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COLD PART 2
11th MARCH 2011
AUTHORS NOTES
AU of Manga chapter 452 onwards- A very different meeting between Naruto and Team Samui creates a different reaction from Naruto.
This fic is a Naruto/Samui pairing, Drama/Humour/(kinda romance) fic.
'This' means someone is thinking.
Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki, Katon Jutsu.
Horizontal ruler (line across the page) means a page break or timeskip, may be a few minutes, may be a few hours...
-X- means a scene change, i.e. we start with Sakura and Sai in a clearing, then we go to Naruto and Samui in her apartment- a scene change from a street to an apartment.
This story started out simply as Naruto/Samui smut. Later I came up with the idea of using the background to look more deeply at Naruto's childish (and often deluded) outlook on the world, his delusions regarding Sasuke and his dysfunctional relationships in general. This is mean to be dramatic as well as kinky and humorous.
Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved in related franchises. This is non profit-i am making no money from this.

"People fake emotions all the time."
"You can't fake what me and Sasuke had!" Samui's eyebrows rose in amusement. Naruto froze realising what he had just said.
"Really?" She put a hand on Naruto's head and pulled him in kissing him on the mouth.
"!" Naruto stood there too shocked to do anything.
Finally she broke the lip lock leaving Naruto standing there astonished.
"If I, a random stranger, kissed you, does that make me your lover? Your soulmate?"
Naruto stood there stunned. No one had ever touched him in this way. He didn't know how to respond- his brain had completely shut down.
Samui's hand shot out and grabbed his crotch squeezing gently, snapping him out of his freeze.
"It is easy and cheap to give false affection. Let me show you how easy it is to give... physical affection."
The stunning female once again kissed Naruto fiercely. While still connected at the mouth she shoved Naruto to the cabins wooden wall. The Leaf ninja gawked at her in childish shock mumbling something unintelligible around the kunoichi's mouth.
Finally breaking the lip lock to allow Naruto to breath, Samui grabbed his wrists and forced them above his head beneath a wooden crossbeam with impressive strength.
"W-wow... y-you're really strong and pre-"
"Keep your hands there." She demanded.
"... Ye-yes sir!" Naruto nodded eagerly before being kissed again. The kunoichi wasn't sure if the orange clad ninja was being sarcastic or was just naturally submissive to domineering women. Any kind of submissive behaviour towards a foreign Ninja from someone who should be listed in the Bingo book as an S-class threat was an idea that intrigued and confused the logic driven kunoichi.
She unzipped and pulled his orange and black jumpsuit and mesh undershirt up and off his body, allowing his arms down long enough to remove the unflattering garment. Beneath the hideous clothing Naruto was reasonably appealing; not bulging with muscle like the freakish Raikage or his younger brother, but not scrawny either.
Samui had done seduction before, and if she was right this young ninja was a virgin. Easy to manipulate.
While holding his wrists with one hand she went to work on his bare chest; running her blunted nails up and down his chest and stomach and teasing his nipples with her nimble fingers and skilled tongue.

Reacting in joy, Naruto brought a hand down to caress the much more experienced kunoichi's head.
"I told you to keep your hands up." She admonished. He returned his hands to the wall above him without question.
'I don't have a lot of experience dealing with Leaf Ninja but it can't be normal for him to be this trusting and submissive to a stranger can it?'
Samui saw his erection through his bizarre bright orange pants.
'He hasn't lost it from my teasing alone, so i guess he's ready for more...'
She unfastened and pulled her Flak jacket off and used it to tie Naruto's hands together to the wooden post that went from the wall they were leaning against to the ceiling.
"Hey" Naruto protested, finally attempting to struggle against Samui's actions. Attempting being the operative word as the busty woman was impressively strong and Naruto didn't want to use his full strength and risk hurting her.
"Trust me." Samui replied in her usual cold voice. Naruto inexplicably was calmed and reassured by this.
"O-okay..."
Samui rarely thought about men- she considered most of them not worth her time- that and it was rarely hard to figure out what they were thinking in her presence (which got old really quick), however she did appreciate a very powerful, weirdly submissive male.
She kneeled in front of the now restrained male. She unzipped his ridiculous orange pants and pulled them down along with his boxer shorts. It took all of her training and natural ice-queen-iness to not react and gawk at the almost impossibly sized member in front of her;

'Did energy normally used for brain development go to his cock instead?'
Naruto stared self consciously at the Kunoichi; his expression was pure fear.

'She doesn't think my... thing is small or... not worth her time does she?' The thought almost brought the young ninja to tears.
Samui kissed his penis, Naruto's almost teary eyes bugged out.
"Gaah! What the?" He gaped down at the busty woman who without warning took his cock into her hot mouth. Naruto's mouth widened so far his jaw threatened to unhinge.
After sheathing his cock, Samui opened her throat taking his length past her pearly white teeth, all the way down into her throat.

