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BITCHED!	By : modeac Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Hinata Views: 103387 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 5
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BITCHED!
CHAPTER 2: FIGURES OF AUTHORITY
AUTHORS NOTES
AU take involving characters and concepts from the Naruto 6: Road To Ninja movie.
This fic is a Naruto/Genjutsuworld!Hinata pairing.
Warning; violent Female Domination, Bondage and brutal Pegging are present in this story!
'This' means someone is thinking.
Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki.
Horizontal ruler (a line across the page) means a page break or timeskip. It may be a few minutes, it may be a few hours...
-X- means a scene change.
Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non-profit-I am making no money from this.

An unknown place...
"AAAAHHH!"
Naruto woke up in a gasp and flail of bedsheet tangled limbs, sweat dripping down his face, blue eyes wide with terror.
"Oh man! Just a dream!"
He gasped and held his head in his hands, bobbing as his chest heaved air in and out. He'd had this insane dream that he'd been transported to this bizarre screwed up world where everyone was completely crazy. Hinata in particular- instead of being quiet and weird she'd beaten Naruto up, taken him prisoner and nearly killed him by fucking him up the ass with a fake cock the size of a tree!
'Oh man… why did I let pervy sage con me into reading dirty books for kunoichi…'
Naruto looked up preparing to face the day when…
"Hey, this isn't my…" He looked around. He gaped in horror as he recognized the walls, the cupboards, the bed he lay naked in…
"AAHH! THIS IS WHERE HINATA… I-IT WAS REAL!"
He leapt out of bed, head spinning in panic. He found clothes on a nearby chair- they weren't his usual loud orange outfit but black pants, a white shirt, sandals, weird arm gloves and a lot of red strap things. Naruto wondered if they were part of some freakish bondage outfit the psycho fake Hinata wanted him to wear. He hurriedly put on all the clothes except the weird gloves and straps and rushed to the door desperate to escape before-
The door swung open.
Naruto stood there, heart frozen by terror as the nightmare-inducing fake Hyuga Hinata stood wearing nothing but a too-short silk white apron with a plate of food in her arms.
"You slept like a log Menma-chan! I made you some breakfast!" She chirped cheerfully.
Naruto stood there trembling, eyes locked on the heart-breakingly beautiful face beaming at him.
Then the food in her grasp.
Then at the nipples clearly visible poking through the thin apron. Her voluptuous body got his heart pumping again- to the wrong places.
'No! Focus! Run she's crazy and-'
The smell of food hit his nostrils, his stomach ordered him to stay and obey the lunatic woman.
The apron and magnificent body beneath enslaved his eyes and his cock ordered him to stay and obey the dangerous stranger.
'No! Focus! I gotta get away from this nut! Escape! I won't succumb to this trick!'
Five minutes later Naruto finished up the food while Hinata got dressed (he didn't know where the clothes came from), unbothered by his presence. He hadn't run away.
'Man I'm pathetic… though that was the best food I've ever eaten in my life.'
Indeed, the food was so tasty it felt almost orgasmic- the smell, the taste, it was like nothing he had ever imagined. For the child raised on junk food it was otherworldy.
Speaking of otherworldly...
Naruto stared at the now dressed Hinata. She wore spandex shorts that were so thin and moulded around Hinata's curves and globes so perfectly that it looked like someone had just painted her ass jet black. She wore a light purple sports bra that Naruto swore was going to snap at any moment under the weight and swell of Hinata's cleavage.
Well worn fighting gloves, black sandals and a headband wrapped around her neck completed the outfit (though Naruto wasn't looking at those items of clothing- he still stared at the Hyuga's 'assets'.
In between eating and ogling the magnificent girl getting dressed Naruto had the flashes of intelligence he occasionally got; if this was a fake why didn't she kill Naruto when she got the chance last night? Why was she feeding him awesome food? Why did she keep calling him Menma? Was she like Hinata's long lost sister and mistook Naruto for someone else?
"We're going to start training today. I always said if we had time we'd do it." The crazy woman declared with a clap of her hands.
Naruto felt a surge of excitement at the prospect of training. It's not like this crazy fake Hinata could be worse than Kakashi.
-X-
"AAAH! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!"
