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Final Straw	By : Akureitsumetai Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Hinata Views: 2755 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Kuroi-Yasha: Hello
one and all! Sorry this took so long and that it's so short, however
I'm having a very hard time in my life right now, things aren't going
well for me and I'm finding it hard to keep going, but I'll make it
thru...hopefully. Anyhow, the next chapter will be longer I promise
this is more of a filler, but it's needed so bear with it please. I'm
saddened to say that I only got two reviews on FF.net, but 4 on
MediaMiner, and an AWSOME 6 on AdultFF.net so that makes up for it..
Anyways, here we go with Chapter 2, responses to reviews will be at
the end of the chapter. YONDER!!!

ATTENTION!!!! READ BEFORE CONTINUING!!!
There will be
a major time skip in the beginning of the chapter, however as is my
writing style, I will always go back and explain everything at a
later time. Also Hinata will not be the kind, shy girl...not by a
long shot. However I am making this a Naru/Hinata story, it'll just
take a while so bear with it if you want to or else stop reading now.
For those familiar with my writing style, you'll notice that things
are very different in this chapter. No, this is not the wrong
chapter, nor did I forget to place certain things. Just bear with it
if you're interested, if not stop reading now.

LEMON-LIME ALERT!!!! THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS THIGS OF A
VERY SEXUAL NATURE!!! DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE UNDER 17!! ITS RATED M
FOR A REASON!!!

Disclaimer: I do not, in any way shape or form, own
Naruto. I do however own a Hinata figure that is about 2 inches tall
that I purchased for 8 dollars....pretty sad eh? Nor do I own “No
More Lies” By Iron Maiden. But I wish I did.

Final
Straw
By:
Kuroi-Yasha
Chapter
2: Maelstrom

There's
a darkened sky before me...
There's no time to prepare...
Salvage
a lost horizon...
But no regrets from me...
Maybe I'll be back
some other day...(some other day)
To live again just who can
say...?

He
could feel it.

Her
desire.

Her
lust.

Her
need.

“N-Naruto-kun...”

He
shuddered slightly at her plea, his name...always before said with
contempt or disgust. Now dripping with passion. He craved more...he
needed more.

Bending
low he captured her soft lips in a slow kiss. She squirmed, he knew
she hated yet loved it when he took his time with her. She made his
life hell, she loathed him with an unmatched passion, yet she wanted
only his touch. It was a very peculiar situation. To hate someone,
yet love them at the same time. Regardless, who was he to resist her,
a measly hanyou such as himself. No, he would please her, then she
could hate him. For now all that mattered was the need, the want.

Releasing
her lips he latched onto her neck as he ripped her snug shirt off her
body. She gasped at his roughness and disregard, she was sooo
turned
on at that moment. Roughly he gripped her breast with his right hand,
his claw just barely touching her nipple, she loved being at his
mercy. With both of her small wrists in his one hand he continued
licking and bitting her sensitive areas, he growled deep in his
throat, her arousal was thick in the air, and it wasn't making it any
easier for him.

“O-Onegai...N-Naruto-kun...”

Having
had enough, he released her hands as he removed the last of her
garments with as much unnecessary roughness as possible. She loved
when he was excessive. He didn't give her a chance to say anything as
he roughly shoved himself inside of her tight opening. Her moan of
pleasure was music to his ears, he didn't need any of the foreplay,
but it was nice and hell, he got his pleasure, why shouldn't she?

His
pace left no doubt that he was not a gentle lover. He could be, she
knew all to well that he could do things to her that she couldn't
even imagine, but right now she didn't care. All she needed was
pleasure, and with rough sex always delivered. She wasn't
disappointed. He groaned at her her tightness as he lifted her off
the mattress and pressed her against the wall, her moans could only
grow louder as the slight pain from being slammed against the wall
magnified the pleasure she felt.

“K-kami...AH!!
N-Na-NARUTO!! ONEGAI!! MOTTO!!”

He
could feel the sweat dripping of his brow as he pushed himself to go
faster, if his princess wanted him to go faster, he'd go faster. His
claws were digging into her hips as he struggled to keep his grip on
her, the sweat on her lithe body making it hard to keep the pace.
Snarling he thew her onto the bed as he flipped her onto her back and
re-entered her from behind. Her moans were making it hard for him to
keep from releasing his seed into her, but damned if he would cum
before her. He increased the roughness of his thrust as he licked the
blood off of his claws, the sweet taste made him want more as he
leaned down and sunk his fangs into her neck. The coppery liquid
filled his mouth and she could only moan with her at the taste. Of
coarse she was moaning because his fangs released a euphoric liquid
into her body that intensified her pleasure and dulled her pain.
Being a hanyou had its up sides.