Samui had no problem with Naruto watching her do this, unlike the Jinchuriki she wasn't the slightest bit self-conscious. Naruto's head banged against the wall as the buxom blond licked and sucked on his cock, his expression changing from shock to one of overwhelming pleasure; eyes closed, mouth agape.
Samui's girdle-like Flak jacket (made from the hide of a giant rhino from the great island turtle) creaked dangerously as Naruto came, bucking awkwardly into her face.
The voluptuous kunoichi swallowed his load now positive that Naruto was a virgin and would feel insulted if she spat his seed out. Oddly the Konoha ninja's sperm tasted quite good, very unlike the foul tasting release she was accustomed to from her infiltration missions in Iwagakure not long ago.
She sat back to look up at him; Naruto dangled from the makeshift restraints, panting, sweating, shaking, eyes closed in bliss and smiling even more stupidly than usual.
Samui disrobed, removing her skirt, her shirt, the wire undermesh and her underwear including her severely overworked bra. She placed the clothing on a nearby crate then studied her... student? Prey? Guest? Fellow ninja? Slightly less coldly than usual.
'Better not give him time to think...'
She grabbed his head wondering how he'd react to what was next. This time it was Naruto who initiated contact, kissing Samui passionately, seemingly unaffected by the fact that she recently swallowed a considerable amount of his sperm. Happily surprised at the males response Samui grabbed his blond hair pulling nearly harshly enough to pull the golden locks from his skull.
She unwrapped the girdle around Naruto's arms releasing the bonds holding him in the air. As soon as the blond Jinchuriki put his feet on the ground Samui violently took him to the cold, hard floor in a Judo like move then took hold of his wrists forcing them flat on the ground above the stunned male's head. Rather than cry out or protest Naruto seemed even more turned on by the rough treatment.
"W-wow! Samui-chan! You're so strong and..."
She cut him off; "What do you know about oral sex?" She asked with an inappropriately deadpan delivery.
"Wha- what do I know about wha...?" Naruto stammered.
Samui smiled. Naruto thought it was the most beautiful thing he'd ever seen.
She let his hands go and knelt over him, sandwiching his head in between her muscular legs. Naruto's frightened blue eyes dashed back and forth between her legs, her opening and her cold but lovely face partially obscured by her massive cleavage. Deciding to man up, he grabbed her wide hips in a tight grip.
Samui lowered herself on to Naruto's face, sitting on him leaving only his frightened eyes visible.
"Gmmm! Mmmm!" Naruto mumbled around the flesh covering his mouth and dizzied by the intoxicating smell of the body covering his nose.
"Lick and suck. That is oral sex." Samui blandly stated, with all the emotion of someone who was talking about wallpaper colours.
Naruto experimented by licking the kunoichi's opening. He liked what it tasted like. He grew bolder, licking and sucking, probing and penetrating deeper and deeper with his tongue.
"Hnnn! Yes, that's right. You're doing it correctly." She tried to instruct Naruto coldly but found it difficult; he had a very talented tongue, and seemingly an instinct for the right places to touch on a women's body.
The sensations were amazing; Samui was tingling, like there was electricity and heat growing inside her (yet not like the Raiton and Katon jutsus she was accustomed to) building up, until finally, she couldn't hold it back; she came into Naruto's mouth like a bursting dam, the Leaf ninja swallowed every last drop- because he felt obligated to do so, or liked the taste, the kunoichi couldn't tell.
Samui stood up. She looked down at the blond teenager looking up at her in adoration. She helped him to his feet with a firm hand.
Just as it looked like Naruto was going to say something, her hand went to his cock. Holding it tightly. She shoved him back against the wall. She leapt up and wrapped her legs around his waist. Naruto grabbed a hold of her despite the massive grip she had on his body with her powerful thighs. Samui put her hands on his shoulders, bringing the pair face to face once more- bright blue to ice blue eyes.
They kissed, Samui tasted remnants of her release in Naruto's mouth, she found it... curious.
Removing one hand, Samui eased Naruto's large cock into her opening. Penetrating was a little difficult because of its sheer size.
Once again Samui took the lead; she began pushing herself up and down on Naruto's massive cock. She began to speed up when it looked like Naruto understood what she wanted and moved his body in time with hers.
Samui let go of Naruto's shoulders and bent her upper body back until her head was upside down nearly touching the floor. Naruto grabbed her ass, holding her contorted and speared on his cock effortlessly. The new position the kunoichi was in gave her a considerably deeper amount of penetration, she began pushing back and forth on Naruto's cock again losing herself in the amazing sensations...
After both coming with enormous force, Naruto pulled Samui close to him, hugging her to his chest and burying his head in her sweet-smelling hair.
With some effort, Samui detangled herself from Naruto and pulled him to the floor on top of her.
Samui took hold of Naruto's cock. She wrapped her nimble fingers around it and began stroking up and down the twitching member, slowly increasing in speed and tightness. Naruto gasped, not understanding what she was doing.
Thanks to the combination of Samui's amazing hands and Naruto's own extraordinary stamina, he became rock hard and impressively sized again very quickly.
"Don't hold back. I want you to use all of your strength..."
"But..." He stopped as the look on Samui's face held no room for disagreement.
She directed him to penetrate her again and he drove into her with enormous force.
"Ah! Yes! Keep doing that..."
She might have wished she could have said something more intelligent and precise, but at the moment she didn't care. Naruto was driving into her so hard it felt like the skin and muscles on her back would tear off as she rubbed against the wooden floor, like her pelvis would shatter as Naruto's body crashed against hers, like her inner passage was going to tear like tissue paper as Naruto's huge cock repeatedly penetrated her with unbelievable speed and power.
if she wasn't a ninja naturally able to reinforce her bodies structural integrity she would have been massively wounded- maybe killed by this...
After several minutes of nearly driving the Kunoichi through the floor, both Naruto and Samui came to their end result; massive orgasms causing even the stoic Kumo Kunoichi to cry out in pain.
-X-
"What the hell was that?" Sakura growled.
"What?" Sai asked. The pair had returned to assisting in search, rescue and salvage operations in the village, confident Naruto could handle one Kumo ninja.
'Unless she's handling him...' A piece of granite was crushed in Sakura's hand. Sai wisely backed off.