Naruto, upside down, his ankles manacled to a metal frame thrashed around, flailing not unlike a hooked fish. Hinata meanwhile lashed out at him with chakra blades erupting from the toes of one foot while her other foot held her deadly curvaceous body upright in a martial arts stance. The crazed Hyuga would randomly switch which foot held her up and which attacked. He posture was not unlike a ballet dancer- except for the potentially lethal energy blade attacks on a screaming Naruto.
"What? In this training you practice evasion skills and reactions and I practice balance, leg strength, kick accuracy and chakra blade skills. You do want me to develop my own skills away from the crusty old jyuken right?"
"BY USING ME AS A PRACTICE DOLL?!"
-X-
Naruto had been released from the frame with no (serious) injuries. Hinata had commanded the trembling blond to get into a handstand. Which the quivering male did...
"Your next training is to strengthen your arms."
"This doesn't seem too hard…" As if responding to Naruto's words Hinata slapped strange bands onto the blond's ankles and made a handsign.
"GAAAAKKK!" A huge weight pulled Naruto's legs apart almost like a wishbone- down below his arms nearly buckled and the earth beneath his palms collapsed an inch under a weight that would have shredded a non-ninja's groin, dislocated hips and cracked discs in the spinal column!
"Your legs are nearly three times stronger than your arms because you walk on your legs…" She stopped Naruto from falling over by poking him in the back causing Naruto to yelp away from her touch expecting death from her calloused but still lovely finger. She kept poking him front and back to keep him balanced.
"Geez, that's it? Only a third of my band weight on each leg and you fold?"
She showed Naruto her own chakra bands. They were off which was why she wasn't crushing the floor beneath her.
"Isn't there another way to do this?" Naruto pleaded, his whole body was quivering with exertion and blood rushing to his head.
"Why yes, thank you for adding." She smiled sweetly and Naruto knew he'd made a terrible mistake.
A chakra scalpel appeared in Hinata's right hand. It extended to the length of a short sword.
"RUN! BUILD THAT ARM STRENGTH! OR DIE TRYING!" A screaming, terrified Naruto scrambled away on his hands as Hinata chased him around the secluded training ground swinging at him and giggling like a lunatic.
-X-
Hinata had placed more bands around Naruto's traumatized body, these had a different design than the weight bands- while Naruto wasn't an expert he had learned enough from Jiraiya to recognize these as storage seals of some kid with some kind of remote manipulation system attached? The bands were placed around Naruto's wrists and ankles, and around his waist as he lay on the ground gasping for air after the byakugan wielder had chased him around without remorse until he fell.
With a hand sign water erupted from the bands and covered Naruto's whole body. The blond yelled as he thought for a moment that the water would overtake his head and drown him.
Hinata explained the jutsu; a look of smugness in her lovely, evil face.
"The water surrounding your body suppresses your full power when training or even moving. You need to exert more energy just to move and I can increase or decrease the weight of the water by adjusting its chakra levels. You'll build up both physical strength and endurance in this training."
Naruto tried to move, the heavy water weighed him down- it was like walking through treacle.
"I… can't move in this!"
"With the right motivation you can."
She produced a strange metal stick from... somewhere. She swished it about a bit with the terrified Naruto watching.
The clearly insane woman tapped it against the water cocoon and Naruto yelped as white lightning jumped from it into the water trap violently shocking the prisoner inside.
"Here's your motivation. Run or get fried like a chicken! RUN!" She yelled.
Terror washed away the agony in Naruto's limbs and the blond took off at incredible speed, Hinata chased him through the forest swinging the lightning rod around like a conductor with his baton, for the umpteenth time that day laughing like a lunatic as her prey screamed like a girl.
'Definitely not Hinata! She's fucking nuts!'
-X-
Elsewhere…
This felt so good...
so warm, so soft...
A pseudo conscious Sakura smiled in contentment, she stretched and snuggled in bed covers as her sleep fogged mind replayed the most amazing dream she had ever had… Sasuke… doing unbelievable things to her… over and over and over… for hours...
Finally her eyes opened and she greeted the room.
'Wait… this isn't my room…'
"WAAA! WHERE ARE MY CLOTHES?! WHERE AM I?" She screeched looking around in panic.
Sakura froze and gasped. 'That wasn't a dream… Sasuke… or someone who looked like him…' Sakura went tomato red as she recounted the previous night; the touching, being directed and bent in bizarre positions, the tongue, the-
"Are you all right?"
Sakura jumped and spun in fear of the voice. In the open doorway stood Uchiha Itachi.
