Loveless | By : BigE2955 Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female Views: 84943 -:- Recommendations : 4 -:- Currently Reading : 7 |
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I'm sorry for the second chapter taking so long. But... I hope it delivered. Let's hope the third chapter will be out sooner than this one! I got eight reviews (8!) for the first chapter, which is pretty amazing. Below is a couple of responses to some of them.
KanamiUzumaki - Thanks! Here's the update you asked for.
MrTedidore - Plotting is fun and all, but I think it's better that we get straight to the action. But don't worry... there's a lot of fun to be had in later chapters if all goes as planned.
Venoms160 - I'm glad you feel that way about this story. The power struggle thing is interesting... although it doesn't really fit with the idea I have for this fic. Harry Potter and Bleach sound fun, although it's probably going to be a while before I put out a story for either one of them.
Alright, now that those are out of the way, we can get to the chapter. Enjoy!
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He attacked her throat with his mouth, his hands running up and down her beautiful body.
"Fuck, Satsuki..." Naruto grumbled, a groan escaping his lips as her walls tightened around him. "You're so damn sexy."
She smiled, rocking her hips back and forth. "Kami," she said. "You really should work on your handling, dobe. My breasts aren't stress balls." Satsuki was teasing him, but the words were truthful.
"Argh... sorry." he said, retracting his hand. "You're just... fuck." He grabbed her hips, thrusting up into her incredibly warm and tight cunt. "Kami... you're just so amazing, Satsuki-chan..."
Satsuki groaned. "You're... you're amazing too, Naruto..." she whispered, so soft that he could hardly hear it. Again and again he drove into her, until finally he came inside of her - Satsuki reaching completion with him.
They collapsed onto her bed in a pile of sweaty bodies.
"Wow..." Naruto said, huffing and puffing. "That was great, Satsuki-chan."
"Mmm..." she leaned forward, capturing his lips in a deep kiss. "What did you do to get Hinata off of your back?" Satsuki asked, propping her head up with an elbow.
Naruto flushed slightly. Hinata had been rather... confused, to say the least, when she had woken up on the floor of their bedroom. He couldn't tell her the truth - that he had knocked her off in a rush to fuck Satsuki - so instead, he simply told her that he'd accidently pushed her off in his sleep.
In the end, he'd been roped into taking her out on a date. So while he lay here in bed with Satsuki, under the guise of finishing up so work for Kakashi, Hinata was at their house - primping herself up for their date.
Naruto didn't know how he was going to make it through the night. An hour, maybe two of nothing, no talking. Hinata could hardly say hello to him in the morning, how the hell were they supposed to have a fun night out? It was impossible.
He confessed his worries to Satsuki.
"Oh... don't you worry," she murmured.
Naruto glanced at her. 'This girl is going to be the death of me,' he thought, transfixed by Satsuki's ethereal beauty, the way her skin seemed to glow in the dim light of her room, the way her features still seemed so perfect even after a raunchy round of love making.
"Why...? What do you have in mind?" Naruto asked.
Satsuki smirked. She leaned forward - and whispered something into his ear, causing Naruto to turn a crimson not dissimilar to his girlfriend.
"S-Seriously?" he said.
She pecked him on the lips. "Seriously." Satsuki said, brushing a sweat soaked strand of blonde hair out of his eye. "Now... go get ready for your date. I've got some things to do."
"Alright." Naruto murmured. "I'll... see you later."
'Oh, you most certainly will.' thought Satsuki.
Tonight was going to be fun.
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Naruto swallowed thickly. “So…” he said, rather awkwardly. “How’s the salad?”
“G-good…” Hinata replied quietly. “I-it’s v-very filling.” she said. She had only eaten a bite or two out of it, leaving the rather expensive salad near totally intact. She looked… alright, clad in a long lavender dress - although the lack of exposed skin made her seem more like an old grandma rather than the beautiful young woman she was.
He smiled. “That’s… good.” he said. “The steak was very good. A little tender - but I liked it.” Naruto rubbed his stomach, glancing around nervously.
‘Where the hell is that waitress?’ he thought, staring at his empty glass of wine. Seriously, he needed to get his buzz on - and fast. Otherwise… ugh, he didn’t know. He’d rather lose a couple of brain cells to alcohol than having to torture them with this… facade.
