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Once more into the breach	By : Zendura Category: Naruto > General Views: 1682 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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The
first thing Tsukiyo noticed when she awoke was that she
wasn't in her home. Worried, she bolted up to see the one person she trusted in
the village, the Sandaime Hokage. Without a second thought she sprung into his
arms and started to cry. He just held the child as she cried into his robes,
giving her soothing words of reassurance. After a few minutes, an ANBU appeared
in a poof of smoke.

"Hokage-sama, the council requests your presence."
At the sound of his voice, Tsukiyo was under the bed.

Sarutobi waved the ANBU away and knelt down to talk to
Tsukiyo, but what he heard made him stop.

Tsukiyo was curled up chanting to her 'nee-san' to let her
in. Frowning, he decided to stop any rumors of this here. "Tsukiyo, I'll
be back in a little bit." Not getting any response, he sighed. Walking out
the door, he raised his hand and in an instant, a dog masked ANBU appeared,
"Yes, Hokage-sama."

Without turning to the ANBU, Sarutobi spoke. "No-one is
to enter this room, and it is to be sealed so not even the Hyuuga's eyes know
what happens in this room." He turned to the dog masked ninja. "Under
penalty of death, No-one is to
enter." Turning to the door, he did a blood-seal to lock it. "I will
be back after I am finished with the council." As he walked away, one last
thing could be heard. "I'm entrusting you with this Kakashi, don't let me
down."

As
the Hokage turned the corner out of sight, Kakashi
summoned his
team. "Panther, you are to hold an S-Rank barrier on this room with Raven.
Chameleon, you are to watch the window. We will switch every hour. No-one
enters this room alive." After a slight breeze, his team was gone.
Standing before the door, the dog masked ninja thought upon the scene he and
the Hokage arrived at at the girls�f apartment. He thought about her eyes the
most. She had accepted on a subconscious level that Mizuki's life would have to
end for her life to continue, and she had taken pleasure in that kill whether
she knew what she had done or not. He couldn't help but think he would have too
in her place. What's worse was the council would most likely spin this to be
the child's fault. This ninja was no fool, he knew the child and the demon were
two separate entities, and had complete faith in the abilities of the Fourth.
Sighing lightly, he just hoped the Hokage could do something about this before
things got ugly.

Sarutobi took a deep breath and let it out before he entered
the council's meeting hall. "You have called me away from urgent matters,
so if you could make this quick" Standing behind his chair as if to make a
point, he looked out across the council. Almost all the faces he saw were dark
and foreboding except for the Nara, Akimichi, Yamanaka, Inuzuka, and the Hyuuga
clan heads. Although one could almost never tell what Hiashi thought until the
man spoke.

A head of one of the more influential merchant clans was the
one to speak first. "We demand that the Demon be killed tonight! Anyone
that was alive the night that beast attacked could feel that it had used its
power, and more than that, is that a shinobi of Konoha was found dead in the
things lair! It is a danger and it needs to be�c"

The man was stopped by the wave of KI (killer intent) that
was directed at him "SILENCE!" Seeing the man frozen in fear, he
looked out across the rest of the council. "Is this the will of the
council? That a child be charged with murder for killing the man that was
raping her!"

He could see a reaction in the Ino-Shika-Cho group as their
faces took on a look of dismayed horror; Hiashi took on a disgusted and solemn
look, while Inuzuka Tsume bolted to her feet and raised her foot on the table.
"I hope the fucker burns in hell for it too! No child deserves that, Demon
or no!" She turned to glare at the civilian, merchant, and shinobi clans
that had raged for the child's death "You people DISGUST me! Don't you see
she's just a little girl?! No family, no guardian, and no friends! This girls�f
life is hell because of you ignorant FUCKS!" Turning to the Hokage, she
put her foot down and stood tall. "Let it be known from this point on
she's under the protection of the Inuzuka clan. If she is attacked or even
threatened in the presence of one of us, we will respond with force." She
turned back to the ones she had yelled at before "Lethal, if necessary!"

What surprised everyone was when Hiashi stood. "I too
declare one Uzumaki Tsukiyo under my clans�f protection." The Ino-Shika-Cho
group was soon to follow with similar pledges.

Sarutobi let himself smile slightly. He had expected
something like this from Tsume and knew the Ino-Shika-Cho group would back her,
but he was curious as to Hiashi's reason. The man was cold and calculating, but
he was honorable to nearly a fault. With him behind the girl, many would step
back. Not all of them, but enough to where he could go through with his plans.

