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A sad life deserves more	By : Zendura Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female Views: 6994 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 4
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Naruto let out a sigh as he kicked
a rock that was on the path. Miko walked up beside him and put her arm around
his shoulders as they continued to walk along the path. "Don't worry
Naruto, we'll try and find Tsunade as soon as possible so that we can be back
soon."

Naruto smiled. Miko always knew
how to cheer him up. "Thanks Miko. I know that finding Tsunade is really
important since Jiji needs her. That's why I didn't complain, but we've been
gone for less than a day and I already miss them."

Jiraiya looked at the two and
nodded up the road. "We'll be coming to a small town soon. I have an
informant there that may know something, so we'll be spending the night. When
we get there, you two find us a hotel for the night. I'll be back before
nightfall."

Both Naruto and Miko nodded as
they continued to walk. Just like Jiraiya had said, they soon came across a
small town. Jiraiya headed off down one of the streets as the two Kitsune
looked for a place to stay. After about half an hour, they found a place that had
two rooms left. It seemed most of the towns vacancies were full of merchants
heading north to some sort of festival. Miko counted her blessings, while she
didn't mind the self proclaimed super pervert, she really didn't want to sleep
in the same room as him if she had the choice.

As Naruto lay in his bed staring
at the ceiling his mind couldn't help but drift to what happened that morning.

FLASHBACK

"Koishii, I don't want you to
go." Naruto had woken up with a very worried Haku holding him tightly. He
could see she was doing her best not to cry. "I have a bad feeling that
something is going to happen to you. I, I'm afraid you won't come back!"
With that last sentence, the dam holding back her tears broke.

Naruto was rubbing Haku's back as
her sobbing woke Hinata. Seeing Haku's hysterical state, she got worried.
"Is everything ok? What's wrong with Haku?"

Naruto let out a sigh. "She
thinks something will happen to me while I'm away, so she doesn't want me to
leave." Sitting up, he pulled Haku into his lap. "Haku, I know you
want me to stay, but I need to continue my training with Jiraiya. We're
probably not even going to leave Fire Country. Besides, Miko will be with me,
and she�fs no push over. I'll be completely safe. I'm more worried about you,
but I trust Hinata to take care of you while I'm gone."

Haku leaned back into Naruto,
letting her head rest against his shoulders. Turning her head she looked deep
into his eyes. "Promise me, if you're in danger, you'll run. I know you.
You never back down, but please, for me, for our family, please run. Run and
make it back to us. If you die I, I..."

Naruto interrupted her with a deep
passionate kiss. As he pulled back, he gave his mate a loving smile. "You
know I can't promise that, but I will promise to return to you and Hinata.
Nothing in this world or the next could keep me from you two."

Haku closed her eyes as the tears
kept falling. She knew he would say that, and it nearly broke her heart that
one of the reasons she loved him so much might take him away from her.
"Please be with me, Koishii. One last time before you leave, I want to
feel you fill me with your love."

Naruto kissed her neck gently as
his hands started to roam. He had been using the Riaru Henjiru to take on his female form during their recent
love-making because he didn't want to endanger their child.
Haku knew this and accepted it. Soon her sobs slowly become moans as Naruto
found all the places that made her pussy clench and her cock jerk.

Hinata smiled as she watched the
two people she loved most in the world show their love to each other. This was
their time, and she didn't want to interrupt. so she quickly and silently left
the room as she wrapped a robe around her naked body.

Haku was too lost on her emotional
roller coaster to notice Hinata leave, but Naruto did. He made a mental note to
thank her later. He was so glad he knew they could never be jealous of each
other, and counted that as one of his true blessings. He let out a small groan
as Haku started to squirm, rubbing her perfect ass against his hardening
member.

Haku's eyes met his once again. He
could still see the fear, but it was being flooded with her lust. "Please,
I want you in me." Naruto smiled as he lifted her up by the thighs as she
took him and guided him to her core. He made sure to let her down slowly. Once
she was sitting in his lap again, she cooed as she pulled his arms around her,
her fears almost forgotten in the complete feeling.

Naruto cherished these moments. As
he rubbed her slightly bulging belly, he couldn't help feel a little
apprehension. Just three months ago, he never thought he'd ever have a child,
let alone someone that loved him like Haku or Hinata. If you had told him, he
would have laughed bitterly as he walked away. But now, now he would be a
father in just a little more than two months. Would he make a good father? He
never had one, so he really didn't know what he should do. I'd be a little
easier if Kyuubi kept his memories, but there was no guaranty. Once again, he
just promised he would do his best and try to be the father he always wanted.