Looking like he had just got out of the shower. He was clothed but his hair was wet and skin slightly red.
She remembered his cold power. His evil. His presence here had to be evil.
"The showers free now. Should be plenty of hot water left." He said pleasantly.
"Gwa…?"
The Uchiha phenom stepped to one side to allow another dark figure into the room. Sakura's eyes widened, she had seen her image before in her teacher, the fifth Hokage's files.
It was Uchiha Mikoto, Sasuke's mother murdered by the son she now kissed on the cheek.
Sakura's brain couldn't process how wrong this all was.
Uchiha Mikoto was a slim woman; she looked like a housewife Sasuke. She wore a loose fitting toned down but not unflattering dress. She smiled at Sakura
"Miss Haruno? May I call you Sakura? I have clothes in your size here. Clean and fresh and Itachi-chan will escort you anywhere you wish to go. Isn't that right Itachi?"
"Yes mom." The being Sakura associated with pure, unyielding evil replied in submission. Sakura went red in the face as she realized her state of undress… and that both Itachi and Sasuke's mom? Reacted to Sakura being naked in Sasuke's room like it was a regular occurrence. Her pride was hurt and her mind was confused.
-X-
Several minutes later...
After nervously accepting clothes off Mrs Uchiha, Sakura had gotten dressed and attempted dispel genjutsu several times. Curiousity and confusion overcame fear and she went looking around the impossible compound. Everywhere she looked she saw happy, alive people going about their business like any normal people.
Sakura looked around. Was this the Uchiha household?
'Why's Itachi alive? Why's the Uchiha clan alive? This is impossible...'
Sakura looked away from the impossible scene of dead Uchiha walking and at the Hokage monument; two of the faces were wrong; in place of the second Hokage was a strangers visage (she couldn't tell whether it was a male or female), the third mountainous face was Sarutobi Hiruzen (as it should be) but the fourth was…
"Dad?!"
"Yeah. Your dad being the fourth hokage, my great uncle Gensai being the second. I think it makes us more compatible right? Something in common."
"What? Wait my dad? Hokage? … and wasn't the second hokage Senju Tobirama?"
"Tobirama?! Hell no. He tried to become second after his brother died but the people chose another to succeed Hashirama. It was his gaffes and lack of people skills you see… that and making kinjutsu that resurrected the dead and turned them into slaves for use as cannon fodder and reusable suicide bombs… seriously, could you imagine what would have happened if that psycho had become hokage?"
-X-
A very different place, very far away...
'Tobi' tossed his broken mask across the room and cursed in rage. His plan to test the prototype infinite tsukiyomi had backfired. He had activated the jutsu just as the 'Tablet of infinite plot reveal' had instructed in incredibly small print. Instead of Naruto and the annoying pink thing falling into an eternal sleep they vanished; replaced by a different Naruto and Sakura. The new figures attacked Tobi with an arsenal of insanely powerful jutsu, wounding the masked man and driving him off. Upon healing his wounds the shadow leader had tried to figure out what happened; his sharingan told him that the beings who appeared before him had the same chakra as Naruto and Sakura and they certainly looked like Naruto and Sakura... except that the new Naruto was dressed kinda like a bondage slave...
After remembering theories about space-time and other dimension manipulation jutsu from Minato-sensei he froze.
The fourth Hokage had theorized that there were other universes that branched off from our own, identical to our own except for perhaps even a single difference that set off other changes. At the time Obito (and everyone else) thought Minato had been sniffing paint… but after what he saw…
'So what universe did Naruto show up in? I could go after this new Naruto since he has a Kyubi in him but… this guy is tough and I'm not about to risk my neck when I could just go after the pussy Naruto instead…'
-X-
Naruto's eyes snapped open to a clear blue sky. The blond realised he was in agony and writhed on the floor grimacing in pain hoping for unconsciousness to rescue him. But something had woken him up...
He turned his head, that small movement causing huge pain in the fallen ninja. Sitting on a rock two feet away was Hinata, looking into a glowing crystal disc of some kind. A voice came from out of it.
"So how is my favorite ball of gentle sunshine today?" The disc spoke.
Naruto's eyes widened.
'Sasuke!'
"Go fuck yourself Sasuke! You interrupted a beating- I mean sparring session with Me-chan."
"Yes that's why I'm calling, Sakura says you … appropriated him last night. She keeps calling him Naruto though. I may have banged her head against the headboard too hard last night."
