With These Bloody Hands | By : Delores Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 1503 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
FF.net Review Response:
SupaSaiyajin: I was aiming for different. I wanted to
be unique, sort of. This came unexpectedly fast since my beta-reader told me
she found no mistakes, though I’m sure there are some, just none that she could
find.
Iceheart19: Unfortunately I have found no way to put
the Sharingan in for Sasuke, but mind you I will. Because where there’s a will
there’s a way. I’m glad that you found my beginning interesting.
xxphatxbaybeexx: Right away! I’ll send it to you once I’ve posted this new
chapter.
eyes0nme19: So many people find this interesting, it
makes me have a funny feeling in my stomach. It’s a good feeling though. I plan
on writing this for a long time, don’t know how long, and just know that it’ll
be long.
Watermelon Gal: You want to know why Sasuke wants to
kill Naruto? Hmm…that has to do with his past; mind you it isn’t a personal
grudge against Naruto in general.
Me: This is an AU and sometimes in an AU ages are
really different. My own little theory you could say. Naruto is in a high
school, whilst Sasuke and Sakura are in college. Just to let you know, I won’t
ignore a reviewer, all of you guys deserve respect for coming out of the
shadows and praising me.
BlondShinobi: I’ll continue writing. The Yuri though,
will be light since I’m inexperienced in that area, but I might write a lemon
just for the heck of it. Wait a bit and you’ll see some Yuri!
Shiin: Another person who find’s this story
interesting. God must love me today.
SexySiriusBlack: ^_^ I dare!
Suukou: I might, but if I do it’ll be a while before
any of that stuff comes into play. I’ll send you the picture after I post this.
So expect to see it soon.
Kashshaptu: ^_^ I’m glad so many people like this.
Here’s the update. Sorry to anyone expecting a longer chapter…but this had to
be done short.
Well, today was unusual, Sasuke thought as he walked
to his apartment. Somehow, someway Sakura had gotten gum in the lower end of
her hair. Ino in attempts to save it had to chop of most of it, but thede
de
it into a better short cut. Sakura was extremely sad, so Sasuke felt nice and
had told her that she looked better with short hair that seemed to cheer her
up.
Sasuke chuckled at that, Sakura was so easily pleased, and a
simple compliment would last her days. I wonder what that cute blondes
doing? After that thought Sasuke stopped in his tracks and blinked. I’m
thinking about him too much. Sasuke shook his head in attempts to clear his
head of thoughts on the blond boy. Ino has blond hair and blue eyes too, but
she doesn’t look as good.
Sighing, Sasuke realized that there was no way the blond
would leave his mind alone. Upon entering his small apartment he stopped
thinking about the blond. He had to decide what he was going to have for
dinner.
Should out out or stay in?
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Naruto had later returned to class. It took him the three
whole periods he was with Hinata to convince her that he was all right. She had
insisted on taking him to Ichiraku Ramen for dinner and being Naruto he
couldn’t refuse. When it came to thinking about the onyx-eyed man from last
night, Naruto did what he does best; he didn’t think. It kept him from asking
to many questions that would go unanswered for a long time.
So when he got home he told Iruka that he would be missing
dinner and ran upstairs to change. He took of his blue shirt and replaced it
with a red one, and then he took of his baggy tan pants and put on black baggy
shorts. With that done he brushed his hair and put the hair clips in place.
Then he admired himself in the mirror and dully noted his piercing’s. On his
left ear there were two in the cartilage and three below, maybe he could put
another hoop in the cartilage later. His right ear had no piercing’s.
With a glance at the clock Naruto realized that he would be
late if he didn’t hurry up. So he ran down the stairs, shouted good-bye, and
slammed the door shut. Soon he would be at Ichiraku Ramen and he could eat.
Now my life can turn back to being normal.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Since Sakura had gotten a compliment out of Sasuke, at the
cost of her long hair, Ino had decided to take her out to eat. Both being short
on money they thought of going someplace cheap. The only real problem now was;
what were they going to wear? It couldn’t be too flashy, or expensive.
Rummaging through Sakura’s closet they found a tan pair of
Capri’s, along with a red spaghetti strap shirt. Sakura put that on along with
a pair of sandals. Ino decided to keep on what she had; purple short shorts, a
violet spaghetti strap shirt, and a pair of purple sneakers. It was obvious
what Ino’s favorite color was, she wore it every chance she could get.
Both had to admit that the other looked good in casual wear.
Maybe I should wear stuff like this more often, Sakura thought.
“Sakura-chan, you should wear casual clothing more often.” Ino said and Sakura
nodded showing she thought it was a good idea. Sakura and Ino said good-bye to
the empty house and began walking to Ichiraku Ramen.
Maybe Shika-chan will be there! (Ino’s thoughts)
If Shikamaru’s there then we can get a good deal.
(Sakura’s thoughts)
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Ichiraku Ramen – I hope I spelled it right.
Shikamaru – 17
Note: The chapters short because it has to be, next one
might be longer.
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