Kyuubi sighed as she looked around. Tsukiyo would be
unconscious for a while yet and she was back to being alone. A couple hours
after Tsukiyo left, Naruto came back into the room scratching his head.
"Hum, so all roads lead here I guess."

Kyuubi looked to the tall blond and figured she might as
well try and get to know him since they were now stuck with each other.
"So Naruto, tell me, what was the me from your dimension like."

Walking out to the cage and leaning against it, he thought
silently for a while before answering. "I'd have to say he was the most
arrogant, sadistic, and all around most evil being I know. He took pleasure in
the fact my life was mostly a living hell and saw fit to tell me so."
Looking over his shoulder, he noticed Kyuubi had bowed her head. After a short
pause, he turned to Kyuubi. "So, how long do you think till she'll trust
me enough to be within her sight?"

Kyuubi frowned. "I honestly don't know. That wave of KI
earlier didn't help matters either, but I'll try and get through to her."
Sighing, she sat with her back against the cage bars. Scowling at the water
that she was now sitting in brought her to her next question. "How do you
know how to change your mindscape? I doubt from what you told me it was to improve
the other Kyuubi's living condition.

Naruto took a while to answer, but she could hear the sorrow
in his voice. "It was when five of my friends died because Kyuubi refused
to help me. After they died, I just wanted to hurt him somehow. I imagined his
cage to be the most painful thing I could think of at the time. When I next
entered my mindscape a few days later to confront him, I was shocked to find
his cage became a whirling mass of super heated blades continually tearing at
his ever regenerating flesh." She could hear Naruto grunt. "When I
saw the rage, hatred, and most of all pain in the beast's eyes, I turned around
and left. It stayed like that for three years before I finally got my revenge
and saw no point to torturing the beast anymore." Sighing, he continued
their give and take session. "Kyuubi, you told Tsukiyo you were looking
for your son. If it's not too personal, I would like to know the story behind
it."

"You can call me Ryoko." Hearing his questioning
'huh' she sighed. "Kyuubi no Kitsune is my title as Queen of the Demons,
but my name is Ryoko. As for my past, I'd rather not talk about it."

Just then the voice of Tsukiyo could be heard, begging to be
let back into her mindscape. They could both hear the fear in her voice. They
both stood and Naruto started to walk away before Ryoko stopped him.
"Naruto, wait." Seeing the questioning look on his face as he looked
back at her, she let out a sigh. "She's going to need to become
comfortable around you sooner or later. It might as well be now."

Naruto continued to walk away as he shook his head.
"No, now is the time for you to comfort her and be there for her. She
doesn't need me at the moment and my presence would be detrimental." as he
finished his sentence, he disappeared into the darkness of the hall.

Ryoko smiled as Naruto disappeared. She silently thanked him
for understanding before she pulled Tsukiyo before her. Before she could even
speak she was enveloped in a fierce hug as the girl sobbed. She just held the
child as she gave her the same calming words of the Hokage. Knowing she
wouldn't be able to tell her without breaking into a sobbing fit, Ryoko went
over her recent memory of what set her off. She saw the overly white room of
the hospital and then the aged Hokage. She smiled as she heard Sarutobi comfort
Tsukiyo much like she was doing now. Then an ANBU appeared and startled
Tsukiyo. She then realized that the ANBU and her attacker nearly had the same
color hair. While not much to some, that small detail triggered the overwhelming
fear. "Tsukiyo, it's ok. You don't have to be afraid."

Tsukiyo continued to cry. "But *sniff* but he *cry* he
came back!" Looking up at her 'big sister', she nearly went hysterical.
"He came back to hurt me again! Didn't Jiji see what he did?!" She buried
herself into Ryoko. "I thought I killed him! Why didn't he die?"

Ryoko rubbed Tsukiyo's back. "Tsu-chan, that wasn't the
same man."

Tsukiyo just hugged her tighter. "No! It was him!"

Ryoko frowned, but she knew she had to do this. She quickly
conjured two forms, one of the ANBU and one of Mizuki. "Tsukiyo, look,
they are not the same person." When Ryoko told her to look she did and
screamed as she tried to bolt deep into the cage. Grabbing the girl and holding
her as to face the two images, she took a harsh, commanding voice as she
talked. Pointing to Mizuki, she continued. "That is the man that hurt you!
That man also died by your hand. You spilt his blood and watched as the life
left his eyes." Now pointing to the dog-masked ANBU she used a softer, but
still authoritative tone. "This man has saved you from the villagers on
numerous occasions. Remember what happened to you on your last birthday."
Getting a slight nod from the crying girl, she continued. "He was the one
to stop the ones hurting you. He was the one that rushed you to the hospital.
He is not a bad man."