Hinata scoffed in disgust. Naruto's eyes went wider in horror.
"You boned the pink bitch? I thought you had standards or at least liked chicks with meat- Sakura is built like fucking wooden planks. And what the fuck is up with that hair?"
"Ah but I like breasts that I can fit entirely in my mouth and her ass is quite-"
"DON'T TALK ABOUT SAKURA-CHAN LIKE THAT YOU BASTAAAARD!"
Naruto lunged up at the crystal in fury, he knocked it out of the shocked Hinata's hand. It hit the floor and shattered.
Suddenly the world dropped in temperature and darkness fell as killing intent so strong it caused light itself to flee appeared. Naruto froze and looked up at a now demonic looking woman in terror.
"That. Was a priceless antique!"
KRAAAASSSSHHH!
Naruto was hit by a boss-level summon beast. Or that's what it felt like. The blond jinchuriki saw a blur of arms and next he was on the ground from the worst beating he had felt since mouthing off to Tsunade about 'dentures'.
Through a sea of pain Naruto croaked in terror.
"I-I'm sorry…"
"You're not sorry… but you soon will be…
-X-
Later...
Hinata circled Naruto, he had been stripped completely naked while he was unconscious and bound by ankles and wrists quite securely hogtied. Around his torso was a weird harness made of crisscrossing leather straps that fit worryingly well. He lay on his side on the same bed he was so viciously violated before. His fingers, trapped behind his back tried to draw up the power to generate rasengan to break his bonds but no power responded to his pleas. He realized Hinata's not-so-gentle fist must have shut down his chakra abilities.
Hinata wore the same training outfit as earlier but now carried a large scroll in one hand. She paced back and forth around the bed staring enraged at the helpless male.
"Seriously, why do you make me so angry like this… ever since we were kids, you were the short weakling that couldn't do anything by himself..."
The fuming young woman remembered events from years earlier; Hinata standing tall, beating up bullies at the ninja academy while a young Naruto just watched amazed and scared and usually hiding behind something.
"All the times I looked out for you at the academy… all that means nothing to you…"
Hinata's teeth grit, eyes flaming with fury, the exotic woman looked truly demonic in the low lighting of the room.
The furious young woman unsealed something from the giant scroll. It was a long black spanking paddle; a long black leather object with a circular end similar to a kunai, a textured grip and a long flat surface to strike with. It wasn't lethal but looking at it frightened Naruto more than any sword or dagger the ninja had ever laid eyes on.
Hinata put Naruto over her knee, using her other leg to trap Naruto in a humiliating bent over position, like he was an unruly child being punished by his mother. Except for being naked and tied up of course.
"WAIT! HINATA I- IT WAS AN ACCIDENT! AND- AND I DO CARE-"
"ARE YOU TRYING TO TWIST THIS AROUND AND MAKE ME THINK I'M CRAZY?! STOP! I CAN DEAL WITH YOU BEING STUPID OR A CISSY, BUT NOT BOTH AT THE SAME TIME!"
Hinata stroked Naruto's ass for a moment then raised the paddle with one hand then brought it down on his ass with a smack! The leather bent across Naruto's ass and Hinata's wrist flexed to absorb, withdraw then punish Naruto's ass once again.
Naruto gasped as the paddle hit him; he wasn't prepared for it. Not the pain, but the wave of embarrassment and humiliation that flooded him after the hit. The fact that a girl- even a superstrong psycho one- could do this to him.
The smacking didn't hurt just felt really humiliating, he didn't say anything for fear of Hinata doing something far worse to him.
'I really am pathetic aren't I?'
As if on cue Hinata tossed the paddle away and unsealed a new object from her scroll. Another leather object, this one shaped bizarrely like a hand. As Hinata brought it down on Naruto's ass he felt the outlines of the fingers dig into his ass then bend and withdraw, in Naruto's mind he saw a living hand striking his butt, grope it (Hinata's hand to be precise) and he wondered why she wasn't doing it herself.
After a couple of minutes of rubber spanking Hinata reached around with the hand paddle and stroked his face.
Creeped out by the sex toy that had just been all over his ass now fondling his face Naruto tried to scramble away but Hinata held him in place with a finger hooked in one of the straps that restrained the blond.
