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Chapter 20
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“So, have you decided what you want to do yet?”
It was probably the fifth time tonight Sasuke had asked him that within
the past three hours and, just like the last four times, Neji shook his head
and said he didn’t know. He knew the
other man was disappointed by the iterative response, he could see the deep
frown marring his face as he took a swig from his bottle of Guinness. Even the dim, coloured lights inside the
darkened night club were unable to conceal it and, while he was grateful that
the Uchiha wasn’t demanding an immediate answer from him, even though he
refused to take him home until he got a desired response, Neji couldn’t help
but feel somewhat abashed for not even knowing what he, himself, wanted.
He’d have to blame it on his upbringing. His parents, both clerks in the middle-income
bracket, always believed that one should always work hard to achieve one’s
goals and riding on the backs of others was, not only lazy, but made you a
burden upon those trying to fulfill their own destinies. That was why, when his Uncle’s boat came in,
his father, while happy for his twin brother, refused the generous portion
offered to him. He wanted his son to
learn a very important lesson: To be
content with what he had even though there were others who had more than he
did.
So, from a very young age, Neji had been taught; not to envy those
better off, the value of a hard-earned dollar and, no matter how bleak things
seemed, they could always be worse and to take the good with the bad. It was his father’s selfless and
self-sufficient rearing that prohibited him from jumping at this tempting
offer… that and his indecisiveness. Here
was Sasuke, promising him the world on a silver platter, all he had to do was
ask and he couldn’t think of one, single thing he’d always wanted more than
anything else.
Naruto and Gaara made many suggestions of their own, however, Naruto’s
recommendations lacked creativity and were very short-lived, while Gaara’s were
sure to leave a dent in the Uchiha’s pockets.
As much as he appreciated their propositions, Neji was looking for an
activity he and Sasuke could share that would leave a long-lasting impression
within his memories. He also didn’t
think that the quality of their experience be measured in dollars and cents.
“I still think you should make him your sugar daddy,” Gaara sighed
after he’d shot down his ‘travel around the world at least once’ idea. “It’s not like he’s got anything better to do
with his time or money.”
“No, ‘m telling you, a pet is the best way to go,” Naruto argued, his
voice heavily slurred by the strong alcohol he’d consumed. “Ya’ll should get a puppy and raise it like
it was your baby?” and, as romantic as that concept was, Neji sadly didn’t see
that scenario playing out.
Sure, Sasuke had a ‘kinder’ side and he was fortunate enough to see the
magnanimous part of the Uchiha that dwelled deep beneath the layers of
arrogance, cynicism and condescension.
And while he seemingly possessed infinite tolerance towards Neji as
opposed to most others, the Hyuuga believed he’d have limited patience towards
a yapping ball of fur that did nothing but, eat, sleep and poop all day. Besides, taking on a joint responsibility
like a pet would mean they held a much closer relationship than what they had
right now (Neji still hadn’t found a word for it) but, for some reason, Naruto
seemed to think they were officially a couple and he couldn’t help but wonder
why, and how, the vapid blonde came to such an astute conclusion.
“I think you should let Neji sleep on it,” Itachi input his two cents
after blowing an exhausted sigh through his nostrils after fighting back a
weary yawn. He’d had an arduous day at
the office and wanted nothing more than to curl up in his bed with both his
lovers in either arm and, had it not been Sasuke’s birthday, he would have been
doing just that. “Just be patient,
little brother. When he comes up with
something, he’ll let you know.”
“Hey, you’re changing the subject,” Naruto shrieked, nearly deafening
everyone at the table because, even though their surroundings were fairly
noisy, they were sitting close enough to engage in conversation without having
to yell in each other’s ears.
“Keep your voice down, Naruto,” his mate warned with a feral
glower. “Or I’ll give you something to
really scream about.”
His lips turned into a small pout but he knew not to push his luck and
drowned any and all snappy rejoinders in another glass.