END FLASHBACK

Naruto was brought from his
memories by the sound of someone knocking on his door. Looking outside it was
still light out, so Jiraiya wasn't due back. Unless he got his information and
they needed to hurry out of town. Getting up, he moved to the door as once
again someone was knocking on it. "I'm coming!" As he opened the
door, he noticed two men wearing black cloaks with red clouds. The taller one
had blue skin and hair with weird gill like marks on his cheeks and sharp
pointy teeth. He also had what looked to be a massive bandaged sword on his
back. The shorter one had long black hair and a pale complexion, but what
caught Naruto's attention were the blood red eyes with three tomoe staring
straight at him, "Itachi."

The tall one chuckled as he looked
at Itachi. "It looks like the brat recognizes you."

Itachi just stood tall with his
ever stoic expression and didn't even reply to his partner. "Uzumaki
Naruto, you will come with us."

Naruto's senses were screaming for
him to get away from these two as Haku's words that morning ran through his
head, but he knew he was out classed here. Even if it was just Itachi, he
doubted he could get away, so he had to stall. Surely Miko, or possibly Jiraiya,
would be able to feel their presence and come. He just had to give them time.
"You know, I always wondered what I would do if I met you, Itachi. Some of
the worse things that happened to me were at the hands of the Uchiha, so I
really didn't mourn their passing, but I still wonder why you did it. I'm not
naive enough to think you did it for my benefit, so I'd like to know."
Naruto hoped this did one of two things, piss one of them off so they'd let
their chakra rise, or actually get an answer. Then he saw it, or at least he
thought he did. When he mentioned it not being for his benefit, he could have
sworn he saw Itachi look at his stomach, but it was too quick to be sure.

The fish guy smirked, "This
brats getting annoying. Can't I just chop off his legs? He doesn't need them
were he's going."

"ITACHI!" at that loud
declaration of passionate hate, all three of them looked down the hall to see
Sasuke glaring at Itachi. "I did as you said. I hated, I survived, and
I've broken all my bonds. Now there's only one thing left, and that's to kill
you!"

"I'm not here for you, little
brother." As Itachi turned back to regard Naruto, he heard the sounds of
hundreds of chirping birds.

"Well I'm here for YOU!"
Sasuke rushed his brother, his immature Sharingan spinning dizzily. All his
thoughts were bent on his brother�fs demise.

Itachi lazily looked back to
Sasuke, and just before the avenger was about to strike Itachi grabbed his
wrist, forcing the deadly jutsu into the wall while snapping the bones in
Sasuke's arm. Sasuke screamed and made a fatal mistake. He glared at his
brother. He realized his blunder when he found himself once again reliving the
worst night of his life over, and over again. He could hear his brothers�f
deadly calm voice coming from seemingly everywhere. "You do not have
enough hate to kill me yet, little brother. Run, cling to life, break all your
bonds, and kill that which you love most. That is the only way you will obtain
the power to defeat me!" Sasuke screamed as the events of that night
played out before him. "You will watch that night over and over for the
next seventy four hours."

Naruto winced when Sasuke screamed
out and again when Itachi threw him down the hall and turned his eyes back to
him. Naruto made sure not to make eye contact. He had been on the receiving end
of some of Miko's illusions, but knew she held back. Itachi would not do such a
thing, so he avoided the Uchiha's eyes at all costs. Naruto noticed the fish
guy itching for a reason to attack, so he figured he better deescalate things.
"You know, it's because of things like that which made him the brooding
emo that he is."

Itachi just stood like he didn't
just beat the crap out of his brother as his Mangekyou receded to the normal
Sharingan. "Uzumaki Naruto, you will come with us now."

Naruto frowned. This guy was like
a broken record. Once again, he moved into his stall tactic. "Answer my
earlier question, and I will."

"Naruto! What's going
on?" Miko had just entered the hall after rushing up from the marketplace
to see two of the highest ranked missing-nin's in the bingo book, the damaged
wall, and an incapacitated Sasuke. Her instincts took over and she charged in
to fight. Kisame moved to intercept while bringing Samehada over his shoulder
for an overhead strike. She saw it coming and dodged to the side while swinging
her fist. Kisame was surprised by the speed, but was able to step back. Miko
pressed her attack by rushing a shoulder slam when her fist missed.