She could feel that Tsukiyo had calmed down some, but she
was still sobbing. Dismissing the illusions, the demon hugged the girl to her.
After what seemed to be a long time, Tsukiyo looked to Ryoko and spoke up.
"What about the scary man. Is he bad?"

Ryoko shook her head. "No Tsu-chan. He is not a bad
man."

The girl looked doubtful. "Then why was he yelling? How
can you tell? He was really angry and angry people usually hurt me!"

Ryoko gave the girl a sad smile. "It is an animal
instinct that tells me when to trust and when not to. If you want, I can give
you this sense to help you."

Tsukiyo looked wide eyed. "You can do that?"
Seeing Ryoko nod she smiled. "Thanks nee-chan!"

Ryoko smiled as Tsukiyo hugged her. She started to leak her
chakra into the girls�f body to make the change. After a couple minutes, she was
done. "There, you now will be able to tell when someone means you harm
whether they hide it or not. Now back to the man that is now with us. He was
angry because someone where he comes from tricked him and now he is stuck here.
He will not hurt you so you don't have to be afraid of him."

Tsukiyo's eyes went wide. "He's still here?"

Ryoko nodded as she looked out towards the hallway.
"Come on out Naruto. I think you should properly introduce yourself."

As Naruto stepped out of the shadows, Ryoko could feel
Tsukiyo tighten her grip on her kimono. As Naruto stopped a couple feet from
the bars he smiled and bowed. "Hello, my name is Uzumaki Naruto, Rokudaime
Hokage, at your service."

As the council members that were not called to stay left the
room, Sarutobi let out a sigh. Once there were only those that had pledged
their clans�f protection for the girl left, he continued "Now, as for the
matter that I wanted to speak to you about. I will be taking Tsukiyo into my
home so as to protect her and so I can begin her training. I want her to be
able to protect herself and have a happy life."

Hiashi rose and after a nod from Sarutobi, he spoke. "I
am afraid I cannot allow that Hokage-sama." Raising his hand to stem any
response, he continued. "I am afraid that you are too busy with your
duties to the village to properly care for or train the girl. That is why I
suggest one of us to take her in. I would volunteer, but the Hyuuga Council and
I do not see eye to eye on this matter and they would most likely see to
turning her into their personal weapon."

With a tired sigh, the Hokage slumped into his seat. "I
see your point Hiashi."

It was at this time Yamanaka Inoichi stood. "I would
like to take her in. After such a traumatic experience I think she would be
better off in a home with as few males as possible and with my knowledge of
psychiatry I could help her over come the experience. I also have a daughter
her age that I think would be glad to take her on as a friend and sister."

Sarutobi smiled, remembering little Ino. "Ah yes, Ino
would make a great friend for Tsukiyo. If there�fs no objections," Looking
to the rest of the clan heads looking for and hint's of doubt, he smiled.
"Then it's settled. Uzumaki Tsukiyo will now be staying with you, Inoichi.
I'll have her stuff packed and moved to your house by noon tomorrow. Now, there
is one final thing I would like to discuss. It seems that Tsukiyo has had
contact with the Kyuubi and sees her as an older sister figure." Seeing
the shock and worry on their faces, he continued. "I was going to request
an S-ranked mission from you Inoichi, to enter the girls�f mind and determine
the level of this possible threat. If, indeed, there is need to worry. I will
contact Jiraiya to see what can be done."

Inoichi looked apprehensive, but nodded. "Hai
Hokage-sama."

Sarutobi stood and moved to the door. "You�fre
dismissed; I will keep you informed on what happens. Inoichi, please follow
me."

As Sarutobi and Inoichi came to the door to Tsukiyo's room,
they noticed that the ANBU that was standing guard had still wet blood on his
mask and the walls were splattered with it. The aged Hokage let out a sigh.
"Then it is as I feared. They tried to kill her while I was called to the
council."

The dog-masked ANBU nodded. "Yes Hokage-sama. Three
Jounin level ninja tried to enter the room, but were stopped after lethal force
was used."

Sarutobi nodded as he released the seal he placed on the
door. "I want you to keep watch until she leaves the hospital."
Getting a nod, he led Inoichi into the room. Looking under the bed, he found
the girl still tucked in a tight ball in the back corner. "She's sleeping
at the moment. Can you go in now or would you like to wait?"