Suddenly
she stopped as she gripped the bedsheets as her knuckles turned white
from the intensity of the orgasm that rocked her small body. She
threw her head back as her raven hair flew back and spread like a
curtain, her pupil-less eyes awash with pleasure, her small cute lips
in took the shape of an O as she let out a silent scream of pleasure.
Her walls, already unbearable reached a new level of tightness,
releasing his grip on her neck he threw his head back and let out a
low growl/moan as his member was milked by her muscles, his thick
seed coating her walls.

He
let go a shuddering gasp as he fell against the bed. His eyes closing
from the aftermath of his orgasm as he took long shuddering breaths.
Opening his eyes as a soft pressure landed on his body, cerulean met
lavender as his lips formed into a genuine smile. “I love you
hime.” She gave him a heart filled smile as her hand went into
his blond locks, “I love you too Naru-kun...”

A gasp left his lips as pain erupted in his chest, looking down he
saw the black glint of the kunai in his heart. His eyes never left
her lavender orbs as she leaned down and planted a soft kiss on his
lips. “And that's why you have to die...Sayonara koi...”
He could only stare as the second kunai came at his throat. The
loving smile never leaving her lips.

Naruto
opened his eyes as the first traces of sunlight entered his decrepit
apartment. Again he'd had the same dream, or was it a fantasy?
'That's
one fucked up fantasy...it fits me just fine.'
Rubbing
the fatigue from his eyes he rose slowly from his shoddy mattress.
The dream was not a new one, hell he hadn't had a regular dream since
he could remember.

Sighing the young blond made his way to the window as the morning fog
passed by his view of the ocean. One could say many things about Wave
country, but it was beautiful...in a morbid sort of way. After Gato
had taken control of the small country and forced it into an economic
stranglehold, things had gone straight down the shitter. Still
though, Naruto found that despite the poorness of his home he enjoyed
the people, they valued human life more than petty possessions and
were always willing to help anyone who was in need, giving from the
few they had.

'Its almost time
kit...'

The
Uzumaki sighed as he turned his back the view, and instead proceeded
to gather his few scant belongings. 'So
it's time to go back to Konoha huh?'
He
couldn't suppress the evil smirk that formed on his lips, while it
was true that he couldn't get his revenge on the village that had
forsaken him just yet, he could count this as a form of
reconnaissance mission. His major contact and only friend thus far
that wasn't his guardian had informed him that he'd been assigned a
mission in which he had to protect a bridge builder from Wave, and
was to meet up with him to return to Konoha as per the Sandaime
Hokage's request.
'I'm
surprised the old man's still alive.'
The
young boy thought as he smiled at the memory of the old man who had
always been so kind to him, and had been the one to save him from his
almost certain execution.

~-~-~-~Flash-~-~-~-~

“Uzumaki
Naruto, do you know why you have been brought before this council?”

The
child in question, no older than 9 shook his head as he stared in awe
at the sheer number of people in the room, the fact that the majority
of the people in the room were looking at him with glares of barely
restrained loathing were not missed though.

“So
you do not admit your guilt to viciously assaulting the Inuzuka,
Uchiha, and Hyuuga heirs?”

This
however instantly got the blond's attention, slowly anger began to
cause the young child shake indignantly. “I did no such thing!”
He spat at the elderly man who had spoken to him, “It was a
spar set up by Mizuki-sensei in order to gage our talents. However
for some reason I was the only one put up against three people an...”

“LIES!!!”

The
roaring voice of outrage had come from one Fuugaku Uchiha who had
shot out of his seat. “My youngest son Sasuke was viciously
mauled by this demon! I demand retribution!!” The Uchiha head
roared, much to the approval of several of the other members of the
council. Most other clan heads remained silent however as they had
already accepted the fact that even if they wished to help, they had
already been overruled by the majority of the council.

Sarutobi
sighed at the turn of events, unfortunately he couldn't help young
Naruto this time, the council had made sure that his power was
limited to shinobi and not to Academy students. 'I'm sorry Naruto, I
have failed you again.'

Naruto
who had been trying to defend himself was silenced as the head of the
council called for silence.