Neji stared, impressed by the amazing power and control Itachi had over
the other boy. Oh, he’d known the eldest
Uchiha was the dominant one in their three-man relationship, even though it
would sometimes appear as if he let his spoiled little rugrats run all over
him. But, when it came down to who had
the last say in any matter and whose rules were to be respected and followed,
there was no argument. Even now, Neji
felt a tiny chill creep up his spine as he timidly observed the astringent
scowl on Itachi’s already intimidating face.
“Instead of trying to think about something you want to do, why not
think about something you’ve never done,” Gaara simply advised while idly
stirring his drink with one, slender finger.
“You’d be surprised by how many things you’ve missed out on,” and he
lifted that same finger out of the cold liquid to pop it into his mouth and
suck suggestively on it. He agreed with
his older lover that this was something that required a bit of deliberation on
Neji’s part but he quite liked this conversation and it also gave him an
auspicious opportunity to get to know this intriguing, young man a little
better.
“It’s easy to say that,” Neji replied after a little thought, “but how
can I think of something I’ve never thought of doing… so to
speak?”
“I see where you’re coming from,” Sasuke nodded, completely
understanding his predicament. “Alright,
let’s compile a list of things you’ve never done and you pick which ones you’re
interested in. Hmm… Have you ever been
in a nightclub before?” he then asked while gesturing with one hand to their
busy surroundings.
“Of course I have,” Neji laughed, and his reply genuinely surprised
everyone at the table. “I’m not that
much of a homebody,” but their dumbfounded and dubious expressions only made
him laugh more.
“I just have a hard time picturing you shaking your stuff,” Gaara
squinted as he tried to conjure images of the usually put-together Hyuuga
getting loose.
“I have a hard time picturing you having any fun,” Naruto
scoffed nastily and tossed his head back to knock the remaining dregs in his
glass down his throat.
“Umm… well, I’ve… I’ve never actually danced or anything,” he admitted
with a sheepish murmur. “While everyone
went off and did their own thing I’d… kinda just sit and watch.”
“Knew it!” Naruto hooted
boastfully, and slammed the tumbler on the table’s vinyl surface. “You are boooring.”
“Can you dance?” Gaara then asked, paying no attention to his obstinate
boyfriend.
Neji shook his head. “Well, I
can but, not the kind of dancing you’re referring to,” and he knew now was
probably the worst time to mention his ballroom dancing lessons.
“I’ll bet you’ve never been drunk either,” Naruto wagered, willing to
ante up his left testicle he was right about that too and, when Neji shook his
head and confirmed this, the boy snorted.
“Pussy!”
“There’s nothing wrong with limiting alcohol intake, Naruto,” Itachi
calmly reminded him. Really, he of all
people should know this and, while Sasuke agreed wholeheartedly, he said
nothing. His guilt kept him silent.
He oftentimes wished alcohol affected him the way it did Naruto. The already brain-dead moron’s I.Q. took an
incalculable hit once he fell under the influence. He even envied Gaara who became easily
exploitable in his drunken state but, no, he and Itachi were unfortunately the
same when it came to intoxication.
They were both dangerously violent.
As with habits like these, this wasn’t something they were aware of in
the beginning and it took someone on the outside (usually a victim to their
drunken rampages) to alert them to their destructive practices. They’d usually toss back a few, allow the
booze to distort their perception and pervert their sense of conscious thought
and what happened between then and when they woke up the next morning with a
hell of a hangover, was of little consequence to each man. It wasn’t until that one day Sasuke came to
and swore he’d been robbed and it was his brother, Itachi, (who’d gone clean a
few weeks before him after attacking Naruto for the same reason), told him what
happened the night before. After driving
him home, he’d stayed behind to make sure he brought no unnecessary harm to
himself or anyone else and he was relieved his younger sibling came out of his
stupor alright. Although, he couldn’t
say the same for his furniture and personal belongings but he often worried
what would have happened had he not been there and what if it had been someone
else who had volunteered to take him home?
Someone who was much weaker than him?
It was almost nine months to the day Itachi had that talk with him, and
he’d never hit the bottle that heavily since.
Tonight of all nights, was not the time backslide. He knew the extent of his anger when he was
sober, but at least he had his self-control.
It disturbed him and terrified him, knowing that he lost that restraint
and uncertain of what he was capable of in that state, but what frightened him
the most was losing that restraint around Neji.