Upon unsealing a third paddle, this one a very wide circular shape. Hinata hissed. "I'm bored… after each stroke of the paddle you will say 'I'm sorry for speaking out of turn Hinata-sama' got it?"
Naruto didn't respond beyond staring up at the crazy woman. "WELL?!" She demanded, her lavender eyes bulging with the veins of the Byakugan.
"YES! I mean… yes Hinata-sama…" He babbled terrified.
"Good." She smiled sweetly.
SMACK! The paddle hit with much more weight than the last two, its larger surface area affecting a larger section of Naruto's ass. The paddle stayed pressed against Naruto's ass, it's cold large surface pressing into the blonde's butt. A second later a surge of terror froze Naruto remembering what Hinata had ordered.
"I'M SORRY FOR SPEAKING OUT OF TURN HINATA-SAMA!" The Hyuga heiress smirked evilly at the terror and submission she had inspired in her boyfriend. She removed the paddle and slapped him again slightly harder this time.
"I'm sorry… for speaking out of turn Hinata-sama." Naruto gasped out nearly choking on his humiliation.
She repeated this cruel practice another dozen times growing wetter each time Naruto spoke the degrading words.
She produced a fourth implement of punishment; a large black flogger this time, its long tendrils of rubber dangled promising pain.
"Now upon each strike you will say 'thank you for punishing me Hinata-sama'." She brought the floggers strands over her shoulder down onto Naruto's ass without waiting to acknowledge Naruto's response.
"AAAGGH! Th-thank you for punishing me Hinata-sama!" Naruto growled it our past gritted teeth- the flogger stung almost like an actual whip!
Another twelve or so agonizing lashes from the flogger fell before the vicious Hyuga tossed the S&M tool away and unsealed yet another instrument of pain. Naruto groaned wondering when it was going to end.
It was a short spanking crop and all Naruto could do was hiss in pain and grind his teeth together to avoid crying out from the pain and humiliation.
"Thank you for spending time with me Hinata-sama." Hinata said a split second before the crop came down with a crack and Naruto again winced as the thin shaft hit first with near-knife sharpness then the spanking flap came down a millisecond later spreading more pain around.
"That was what you were supposed to say moron!" She growled.
-X-
It went on like that for hours, punishment from an vast array of sealed instruments and an increasing vocabulary of humiliating phrases Naruto was forced to utter;
A blood red flogger; lashing down with huge weight in the thick rubber strands.
"Thank you for your time and attention Hinata-sama." Naruto was forced to say through the pain as his ass and back burned from growing welts.
A Rattan cane; striking with a sickening crack.
"You're too good for me Hinata-sama." Naruto recited as long red marks branded themselves into his skin.
A roughly textured large wooden paddle; flattening Naruto's ass on impact.
"You're a princess Hinata-hime…" Naruto gasped out knowing his buttocks had to be deeply bruising.
A bullwhip, huge and downright lethal looking, it came down on Naruto's back eliciting an agony thrash from the barely conscious male.
"GAAARRGGHH! YOU'RE A GODDESS!" Naruto cried out long lost of all dignity.
Naruto felt like his ass and back and shoulders were going to tear open like an apple hit by a wind bullet, but the rest of him felt…
He could feel Hinata's hand holding his; his iron grip didn't seem to bother her and holding a warm hand in his felt... good... reassuring... not like any feeling he had before...
There was something else... as the punishment went on he saw Hinata's beautiful face change from rage and hatred to happiness, and Naruto's heart soared. The blond tried to relax, letting Hinata punish him. The pain wasn't so bad...
Finally Hinata stopped producing devices of pain from her now-dreaded scroll. She spread Naruto across the bed, stomach down. He was still hogtied with the weird strap harness around his torso.
She moved her palms across his back using her Jyuken to trigger pleasure centers. The perversely skilled kunoichi could make the blond cum using only her fingers without going near his cock if she so desired.
"You took your punishment like a big boy Me-chan... and I can be gentle for those who earn it..."
With an orgasmic, stupid smile on his face, Naruto's eyes widened then rolled into the back of his head as he sighed into the sheets. He couldn't ever remember feeling so good..
Hinata removed her hands from Naruto's back and continued administering to him with her tongue. Naruto twitched in confusion as chakra being poured into him from a hot, wet tongue felt really weird. He shifted his head up from out the bedsheets and saw much to his terror Hinata shimmying another strap on cock up her wide hips.
