Behind Steel Bars | By : Agami_Shukagri Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 3300 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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A/N: Hey y’all! Welcome back for the next chappie of Behind Steel Bars. I’m terribly sorry for the late update on this. Hehes, I got lost on the path of life I suppose. It wouldn’t be the first time.
Sekito: True.
Agami: Hey! What’s that supposed to mean? *pouts*
Sekito: Heh, don’t worry about it.
Agami: *continues to pout*
Rakknar: *chuckles lightly* So, our hikari isn’t sure where to go with the roster now. It’ll be up in the air for who has who this time.
Agami: Yeah, I kind of forgot….. Whoops, it happens.
Sekito: Indeed. It’ll be fine anyways. I know you’ll do well.
Agami: Aws, thanks! I hope so.
Rakknar: We know so. Now, we hope you all enjoy what happens this time.
Sekito: Remember to please favorite, follow, vote, drop some kudos, and always please leave us some nice reviews. We look forward to hearing about what you think.
Chapter 20: Lotus
Naruto
Some time has passed. It’s nearing to the point where it’ll happen. Obviously I’m nervous about it. Sighing, I rolled over in bed. So much has happened over the course of a few weeks. Knowing I’ll be a parent to these people I thought had been monsters does make me feel like I’m complex now. It’s because these people who are thought to be the bad guys aren’t necessarily that way. They have hearts that have needs and wants like the rest of us. It’s sad that most people outside of Amegakure don’t see that side of them. Grimacing, there’s a sharp pain before I curl up into a ball. Hearing the sounds rushes in Sasuke. Guess he was on guard duty while the others are out collecting things or out on missions.
“What’s wrong?” He asked, noticing he’s frowning which is more than he usually emotes.
“Water broke,” I muttered, picking me up into his arms before rushing me to the medical wing and then calling for Konan to come help.
Being hooked up to an IV I waited. The pains came and went intermittently. It’s not a pleasant feeling where I don’t think I can really move from here much. Gritting my teeth I fought through it until hours later came out two boys and a girl. Konan washed and swaddled them in soft blankets before handing the trio for me to hold. The others had been called, returning from their chores and missions in a hurry. Apparently word had spread. Gaara is also going through the same thing as me. From what I heard he gave out a few girls and one boy. So, the opposite of me. That’ll be a good balance. Plus, they’ll grow up together so they’ll have friends to play with around here. Giving a soft smile to my newborn children I wonder what to name them. A few come to mind. Sitting beside me is Deidara, holding one of my hands within his own. The others had visited Gaara before me. Good because I want to make sure he receives a sufficient amount of attention.
“Any names come to mind, hmph?” Asked the flamboyant artist curiously.
“Yukio and Muzako for the two boys,” I replied with what I thought of. “Then for the girl….I think Auxe would be nice.”
“That’ll do well,” commended Sasori, sitting beside the blonde.
“It’ll be interesting seeing them grow up,” mused Itachi, noticing that the girl has silver hair, one of the boys has blonde, and another has reddish brown.
The eyes of each are different. When they do for a split second they can see what it is. For Yukio it’s oceanic blue. Muzako’s is almond brown. Then for Auxe her eyes are onyx. Each will in time grow into whatever abilities their parents have given them. Due to the makeup of each of the guys being different means there’s no telling what they’ll become. All I know is that I love them each dearly along with the children I have finally given. Hopefully they won’t be ridiculed or anything of that nature due to who and what they originate from. That’s my worry along with any of them harboring a fragment of Kurama. Yes, I do trust the fox with my own life, but it would concern me if any of my children have to experience the same life I had way back when. The good thing is these three have parents unlike me growing up. They won’t be alone on their journey through life.
For a certainty at first I thought I had been sent to the lion’s den. What I didn’t know then that I do now is they are my family that managed to create a future where I previously thought I’d be alone instead I have been taken in by the pride to become a proud parent of three. And even behind these steel bars I wouldn’t change a thing that’s happened so far. What I’m excited for now is raising these three and watching them go out into the shinobi world to take them by storm.
A/N: Yays! Done with the story! Yeps, this is an unexpected ending to Behind Steel Bars. It’s also my shortest longfic so far. It ended at about thirty thousand words more or less. Hopefully you all enjoyed how things played out along with its progress. What’ll happen now? Well, I want you all to vote on something in the comments.
Do you want an epilogue and/or a sequel to this? If yes for an epilogue then it’ll be a time skip a couple of years to show how the kids grow up. If it’s a sequel then it’ll have the entire show of the six growing up and all.
Hopefully I did a satisfying job of tying up lose ends and giving it a proper ending. Obviously I like and prefer to have the title involved somewhere during the last few lines or at the very end. Personally I thought it was cute. I’m also satisfied with how I finished it off. It’s important for the writer to be satisfied with everything of course.
Sekito: Do you think you would’ve done anything differently?
Agami: Hmmm, nah, I don’t think so. I liked how everything went after each chappie. I also enjoyed doing more pov’s and involving some more as it grew longer. I thought it was a good idea to show the readers what the other characters thought and felt.
Rakknar: Do you think you want to do something similar to this, but with different shippings?
Agami: Oh yes I most certainly do. Hehes
Sekito: Heh, wow. You didn’t hesitate there.
Agami: *innocent look*
Rakknar: Good, you better.
Agami: Actually, that’s something I’m going to be doing in the new story I have planned. Hopefully you all will enjoy the updates that’ll happen in due course along with anything new. I ensure regular weekly updates happen whether they’re short or long. Remember it’s all about quality instead of quantity here.
Sekito: Of course.
Rakknar: Remember to vote, drop some kudos, favorite, follow, etc. It’s good to see that people have enjoyed this story. I know Agami will be looking forward to working on said updates and all within due time.
Agami: Exactly! It takes time for perfection to be finished obviously. Hehes
Sekito: Heh, true. Also, please remember to leave some nice reviews. We always look forward to hearing what you lovely readers think. It’s also important to remember to vote on which you’d prefer either an epilogue or a sequel to this in your comments.
Sekito: Until next time, farewell loves!
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