Sasuke’s stomach lurched violently at the thought and he pushed the
remainder of his beverage out of arm’s reach to curb any further temptation.
“I just never understood why people allowed themselves to get drunk in
the first place,” the psychology minor said with a wry shake of his head and
Sasuke’s shame churned in his gut, threatening to bring up every drop he’d just
consumed.
“It’s overrated,” the younger Uchiha rasped, glaring hatefully at the
green bottle before him.
“Well, look at you,” Naruto tittered, wagging a finger between the two
dark-haired males in the adjacent seat of their corner booth. “You’ve taken a vow of abstinence and you’re
too much of a prude to get hammered,” and he snorted before leaning over to rest
his heavy head on Itachi’s shoulder.
“You guys sooo deserve each other.”
Neji frowned at the response, not because it was insulting but because
he was insinuating, once again, that he and Sasuke were an item. It certainly wouldn’t have bothered him at
all <i>if </i>that statement were true but the fact that Sasuke
didn’t correct him made Neji wonder if the Uchiha believed it was even if he
hadn’t come right out and said anything.
Neji gnawed on his bottom lip.
However… he didn’t strike him as the type to come forward and say he was
ready to take this to the next level, much less ask his permission to do
so. No, Sasuke was the type of person
that did what he wanted, when he felt the time was right. No corroboration was ever needed since he
preferred to make his decisions based on moods, and if his partner wasn’t ready
then he could always either talk them into it or wait until they were in that
mood again.
This was probably why he was having so much trouble figuring out what
kind of relationship they had. He was
also having trouble figuring out why it needed a name in the first place. He was content and secure whenever Sasuke was
around, right? Maybe it was because he’d
feel a lot less confused if he knew what it was called.
“There’s nothing wrong with getting a little tipsy though,” Gaara
suddenly curbed his train of thought, “Not only will it help you relax but
you’re still aware of what’s happening around you. I’m sure, if you’ve ever been to public
speaking seminars, they tell you that a little alcohol before giving an
important speech can calm your nerves.”
Neji nodded in agreement. There
was a professor at the university who had to address up to a hundred and
thirty-odd students in the lecture hall on a weekly basis. He was a timid man, and most of his pupils
had a hard time interacting with him once classes were over. He was also very difficult to hear at times
due to his quiet nature but, every Wednesday afternoon, his voice could be
heard from the podium where he stood even to the very back of the room where
most of the delinquents sat, and all without the use of a microphone. Occasionally, he would stop to clear his
throat and take a sip from a glass that he always brought with him and everyone
knew that the contents of that glass was not water.
“I, myself, prefer to use the ‘underwear’ trick,” Gaara continued and
the way he was suddenly ogling Neji’s chest made the Hyuuga wonder if he were
using that trick on him right now.
“I’ve never had to give a public speech,” Naruto interjected.
“That’s because you never have anything important to say,” teased
Sasuke.
“How do you overcome performance anxiety, Sasuke?” Neji turned to ask him, just missing the
moment when Naruto flashed the bird.
“It’s never been an issue for
me,” he bragged, knowing full well what Neji meant by ‘performance anxiety’ but
he was unable to pass up this opportunity to steer this conversation down a
perverted path. “I’m always ready to
‘get up and go.’ Itachi, on the other
hand, has these little blue pills--”
“Don’t go there,” the eldest at the table snapped, his irritation
rising at his brother’s implication, “Unless you’d rather we discuss your
sexual aberrations as well.”
Sasuke stiffened and his face became noticeably pallid. He’d brought it on himself, knowing full well
how self-conscious Itachi was about using sexual enhancers. He was still fairly young and, at his age,
it had nothing to do with a deterioration of his virility or stamina. It was all due to stress, and Itachi found
that whenever he was on vacation or took an extended leave of absence he never
had need for them.
Sasuke was sympathetic, after all, Itachi took on the majority of their
responsibilities once they reclaimed their father’s position in the company,
but like the annoying, little brother he was, he never passed up an opportunity
to heckle his sibling about it.
He just happened to choose the wrong time to do it.
