was still shorter
than most, but life as an active ninja had given him a toned, slim body with
well-defined, lissome limbs. Some have described him as girly and he reacted
with an insulted punch for their statement.

�Are you now convinced?�

He peered at the mirror, eager to see the fox�s human face
behind him but before he could make out anything from the shadowy blur, the
mirror vanished.

�Whatever,� he said, feeling a bit disappointed. �I don�t see
what difference that makes in my current situation. Everyone still hates
me.�

�Hate you they might still do�but I have noticed the hungry
stares you receive as you blithely stroll through the village. You just do not
notice, ignorant as you are. Girls simply do not flock around you because of
their elders� warnings.� It was then that Kyuubi�s
voice intensified. �Do you think that it is a mere coincidence that you are
attractive?� The fingers holding his chin loosened and drew themselves up to
stroke oh so casually at his whiskered cheek. �That you were blessed with good
genes?�

�Then what else could it be? Huh? It�s not as if I know what
my family looks like. Shit, you make me so tired.�

�It is because of me,� the demon stated proudly. �Because I
am sealed inside you, you evolve differently than you would have normally. I
planned it so.�

�Oh you are so full of crap. That pervo hermit explained how my seal works. It�s got nothing
to do with you.� Naruto was now irritated, grimacing
as the day�s exhaustion started to settle in.

�Believe what you will but one day you will have to accept
your heritage, whether you like it or not.�

�What? YOUR heritage? Bullshit!
There is no way in hell am I going to accept your damn heritage!� Naruto yelled, struggling in the demon�s hold for a second
time. Again, he could not budge. That moronic Nine-Tails was becoming too
arrogant for its own good.

Kyuubi now sounded solemn. �Then
you would have also realized that I am becoming you and you are becoming me. We
are merging slowly but steadily. It is your heritage, boy. And I will tell you
how to claim it. But first, you will have to rid of yourself of your self-hate
rants. Uchiha is your first hurdle� at first I did not
deem it possible for you to fall in love with that mortal and judging with how
he acted, well I suppose I will have to teach you some things. You will prove
yourself stronger than him. Conquer him.�

Naruto�s gaze saddened considerably
at the mention of that. He sighed, body slacking into the comfortable embrace
behind him. �I don�t want to fight him or kill him. What�s the point? He hates
me.�

�If you are in love with him,� the being�s tone soured as if
it was chewing on something rancid, ��what a ghastly notion that is� then you
will listen to what I have to say. I did not say kill him. Conquer him. There is
a difference.�

The host remained quiet, waiting for his parasite to further
clarify its point.

�Make good use of your assets. Seduce the boy. Act like he
wants you to act. Prove yourself so irresistible that he will not be able to
stop thinking about you. Use his lust against him.�

Naruto chuckled amiably, finding
the whole thing absurd. �Are you mad? You�ve gone senile in your old age, fox.
There�s no way that�s ever going to happen. He�ll probably kick me in the nuts
if I go all gooey and bat my eyelashes.� The chuckle softened and the boy became
bitter. �You saw how well he reacted when I told him my feelings. You heard him.
I�m nothing to him.�

He really couldn�t help the overwhelming emotions of hurt
from suffocating him, he really couldn�t. Hokage or no
Hokage, it would be hard to achieve something that
miraculous when the entire village wished you were dead. He couldn�t even have
one person, just one person, love him for who he was. As if sensing its host�s
pained expression, the demon allowed its knuckles to lightly graze against the
boy�s cheek in some form of comfort.

�He hates me�he said all those horrible things�I�m
nothing�worth nothing�� Naruto rasped, mouth quivering
while he attempted to stop his eyes from watering.

At first he didn�t notice a moist tongue lick languidly up
the side of his throat. When he did, he recoiled before telling himself that
none of this was real and that everything was in his mind. Dogs liked licking
people to show affection all the time right? Foxes shouldn�t be any
different.

�Mortals say things they do not mean when they wish to hide
something,� the fox voiced after a moment. Naruto�s
eyes fluttered shut as a set of lips took his earlobe into a warm, wet mouth.
�Did you not stop to think why he chose that method of rejection? And he enjoyed
it, I am sure of it. It is obvious that this Sasuke
boy enjoys hurting you�sexually. Degrading, demeaning and yet still sexual.�

�I don�t�understand�� It was harder for the blond to
concentrate. Kyuubi was murmuring straight into his
ear, hot breath washing over his jaw line. The limbs draped around him moved,
now his inner thigh was being touched again, claws dangerously close to the
juncture between his legs. The other hand cupped his face, tilting it to provide
more access for tantalizing kisses.