Kisame was forced to back peddle
more when she slammed into him. Grinning, he pulled the coverings off Samehada.
"You're a feisty one, aren't you?"

Miko glared at him as she took out
her katana. She then noticed
Itachi going through a long set of seals while Naruto was distracted with her
fight. Looking straight into Kisame's eyes, she used Heki Dageki.
It worked perfectly as Kisame blocked a left underhand cross slash only for
Miko to jump over his right shoulder and relieve him of his head on the way by.
When she landed, Itachi had already finished his technique.

Finishing his hand seals as Naruto
watched Miko behead the fish man, Itachi slammed his hand into Naruto's stomach
while calling out, "Oni-Gokumon: Kai (Demon Prison Gate:
Release)"

Naruto fell to his knees as he
felt a fire rip through his body from where Itachi hit him. His eyes widened as
he recognized the feeling. Somehow, Kyuubi's chakra was flooding his body. His
confusion was soon forgotten as the pain became unbearable and random scenes
flashed before his eyes. He would have thought he was dying, but the images
weren't of his life. The memories were jumbled and fragmented, but definitely
not of his life.

"NARUTO!!!" Miko cried
out as he fell to his knees and a familiar chakra flooded his body. Near
instantaneously, she had Itachi by the throat as his feet dangled half a foot
above the ground. "What did you do to him? Tell me now before I KILL
YOU!"

Itachi laughed, but had to stop as
her grip tightened. "I have released my Lord Kyuubi! You will die now for
your insolence at the hands of my Lord!" She saw as his eyes changed from
the normal three tomoe Sharingan, to the cursed blades of the Mangekyou.
Suddenly, Miko found herself in the world of the Tsukuyomi strapped to a large
cross. Itachi appeared before her as he laughed. "You will spend the next
seventy four hours being stabbed repeatedly." As he moved to stab his
victim, the cross crumbled and the world around them shattered. Finding himself
in a sakura orchard, he looked around, but couldn�ft find the woman he just had
at his mercy.

Miko's voice seemed to echo out
from all sides. "You are a fool, Itachi."

"How�c? No-one has ever broken
my Tsukuyomi!" Itachi was worried now. If this person could break his
illusion, and seemingly turn it against him, he was in trouble.

Miko stepped out from behind one
of the trees surrounding Itachi. "Kyuubi is long gone. He has passed on to
his next life, thanks to Naruto."

Miko watched as Itachi gathered
himself. "You lie. I could feel my Lord's chakra when I opened his
prison."

Miko growled at being called a
liar. "You doubt me, human? My brother will return to this world anew as
the child of his former container."

For the first time since he was
but a child, Itachi's jaw dropped and his eye's went wide, for before him stood
Miko in her full demonic glory. "It can't be. This is a trick! You can't
be..."

"SILENCE! You have
assaulted a member of the Kitsune Demon Clan, the very Clan you were born to
serve! For this most heinous of crimes, the punishment is DEATH!" Miko
watched as copies of her commenced to strike him from all sides as they dashed
from tree to tree.

"I didn't mean it! I didn't
know who you were!" Itachi pleaded as he took hit after hit.

Miko's eyes narrowed as she glared
at Itachi. "This is for your assault on Naruto! Not your misguided
attempt to torture me."

"Naruto�c is a Kitsune?"
Itachi just fell to his knees, clutching his head as his unstable mind
collapsed. As his reality shattered around him, it suddenly made sense. If his
Lord Kyuubi was to be the child of Naruto, of course he would have made the boy
a demon. Not only did he attack a Kitsune, but someone Kyuubi deemed worthy to
be one. Naruto had received the one thing Itachi had always dreamed of, and
now, for his error, he was going to pay with his life. He raised his head and
looked at Miko with a sad smile. Spreading his arms wide, he closed his eyes
and bowed. "I accept my punishment, my Queen."

In the real world, Miko dropped
Itachi and once again he fell to his knees and made no move to escape. With a
single quick motion, she beheaded the Uchiha and sheathed her sword before
rushing to Naruto's side. He lay unconscious on the floor, twitching every now
and then. Kyuubi's chakra was starting to recede when Jiraiya came running down
the hall.