“Sexual aberrations?” Neji echoed, his curiosity now piqued, “Like
what?” and he directed his question to the eldest because he knew Sasuke wasn’t
willing to fess up.
“Hmm… there are so many. Where
should I begin?” He purposely delayed a
response, humorously watching as the Hyuuga sat on the edge of his seat in
suspense and his lovers snickered, enjoying this moment at Sasuke’s expense.
“Is it something disgusting?” Neji asked cautiously, weaving his brows
together in hesitancy, “I don’t think I want to know if it’s disgusting… wait…
I do want to know but leave out the details?
No, wait, just tell me everything,” he rambled after curiosity finally
got the best of him and he braced himself for the horror stories by gripping
the edge of the table with both hands.
“Neji, it’s nothi--” Sasuke started to say but was rudely interrupted
when the older man next to him placed a finger over his lips.
“Shh! Don’t interrupt when the
adults are talking, sweetie,” Neji smiled, loving the shocked, wide-eyed
expression on the other brunette’s face.
“Oooh, be careful, Neji,” Naruto giggled a warning from the crook of
his lover’s shoulder. “Sasuke doesn’t
like it when his partners are assertive.”
“Nope,” Gaara concurred with a shake of his red head, the dim lighting
around them giving the bright strands the appearance of a flickering
flame. “He likes being the one in charge
and he always has to be on top. Always!”
“Really? What else?” Neji asked,
encouraging them to continue. He didn’t
seem at all disappointed by this revelation because, in his mind, Sasuke was a
dominating individual and the fact that he always had to have the last word and
always had to be right, even if he had to change the laws of existence to
support his claims, proved this.
“He likes it when his partners are noisy in bed,” spoke Itachi. “What he doesn’t like is when they talk
dirty.”
“Which wouldn’t apply to you because you talk like a school teacher,”
grumbled Naruto.
“I don’t actually think I’ve heard him say even one cuss word, as long
as I’ve known him, Gaara thoughtfully tapped a finger against his chin, and
despite his roasting, Sasuke couldn’t help but smile inwardly. He was probably the only one sitting here
that had heard Neji curse before, and for some reason, it made him feel
exclusive. However, he was glad the
Hyuuga’s obscene outbursts were extremely rare because using foul language
really didn’t suit his sterling personality.
“I also think it’s fair to warn you that my brother is very messy when
it comes to sex,” Itachi continued with a cheeky glint in his eyes and Neji was
a little surprised that the older man wasn’t at all adverse to talking about
his brother’s sexual exploits.
“Yeah, yeah,” Naruto lifted his groggy head and bounced excitedly in
his chair. “Sasuke likes to spray his
shit everywhere. He’ll put it on your
face, in your hair, on your stomach,” and he counted off each body part on his
fingers.
“A girl almost got it up her nose once,” Gaara added, lazily running
his fingertips along the rim of his tumbler.
“On your thighs, on your back, on your ass…” the tipsy blonde
continued, accidentally counting his index finger twice.
As much as he wanted to browbeat all three of his comrades for putting
him in such an awkward position, he allowed them to continue since he was
curious as to how Neji would react this information. Fortunately, he didn’t seem a bit appalled by
any of this, and the sidelong glance from the corner of his eye revealed him to
be laughing along with everyone else.
But Sasuke also wanted to know what the other man really thought. Did any of this turn him off? Did it intrigue him enough to want to
experiment? Did it change Neji’s
perspective of him?
God, what he wouldn’t give to be psychic right about now.
“Oh, and one of his biggest fantasies is oral sex with a tongue
piercing.”
“On the tongue too,” Naruto went on, still stuck on that same finger,
“All down your throat and gargle like mouthwash.” He showed Neji how to do it
by taking a guzzle of Itachi’s drink.
“The gargling is optional,” Sasuke amended with a flat sigh, tired of
having to keep repeating it.
“He also said swallowing is optional,” the red head nodded in
confirmation. “But… if you’re going to
spit, you have to spit it out slooowly so it dribbles down your chin and neck,”
and he let his fingers trickle along a similar path in demonstration.
“Got milk?” Naruto hooted, reminding them of an old joke they shared
based on a very similar topic.