�You want the boy?� Asked the voice,
slicker than oil and twice as sly. �Give him what he wants. He called you
a masochist. Then let him be the sadist. Lower yourself to the lowest to the low
and pull him down with you. It will be so beautifully depraved!�

Naruto suddenly yelped. The hand at
his leg had slashed itself up to his hip, leaving five thin cuts. Blood quickly
welled up into the wounds, threatening to spill over but Naruto paid no heed to the stinging. He was pacified by the
demon�s sinfully talented mouth that was suckling at the length of his neck.
Horny idiotic fox. �Your logic��-gasp- ��really doesn�t
make any sense��

�I find it obvious. Does he pay attention to anyone else in
this godforsaken village either than you? No. He does not care about that�fanclub is what they call it? Only your
rivalry. He would not be so passionate in fighting you, despite what he
said previously. Disregard what he said. Let him degrade you; allow him to
exercise his sadistic tendencies. Let him think that he is the master. Pretend
to be a submissive slave. Uchiha will find himself so
lost in his addiction in you that he will not wish to escape. You will then find
that the tables are turned. Perhaps the outcome will not be as romantic as you
would have hoped but remember that lust plays a key factor here. To the human
eye, you are irresistible. And�you must be careful that he does not tire of
you.�

The youth sucked in his breath. One talon was lightly tracing
the length of his fully-erect cock slowly, bringing a sense of uneasiness with a
strong twinge of pleasure. His thoughts were all over the place; the demon was
making absolutely no sense in its talk. Half-assed riddles,
masochism and sexual degrading? How the hell was that supposed to help
him with Sasuke? Better yet�why would he want Sasuke to put him down? Damnit, he
had some pride left! As far as he was concerned, his teammate probably had the
libido of a potato let alone some hidden, perverted side. Still, the demon was
right in some twisted way- you do not jerk off in another dude�s face to tell
him �I don�t like you�.

�I did not expect you fully grasp the point I am trying to
convey here�� the entity whispered, lips brushing
against the boy�s sensitive ear with hands splayed on his chest. �But human
emotions are my specialty, especially manipulating them. I have seen what Sasuke attempts to hide in that grim face of his that no-one
will ever notice. I have seen�many things. But you will soon understand. Perhaps
I should let you go for now. You can become quite tiresome.�

While Naruto attempted to get
around the Nine-Tail�s cryptic words, one thought struck him. �Wait! Why are you
trying to help me? Even if you can call that advice��

The fox�s human arms pulled back abruptly. �I do not wish to
live eternally inside a moping brat with low self-esteem. Besides�� There was a
short, ominous cackle. �Petty mortal theatrics amuse me. This is a perfect
example of one. Think of it�as my own exclusively broadcasted soap-opera.�

Before Naruto could pivot his body
in order to catch the elusive face that had so cleverly hidden itself from him
all this time, everything blurred again. He glimpsed a vague image of flame red
hair before the annoyingly loud screech of an alarm-clock pummeled itself
straight into his eardrums.

The youth had jolted from his bed, managed to tangle his legs
in the blankets before hitting the back of his scalp against the wall. He
slammed his hand down to silence the contraption and then took a deep breath. It
appeared that he was back in his empty room. Eyes widened considerably. He was
still wearing yesterday�s clothes. However, the material on his right leg was
torn to shreds revealing the slash marks that the demon had inflicted in this
supposed dream. That and the fact that he was still sporting a
hard-on.

�Fucking demon!�

Maybe some ramen was in order. After a cold
shower. Maybe he could kill two birds with one stone and have a
three-minute cold shower while the ramen sets.

TBC.

~~

This was a bloody hard chapter to write. And yeah� Kyuubi is making no sense
(deliberately)�or do we readers see something that Naruto fails to understand? *rubs hands manically* I should
start planning those zesty lemons from now *thoughtful look*

Actually I apologise if it seemed
that I took too many liberties with the fox. It�s just that his cameo
appearances in Naruto don�t leave too much for proper
character development. *disappointed sigh*

Review responses!

Vampia Zee: Macs? *comforts* Macs are
evil�.thingies created by Satan. Well hopefully your sadistic self will be
awakened more with the next chapters. I was originally going to have Sasuke mouth-rape Naru-chan but
decided� nah, that could be saved for later *evil wink* But hey, you reviewed
anyway and that makes me really happy *grin*

Tenohikari: *giggle* Sasuke is
totally incapable of angst! *enter sarcasm* Let us forget that it�s ALL he has
been doing in the anime. Well I guess the boy is somewhat human�how can he not feel a tad guilty? Thanks for reviewing!

Saki: You know when I got my boyfriend to
proof-read the second chapter (at knife-point mind you �cause you know straight men and yaoi) he mentioned that it�s more or less a reflection of
me- I compulsively smoke to calm my nerves as well. As you see, Mr Nine Tails does have plans � as confusing they may
seem.