What Jiraiya saw when he entered
the hallway, was a war zone. He then noticed the two headless figures with
black cloaks decorated with red clouds, an unconscious Sasuke, and Miko picking
up an unconscious Naruto. Running up to Miko, he noticed Naruto's shirt was
burned in the front and his seal had reappeared, but the spiral was made of two
lines now, instead of one. "What happened?"

Miko nodded to the corpses before
entering the room she had rented for her and Naruto to set him down.
"Naruto was attacked by Uchiha Itachi and Hoshigaki Kisame. When I got
here, Sasuke was already unconscious. As I battled Kisame, I noticed Itachi
making hand seals, but before I could get to him, Itachi did a jutsu that was
intended to release Kyuubi. From what I can tell, when Kyuubi moved on, he left
his chakra within the seal, but when the seal was opened it flooded into
Naruto. I killed Itachi and then you showed up."

Jiraiya nodded and made his way
out to get a better look at the damage. "Miko, come out here and take a
look at this." Miko walked out of the room to see what Jiraiya was talking
about. In the hall lay her defeated enemies, but their bodies had changed.
"I don't think they�fre dead."

Kisame got up while rubbing his
neck. "Damn, Leader is not going to be happy. He always gets pissed when someone
loses a body." Looking over to Itachi's meditating form, he grinned.
"I wonder, will she be able to get you too, Itachi?" Not a second
later, Itachi's body collapsed and Kisame got worried. Putting his hand to his
partner�fs neck, he could feel a pulse, but it was faint. "What the hell
did she do to you?" Picking up his partner and putting his unconscious
body over his shoulder, Kisame started the trek to Amegakure. "Leader's
not going to like this. She took me out in under a minute at thirty percent,
and then Itachi!" Kisame remembered seeing the woman's violet eyes change
as the pupil became slit before her final attack. "Damn Doujutsu's! Next
time, I won't fall for that cheap shot!"

Miko growled. Itachi may have
escaped this time, but she would find him. Her musings were cut short as a cry
of 'Dynamic Entry' was heard before a green blur kicked Jiraiya in the head.
When Gai realized what he had done, he quickly helped Jiraiya to his feet.
"Sorry Jiraiya-sama, I was using my Hitai-ite to see around the corner and
it was blurry."

"Just be more careful."
Brushing himself off, Jiraiya pointed to Sasuke. "I take it you�fre here
for him?"

"Hai Jiraiya-sama." Gai
and Jiraiya continued to talk and the hotel manager appeared, but Miko wasn't
interested in their discussion. All her thoughts right now were on Naruto.

She sat on his bed as she moved
some hair from his face. "Please be ok, Naruto. You saved me from my
darkness. If it weren't for you, I'd still be in Snow Country sulking and
waiting to die."

"Yuki-chan." it was
almost inaudible, but Miko's sensitive ears caught it. It surprised her because
that's what Kyuubi called her when they were young. He always said she was as
beautiful as the purest white snow.

His head hurt like never before.
That's all Naruto could think as he came too. Looking around, he was surprised
to find himself in his mindscape apartment. That's when he noticed a scroll on
the ground in front of the wide open cage. Curious as ever, he got up and
walked over to the scroll. Opening the scroll, he noticed it was from Kyuubi to
him.

Hey
Kit, or by now it's probably Otousan

Well if you�fre reading this,
the seal was released and the cage opened. I bet that was a surprise, wasn't
it! When I changed the seal to make you and Kaasan into Kitsune, I made sure it
would stay once I was gone. I figured you tend to need me in a pinch since I
was always like your personal chakra storehouse, so I changed the seal so you
could store chakra in it. I know it might not sound like a big deal, but until
you reach your ninth tail, you will have a limit. Now don't go thinking that
this is a shortcut to power either. It�fs meant to get your ass out of the jams
you�fre always putting it into. The thing is, as I used my chakra to change you,
the seal shrunk since it thought you were absorbing my power. I was able to
stop it, but not until it was already down to about large enough for two tails
worth of power. While it wasn't much to me, you never used more than a half
tail. I will be leaving what's left of my chakra behind and it will open the
gate when you're in serious danger, but since you�fre reading this, you probably
already know this. Once the gate has been opened, you'll be able to open and
close it mentally without difficulty. Since its most likely empty right now,
you might want to refill it. To do this, just push chakra into the seal, and
when you need chakra, just pull it back. Real easy�c right? Finally, the last
feature of this is very important. If you become severely injured, or are about
to die, the seal will push any chakra it has into you to heal you. I had to do
that a lot for you too, so I figured it'd be useful. Well, I'm leaving now, and
if I don't remember anything, I hope I make you proud.