Naruto leapt up in fear and would have rolled off the bed crashing onto the floor if Hinata hadn't stopped him by again hooking a finger in the harness around his torso.
Naruto shivered and stared at the dreaded false phallus, this one was a jet black colour and looked more rubbery than the last. It flopped around as Hinata shook her hips playfully. She squirted on some kind of desensitizing lubricant onto it from a squeeze bottle of some kind. Then began pumping it as though masturbating. Naruto's eyes bugged and he shivered in terror at seeing it.
"Hinata-sama- mistress- dono- hime- goddess…" He struggled for more positive suffixes as he tried to get away as the depraved kunoichi easily held him in place with one finger.
"Relax Menma-chan. Your punishment is over. This thing will blow your mind if you let it. I promise." She looked at him with an affection that looked practically angelic compared to her demonic rage from earlier.
Naruto gulped. "... Er... I- I..."
"Me-chan, trust me. I could hurt you if I wanted, but I promise I won't, not really. This is just rough fun."
Naruto mumbled in submission and didn't resist her as she rolled him back onto his front, his blue eyes betrayed his fear of her though. It made her hotter and wetter.
Hinata kneeled on the bed next to him, rubbing the small of his back and further activating pressure points, her fingers nervous from being very excited by his fear. The erratic Hyuga bit her lip as she lewdly scrutinized her captives battered ass. Using her fingers she gently pulled open his pain-tightened anus.
Once his sphincter was stretched (but still twitching due to pain) she leaned forwards and slowly slowly pushed forwards into Naruto, her heart jumping as she heard him gasp and groan as the well-greased plastic entered him. Hinata placed her fingers across Naruto's back holding him tight in place as she delivered the solid, wide plastic into him.
"GGGHHHKKK…nyyaaaahhh!" Naruto growled then yelled as he felt his recently deflowered asshole fill with ice-cold plastic cock.
His body compacted as he tried to just relax and let Hinata spike him up the ass again.
The domineering kunoichi bent over Naruto; her full thighs slapped into his reddened ass, her large breasts slapped against, flattened, bounced and rubbed against Naruto's back and arms. One strong arm wrapped around Naruto and held him, her other sent chakra pulses into his pain-wracked body.
Naruto nearly went crosseyed from the pain of having thick, wide, solid plastic driven into his rectum. His body was drum tight, face screwing up in extreme discomfort. The teen's anal canal stretched wider as the strap-on invaded deeper into him. Naruto drove his face into the pillow biting into it. Hinata looked down, a smile across her preternaturally lovely face.
The voluptuous kunoichi used her byakugan to peer into Naruto's body. First the darkened, welted skin peeled away revealing slightly bruised muscles that twitched like the strings of a musical instrument, then she saw blood vessels and the life fluid they carried pumping to reach the highs she was putting him through. She saw the bones and organs, some spreading and deforming under her intrusion into Menma's body.
Finally she adjusted her doujutsu to see both the energy pathways to stimulate with her gently fist and quite obscenely, the strap on phallus fully gloved in her captive's ass. She saw the tip inch closer and closer to his intestines, saw the sensitive inner folds of muscle inside his anal canal stretch and contract as the large, thick plastic invaded. Hinata licked her lips in contentment.
Hinata raised her body upwards causing the cock to twist downwards painfully in Naruto's asshole towards his prostate gland.
"Oooohhhhh! Yeah! Getting stuffed feels awesome. Is it good for you, Me-chan?" The depraved young woman cruelly asked.
"Gh! Gh! Gh! Gh! Ghhhaaaa!" Cries, groans and gasps were Naruto's only response. Every sound from the tortured male made Hinata hotter, closer to orgasm.
"That's it. Tell me how much you fucking love it Me-chan!" She gasped.
She began moving her hips back and forth, pushing and pulling the thick plastic attached to her. Her customary lack of gentleness reasserted itself and she sped up, driving in and out of Naruto with the speed and force of a piston engine.
Naruto's chest and face rubbed against the bed and his muscles compacted as Hinata crashed into him again and again.
Naruto didn't understand what was happening; his body liked this and he orgasmed, his cock spraying cum into the bedsheets, some dabs spurting onto Hinata's sandals as his cock was flattened beneath him pointing behind him. His body arched against Hinata's stabbing into him driving her so deep the doujutsu mistress saw Naruto's intestines deform inside his body.
