The Deal | By : BigE2955 Category: Naruto > General Views: 35127 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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Review replies, because fuck, some of these are just too awesome/hilarious not to reply to, :)
Meta1213 - Yeah. People would rather see OOC Naruto being a dick to everyone then IC Sasuke being a dick to everyone. I don't mind if they're civil about it - like you said, people have different tastes - but the fact that one person is abstient enough about hating Sasuke to comment on every story I post is a little... sad, and yet funny at the same time.
Papillion - The point of over half of my stories is for the prot. to be a douche, :). Take Naruto's Fetish Remastered for an example - Sasuke is pretty 'nice' in the first few chapters, but by the end he's a sociopath that destroys Naruto and his family for flimsy reasons. That's the point! :) I don't really see how what I write can be considered slobbering over the Uchiha clan... Sasuke, maybe, but that's usually just to add a humil aspect for the other men. A question. I know you said you don't read my Sasuke fics, but do you enjoy my Naruto-centric fics, e.g. Restoration, Loveless, Dominos?
Nightwind83 - As I said above, everyone has different tastes, and I'm perfectly fine with that. I've always liked Sasuke. That's something I haven't denied - but, I've been trying to get better about making him a little too perfect in my stories, :). This one is from a few months ago, so, yeah. And trust me, I am enjoying the hell out of writing these stories. At this point, I get a bunch of people contacting me directly via email or fanfiction.net telling me how much they liked the story, so the reviews on here are a battleground between staunch defenders of me and those three guys who flame every story I post. It's funnier than it should be, lol.
Y'all Mother Fuckers cont. - Self insert? Hmm. Would I like to have a foot long cock? Sure. Would I want to be Sasuke? Hell no. Sasuke is a tortured, mentally damaged person who has gone through some of the most horrific shit in his life. You couldn't pay me to be Sasuke. But seriously, stop whining. If you want your typical, Badass!Awesome!Godlike!OOC! Naruto stories, go to google, type in 'Naruto lemon', and you'll be good. That's some good advice right there! :D
Neko - No. The vast majority of fanfiction based in Naruto, both lemons and normal, are - surprise surprise - based on Naruto. It's not my fault you're too lazy to find them.
Anon - What?
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As the door swung open, a piercing ring ran throughout the store.
Ino glanced up, a bright grin on her face. “Sasuke-kun!” she said, her tone showing slight surprise. “What are you doing here?”
Sasuke avoided her gaze. He wasn’t one to be embarrassed - but the last time he had seen the beautiful blonde, he had injected a massive load of his cum deep into her hot and wet cunt. Not that she knew it was him who had done that.
“I’m…” He murmured something that she couldn’t quite catch.
“Hmm?” she said.
The young Uchiha sighed. “I’m here to get some flowers for Sakura.” he said darkly. “We’re going on a date tonight.”
“Kya~!”
Sasuke recoiled at her shriek as she - and he was not exaggerating - leapt over the counter with one deft hop, before darting up to him and pulling him into an incredibly tight hug.
“That’s so sweet~” Ino cooed. “Forehead’s gonna be so happy, I just know it!”
He put his hands on both of her shoulders, easing the blonde off of him. “Whatever.” he grumbled. “Just let me get some stupid fucking roses and I’ll get out of your hair.”
Ino put her hands on her hips. “Don’t think you’re getting out of this that easy, mister!” she said, poking a finger into his chest. “Forehead went through a lot to get you back here, so I’ll be damned if you don’t give her the night of her life.”
Sasuke glared at her - but the look on her face told him that she was clearly not going to relent. “Fine.” he said. “What should I do?”
“Flowers are a good start.” said Ino, a smirk on her face. “But a bouquet is how you really capture a girl’s heart. Follow me!” She quite literally skipped off deeper into the store. Sasuke heaved a sigh, before following after her.
Row after row of plants beckoned, the Yamanaka Flower shop holding a great variety of them, from the most common of dandelions to the rarest of herbs, cultivated in underground gardens. A gentle aroma filled the room, sweet, like a pasture.
And Sasuke hated sweet things.
He shoved his hands into his pockets, striding behind the beautiful blonde. Ino hummed a little tune under her breath, green eyes flickering from row to row as she looked for that plant, the perfect one to begin.
“Alright!” she said, clapping her hands together. “Let’s start off simple. A nice bluebell will do - basically, it means that you’re grateful.” She plucked a few of them from their respective place. “Then… let’s get some myosotis,” Ino grabbed the light blue flowers up. “They represent ‘true love’.”
Sasuke rubbed his forehead. “Next?” he said.
Ino grinned. “Some pansies… to show how thoughtful and caring she is. A peony, to tell her how brave she was to try and save you. And then…” She smirked. “... a cherry blossom.” In the end, it was a variety of colors, from pink to blue to purple. It looked nice, he had to grudgingly admit.