Kyuubi

P.S. I left some ammo against Miko
for you in all the embarrassing memories I have of us. Be sure to put them to
good use!

Naruto smiled as he read the
scroll. When he was finished, he stood up and tried to push chakra into the
seal. He grinned as a blue mist left him and entered the cage. With a promise
to repay Kyuubi somehow, he left his mindscape. As he came to, he could hear
the sounds of birds greeting a new day, he could smell the early morning
breeze, and he could feel the suns first rays on his skin. Opening his eyes, he
saw Miko smiling down at him as she sat on his bed, "Hey Naruto, how you
feeling?"

Sitting up, he smiled at Miko.
Suddenly, an image of a very young Miko was chasing a snow rabbit through the
woods before it dived into a tunnel under a tree. Miko was right behind it and
couldn't stop, so she ended up ramming the tree and having a large pile of snow
fall on her. The 'What Just Happened?' look on her face as she emerged from the
snow was priceless, and he could hear someone laughing in the background.
'Haha, it showed you, Yuki-chan!'

Miko got worried when Naruto
smiled at her, then he got a slightly far away look, as if remembering
something, and then he started laughing. Seeing her concerned look, he calmed
down. "I'm fine Miko-sensei, just remembering something really
funny."

Being curious, Miko tilted her
head to one side. "What was so funny?"

Naruto smirked, "Oh, nothing
much, just something about a little fox-girl chasing a rabbit into a tree,
Yuki-chan." His smirk grew as Miko's eyes went wide and she blushed,
realizing what he was talking about.

Miko was shocked, but was still
able to think of questions. "How do you know about that, and how do you
know that name?"

Naruto soon was explaining about
what Kyuubi did to the seal. "And he also said he left me some of his
memories. I guess that was one of them."

Miko was scowling. "I was
going to be the nice aunt, but now I can't wait until he's old enough to pound
into the ground!"

Naruto laughed. "Just promise
me you won't do any permanent damage."

Miko pouted. "Fine, but you
can't tell anyone about anything you remember, or I get to start crippling
limbs!"

Naruto let out a sigh. "Fine,
but I better get some extra jutsu training or something for my silence."
After all that had happened, Naruto still acted like a kid in a toy store when
it came to jutsu.

Miko ginned. "Oh, I'll think
of something."

Naruto didn't know if he liked
that grin or not. It could either mean something completely awesome, something
entirely too painful, or possibly both. While he was pondering just what he got
himself into, Jiraiya came into the room. "Good, you�fre awake. I've got a
Tsunade sighting in a village to the north. Pack you�fre stuff, we got to
move!"

Naruto jumped up out of bed.
"Jiraiya, can you have one of your toads give Haku a message? Our bond has
always been strong, so she probably knows I was in lots of pain last
night."

Jiraiya nodded. "Sure, but
hurry up. I want to leave within ten minutes."

Ino was getting really frustrated.
Gaara was trying to teach her how to use sand, but it wasn't working.
Remembering back to what Miko-sensei said before she left, Ino sighed. Miko had
told her that she may never be able to control sand since that was something
Shukaku was able to do, and that Tanuki in general were able to shape shift.
While this got her excited, she wouldn't be able to learn how unless they met
another Tanuki. She also remembered how Miko told her that she was lucky that
her family abilities were jutsu and not actually a bloodline limit. That had to
be the first time in her life she was glad of that fact, because the
consequences didn't sound nice. Ino looked at Gaara as he practiced moving his
sand. It was beautiful to behold the way he could make it twist and turn.

Of course, thoughts of him brought
her to her problem. She wondered how she was going to tell him that before they
were together, she had been with Haku, Hinata, and Naruto. While she enjoyed
her time with them, she had decided to move on. She was with Gaara now, and he
meant everything to her. She shook her head as she wondered about her sanity.
Was it normal to fall in love with someone so quick? She then thought about
what Naruto and Haku shared and knew it was possible. They were the perfect
couple. She could only hope for the same between her and Gaara, but if that was
to happen, she had to be upfront and truthful to Gaara. Secrets would only hurt
them in the end.

'Well, it's now or never.'
With that thought, Ino called out to Gaara. "Hey Gaara, can you come over
here? I want to talk to you about something."