“Exactly,” the elder Uchiha nodded.
“Wow, Sasuke,” Neji erupted in laughter, “I’m learning so much about
you.”
His only response was a shallow grunt but he smiled none the less. He was just glad the Hyuuga wasn’t offended
by their discussion (or his sexual practices).
Usually he’d ask to change the subject or excuse himself from the room
and he wondered if was the rum punch he’d consumed that had anything to do with
his sudden open-minded tolerance.
“And this is just the tip of the iceberg, Neji,” the tanned boy said,
“This guy, right here,” and he pointed a finger at the shorter Uchiha sitting
across from him, “This guy, right here, is one sick motherfucker.”
“He won’t watch porn unless it has cumshots in it,” said Gaara.
“Yeah, facials and cream pies are a staple in his collection.”
“Speaking of which, he’s got an entire folder in his laptop dedicated
to that stuff.”
“Not to mention the ones of drag queens and manginas.”
“Hold on a minute,” Itachi interrupted his boyfriends in the midst of
their deliberation. “I think you lost
him.”
Sure enough, there sat Neji with a vacant stare on his face, too
embarrassed to ask for a definition of those odd words.
“Seriously? No shit?” Naruto’s
azure eyes blinked in utter disbelief.
“What is it you don’t understand?” Sasuke then asked him. He didn’t want the Hyuuga to pass up, what he
purported to be, a very educational experience.
“Umm…” Neji paused and a soft, red hue tinted his cheeks, nose and
neck. While he didn’t know their
meanings he was still too embarrassed to utter them. “The pie-things… what Gaara said, and the
man-things.”
“Pie-things and man-things!”
Naruto guffawed, further provoking the blush on Neji’s face.
“You mean cream pies and manginas,” Gaara corrected.
“Uhm… yeah,” he nodded causing a few strands of his hair to fall over
his shoulder, amazed that he didn’t feel as uncomfortable with this discussion
as he thought he should be.
“Heh, don’t worry about that right now,” Sasuke smirked and reached out
to rake the wayward locks that blocked his view of Hyuuga’s pink face, “You’ll
find out soon enough,” and his deft fingers gently grazed the rim of his ear
causing a warm shiver to travel along his spine.
Neji exhaled sharply when that isolated area of contact seemed to spark
a chemical reaction within his body which ignited the alcohol that was coursed
through his veins, and the burning sensation didn’t stop at just his face
either. His stomach felt like an oven
that had been left on at three hundred and fifty degrees, and his limbs,
although heavy, felt as if they were made of jello, not flesh and bone. He managed to lift one hand to his forehead
and was not at all surprised to when he pulled away his fingertips to find them
glistening with perspiration.
He furrowed his brow as he looked into the empty bottom of the glass
he’d been drinking from all night. “Is
anyone else feeling hot?”
“Wewt!” Naruto hooted at his interesting choice of words, stretching
out in front of him to exchange a high-five with his dark-haired friend, and
even Itachi found it hard to keep a straight face through his stoic demeanor.
“Oh no, honey. That’s all you,”
Gaara crooned, extending his hand to receive a five from his hyperactive mate
as well.
“Actually, to be honest, this conversation’s got me a little hot, too,”
the blue-eyed boy admitted as an aside.
“Here, Neji. Go buy yourself
another drink, that should help cool you down,” Sasuke said with a naughty grin
and he fished a handful of bills from his pocket before handing Neji a couple,
and the other man stared at them as if he’d never seen one before in his life.
“I’m surprised at you, Sasuke.
Taking advantage of poor Neji like that,” Itachi smirked once his
brother had pointed the tipsy Hyuuga towards the bar and sent him along his
way, “Does this mean you intend to capitalize on his condition a little later?”
“Hell yeah!” Naruto answered before Sasuke had a chance to make a more
subtle-but-similar reply. “If I was
Sasuke, I’d fuck ‘im right now.”
“I can’t believe he actually listened to you and went to get
<i>another</i> drink,” Gaara chuckled with a slow shake of his head
as he glanced behind him to watch that tall, enticing figure disappear amongst
the crowd, “If you didn’t disgust me so much, Uchiha, I’d shake your hand.”