“Very
well then, it has been decided that the defendant is guilty of all
charges by the majority of the council. As a result we will now pass
judgment on this...child.” Motioning to his peers he directed
their attention to a screen that rolled down the wall. “Now we
shall take a vote for his punishment. If you wish to vote for exile,
please make the Ram seal, if you wish to vote for imprisonment make
the Inu seal, and if you wish to vote for execution,” This got
a cry from Sarutobi and a ghost white face from the young boy in
question, “Please form the Tora seal.”

Sarutobi
had had enough, “You cannot seriously begin to even consider
executing a helpless child?!” Sarutobi got no response and
watched in horror as the council began to make their decision. After
a few moments the numbers had begun to appear.

Exile:
17/100

Imprisonment:
18/100

Execution:
65/100

Sarutobi
could feel his body begin to shake with grief, anguish and anger at
the council's decision.

“And
so it has been decided. Naruto Uzumaki.” The boy looked up,
tear-filled azure meeting uncaring coal. “You are hereby found
guilty of attempted murder of 3 clan heirs, and are hereby sentenced
to death.” The tears now escaped Naruto's eyes unchecked as he
collapsed to his knees. “Your execution shall be three days
from now at dawn. You are to hang from the Gallows. This meeting is
adjourned.”

Naruto
didn't even resist when he was removed from the chamber an ANBU and
taken to a special cell in the Uchiha district and had several
inhibitor cuffs and chakara suppressors placed on him.

~~Back
at the Council Room~~

“HOKAGE-SAMA!!!
YOU CAN'T LET THEM DO THIS TO HIM!! HE'S JUST A CHILD!!”

The
elderly Hokage had never felt so old in his life, all the strength
seemed to have just vanished from his limbs. He shook his head as
tears continued to fall from his eyes, “I'm sorry Yume-san, but
my powers have been stripped. I-I...I'm afraid I'm powerless.”
The young woman shook her head, “No, your just not thinking
hard enough! There has to be...we can't...” She stopped as she
collapsed and began to sob. She had not known the child for long, but
she had quickly grown attached to the young jinchuuriki.
His care free and loving nature, the innocence that shined in his
bright azure eyes, his fox-like smile of content or simply
mischievousness.

The
old Hokage merely continued to shake his head, “No, I'm sorry
but we...” Sarutobi paused in mid-sentence as his mind began to
put things together. “No, I couldn't...but if I don't...will he
even agree..?” Yume looked up as the Hokage began to grow
serious and suddenly stood. “Yes, there is no other option.”

Turning
the Hokage snapped his fingers twice and a familiar ANBU knelt before
his lord. “I assume you heard my ramblings?” At the
ANBU's nod, he turned to face him, his eyes cold. “Then I trust
you know what I am planning on having you do?” The ANBU nodded
yet again, “Very well, the execute Operation: Crimson Dawn and
add the new objective.” Finally the ANBU nodded one last time
before vanishing.

“Hokage-sama...?”

“Forgive
me.”

Neither
was certain exactly who he was apologizing to.

~-~-~-~Back-~-~-~-~-

Yes, his life had gone to shit in a lot of ways, but at the same time
he couldn't help but think that if he'd stayed in Konohagakure he
would no doubt be more miserable than he was right now.

'Its time kit. The
battle has just begun. Are you ready?'

Naruto nodded as the placed the hi-ate on his forehead. On it was the
engraving of a fox with 9 tails, with two fox-like metallic horn/ears
at the top. His eyes went to a deadly tone of dull ice as he pulled a
mask over his face, and donned his black cloak with the spiraling
swirl in the dead center of his back and blue streams of stitching in
his cloak, giving it the illusion of a flowing wind.

“Yes...I...no...we...will
show them the true strength of a demon.” He grinned ferally as
behind him the gray sky suddenly took on a darker overcast.

The Maelstrom had finally emerged.

Kuroi-Yasha: Well,
what did you guys think. I know a lot of you will probably want to
kill me right now, but I promise the next chapter will be up in less
than a month. The rest of what was mentioned in this chapter will
slowly be explained in each chapter, so just bear with me. That being
said I would kindly appreciate receiving more than just 2 reviews, so
please help me out and give me a reason to keep writing ne?

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Man you are a life saver. The link certainly helped, and I'll be
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Thanks for the review! Uhm, well to answer your question; Hinata,
while being from a very elite clan, is still a child, as such she
will want to interact with children her own age. As such I saw it
fitting that she would go to the park and play with her peers. Also
because of her kind nature which is still in place before her mother
dies (at least in this fic) she is the only one that dares to
approach our hero and provide some sort of social interaction. Also I
did state that he was then forbidden to go near her ever again and
was nearly killed by her guardian. Sorry if I didn't make that
clearer.

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