Kayoko: *giggles
all fangirlishly* Yeah a smoking Sasuke can look pretty cute. I liked that ending scene
myself� it�s how I imagine them to be. When they don�t
want to face each other, then the passion leaves the fight and it becomes� how
to say it, monotonously played-out. And, thank you for reading!

Midnight Moon: Oh
I have plans for little Naru-chan! You hardly get the
downright dirty, perverted BDSM fics with Naruto I discovered� so I decided to write one on my own!
*hugs* I�m happy you�re enjoying this!

Sansty_san: I was totally spazzing on how to have them act around each other. I didn�t
want Naruto to act like a kicked puppy and cry each
time he sees Sasuke and then have the whole damned
village ask questions and such. And luckily for you, there will be more!

Ezi: It�s easy writing stuff like this! I
feel unsatisfied if I write fluffy stuff to be honest. Fuck the guilt cause I
just luuurve torturing characters *ominous laugh*
And don�t worry, I �m not easily scared hehe

MimiruChan: But it wouldn�t be fun if Sasuke was all nice and stuff *pout* And besides, killing Sasuke off
would be way too easy! I�m happy you�re enjoying my little story!

JadeTiger: You�re right, if Naruto fled Konoha or took his life it would have been way too
predictable. Well I don�t know if this story will end up good or not, but I will
try my best!

TenshiKaitou: *bats for air* I really am my own
worst critic, I�m afraid. But I love twisted psychotic characters. Besides,
Sasuke does it to himself. You know the whole: �Gee
I�m still not over my clan�s deaths despite the fact it�s been so many years
already�So, I�m going to run to the enemy, to a snake bastard who wants to take
over my body just so I can kill my stupid brother who is laughing at me as we
speak�never mind the fact that I�ll be a missing-nin. Fuck my
friends and home. I�m on an angst roll here!�

And yes� Naruto will be in for a
ride�it all depends what sort of ride heh heh�oh gosh, ignore me I�m getting all perverted here!

DarkSetoKaiba: woah woah, get a hang of yourself. You do have a point, I�ll
admit that much and I do appreciate you taking the time to read this piece and
adding your comments- in fact, after I read your statement I had a long
conversation with my boyfriend on the topic of character analysation. Did you mean my psycho-analysation on Sasuke alone or
Sasuke psycho-analysing
Naruto and then torturing him? I didn�t quite grasp
it�in that enthusiastic rant of yours. He is confused, he doesn�t know what is
going on and how to react and it doesn�t mean that he�s actually *going* to
listen to his inner creepy voice thingie. What one
thinks and one does in the end is a totally different thing. I�ve been writing
fanfiction for years myself and this thing I�m doing
purely out of fun and smut�speaking of which, you say you�ve been writing fanfiction yourself, but where are they? *searches
aff.net*

Keep in mind that I write purely on the spur of the moment.
If you don�t like where I�m taking this story then please, don�t force yourself
to read it.

Darkangel: Ahaha, yah
he does kinda �provoke the entire sub image doesn�t
he? But sometimes I do like it when he�s in control�I mean that demon sealed in
him brings soooo many possibilities, dontcha think? *wink*

Kenshinjunkie03:
I guess this story is the opposite extreme of the usual �I love you
stories��I�m not even going to attempt the romantic aspect. Whether Sasuke says �I love you� or �I love to hate you� in the end
is yet to be seen *mysterious smile* Thank you for your review!

Emily: *blushes*
Now its reviews like yours that make fanfiction
authors like us smile! I�m absolutely basking in the praise! But really, if you
do spot something wrong I wouldn�t mind a bit of constructive criticism every
now and then�how else am I supposed to improve! *impish grin* It really is fun
when you write on more than one character�s perspective; it does set a contrast
in the writing instead of being focused on one personality. Don�t worry about
analyzing my stuff like you do for English (which I hope you did well) � I used
to do four years of straight literature back in high school so I can definitely
understand your frustration. Again, thank you!

SnyperKat: Mmmm Kyuubi. Sasuke is such a bastard
isn�t he? But personally I like him like that *grin*�bastards fall down to their
knees harder!

Ryuukotsusei: Eeep, I�m
sorry for changing the title! But if I was going to continue it, then �Mistakes�
wouldn�t have suit the story (mind you, I suck at choosing titles for things in
general). But never fear, I shall continue dodging those rotten veggies with my
super uber ninja powers of the FanFic Author! (as for Sasuke taking advantage of Naruto�then you will just have to wait and see! Heh heh heh)

KyuTails: I am so honoured! *bows profusely* This
fic will be eventually SasuNaru but I do keep in mind that the clan does need to be
resurrected at some point�if not by Itachi, then by
Sasuke. He did after all,
state that it�s his secondary goal so I�m sure it�ll be swimming around in his
mind. Then again, who said that he couldn�t keep more than one partner? And as
for Sasuke being evil�well he�s just a confused little
boy *scuttles away* Thank you for the review!
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