“It’s not like I planned this or anything,” the young man said in his
defense even as he sat there with a satisfied grin, much like the hunter
waiting eagerly for the rabbit to venture into his trap. “I had no idea he had such a low
constitution. I just thought a few
drinks would loosen him up, that’s all.”
“And yet you sent him for another,” his brother plainly pointed out
with an arched eyebrow.
“Christ, he’s only had two,” Gaara frowned and drank the remainder of
his vodka, cranberry juice mix. “What’s
the third one going to do to him?”
“Guess we’ll find out tomorrow morning, eh, Sasuke,” Naruto winked.
“No, you’ve got me all wrong,” the dark youth laughed, “It’s not like
I’m going to drag him into a secluded corner and have my wicked way with
him.” Although, he really wouldn’t mind
if that scenario just happened to play out.
“If he’s stumbling all over himself after he’s had that drink, then I’ll
just take him home and let him sleep it off.
It’s no fun having sex with someone who’s not conscious enough to enjoy
it, right?” And when the other three unanimously agreed with him he
continued. “But, if he’s not too
hammered and he’s okay with a little fooling around then I’ll see where it
takes us.”
“Here’s hoping it takes you ‘all the way,’” Naruto cheered while
raising his glass in a toast.
“Well, I hope you don’t get lucky,” Gaara sneered spitefully, “He’s too
good for you.”
Sasuke wanted nothing more than to leap across the table and punch the
rude little shit square on the nose, but he fought that urge, and it wasn’t
because Itachi was sitting right next to him.
The reason Sasuke didn’t give the pompous red-head the ass-kicking he so
royally deserved was because he actually agreed with him. He didn’t deserve someone like Neji even
though he’d always believed he deserved nothing but the very best. But there was something about the Hyuuga that
made him… God, what was the word?
Decent?
Yeah, maybe.
He was a decent guy.
Hard-working, selfless, and passionate about life. Sasuke still couldn’t understand nor believed
there still existed someone who could put the needs of others before the needs
of themselves, especially in this day and age.
But Neji could, and he did constantly, even going so far as to
protecting Orochimaru from his wrath, even after the terrible things that
bastard did to him.
Decent would have to be an understatement. Neji Hyuuga was practically the definition of
‘angel walking among us.’ They were from
two completely different planes of existence, and he would never be able to
ascend to Neji’s level, that was why he was trying to drag him down to
his. Now that he thought about it, in a
way, that was exactly why he was trying to accomplish, and it made him feel
even worse.
Sasuke sighed with indignation and he suddenly felt the desire to crack
Gaara’s skull open with a bottle for ruining his good mood with such
insensitive words.
“I’m going to find him,” he rasped, pushing himself out of the
plastic-coated seat.
“Sasuke, what gives?” his blonde-haired friend asked, concerned by his
troubled disposition.
“There’s no need to worry, little brother. Neji’s a big boy; he can take care of
himself.”
‘It’s not that,” his sibling replied before walking off in search of
his intoxicated secretary, “I’m going to
take Neji home. I think he’s had enough
for one day.”
Naruto shot puzzled glances between his boyfriends but the perplexed
expressions on their faces told him they were just as clueless about the young
Uchiha’s agitated attitude. They barely
had enough time to confer about his immediate change of heart before he
returned but the fretful look in his eyes and his agitated frame let them know
he was on the verge of an anxiety attack.
“Guys, I need your help,” he spoke a little too quickly and his
breathless pants matched the rapid pace of his frantic heartbeat. “I went to the bar and I can’t find Neji
anywhere.”
*****
Okay, so I decided to end the chapter here as a cliffhanger so it
doesn’t get too long. Sorry to have to
do this to you but you’ll have to find out what happened to Neji in the next
chapter.
Here’s a hint: Orochimaru had
nothing to do with it. (Not much of a
hint, I know, but I didn’t want you to be disappointed when you found out he
didn’t. But, don’t worry, I haven’t
forgotten about our Neji-obsessed predator.
He’s still in it, he just shows up later).