She lead him back to the counter.
“Is that it?” he said, exasperated.
“Just about. A nice rose to top it all off.” She added the bright red flower to the virtual garden clutched in her hand. A few touch ups here and there, and then a bouquet was pressed into his hands. “And there. Finished. That’ll be twenty-five thousand ryo, please.”
His eyes widened slightly. “For a bunch of flowers?” he said
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Ino’s smirk widened. “True love comes at a price!” she chirped. “And I wouldn’t want to tell Forehead next time we meet up about how you skimped on her flowers…”
Sasuke glared at her. He slapped a few bills onto the counter. “There.” he said. Then, he turned and left - throwing the door open with a loud ring, grumbling something unintelligible under his breath.
“Thank you!” Ino called after him, a smile on her face. “Come again!”
‘Fucking bitch.’ Sasuke thought, his eyes narrowing. ‘If that husband of her calls me over again… I’m going to fuck her brains out.’ The people of Konoha gave him a wide berth as he passed, none of them willing to be in the path of an angered Uchiha, especially one with a bouquet of flowers in his hand.
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Sakura knew that something was… off about her husband.
Not that she was complaining. Their date had been fantastic, amazing really - any vengeful feelings had been suppressed for their night out, and it had been everything she’d dreamed of since she had been a little girl.
But… she always knew what would happen when they got home, especially when Sasuke was dealing with a lot of pent up stress from the day.
She squealed as he quite literally threw her onto their bed. His clothes were off in an instant, and he leapt onto the mattress, pulling her dress off with ease. He was upon her in an instant, hands and mouth working overtime - caressing her breasts, nipping at her neck, or teasing her already glistening folds.
Soon, he was inside of her, his enormous member stretching her inner walls immensely.
He was rough, yet passionate. Loving, yet fierce. A whirlwind of masculinity and power that brought her to orgasm again and again - leaving her a mere pile of goo by the time he came deep inside of her, filling her womb to the brim with hot and sticky cum.
Afterwards they lay together, her wrapped in his arms. The smell of sex filled the room, thick and pungent. Thin sheens of sweat coated their bodies, and they both panted softly, merely basking in the afterglow.
“You know…” Sakura murmured. “You can just tell me what’s up. I’m not saying I don’t appreciate your methods of… erm… stress relief - I’d rather you not be stressed at all, baby.” she said.
Sasuke sighed. “Sorry…” he murmured. “I went to the flower shop with Yamanaka earlier, to get you those flowers.” His head was buried in her cotton candy pink hair, the young Uchiha inhaling her sweet scent - the only exception he had for his rule of despising sweets. “She kind of pissed me off.”
“Heh. Ino-buta tends to have that effect on people.” Sakura said. “Still… she’s been happy lately. Like really happy. She told me that she and Sai have started… well, fucking.”
“Really?” Sasuke asked.
Sakura nodded. “Sai said he found some solution to his problem, whatever it was.” the pinkette murmured. “I’m happy for them.”
The image of a certain blonde, naked, her yawning cunt drooling his cum - filled Sasuke’s mind. “Yeah…” he said. “Me too.” He began to nip at her neck, eager to clear his thoughts.
“Oh… you’re insatiable.” Sakura groaned, arching her head so as to allow him access to the creamy skin of her throat.
“Don’t act like you don’t love it.” Sasuke murmured. “I’m going to pound you into the mattress, Sa-ku-ra.” Soon, he was straddling her, slotting his massive cock back into her cunt. Bed springs squeaked, moans echoed through the room, and the rest of their waking night was spent in the throes of passion.
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Sai woke up, not for the first and certainly for not the last time, to the feel of Ino attempting to suckle his flaccid member to life. And as always… it simply didn’t work
Their sex life was a little meager, he could admit. Only once had they done it - and even then, it had been her and Sasuke. She still gushed over that night, clinging to him and recounting the details dreamily, all the while attempting to rouse his libido.
He’d… tried to sate her, just a little bit. Sai had attempted to eat her out, as Kakashi-taichou’s books had so eloquently called it, but it had been odd. Clumsy. His tongue simply didn’t feel right down there, lapping up her fluids. It hadn’t lasted long, and within a minute, he had been practically on the verge of gagging, Ino whispering sweet words and rubbing his back.
Clearly, he would have to invite Emo over once more. To please his wife, as he unfortunately was not able to, and not for a lack of trying. Even now, he was scribbling down the message, intent on sending it along with one of his ink birds to the Uchiha household.
Tonight. Come as soon as you get this. Window to mine and Ino’s bedroom is ajar. One of my clones will meet you in the bathroom.
- Sai
Perhaps an hour later, Sasuke slipped through the bedroom window. As silently as he could - which was damn near impossible to hear unless you were an S rank shinobi - he made his way through the house, before slipping into the bathroom.