Inoichi just made himself comfortable sitting on the floor.
"I will do it now Hokage-sama. If she is in contact with the demon I will
be able to see how they interact." Quickly doing the seals for the
Shintenshin he entered the girls mind.

Tsukiyo's eye went wide. "You're a Hokage!" She
then noticed he looked like the fourth big head on the mountain. "But I
thought you died sealing the demon in me! And don't you mean Yondaime?"
Then a light went off in her brain and lit up her eyes. "You�fre an Uzumaki
too?! I thought I was alone!"

Swearing at himself in his head, he stumbled for an answer.
Ryoko saw his hesitation and smiled. "Tell her the truth. It would be
counter-productive to lie and you�fre here to help her."

Letting out a sigh, he sat down. "This may take a
while." It took a while to tell her about how he came to be in her mind
and a little about his life and he answered almost all her questions except the
one where she asked if he knew who their parents were. He wanted to tell her
about their father, but that could be dangerous information if it got out. It
had taken about an hour to go over everything, but now they were finished so he
stood up. "You know, sitting on a wet floor gets really annoying."

Tsukiyo had really got hooked into Naruto's story and when
he mentioned the floor she became down trodden. "I'm sorry my head is a
sewer, nii-san."

Naruto just squatted down and ruffled the girls�f hair.
"Don't worry, I�fll show you how to change it." Just as he finished
his sentence he and Ryoko felt a presence enter the room. Recognizing the feel
of the aura, he smiled.

As Inoichi approached, he noticed a man outside the cage he
got worried. He instantly thought Naruto was the demon and had somehow escaped,
for Naruto was blocking his view of both Ryoko and Tsukiyo. "How did you
get free Kyuubi, and where is the child?"

Naruto chuckled as he looked straight at Ryoko. "You
know, on any normal day I'd take offense at being called a demon,"
Standing up and stepping aside as he turned to Inoichi he smiled. "But in
this world I think I'll take that as a compliment." Ryoko was thankful
that Naruto wasn't looking at her because she was sure that she was most likely
blushing.

Taking on a more commanding pose as he had learned to do as
Hokage, he looked straight into Inoichi�fs eyes. "You know Inoichi,
entering someone's mind without permission when not in a combat or mission
situation is a big taboo in your clan, if I remember correctly, so that would
lead me to believe the old man put you up to it."

Inoichi stopped dead in his tracks as he saw a tall blond
man wearing a white sleeveless coat that came to inches above the floor with an
embroidered red flame design along the bottom and mesh long-sleeve shirt.
Underneath, he wore black ANBU pants with combat boots and a Konoha Haiti-tai
was worn on his brow. Inoichi's breathing stopped as he let out a single word
slip "Arashi?"

At hearing Inoichi use his father�fs name, he smiled.
"Please Inoichi, flattery will get you nowhere. I am not Arashi, I am
Naruto Uzumaki."

At this Tsukiyo stepped forward and glared at Inoichi as she
declared Naruto's title. "Yeah, he's the Rokudaime Hokage of the other
Konoha, so show some respect!"

Naruto inwardly groaned at this, but still couldn't help but
chuckle at Inoichi's flabbergasted appearance at the statement. After doing an
amazing rendition of a fish he just looked at Tsukiyo. "But there hasn't
even been a Godaime Hokage, how can there be a Rokudaime? And what do you mean 'other
Konoha'?"

Naruto groaned. "You know, this will be the third time
I've had to tell this story." Seeing Inoichi's questioning look, he gave
him a quick and abbreviated version.

By the end Inoichi was full of questions. "If what you
say is true, then why didn't you try and find some sort of paradise?"

Before Naruto could answer, Tsukiyo spoke up. "Because
something taken is worthless, but something earned is worth everything, right
nii-san?"

Naruto looked to his little sister and smiled "Right!
If you remember that and the other things I will teach you, you will go far in
life. Maybe even become a Hokage yourself."

Inoichi smiled. "Arashi used to say that. Matter of
fact, it was in his address to Konoha after being declared the Yondaime
Hokage."

"While all this talking is fun, I'm willing to guess
you're here because of me." Inoichi flinched when Ryoko stood up and
stepped up to the bars, her nine fox tails flowing behind her, and crossed her
arms. "You were probably sent to see if I was a threat to the child, and
if I was somehow corrupting the girl to hate the village."

Inoichi nodded. "If I was to deem you a threat we would
be contacting Jiraiya to see if the seal could be reinforced."

