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When A Heart Cracks	By : SirGeneralSir Category: Naruto AU/AR > Threesomes/Moresomes Views: 45420 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 5
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Having had to battle the cult and save Naruto, Tsunade gave everyone involved a few days leave from having to do any missions.
Hinata found that despite the battle and wandering the cave, she was far too restless to just sit back and rest.
She started pacing around the new compound but she needed something to do or she would go mad, however as the day went on her restlessness only grew stronger.
Finally she decided she would train in her favorite spot, it was the same place that Naruto once told her that he liked weird girls like her as he left for the tournament of the Chuunin exam.
As she began hitting a practice log, she was also feeling annoyed and very distracted as her thoughts kept wondering over to the love of her life and how he was not there with her.
She couldn’t get her thoughts about Naruto out of her mind, the things they did together in the cave and outside it with Ino and Sakura, how he touched each of them and intended to mate with her, overall she now realized that she was extremely aroused.
She silently cursed to herself when her hand slid off the side of the log missing her intended target.
She was tired of practicing and could feel her need to fuck him growing stronger, she needed to find him and make him mate with her.
“Oi Hinata, wasn’t that one hell of a day, those damned cultists sure fought like hell.
One guy actually had exploding tags stuck to his body and he tried to get the drop on Akio, I’m glad you missed it because what he did to that guy was something of a nightmare.”
Hinata looked out of the corner of her eye as she watched Kiba walking towards her as he continued to talk about something but she simply returning to her practice.
‘What is he doing here? Why can’t he just leave me alone? I don’t even care what he’s talking about. I’m not interested in his pointless babbling -- always talking and trying to make himself sound special while knocking everyone else down.
He doesn’t even shut up to let others get a word in.
I always thought he was an asshole, but now he’s just getting on my nerves.’
As Kiba got closer to her, she noticed that he suddenly stopped and immediately began to sniff the air, taking long deep breaths Hinata could hear him begin walking towards her again but at least he had stopped talking.
As she continued to hit the practice log, Kiba suddenly wrapped his arms around her waist and pressed his now hard cock between her ass cheeks, one hand reaching for her breast while the other went for her crotch as he pressed his face next to her ear.
“I can smell it on you, You’re like a bitch in heat right now just begging to be fucked.
I can take care of that little problem for you, I have exactly what you need right here.”
He whispered into her ear as he pressed his dick even harder against her ass, trying to assert his claim to her body.
“No.” Hinata’s voice was full of disgust as she answered the young man.
“What do you mean no? You’re so horny that even you’re panties are wet, just let me fuck you once and you’ll never have to worry about waiting for a man’s dick again.”
He said in a husky voice.
“I said NO! Now leave me alone”
She then elbowed him in the stomach forcing him to let go as he stumbled back a few feet, he glared back at her
“What? You think you can just deny me like that? Who do you think is going to take care of this for you? Don’t tell me that your still hung up on Naruto, That dumbass hasn’t noticed you yet and never will. You will just fall into the background like you always did and be forgotten.
I will do you a favor and make you my bitch even if it’s by force!”
He roared as he lunged forward in an attempt to force himself on her.
Hinata spun around and kicked him in the side of the head, sending him flying into the ground at least ten feet away from her.
She then took up a combative stance facing her attacker as she activated her Byakugan.
He slowly got up while glaring at her, he charged running at full speed, and lunged in an attempt to tackle her to the ground.
Not considering her as an opponent that would fight back, intending to overpower the woman he was lusting for.
Hinata quickly struck him in the chest as was about to perform one of the Eight Trigrams, a shadowy figure appeared and grabbed Kiba by the scruff of his jacket and sent him flying back several feet out of range of the deadly attack, bouncing several times before coming to a stop.
“Despicable scum, I should have allowed her to kill you for your dishonorable actions.
I strongly recommend that you run home as fast as your little legs can take you before I decide to do it myself!” Shouted an enraged booming voice from the figure.
Hinata saw that it was Kazuo who intervened and began shouting at the young Inuzuka as his gray eyes suddenly changed to that of the dragon, Hinata and Kiba both shuddered from the feel his massive chakra radiating from him like a tidal wave.
Hinata figured that Kiba must have feared what one of the dragons would do to him as she remembered what she saw, how the other dragons had butchered several of the cultist’s last night but also from what she did hear from Kiba only moments ago.
As Kiba growled in frustration took off running, quickly disappearing in the distance.
Kazuo turned to the young Hyuuga but looked shocked at what he saw.
Hinata could feel that she was shaking as if she was cold, but she was sweating as if she had a fever.
She looked up at him as she fell to her knees as she crossed her arms around her body in a vain attempt to stop her trembling.
“You are clearly very ill, we must seek medical attention immediately”
Kazuo then put Hinata’s arm around his neck and the two disappeared.
Sakura was now just leaving the Hokage fortress when she felt a deep emptiness in her stomach as it growled at her, she had stayed longer to help both Tsunade and Shizune with some paper work as she too had become restless.
But now she realized that she had not eaten for several hours and was starving, her stomach making its pain felt.
She then caught the scent of something in the air, it was sweet and yet spicy at the same time and it called to her and her stomach.
Following the smell she found herself at the Ichiraku Ramen stand, there she quickly ran in only to be flooded by the smell of Miso Ramen.
She had to control herself from drooling all over the counter as her desire for food became even stronger.