Gaara stopped and moved his sand
into the gourd on his back. Walking over to where Ino was sitting on a log, he
stood in front of her with his arms crossed. "Yes Ino?"

Ino took a deep breath to calm
herself. "Gaara, you need to know something about me. I, well," This
was a lot harder than she thought it would be, but she pushed onward. "I'm
not a virgin." Seeing that he was waiting for her to continue, she just
started to blurt it all out. "You see, my first time was with Haku in the
hot spring, and then I kind of joined her, Hinata and Naruto in their nightly
fun when I would sleep over. I just want you to know this, and I've already
told them I wouldn't be able to do that with them anymore. I love you and I
will be faithful to you, but I thought you should know this." Ino bowed
her head as she awaited his reply.

Gaara smiled as he reached out,
gently lifting her head as his hand cupped her cheek. "Thank you for being
honest, Ino-chan. I have no problem with your previous endeavors, and I appreciate
your dedication to me. We have so much to learn about each other, but that is
part of the fun."

Ino pressed her cheek into his
hand, but she had a question. "How are you so good with words? From what I
got from talking with Temari, you had little to no contact with anyone."

Gaara sat down on the log next to
Ino. "Did she tell you how I could never sleep?"

Ino nodded. "Yeah, is that
why you didn't wake up until noon?"

Gaara nodded his head. "Yes,
that�fs why I slept in late. I wish I could have seen Miko-sama and Naruto off,
but I was sleeping too deeply to realize what time it was. But, to answer your
first question, when I was alone, which was a lot, I would read. I have read
many books from many different categories. It was a way to escape the
loneliness of my situation."

Ino leaned her head on Gaara's
shoulder. "Well, you aren't alone anymore, but that doesn't mean you have
to stop reading."

Gaara pulled out a familiar orange
book. "Jiraiya-sama gave me this book, but I have never read any of this
series. I was going to start it today, but I�fd much rather sit here with
you."

Ino looked at Gaara, she was so
close she could feel his breath, but it felt cool against her blushing skin.
"Gaara, do you know what kind of book that is?

Gaara was finding it really hard
not to lean forward and take her lips with his. "No Ino, why is there a
problem?"

Ino smiled as she kissed him real
quick before standing up. "No. Tell you what; I'm going to go relax in the
hot spring. If you have any questions about anything in that book when I get
back, I'll be happy to answer them."

As she walked away towards the
house, he looked down at the orange book. "Why would I have questions?
Jiraiya-sama said it would tell me everything I need to know, but he wouldn't
say about what."

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So how'd you like it? I noticed
last chapter some people liked Tayuya's pairing, some didn't, and some didn't
mind either way. Like I think I've said before, all pairings but two are final
and those will be chosen soon. BTW lemon scenes will be slowing down some, but
don't worry, I'll try and make them count when they do come up. As for cross
pairing, there will be some, but not much. So far the groups that are now
together are the pairings, except for some that haven't shown up yet. For those
of you who happen to like Itachi and think he got the shaft, keep reading. He
still has a roll to play in this. The plot will get a lot more serious once the
dual retrieval arcs are over. So far it's been mostly sex and happy thoughts,
but this is the calm before the storm. Ok, on to the reviews!

Dragon Man 180: Glad you liked the
Yuya-chan pairing! As for the Kiba thing, it comes from the bloodline limit.
Wolf/Dog demons are notorious for being hung! It's one reason why the ladies
love Sesshomaru! (Inuyasha reference, I do not own) Yeah Yamato is cool and I
figure he was Sarutobi's most trusted ANBU so he would know. How did you like
Itachi? I tried to keep his character close to canon, just with a definable
goal.

Cameron: Glad you like it! Yeah,
the hold thing where Shika snapped and went all aggressive was his new
instincts kicking in. The Tsunade Arc is slated to last two to three chapters
but it may be four if I continue to continue the relationships back in Konoha.
How'd you like the fight? I know it was quick but they didn't know Miko's
capabilities so she was able to surprise them. That and they were both only
using about thirty percent of their power.