“I’m here to brief you.” the ink clone said softly. “Beautiful insists that she and I will have intercouse after this movie is over. The original me will excuse himself to the bathroom - and you will take his place.”
Sasuke frowned. “I’m not watching an entire fucking movie.” he growled.
Sai shook his head softly. “You don’t have to, Emo.” he said. “Beautiful is dying for sexual intercouse. I’m sure it won’t take much to get her clothes off.”
The Uchiha sighed. “Alright,” he said.
“Just as last time, simply excuse yourself to the bathroom after you have ejaculated.” Sai said. “We will then switch places once more. Is that alright?”
“That’s fine.” Sasuke said.
“Good.” Sai said. Then, he disappeared - the clone morphing into ink, that sunk to the floor and eventually seeped into the wood, before vanishing altogether.
Sasuke waited patiently for several minutes, before the bathroom door slowly opened, and Sai stepped in. Once more, he took on the form of Sai - and giving a curt nod to the former ROOT member, stepped out into the hall.
He padded down the corridor, striding into the living room. He slipped back onto the couch, and as if on instinct, Ino pressed her back against him. He wound his arm around her torso, pulling her closer to him as he did with Sakura when they were in the same position.
Sasuke resisted the urge to chuckle, as he took in Ino. It was plainly obvious that she wasn’t wearing a bra - she must really want a nice pounding. Those tight little shorts she wore left little up to the imagination, and her perky nipples poked right through the thin shirt she had on.
You see, despite what impressions people might have gotten from his youth of avoiding or outright cursing out fangirls, Uchiha Sasuke was a virile young male. And he, just as much as any man, loved a nice and tight pussy to fuck and unload into. And Ino was practically just screaming ‘take me!’, with the occasional glances and not-so-subtle touches she was giving him.
Being direct was the best way to go. This movie was the kind that Sakura or Naruto would like - in other words, really fucking boring.
With a sharp jerk of her arm, Sasuke pulled Ino into his lip.
“Oh…” she purred. “So forward, Sai-kun. You want me just as much as I want you, ne?”
He smirked, hands running up and down her curvy body. “Don’t worry, Beautiful.” he murmured, grasping her breasts in his hands and giving them a slight squeeze. “I’m going to make you feel really good.”
Ino shivered, at the sheer promise in her ‘husband’s’ voice. She swallowed, as she felt something press against her thigh - a swift glance telling her that it was an enormous bulge, straining against the fabric of the trousers.
She ran a hand along it, mouth agape at the hardness, the thickness of it. She had forgotten just how big he could get when hard - so different from the size of its soft state, which she had been exposed to when she had (unsuccessfully) attempted to get into her husband’s pants before tonight.
Sasuke or ‘Sai’ if you will, grasped the hem of her shirt. She obediently lifted her arms, and he pulled it off - freeing her plump and perky breasts, topped with rosy nipples. He played with them for a moment, pinching her nipples, squeezing them, even giving one a little teasing lick.
He grasped her hips, and with a shark jerk, pulled her shorts and panties down. He pulled his trousers down, freeing his hardened member - and then, with a light thrust, slid inside of her.
“Fuck…” Ino whispered. This… fullness. She had forgotten just how good he had felt inside of her. He was so big and hard, easily able to fill her tight little pussy. She felt every vein, every muscle, every twitch, every inch as he slipped his length deeper and deeper into her canal, his hands using her hips as a guiding tool.
“You’re so incredibly tight, Beautiful.” Her ‘husband’ murmured into her ear, his voice low and husky. “How is it possible for you to feel this good?” His cock filled her up like nothing had before. As if it was made for her - or her cunt had been made for his member, she wasn’t sure. All she knew was that it felt amazing.
He dragged her shorts and panties down the remaining length of her legs, before kicking them off and onto the floor. Although he had to stand up for a moment - him still inside of her, holding her up easily with a single hand - the rest of his pants came off as well. He sat back down, back against the couch, her chest pressed against his - green eyes meeting black.
Ino grinned. “Damn…” she murmured, hands wrapped tightly around his neck. “I’m going to ride you like a fucking cowgirl, Sai-kun. Giddy up,” she said, shooting him a playful wink. His hands wound loosely around her waist, and soon she was bouncing up and down on his cock, loud moans and low grunts filling the living room.
The movie playing on the television screen, long since forgotten. The smell of sex - thick and pungent - filled the room, as Ino’s bouncing became even more frenzied, a wild look in her eyes. His hands were on her ass, helping her as she went up and down.
“Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck…!” she chanted. “You’re oh - fuck! - you’re so big, Sai-kun.” Ino whimpered. “I’m gonna cum. Oh… oh kami, I’m gonna… argh…!” She sounded like a dying animal, collapsing against him, twitching and shaking as she came. Her bounces stopped, and although her walls tightened around him, Sasuke merely held her as she went through the orgasm of a century. “I love you,” she groaned into his ear, voice slurred. “I love you…”
Sasuke smiled. He remembered the first time he had given Sakura such an orgasm - in this same position actually. Maybe it was the depth and penetration he offered, or the fact that her clit and breasts were opened for his teasing, but it was the perfect way to drive his wife, and now second lover, wild with lust.
He hadn’t came like she had. But he didn’t need to, not yet at least.
Finally, she settled down. Ino panted, a thin sheen of sweat on her body, blonde hair disheveled and just plain looking a mess. She had just felt more pleasure than she possibly had ever experienced, and it had been at the behest of her amazing lover.
“You didn’t cum.” she whispered.
Sasuke frowned slightly. “No, I didn’t.” he said.
“Sorry, Sai-kun.” Ino murmured. “I-I-”
“It wasn’t anything with you.” he told her, stroking her cheek. “The man doesn’t always have to orgasm, Beautiful.” He was getting a lot better at mimicking Sai’s way of talking. It wasn’t perfect - if Ino hadn’t just had her brain fried by him making her cum, she would easily tell the difference - but he was improving.
“I want you to cum, though.” Ino insisted. She lifted herself up - letting out a groan as he slipped from her cunt, her liquids trailing down her thigh. Her movements were sluggish, but eventually she managed to drop off of the couch, falling onto her knees before him. His length loomed above her, slathered in her juices, bits of pre cum dripping from the tip. “I want you to feel good,” she said, a hand casually wrapping around the base of his enormous member. “I want you to feel as good as I did just then, Sai-kun.”
He inhaled, resisting the urge to moan as she gave him a few pumps. “Alright.” Sasuke said. “Go ahead.”
She didn’t need to be told twice. Ino took his length into her mouth, tucking her head further and further down, as far as she could go without gagging. Meanwhile, her hand worked at the base of it, pumping it, stroking it, her other hand teasing his balls. Those Icha Icha books really had helped with her technique, despite her inexperience with blowjobs.
Ino was acceptable, Sasuke decided. She would certainly get him off - he was close - and she could only get better with practice.
“I’m going to orgasm, Beautiful.” he said.
She slipped him from her mouth with a pop. “Cum wherever you want, baby.” Ino whispered, her voice sultrily.
‘Payback time.’’ Sasuke thought. Making him pay that much for a bouquet of flowers was an outrage, and he was going to enjoy this revenge, no matter how petty it may be.
He gripped the base of his member, and then aimed the tip of it directly at her face. With a low grunt he came - shooting ropes of his sticky seed all over her face, Ino grinning as she was bathed in his cum. By the time he was done, his essence was everywhere - dripping from her lips, her nose, her platinum blonde locks. Not an inch of her soft features had been spared his load.
“It’s so warm, Sai-kun.” Ino purred. “Kami, your cum feels so good all over me.”
‘Sai is a lucky man.’ thought Sasuke. Best to excuse himself. He felt sorry about leaving Sai to discover his wife in such a state - but she had pushed him to this. Whatever.
“I’ve got to go to the bathroom real quick, Beautiful.” he said. “I’ll be back in a moment.” He picked his trousers up off of the floor, slinging them over his shoulder as he strode down the hall. Ino sat back down on the couch, cum drying on her face, turning the movie volume up.
He stepped into the restroom, where Sai had taken to drawing a painting - of what appeared to be some sort of harbour. Sasuke splashed his face with some water, before morphing back to his regular form.
“Thank you.” Sai said, bowing slightly.
Sasuke hardly managed to stop himself from wincing. “Don’t mention it,” he said. And then he darted into Sai and Ino’s bedroom, slipping out of the same window he had come in.
Sai disrobed. He stepped back into the living room fully nude, dark eyes widening at the sight of Ino’s form.
“Oh, do you think you could make some popcorn, sweetie?” asked Ino, turning towards him - her face bathed in a creamy mask of dried cum, only her eyes and bright grin visible through the goo.
Sai took a step back. “S-sure…” he said. “Do you think you could clean up a bit?”
Ino smiled. “Nah.” she said. “I like feeling your seed on me… it feels amazing, Sai-kun.”
He swallowed. “Alright.” he said, using all of his willpower not to stutter. “That’s… that’s fine then.” He turned and strode away, his heart hammering against his ribcage. Fuck. What was wrong with him? What was wrong with him?
Why… why did she look so beautiful - covered in the seed of another man?
Another hard swallow. Dealing with emotions like this still left his mind in a jumbled mess. He had to clear his mind… watch a movie with his wife, and hope she would take a shower before bed.
That’s what he would do.
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