Samui staggered away from Naruto (who lay barely conscious on the floor). She picked up her clothing, paused to grimace and rub her bruised back, then began redressing- in no seeming hurry.
"Ah... so... what now?" He asked dreamily.
"Now I rejoin my comrades in their information search. Afterwards I will return to Kumo. Of course if you have any information on the Akatsuki I'd be happy to-"
Naruto froze. "W-wait! You mean... I thought we... I mean... what we just did..."
Samui stared at him. "You think sex is always a profoundly spiritual act? In the ninja world this is rarely so, it can be many less wholesome things." She spoke from personal experience.
"B-but..." Naruto stammered, voice choking.
"You think this meant something? Shinobi need to see the world for what it is- not what they want it to be. Those who make that mistake... die."
She paused for a moment, actually feeling sorry for the fool.
"I hope our villages will work together in the future to defeat the Akatsuki- this means people like you need to wake up. Your ideas about never giving up on people and unbreakable bonds are a childish fantasy. Traitors exist and must be dealt with. Lethal force is often required and Shinobi are often called upon to make harsh choices."
With that, she turned and walked away.
Naruto looked away from the harsh woman remembering both Jiraiya and Itachi saying similar words to him...

Hours later Samui had met up with her team mates. They had completed their work at the Konoha Central Archive a while after the blond's Kage Bunshin expired.
"What were you doing while I was endangering my shinobi career-"
Karui cut the whining Omoi off; "All you were doing was writing! Copying information!"
Omoi was unfazed by her yelling; "I risked tendonitis; risking both my sword skills and my ability to utilise handseals quickly..."
"From Uzumaki Naruto I received an impressive amount of intelligence on Uchiha Sasuke." Samui reported deciding to intervene before they really got started.
"You look and smell funny." Omoi reported. His eyes widened,.
"You didn't just have freaky/extraordinary sex with that orange guy in an attempt to break his freakish obsession with Sasuke and therefore make him useful to us/ teach him a life lesson and force him to grow up and change into a more capable ninja did you?"
Karui leapt forward in one of her aggressive stances; waving a knuckle sandwich, one knee lifted into the air before her, eyes bulged, body trembling, yelling;
"Whaat! You know Captain Samui only likes super strong/super intelligent/super deep types! Right!"
"My taste in men is immaterial to this conversation." She blandly replied, her response enraging her comrades as usual.
'Though he could be something if he grows up and gets past his emotional problems...'
-X-
Naruto sat naked against the Sentry house wall. Alone. He struggled desperately to get a hold of his still churning emotions. He did something he didn't do often; doubt and think; 'Why'd she do that? Go that far to make a point? Should I go after her...'

END CHAPTER 2
AUTHORS NOTES
Naruto's character and behaviour- My opinion on the problem with Naruto in canon is that the world needs idealists- people who see the world for what it could be, not for what it is- but Naruto crossed the line between idealism and self delusion years ago when he convinced himself that Sasuke was kidnapped instead of leaving of his own free will. Naruto further sank into fantasy when he explained away his "friend and brother's" various crimes including trying to kill him twice (three times in current manga timeline).
Samui- I decided that Samui would be a realist and somewhat of a cynic to counteract Naruto's over the top idealism. I also decided she would be a ninjutsu specialist with abilities in both lightning and fire natures. The reason for this is partially that in canon she doesn't carry any tools beside a tanto so I doubt she'd be a weapons specialist, being a medical ninja is overdone for kunoichi in Naruto and Genjutsu would be too hard to write. Also I already wrote that Samui could perform the Shadow clone jutsu in the previous chapter.
How long the story will last- Originally this story was only going to last two chapters, however given the enormous positive reaction it has received I have decided to expand it beyond that, I haven't decided how far yet, at least as far as the Confining Jinchuriki arc (I intend to massively deviate from canon obviously).
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