Naruto fiddled with his food, pressing the uneaten greens back and forth with an uninterested look on his face. Hinata glanced from her salad to him every now and then, biting her lip. Her cheeks were dusted a light pink, as she fiddled with the folds of her dress beneath the table.
Finally, the waitress came back a few minutes later. She was rather unassuming, with closely cropped brown hair and simple black and white attire. If one were to look at her, they would likely be rather alarmed, however - the look she was throwing at Naruto was nothing short of… complete and absolute adoration. Her eyes were practically the shape of hearts, her cheeks a bright crimson as she stared at him. Not that he noticed.
“Is… is there anything I can get you, Naruto-sama?” the waitress asked.
“Yeah!” he blurted. “Can I get another glass of wine?” Naruto said, picking up his empty one. “Pronto.”
She hurriedly nodded her head. “Of course!” she said, speeding away as quickly as her legs could possibly manage. In no time at all, she returned, a glass filled to the brim with red wine clutched in her thin fingers.
“What’s your name?” Naruto asked, as she placed the glass down in front of him.
Her blush intensified, if that was even possible. “H-Haruki.” she whispered.
He flashed her a grin. “Thanks, Haruki!” he said. “We’ll call you if you need anything else.”
Haruki walked away robotically. Unbeknownst to him, she fainted the moment she got back into the kitchen - only saved from a concussion by a passing waiter.
“So, umm…” He paused for a moment, taking a sip of his wine. “How was your… day?” Naruto asked.
“I-It was okay.” Hinata murmured. “C-Could h-have been better.”
Naruto winced. “Yeah… that, that sucks.” he said. Another sip. “Anything interesting happen?”
She shook her head.
He frowned. “Well, I’m sure things will pick up.” said Naruto.
His phone buzzed in his pocket.
“Hold on,” he said, raising a figure. “I got a text.” Naruto took his phone out, swiping the screen.
One message from Teme - ‘Go to the bathroom.’
Naruto raised an eyebrow. Why on earth would she want him to go to the bathroom…? This was one of those restaurants were plenty of bathrooms, but all of them could only fit one person inside. He supposed it gave people privacy, but he had never really cared for things like that.
“W-Who is it?” Hinata asked.
He glanced up. “Just Lee telling me to… embrace the power of youth on our date tonight.”
She blinked. “I-I d-didn’t know that you told him we were g-going on a date.” Hinata said.
Naruto shrugged. “I didn’t.” He scooted his chair back. “I’m going to go to the restroom. Be back in a bit, alright?” he said.
“A-Alright.” Hinata murmured.
He stepped into the ‘bathroom area’, where two rows of doors beckoned. Naruto’s eyes widened - as he saw one of the doors marked with what was unmistakably an Uchiha fan. ‘Did the Uchiha seriously have private restrooms when they were still around?’ he thought. ‘And why is it still here?’
‘It’s a genjutsu.’ Kurama purred from inside of him, half asleep. ‘Your mate is trying to tell you which one to go in.’
‘Oh.’ he thought. ‘Smart.’
Naruto strode to the door, pushing it open. It was dark within the bathroom, and his fingers fumbled for the light for a moment as the door swung closed behind him.
Flick.
The lights came on - and almost on cue, a pair of arms wound around his torso. He felt a soft body press against his back, and he turned his head, only to have his lips captured by a woman’s. She slipped her tongue into his mouth, hands running up and down his muscled chest appreciatively.
They separated. “Satsuki…” Naruto murmured, breathless. “What… what are you doing here?”
She grinned. “Well, I couldn’t just leave my man all alone in the cold.” Satsuki murmured, unbuttoning the top of his shirt. “I’m not so heartless as to make sure you’re nice and refreshed for your… ‘date’.”
His eyebrow rose once more. “Refreshed?” he said. “Oh, whatever could you mean by that, Satsuki-chan?”
Satsuki smirked. “Well… what would you prefer?” she said, pulling his shirt off, tossing it onto the lid of the toilet. “To sit out there with that little girl… or to be in here with me?” She circled around him, revealing the tight black dress she wore. Satsuki reached up, pulling the front of it up to reveal the lack of undergarments beneath. Juices steadily dripped down her leg.
