Kyuubi the Bitch | By : Lechan Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 3775 -:- Recommendations : 3 -:- Currently Reading : 3 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
A.N. Obviously I’m not finished, and I won’t bore you with the reasons behind my utter failure. Suffice to say that my life became a massive shit-hole and fell to burning pieces around me I took a trip to the hospital and ended up on Xanex… yeah, that about covers it all. I’ve had this chapter done for a while I just hated it so vehemently that I have refused to post until now because, well lets face it, I’ll never be satisfied with it. So please review and let me know how badly it played out, or if it works.
Also, I don’t think I say it often enough, but you reviewers are AWESOME! ^-^ I love getting feedback and well, you are the reason I keep writing, even on those days were I just want to give up I look at the reviews and think, ‘Yeah, no. they’re waiting GeminiScar, get your butt out there and finish what you started.’ So thank you very much! ^-^ Also, AlienX, you hit it right on the mark there. ^-^ Thanks for reviewing. ^-^ Kyuubi the Bitch Sasuke Chapter 11: Chosen Paths and Fate The streets were empty, echoing with the cries that grew louder the farther from his home he traveled. Buildings looked like empty monoliths, the welcome curtains flapping in the cold breeze showing the emptiness beyond. The darkness from within the houses was so foreboding the child averted his eyes to the muddied street and the direction his feet took him. His cheeks stung from the harsh wind that whipped and tore at him in punishing gales, as though the wind its self was attempting to hold him back, to make him turn around and hide in the loneliness that he knew. He’d already slipped several times, so he knew the tepid feel of the mud and the puddles on the ground. His shirtfront was splattered and clung to him making his body temperature drop even further the longer he pushed against the force of his fear. The one sobbing was important, and he couldn’t deny himself or the other any longer. Hiding away didn’t save him, and it wouldn’t save the other child now. Another harsh gust sent him tumbling, and icy muck slid under his shirt collar slipped across his skin. He bit his lip harshly to stop his cry and his knees and palms stung from the impact, as tiny rocks and twigs scraped at his flesh. He remained crouched holding his tiny hands to his chest; whole form shuddering as he bit back his own tears. The cries grew louder in his stillness. Looking up, determined, the child found himself seated before a large building. It had several floors, each lined with numerous doors and windows. It, like all the others, was dark and empty, but something about the building seemed familiar and like his home, it was a cold recognition which made the building far more sinister than it should have been. His heart beat rapidly against his ribs, fear making him wonder if he could even continue on, but the cries came from the apartment building and he couldn’t leave it there. With a fortifying breath, he stood up and squared his shoulders as the wind abruptly died around him. He was going into the building, and he would not be leaving alone.
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