I haven’t done this in a while, sorry but I replied to some more
reviews here:
dragonslayer1: O_O ooooh my GOD!!! THERE IS
A GOD! IT'S A MIRICAL!!! I LOVE YOU MORE!!! HURRAY ANOTHER CHAPTER AND A SPICEY
ONE TOO! YES YES GOD YES!!
ClaireBear: I know
this reply is a little late, sorry. Yeah
it’s a miracle I updated, huh. I don’t
know what’s wrong with me >.< I’m
working on chapter 21 right now and I hope it’s finished soon. That will be a spicy one as well, provided
it’s not too long and I have to chop it in half like I had to do with 19 and
20.
Tyra: Wow.
That was awesome! xDD
Nyah, it was really amusing to read about Neji's childish behavior. xD It was
so cute.
And it started that hot and passionate kissing scene..
Which led to the even more hot scene. xDD
Sasuke and Neji surely are making progress. It's good.
Poor Sasuke though, he didn't get his much needed release. xDDD
Well, that day is still coming.
Naruto and Gaara, once again, they are so adorable!
Poor Naruto's butt is sore.. Right for him though.. xD
I hope you keep writing!
I really wanna know what the blond and the red-head is going to do now! xD
ClaireBear: Same
here, I love it when Neji has his ‘immature’ moments even though it feels
out-of-character to me sometimes. But
he’s always so serious and adherent to the Shinobi code in the canon and the
only time I remember him doing something weird was that one filler episode when
he drank that tainted soup (might have been ramen or chili) and he kept passing
out while making these hilarious expressions.
I purposely did that to Sasuke >:3 I’m prolonging his suffering just because I
can but he won’t have to hold it in for too long. I’m glad you like Naruto and Gaara. Even I’m having trouble reigning in their
shenanigans so imagine what Itachi has to put up with, heh. Since you’re so curious, I’ll share something
with you. Naruto and Gaara’s next round
of monkeyshines is going to involve Neji, but in a good way. ;)
That’s all I’m going to say and I hope I didn’t already give anything
away.
ydjessy: Love your fic, hope to see an
update soon, I'm totally hooked on this.
ClaireBear: Well, I’m really glad you
like it and I really hope to keep the updates coming. I just wish I wasn’t such a huge
procrastinator.
alpha2nd: Holy crap! Woo! Go Sasuke!
Poor Neji, he must be so embarrassed, but its a good thing! Gah, I really think
you make Naruto and Gaara so funny in this. I wonder what kind of havoc they
would make having their food eaten. Great job as always!
ClaireBear: Heh he, Naruto and Gaara are
like two typhoons creating havoc and leaving a mess in their wake. Wherever they go; disaster strikes. XD I’m
glad you like the fic so far.
Rainshi:
oooh I love this story so much I can't wait for the next update!!!
I also can't wait till Sasuke Scores!!
ClaireBear:
Sorry the updates are abysmally slow, I’m working on chapter 21
right now and I really hope to have it finished soon. It should be veeery interesting ;)
Anon: I can't
wait to see Neji loosening up. That's going to be funny. When's he going to
tell Sasuke how he feels?
ClaireBear:
Okay I must confess, I am not entirely sure when or how Neji’s
going to bare all to Sasuke but I was kinda leaning in the direction of having
them be in a relationship without verbally acknowledging it. They know it, we know it but no one ever
comes right out and says anything. I
might change that though since I have an idea for a conversation those two are
going to have a little later in the story so Neji just might tell him how he
really feels.
NessSachiel:
love it, love it, love it :)
kill Orochimaru for me soon, ok? :>
and I would love to see more of Sasuke/Neji goodness :*
ClaireBear:
‘kill Orochimaru for me soon, ok? :>’ <= You have no idea how much this cracks
me up, it’s like something on a to-do list.
1. Make
Naruto and Gaara do something crazy.
2. Make
Neji and Sasuke do the nasty.
3. Kill
Orochimaru!
Tyra: Hahaha,
awesome chapter!
Neji actually came out of his shell for a while. I like seeing him a little
more daring and flirting even! He really doesn't want to be the spoilsport this
time, eh? No matter what Naruto says.