jguy220: Yup! Figured it made the
perfect smack worthy comment! Oh Ino's ability is going to be so cool it's
scary! As stated above Shika was helped by his new instincts. Pre-demon Shika would
have just backed off and mumbled troublesome. Ah I'm glad I'm helping you free
you�fre 'Inner Pervert', and believe me there will be fun with shadows! I would
take being a Nara over being an Uchiha any day! The only one I'd take over Nara
is Haku's ability! Ever since Sub-Zero I've had a thing for kicking ass with
ice! (Don't own Mortal Kombat either) Yes, wing hug does match the tail hug in
power, but both pale to the boobie hug! Like I said mixed pairings will be
happening so just keep an eye out. Tsunade's retrieval will be important so I
don't want to give away any details! Ah Lee, he is the person that's
significant other is in question. He will be playing a decent role in this fic
so he deserves to get a girl, but the question is who! I think I have it
chosen, and I haven't seen it AT ALL so I'm REALLY tempted to do it! So should
I break new ground? I got Kankuro covered, so don't worry. Oh and don't worry,
that girly scream is just the 'Inner Pervert' demanding to be fed!

Anttolas: I like Naruto and Tayuya
as a pairing but not in this fic. Naruto has his set pairing. I will be doing a
fic that's an exclusive Naruto Tayuya pairing so just hold on till that one
starts!

The Former PrinceofDDR: I replied
with a PM

chemdude: well, in answer to your first
question Gaara and Ino are going to be one of the monogamist relationships. For
your second question, no. Hinata is with Naruto and Haku. She just is a caring
person and felt guilty she had him hurt himself to help Haku when she could
have. The set in stone pairings that have been revealed are Naru-Haku-Hina,
Miko-Anko, Shika-Kin-Yuya, Gaara-Ino & Kiba-Temari. And yes that five-way
scene will happen, but I am waiting until after the pregnancies are over. That
is one of the cross over pairings I mentioned earlier.

Dragon and Sword Master: Ok, so
maybe it was a little obvious. I'm glad you liked the Shika-Yuya-Kin pairing,
and was able to see the dynamics of their relationship. As for a possible
Yuya-Anko get together, I was thinking about it but haven't decided. If she
didn't end up with Shika it would have been Anko. If you had the power to peep
like the Hyuuga do could you stop yourself? I love the idea of Kiba-Temari!
They would be so lovably cute in an aggressively sadistic way! Speaking of
kinky sex, there are two BIG taboos�f that will be broken in the future. I will
give warnings so they may be skipped, but once again it falls under my refusal
to censor my work. Yamato is one of my favorite part two newcomers, besides the
goofiness of the Deidara and Tobi partnership. BTW I will say now that after
the Sasuke Retrieval arc it's totally me. None of this Uchiha Madara stuff, so
Tobi will stay as Tobi! He's better that way!

SealingMaster: Just a little
faster than finding a boy in the woods and giving him head, no? Glad you like
the way it ended up! It was seriously Shika or Anko for Yuya-chan. Varity is
the spice of life, and demons are the truest to themselves! Oh and hi Desmond!
I've answered the cross-pairing question a couple times now but I'll say it
again. There will be some cross pairing but everyone won't be sleeping with
everyone else, but I can tell you Ino's 'collage days' are over. She has Gaara
now and he's all she needs. In answer to question number two, I don't want to
spoil anything so just hang tight. BTW you never know, Sasuke just might be a
late bloomer, I mean he is what, twelve while Naruto is fourteen, and Kiba is
hung like part two Akamaru!

Ray Tails2 Prower: Closets are for
clothes, besides its much better being a 'Monitor Pervert'! While I attained
the rank of 'Super Pervert' long ago I fondly remember my days as a 'Monitor
Pervert'. I learned to express my perverseness freely before my monitor and
that soon led the perverted freedom in all things! This is the road to the 'Super
Pervert' and I invite you to walk it!

Cameron: And you won't have to
worry about that.

Hiroshima Kazama: There is allot,
but you wouldn't believe how fun they are to write.

DARK SPIDERMAN:

QJD: Sorry you feel that way, but
it is the pairing I chose. I hope you can continue to enjoy the fic, but if you
can't then oh well. I won't make you read it.

Raven_Shantor: Glad you find my
writing style and plot enjoyable. I too thought it was rushed, as I said in the
author note of that chapter but when I was writing the scene my muse took me
and I like it so much I couldn't find it in myself to delete it. About your
first suggestion, after the Sasuke Retrieval arc it's all new, and all me.
Sakura has an important role and she WILL play it, but it's a different role
then in canon. As for number two, it's coming. The fun days are soon to be over
and the reality of their chosen profession is about to set in. As for number
three, nice idea but I'm going in a different direction, but I think you'll
like it.
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