Revenge | By : PhoenixInnocence Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male > Naruto/Sasuke Views: 1885 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 3 |
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Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto and I make no profit from this story.
AN: I wanted to start off by apologizing for my tardiness. I forgot to mention in the last chapter that I would be late with getting this one out. I knew there were problems with this chapter when I went to edit it and I found it hard to work around. So, on another note: I weathered Sandy just fine and only suffered about an hour of no electricity. There was no flooding in the area, but there were downed trees and power lines in other parts of the city. That’s what you get with 50+mph winds. To MisatosPenPen: Sorry, I’m still harping on the cell phone tower. I’ll have to make a note of pointing that out in the chapter about it taking a day. It would make it seem more authentic then. I hope the speech tags in the last chapter were enough to follow who was speaking and since you didn’t mention anything about being confused, I’m assuming they were fine. :D Maybe Madara should have taken a picture of Sasuke; it certainly wouldn’t have hurt his chances. But then, Naruto trusts his word so easily without doubt. And, yes, let’s hope the plan works. We shall see. To Angel_Davis: Thank you. I debated whether I should cut that scene with Tsunade out or not. Now I’m glad I didn’t.
Chapter Eighteen
June 21st
I arrived at the conclusion, due to constant snickering, that the two men standing sentinel by the front door found my current predicament amusing. No matter how much I struggled I couldn’t break Madara’s hold on me, trapped against his chest. I growled in annoyance and struggled in his hold, but for an older guy he certainly was stronger than I was and held me steadfast; to the other two’s amusement.
With the way they looked they were laughing at me? The one was lean with short platinum-blonde hair, his shirt opened to bare chest. The other’s face was half hidden, but from what I could see of him, stitches riddled his body…or where they tattoo. I really hope they were tattoos. I wasn’t amused when Madara chuckled and tangled his hand into my hair, running his rough fingers through the clean strands. I gave a deep grunt and pushed against his arm, my face heating up with the exertion, my cheeks puffed out as I held my breath. But his arm wouldn’t budge and I exhaled going limp with exhaustion. But still his hand continued to pet me and it was starting to give me the creeps. I wanted it to stop. Enough was enough! “Will you cut it out? I am not a dog!” I snapped at the end of my rope. “Why?” He asked. “I enjoy the texture beneath my fingers; you have such silky hair, Naruto. Just like your father.” “How nice.” I grumbled. At one time I would have appreciated the comparison to my Dad, but coming from this creep, it just disturbed me. I didn’t want to think that way. “Must you be this way Naruto?” He sighed, inhaling the scent from my hair. “I could give you everything you ever wanted in life you know. Just ask and I will give it to you.” I stopped struggling, relaxing slightly in his grip. Arching a brow, I asked, “Anything?” “Yes, anything for you, Naruto.” Madara assured me, kissing my neck. I suppressed a shudder and grimaced. This was disgusting, this guy was disgusting! Couldn’t he tell I was clearly not into him? “Ok, this is what I want. I want Sasuke! Bring him to me; and while you’re at it I want my Mom and Dad, too.” I hissed, cringing at the pain in my heart at the mere thought of Sasuke. His pain was the freshest. “Go ahead, I’m waiting.” Madara snarled in my ear and shoved me away. “You ask the impossible!” “Duh, that was the point you ass! You can’t give me what I want because you are the one that took it from me!” “Why must you try my patience like this?” He snapped and struck me across the face, hard. I stumbled to the ground, seeing white, and the last thing I saw was the beige carpet as I slipped into unconsciousness. I woke stiff on a bed that wasn’t my own in a place that wasn’t my own and unclear how I got there. I huddled under the blankets for warmth as the early morning sun shone at my back. I wanted to lie here and never move again…And then the memories flooded back leaving me cold even to the vibrant rays of sun. I wish I could cease thinking altogether, it was better if I didn’t have to. But that was all I seemed to do; and depressing thoughts they were. Everyone must be worried sick about me; Iruka and Kakashi, Sakura and Tsunade, Neji and Gaara; everyone. What were they doing at this moment? Were they still looking for me or did they believe I was dead by now? As much as I wanted them to look for me it was better if they didn’t. I didn’t want the responsibility if anything happened to them because of me. They shouldn’t suffer further, not after Itachi and Sas… NO, I didn’t want to think about him! That pain would eat me alive if I allowed it. I wasn’t ready. I was being a coward. I was hurt, in heart and body. With that thought I touched my cheek tenderly, wincing at the sharp pain just a slight touch produced. Ouch, that really hurt. But deep down, I felt like I deserved this pain. I deserved it for being so stupid; though it was a hard pill to swallow that I actually passed out. I bet there was even a bruise there, yeah it definitely bruised as I touched the tender flesh again and hissed. “Are you finally awake, Naruto?” Madara laughed. I shot out of the blankets and against the headboard in shock. I saw the woman, Konan, move towards me slowly and sit down at the end of my bed. She was holding another cup of water and held it out to me. I grabbed it and downed it, suddenly extremely thirsty. “Are you hungry?” She asked softly. Her tone was caring and had a mother-like quality to it. It was a nice contrast to the harsh tone of the others and seemed oddly familiar to me. “Yes.” I nodded, focusing on her instead of the man leering at me. Why was she being so nice to me? Was it because she was a woman? I knew they had instincts like that. I’d seen it many times with the moms, and some dads, of the young boys in my class when they came to parent-teacher conferences. But I was not a boy, but a young man. So her actions were confusing to me. “Why don’t you join me at the table then?” She held out her hand and I reached out hesitantly. She wrapped her hand around mine and pulled me forward, leading me to the table. Her hands were warm and soft, unlike Madara’s rough and dry. I turned back to look at Madara, afraid that he was following us, but he made no move from his usual chair. His grin was wide, staring at my retreat. I turned back to Konan, swallowing around the lump in my throat. Why was he staring at me all the time? If he took a picture it would last longer, but I didn’t want him to have a picture of me either. I sat down and pulled a plate of steaming food towards me, digging in despite my hesitancy. They could have poisoned the food, but I was so hungry and I hadn’t eaten since yesterday with Sasuke… I felt my stomach drop and the food turn rancid in my mouth. I forced myself to swallow and downed another glass of water. No matter how much I tried I couldn’t stop thinking about him! “When you are done, Naruto, I have something to show you.” Madara stated, interrupting my thoughts. I forced myself to slow my eating, taking as much time as possible and delaying when I would have to be in close proximity to him. He just laughed at my obvious antics. “I’ve waited 16 years, take all the time you need.”
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AN: So, I should say that I still feel this chapter is anti-climactic. I can't seem to write action sequences very well, no matter how much I try. That's something I intend to work on as my writing progresses, if it progresses. LOL.
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