Hearing this, Tsukiyo got angry. "If it wasn't for
nee-chan, I'd be dead right now! You can't take her away from me! Why does
everyone hate her? It was the bad people that took nee-chan's son that are to
blame!"

This revelation shocked Inoichi, and when he looked to
Kyuubi to ask if it was true, he could see the pain and sorrow in her eyes. He
had seen it in my people, but to see it in a demon was something else. He
couldn't help but think if someone had taken Ino, he would kill anything in his
way from saving her. "So this is the reason you attacked? But you are the
only demon in Konoha. Are you sure it was a Konoha shinobi?"

Ryoko glared at Inoichi. "The man that took my child
wore the symbol of this village upon his brow. I was able gouge out one of his
eyes and rip off an arm before his comrades stopped me with a barrier of some
sort while he disappeared. After I killed his colleges, I searched for the
origins of the men that attacked me by asking where the village that used a
leaf for its symbol was located. That led me here. When I was confronted by
your shinobi, I lashed out. I was in no mood to talk, for I had come to free my
son and destroy those that dared to anger me. The rest you already know."
Looking away from the others, Ryoko continued. "I tell you this not to
justify my actions, but to show that I mean no harm to this child, for I
consider her one of my own."

Inoichi looked from the Kyuubi to Naruto and back a couple
of times before he sighed. "I don't know, this is a lot to take in. Then
there is the fact that all this could be a plot to win your freedom, but I
somehow doubt that. I will tell Hokage-sama all I have learned here and let him
decide." Looking down at Tsukiyo, he smiled softly. "But I also bring
good news. As of tonight Tsukiyo, you will be living with me and my family. You
have gone too long without someone to look after you, and even if these two
prove to be truthful, they will not be able to help you in your day to day
life."

Tsukiyo was conflicted on what to think. On one hand, she
had always wanted parents, but on the other this man might have her nee-chan
taken away. Still not sure of what was being offered. she asked while trying to
hide the hope she was feeling. "You mean you want to adopt me?"

Inoichi smiled, seeing the sparkle of hope in the girls�f
eyes. "Yes, I have already cleared it with the Hokage, and you will meet
the rest of my family tomorrow when you are released from the hospital."

Tsukiyo nodded to herself before stepping up to Inoichi and
held out her hand "As long as you promise not to take nee-chan away."

Inoichi frowned. "It's not up to me Tsukiyo; it's up to
the Hokage."

"Then I'm just going to have to tell him he can't take
my nee-chan!" She turned to Ryoko. "I'm ready to go back and tell
Jiji my terms."

Ryoko smiled and Tsukiyo faded away. With a bow, Inoichi too
made to exit, but Naruto stopped him. "Are you also going to be preparing
her for the academy?"

Inoichi nodded. "Yes, I'm going to be teaching her and
my daughter Ino the basics of chakra and possibly how to use kunai, why?"

Naruto grinned. "I plan to have her tree climbing
within a year tops, and hopefully by the time she enters the academy she will
be able to perform the Kage Bunshin."

Inoichi�fs jaw dropped before he went into over-protective
father mode. "That's too much to ask of one so young! Not to mention the
Kage Bunshin is a kinjutsu and could kill the girl!"

When Naruto chuckled, he could see Inoichi become more
aggressive and his hand slide to kunai holster out of habit. "I think you
underestimate her. She already has the chakra capacity of a newly graduated
genin and that's only going to increase with time. You see, the seal is
constantly siphoning a small amount of Kyuubi's chakra thus expanding
Tsu-chan's capacity. If she is not trained to control it now it will be a hell
of a lot harder later when she graduates. Believe me, I had a high Chuunin to
low Jounin chakra capacity when I graduated and that was without formal
training. You have no idea what it's like trying to learn control when you have
that much chakra. As for the Kage Bunshin killing her, that is almost
impossible, for she'll always have us to keep her from dying from chakra
depletion."

Inoichi grudgingly had to agree with Naruto's statement.
"Aren't you afraid she'll end up being used as a weapon? If it was to be
known that she had this much power, the council would use her for missions
she's not mentally ready for!"

Naruto's expression became serious. "And I trust the
old man to keep that from happening. As long as he's alive, she'll be
fine."

Inoichi nodded. "Just in case, I'll tell her other
protectorates of this so they can help."

Here, Naruto quirked an eyebrow. "Protectorates?"