Hinata felt the surge of power, the power born of her control of him, her awesomeness. She pushed in and out of Naruto's body so hard the bed shook.
Naruto's head arched up and back so hard he might have worried about breaking his neck if he wasn't fixated on the searing agony of having what felt like Gamabunta's Tanto shoved up his ass.
She wrapped her body around her restrained and spasming victim and sensually wiggled her body against the tight, pain wracked one she coiled almost serpent-like around.
Just looking at- and into- her slave- no her partner- made her orgasm; his pain, his willingness to take the pain, to enjoy it made her cum until her sex juice ran dry. Then she whispered into his ear, her face touching his;
"Told you. How'd it feel?"
Naruto's usually bright blue eyes had migrated nearly into the back of his head, he was barely conscious.
"...I-it felt…" Naruto didn't know how to speak.
Hinata looked down on the gasping teen she had just sodomised. She stroked him across the head with an affectionate look. While her jyuken triggered a sense of calm, even bliss in Naruto as he gasped and sucked in heaving gasps of air to soothe his overexerted body.
"From the moment we first met I knew only you could be the man for me… only you could be all I need…"
"...I love you." She stated breathily.
Naruto looked back stunned. In all his life no one had ever said those words to him. Not a parent (he didn't have any). Not a girlfriend (he'd never had one). Not any friend or comrade of any kind.
His world froze. Naruto shuddered, new tears, these of joy, not pain pooled in his eyes and he blinked them back.
"...I... I love you too Hinata..."
KRREEEAAAK! SNAP! KRAAAASSHH!
The fatally overworked bed frame shattered and the bed and its occupants fell and hit the ground.
Naruto's eyes bugged as the fall caused Hinata to fall on top of him driving her body so far forward she speared Naruto deeper than ever before and her breasts slapped Naruto's back as she fell and folded over him.
Naruto's head arched up and his mouth and eyes opened wide and crossed respectively. Then he passed out.
"Ha Ha Ha! Oops." Hinata looked embarrassed. Then she saw with her doujutsu that the dildo she wore had spiked so far into Naruto that it had actually torn something.
"Uh-oh... I am not gonna like telling the doctor about this..."
END CHAPTER 2

AUTHORS NOTES
Multiverse; In order to make this work as a multiple chapter fic this is not an illusionary world, it is an alternate reality, like the quantum realities from that Star Trek episode where Worf kept jumping to worlds slightly different to his own.
This chapter is mostly story setting, explanations on why the world they are in won't vanish all of a sudden, why Sasuke is the way he is, why there's two Naruto's (Menma is in Naruto's world).
Naruto's character and behavior;
Naruto thinks Hinata is in love with him. I view Naruto as emotionally malformed and alternate Hinata as quite psychotic, the reason for this will be stated later in the story.
Due to the circumstances in which he was raised (a pariah with no parents or legal guardians in a village of trained killers) I view Naruto as emotionally malformed; a child so devoid of real human contact that any kind of attention, acknowledgement or affection causes him to convince himself that he has some kind of profound spiritual connection with them. That's the only reason I can think of for Naruto considering Kakashi a teacher, Sasuke a brother or Sakura as anything other than a waste of oxygen (prior to shippuden at least).
One of the reasons this story took so long to bring out was I didn't want this story to be Naruto chained to a wall and released only to be Hinata's doll. I think I can say something about Naruto's character by having him given the option to leave but willingly keep coming back to Hinata's abuse because he thinks this is what a real relationship looks like or that he can change her (smooth out her rough/razor sharp edges).
Also remember;
1/ There are people in real life who are in unhealthy, violent relationships for various reasons.
2/ Naruto has no way of knowing what a normal romantic relationship looks or feels like- he's never had one, probably never seen one up close. In canon he doesn't have even a casual romance with anyone until he's like 19 (The Last: Naruto the movie).
Hinata's character and behavior; This reality's Hinata does love Menma/Naruto- in a very dysfunctional and unhealthy manner, this will be further explained later in the story.
The not-so gentle fist; Other reality!Hinata is a jonin level ninja in this, she could fight Naruto flat out in a real battle and push him to the limit. I'll do more on Hinata's power level in the next chapter including the fact that she has her own unique take on the gentle fist style.
Menma; Naruto and Sakura exchanged places with their other universe counterparts so there is a version of Naruto who won't 'talk no jutsu' his enemies into submission in the 'Prime universe'.
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