The pretending to masturbate in the movie theatre was hilarious. :D Even Neji
did it.
It surely was a pleasant suprise for Sasuke too. xD
And the fact that Neji knows (at least something) about BDSM was suprising for
me too! xDD
Like I said: Awesome chapter!
I can't wait to read more. I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
ClaireBear:
I must be the only one that thought that movie theatre scene was a
little too much. I actually wanted to
take it out but I’m glad I left it in especially now that so many people
enjoyed it. Neji is trying so hard to
get Naruto to accept him and to change the prudish view he has of him but the
blonde isn’t making it easy because he has his reasons. And those reasons will be revealed later.
Nejislady:
I just saw this story in the updates and wanted to read it after I
read two of your other stories with Sasuke and Neji I had to jump on this. I really,
really love this pairing. It's hardly ever seen if at all. I'm going to read to
catch up to everyone else.
ClaireBear: Yay!
Another Sasuke x Neji fan.
^_^ Yeah, this pairing is very
rare and it’s a terrible shame. There is
also no Sasuke x Neji section on this site.
My
opinion is because, in the Naruto canon, Neji and Sasuke never interact if my
memory serves me. I don’t think they
even said more than two words together or were even in the same place at the
same time (outside of the Chuunin Exams).
Most popular yaoi couples are those of characters on the same team,
hence you see a lot of Neji x Lee (which I never supported at first but started
to grow fond of since Lee is really, rather sweet) or characters that actually
fought against one another, Lee x Gaara.
I can’t
remember why I was compelled to pair those two boys together but I know it had
primarily to do with the fact that I love Neji and wanted to put him in the
submissive role of a relationship and semes don’t come any more dominating than
that bratty Sasuke who has to be the best and have everything HIS way. I also think they work well together because
I don’t believe Neji would let anyone take a superior position over him unless
he viewed them at least as an equal and the only person hardcore enough to take
on the arrogant Hyuuga (in my mind) was Sasuke.
Also,
Neji is sexy and Sasuke is hot and you can’t go wrong with that kind of
combination. XD
qwerty: I burst
out laughing when Naruto was mimicking Neji's "Oh shit, Busted!"
look. So funny^^
I love this story. It's well-written.
update!!
ClaireBear:
I was giggling like a hyena when I wrote most of that part
actually. So funny in my mind as I
pictured it. I’m glad you liked it and
thanks for the compliments J
Yersi Fanel: Looks someone is alive! *gets hit by a
rock*... that hurt...
Anyway, nice chapter my friend! It was interesting.
ClaireBear: I’m glad to see you’re still around too,
Yersi. Yes, I’m still alive XD I hope you’re still working on your fics
unlike lazy, ol’ me. I haven’t done much
reading on adultfanfiction but that should change next week when I get some time
off, I’ll check out A Distant Cry.
neji_lover:
I'm 100 per cent only yaoi fanfic fan so I'm so happy seeing a
fanfic of my favourite couple and I think that sasuke is the perfect seme and
neji the perfect uke .
(MUAJAJA) that's hot
write more and more nad more ..... don't stop writting (but if you do another
fanfic please I'd like neji being boy (I'm such a yaoist)
ClaireBear:
Yay! Another Sasuke x Neji
fangirl. They’re my favourite couple too
and uke Neji / seme Sasuke is the sweetest combination. I’m glad you like this story so far and I
don’t plan to stop writing, I just write a lot less now but I really want to
finish my fics before hanging up my keyboard.
I have some ideas for more stories and you’ll be happy to know that Neji
remains completely male in all of them.
The reason I made him cross-gender in that one was because, for the sake
of the story, I wanted him to get pregnant and, since it was an AU fic, based
on ‘real-life’, the only way I could realistically pull that off was by giving
him a uterus.
I like
M-Preg fics but I love them even more when they make sense. (Which is probably why I haven’t been able to
write a decent one yet or at least work on the one-shot I did a while back).
Thanks
for all your reviews, I really appreciate all your feedback. I also want to give a round of applause to my
beta who does more work betaing this fic than I do actually writing it. XD
Take care everyone and see you next update.
ClaireBear
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