Inoichi smiled. "Yes, after what happened to her,
Inuzuka Tsume declared her under Inuzuka clan protection. Hiashi, Shikaku,
Choza and I also put her under our clans�f protection."

Naruto deadpanned "Figures, I had no such luck. If it
hadn't been for the old man, I would have died or ended up a member of
Root."

Inoichi winced. "I should be getting back now."
And after a small bow, he left.

Naruto turned to Ryoko and smiled. "That was
interesting to say the least, but you were very quiet during that
conversation."

Ryoko had been thinking about the gift of animal instincts
that she gave Tsukiyo, and was pondering what other things she might give the
girl. "I'm just thinking what I will be doing to help with her
training."

Naruto suddenly slapped his forehead. "I forgot to tell
her how to change the mindscape!"

When Inoichi returned to the land of the living, he heard
Tsukiyo's voice in a commanding and forceful tone telling the Hokage why he
couldn't take the Kyuubi away from her. She was just finishing her rant to a
flabbergasted Hokage when he stood up. "And if you take her away, I�fll
hate you forever!" Ending it with a pout, she plopped down on her bed with
her arms crossed.

Inoichi had to smile, because not a week earlier Ino had
used the same line to try and get him to agree to getting her a puppy. He had
stood firm, but something told him his life was going to get 'interesting' if
the two teamed up against him. "Tsu-chan, I will talk to the Hokage about
it. I personally don't see any problem with how things are at the moment. As
for you, young lady, it's late and you will have a busy day tomorrow, so lie
down and get some sleep. I'll be back tomorrow to pick you up, and take you to
see your new mom and sister."

With one last cute glare at the old man, she got under the
hospital covers. "Goodnight tou-san, jiji."

Inoichi gave her a kiss on the forehead. "Goodnight
Tsu-chan." And with that he turned and exited the room with the Hokage
right behind him.

Before closing the door, Sarutobi turned down the lights.
"Goodnight Tsu-chan." After the door was shut, he turned to Kakashi.
"You can release the barrier, but you're to continue your watch until
Inoichi here retrieves her tomorrow. After that, I want you and your squad to
report to me."

The dog-masked ANBU nodded "Hai, Hokage-sama."

Inoichi smiled and made a sweeping motion with his hand for
the Hokage to lead onward. "We should go to your office. I'm afraid it'll
be a long night explaining what I have seen and heard."

The aged old man nodded. "Yes I believe there is much
to discuss."

The two men walked off and Kakashi let out a sigh. It was
going to be a long night and he had just gotten the new volume of Icha Icha.
Musing to himself, he smiled. 'If I was a Nara I would have to say this was
troublesome.'

Ryoko turned to Naruto. "So why didn't you tell them
you were a demon?"

Naruto winced. "You noticed, huh?" Scratching his
head sheepishly, he gave her a sad smile. "They don't need to know that.
It was only because of the amounts of demonic chakra Kyuubi forced into my body
that I became one. He thought if I became a demon he might be released. In the
end, it only made me depend on him less."

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Zen: Well here's the next chapter of OMITB. I was going to
update ASLDM first but I have this ready and just sitting here so I figured I'd
update. I just want to put your worries to rest and say that this will be a
Naru/FemKyuu Tsukiyo/??? and I already have her pairing chosen but would like
to see who you would like to see her with!

Mihoshi: Zendura, your T.V. is smoking again!

::Zen grits his teeth:: I'll be there in a minute. Incalu,
if you�fre asking why Naruto ended up in the mind of a female him it was just
because that was the dimension he ended up.

Mihoshi: That's what you get for using unsanctioned methods
of inter-dimensional travel!

Zen: Well anyway! Kyuubi Fanatic, Kage Husha kind of beat
you to the punch. If you see any errors please tell me about them and I will
correct them, but he has already gone back and Beta'd the entirety of ASLDM and
as thanks, I made him my official Beta.

KH: Sorry Kyuubi Fantastic�cI
hope you can forgive me. The next story can be yours, how�fs that?

Zen: sounds good to me! I got me plans for the next one, but
won't start it for at least a month or two.

Mihoshi: What's a Beta?

Zen: It's someone that pretty much fixes your mistakes for
you.

Mihoshi: Like Kiyone!

Zen: Yes, like Kiyone. Speaking of which when will she be
picking you up?

Mihoshi: Huh?

::Zen slams his head on the keyboard:: You haven't even
called her have you?

Mihoshi: Why? Was I supposed too?

::Zen slams his head on the keyboard a couple more times::
Any who, I hoped you liked the update. See you again real soon!
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