“I think the answer to that one is obvious.” Naruto mumbled, his voice husky. “Do you want it rough, or soft?” he asked.
The last of the Uchiha chuckled. “Do you even have to ask?” she said.
“Rough it is,” he said. Naruto unbuckled his pants, dropping them until they rested around his ankles. His boxers came out soon after, his manhood spilling out - erect, bits of precum dripping from the tip.
Satsuki licked her lips. Her lover was certainly rather well endowed - although he hadn’t been her first, he was certainly her biggest, at least eight and a half inches in length. More than enough to fill her tight little cunt in the way the both of them loved.
He picked her up with ease, pressing her back against the tiled wall. Hiking her dress up, Naruto slowly pressed his member against her entrance, groaning as the mushroom head of his cock was soaked in her liquid fire.
Naruto gazed at her, this… this absolutely amazing woman. Hair as dark as the night… skin as fair as snow… kami, she was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. What had he ever done to deserve her? Saving the world didn’t seem to be nearly enough to net him a reward of this magnitude.
He thrust his hips forward, a low groan spilling from his lips. “Fuck…” he moaned, leaning forward until his nose was pressing against her neck. “I love you so much, Satsuki-chan.”
She wrapped her arounds around his back, a serene look on her porcelain features. “I love you too.” she said. Satsuki slipped a hand beneath his chin, lifting his head up until her mismatched eyes locked with his bright blue ones. “Now fuck me.”
“You don’t have to ask twice.” Naruto murmured.
He started out at a steady pace, hands clutching her ass tightly as his long and thick erection speared its way into the tiny hole in between her legs. She was as tight as ever, her inner walls clutching at his member, attempting to milk him for the bountiful load that rested inside of his rather large ballsac.
Their shared moans and groans filled the small bathroom. It was fortunate that she had put a genjutsu over the room - otherwise, there most certainly would have been some disturbed patrons, based on the way he was pounding her against the wall.
Again and again, he drove himself home. His head was buried in her bust, soaking in her warmth and softness despite the dress that separated him from the fleshy globes on her chest. His blue eyes soaked in everything about her, from the way her nipples poked through the thin fabric, to the light flush on her cheeks. A small groan escaped her lips every now and then, her arms tightening around his back.
He would love nothing else but to take his time with this - make sure he did this right. But... like it or not, Hinata was waiting for him back at the table. And he didn’t want her to think he was facing some unfortunate problems in the bathroom.
It was rather difficult to hold her up with only a single hand, but he managed. His free arm snaked beneath her dress, until he found her little nub - her clit engorged, blood pumping through the pleasure center of her body. Just a tap was all it took, and her walls tightened around him, Satsuki letting out a guttural groan as she came.
That was it for him. It was all too much, the heat of the bathroom, the feel of her body pressed against his, her incredible hot and wet pussy beckoning his release… it was over. With a grunt he came, bottoming out inside of the Uchiha goddess, his cock spurting great jets of his seed deep inside of her.
“Asshole…” she grumbled into his ear, after both of their releases were done. “You had to cheat and go for the clit, didn’t you?”
Naruto grinned. “I wouldn’t call it cheating.” he said. “More like… taking advantage of my surroundings.”
Satsuki rolled her eyes. She leaned forward, pressing her lips to his.
He let her go, and she stood up, although her dress was still bunched up around her midriff. Satsuki glanced down, a smirk on her face as she watched his sticky seed drip from her snatch, trickling down her thigh and dripping onto the floor.
“Mmm…” she murmured, her voice low. “You filled me up nice and good, Naruto.” One of her hands reached down, spreading her folds open and allowing even more of his essence to spill out. “I hope that’ll keep you happy during your ‘date’.” she said.
“Fuck.” Already he was back to full mast - the sight of his seed drooling from her cunt was just too damn sexy. But… he had to leave. “You’d better get out of her.” he murmured huskily. “Or I won’t be able to help myself.”
Satsuki smirked. “Don’t tempt me.” she said. She grabbed a roll of toilet paper, ripping a piece off and rubbing the cum off of her thigh. The dress fell down, and she fixed herself - pushing back loose strands of hair and straightening her dress. “See you later,” Satsuki mumbled, pecking him on the cheek. Then, she slipped out of the bathroom.
He took a moment to… recuperate. He really needed it - fuck, that woman would drive even a jinchuriki (and Uzumaki) like him to exhaustion.
Naruto ran a hand through his sun kissed hair. Then, he pulled up his pants, put his shirt back on, and walked back into the resturaunt.
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Later that night…
“H-Honey…?” Hinata said.
Naruto raised an eyebrow, glancing at her.
They were on their bed, Naruto looking at a video on his phone while Hinata read a book. The room was rather dim, with only a lamp on Hinata’s nightstand illuminating it.
“Hmm?” he hummed.
“C-Can I… I-I d-do something tonight?” the Hyuga asked.
“What do you want to do?” Naruto said.
She swallowed nervously, her gulp so loud that even he could hear it. “I want to…” Another gulp. “T-To suck y-your… t-thing.”
“My… thing?” he said.
Hinata pointed at his crotch, his rather considerable manhood hidden only by a pair of boxers.
“Really?” Naruto said. She had never been so forward as to want to do that. She’d touched his member… once… and that had been on accident. Other than that, it was just the same old missionary, and if that wasn’t the case, then his cock was tucked away inside of his pants.
She nodded. “I-I w-want to… t-to try it out.” Hinata murmured.
A few moments later, and he was sitting on the side of the bed, Hinata on her knees before him. His member had been brought to full mast by his hand - and a few mental images of a certain Uchiha - and now, it was a scant inch away from her pale lips.
She leaned forward, and slowly took it into her mouth. Her face… twisted, and she recoiled.
“H-huh…” she murmured.
“What is it?” asked Naruto.
“There’s this… taste.” Hinata murmured. “I-It’s k-kind of b-bitter… and I-I don’t like it. It tastes like… t-tomatoes?”
He resisted the urge to flush. “That’s… weird.” he said.
She glanced at his manhood. “I-I d-don’t like it very m-much.” Hinata said. She bowed her head. “S-sorry.”
Naruto sighed. “It’s alright, Hinata.” he said, ruffling her hair. “Let’s just go to bed. Alright?”
“A-alright.” she said.
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Her hand was wrapped tightly around the base of his steely member, her head bobbing up and down on the pole. Ruby red and plump lips ran over engorged veins and throbbing muscles, her other hand gently fondling his balls at the same time.
His hands were clutching both of her creamy thighs, a wet and dripping snatch pressed into his face. His tongue was hard at work - lapping and licking at her folds, slipping inside every now and then.
Sixty nine was almost certainly one of his favorite positions. Not only did he have the pleasure of eating her out - to slurp up her delicious honey - but he got to enjoy the sensation of Satsuki giving him a world class blowjob at the same time.
It was a novel experience to eat her out. You have to remember… Hinata had been his first, and the two of them had hardly done anything remotely interesting beneath the sheets. Still, he was a quick learner - he had learned the Rasengan in a month - and although this was only his fourth time with his tongue inside of her, he had her shivering in pleasure on top of him.
He was losing, though, that much was obvious. If he was skilled with his mouth, then she was a prodigy with hers - able to work her way around his cock as well as she could around a jutsu. Every moan elicited from his mouth was a triumph for her, but he simply couldn’t help it. Her mouth was just too warm, her hand so soft, her tongue so good.
Satsuki began to hum around his member - and the vibrations that shot up his spine told him that he was finished. He grunted into her snatch as he came, blowing an enormous load inside of her mouth.
She drank down his seed without hesitation, pumping his shaft with a hand to ensure every drop of his goo was extracted. Satsuki sld him from her mouth with a pop, licking her lips.
Satsuki glanced back towards him. “You’d better finish me off.” she said, warning in her voice.
He went back to his ministrations, and five minutes later drove her to orgasm - the young Uzumaki lapping up her juices as they came pouring from her snatch. She hopped off of him, dropping onto the bed at his side.
Naruto pulled the covers over their sweaty, naked bodies, a happy grin on his face. “I love you, Satsuki-chan.” he said.
“I love you too.” she said.
Soon, they drifted off to sleep, lost in each other as they lay in Satsuki’s bed.
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