“Welcome, Oh Sakura it’s you what can I get for you today?”
Teuchi the owner asked in his normal friendly tone.
“I would like a big serving of some Miso Ramen please.”
“You got it, one Miso ramen coming right up.”
“Are you here by yourself today?”
Sakura asked noticing the old man standing behind the counter alone.
“Yeah, Ayame took the day off to be with Choji this afternoon, but I think she’s setting herself up to get hurt.” The old man said shaking his head.
“What do you mean? Choji is one of the sweetest guys in the village, he would never hurt her.”
Sakura said in shock at Teuchi’s words.
“It’s not that I think he will try to hurt her, but that he will expect the wrong things of her when she is happy doing the things she likes, but I promised her that I would not get involved so all I can do is pick up the pieces afterwards.”
Teuchi then returned to preparing Sakura’s food then handed it to her.
Once Sakura got her food she slowly started to eat at a normal pace but with the growling of her stomach she started eating it faster and faster until she was taking full gulps of the bowl that almost mirrored the number one customer to the shop.
It was not long until it was empty and she ordered another one, before she knew it Sakura had finished four bowls of ramen leaving Teuchi scratching his head as she turned to leave.
“I’m glad to have you as a customer but don’t you think you overdid it a bit? Only Naruto ever eats that much, you will ruin that diet you’ve been working on for so long.”
“Yeah I guess I might have over done it a bit.”
Sakura laughed scratching the back of her head in embarrassment and left.
As she started to head for home she began to feel warm inside, but it was nothing like the sensation of a hot meal.
This was something else and she could feel it on her face and between her legs, warmth that just wouldn’t go away and it was slowly spreading across her body.
Sakura was lost in thought about what was happening to her that she didn’t notice a drunken villager staggering into her path until they collided, knocking both to the ground.
“Ugh, I’m sorry I didn’t see you there.”
Sakura started to apologise to the man.
“bagh, why couldn’t ya watch ... wer ya doing, stuped ... ninjer gerrlie”
The man spat his slurred speech at her, instantly she became pissed and pushed the small man up against the wall of a building, her hand tightly around his throat as her eyes burned with anger.
Suddenly a hand gently rested on her shoulder and a calm soothing voice reached out to her.
“Easy there young lady, he is just a drunk and does not understand what is going on, you would not want to do something regrettable to an innocent civilian now would you?”
Sakura turned to see the silver blue mask of Hiroshi, his red eyes looking back at her as she slowly released the man who didn’t even appear to notice what had just happened as he had just passed out.
‘What am I doing? I could have really hurt this man, just because he talked back to me.’
Once he hit the ground, the man started to grumble back to his feet and looked at some movie poster with a male hero and some typical bimbo on it.
“Wuts ... yer problem bub, I’ll kick yer ass”
The man then fell face first against the wall and slid down to the ground sound asleep.
Sakura couldn’t help but laugh at him now only to be silenced by the flashes of heat building up in her body.
She leaned against the same wall she had pinned the man to and undid her top about half way almost revealing her breasts to the world.
Sakura then started to gently rub at her crotch as the heat in her body continued to build with the most powerful sensation of sexual arousal she had ever felt before.
“Why, why is it so damned hot out here?
This isn’t right at all, I’m so hot and my body won’t stop trembling.”
Hiroshi looked at her with concerned filled eyes as he tried to analyze the situation.
“Your temperature has dramatically increased. We must get you to the hospital immediately.”
Hiroshi then lifted the small woman into his arms and disappeared in a blur as he jumped into the air, Sakura shuddered at the sensation of his chakra propelling them at near breakneck speeds.
An hour later, Akako knocked down the door of Ino’s apartment desperately looking for her.
‘I must find her, Sakura and Hinata are in the hospital now, whatever has infected them may be affecting her as well, she must be brought to the hospital immediately’
Running through the first floor rooms calling out to the young woman, Akako was looking for anything that was out of place when she heard a thud upstairs.
Running at lightning speed she ran up the stairs to what appeared to be Ino’s room.
Inside Akako found Ino kneeling on the floor of her bedroom, sweat pouring down her body as she shuddered.
Akako started to walk towards the young blond as Ino realized she was not alone and looked up at the masked woman.
Ino’s eyes were full of confusion and desperation. Her body trembled as she looked in Akako’s green eyes as it was the only thing that could be seen behind the white mask.
“Come with me and I will take you to the hospital, we will do everything in our power to help you.”
‘Ino can’t even move, and she’s panting like an animal trying to cool its self off, she’s burning up just like the other two.’
Akako then lifted the small girl up and disappeared out her open window.
A few hours later, Shizune was running down one of the many hallways in the Konoha hospital with a large bundle of papers in her hands, just as she turned a corner she saw her master.

“Tsunade-Sama, it’s just been confirmed that all three of them have been infected by it, but not only that they seem to be getting worse. We’ve had to heavily sedate them but their bodies are burning it up, If something isn’t done soon, I’m afraid that they may die in the next few days.”
Tsunade grabbed the papers from her assistant and looked them over, her eyes clearly focused as she scanned the pages, taking in every detail about the findings.
“I have never heard of anything like this before, their chakra network is running wild and their bodies are acting like it’s trying to fight off some kind of infection, but they are acting completely different.”
“Perhaps we can be of some assistance Tsunade-San.”
Shizune and her master looked towards the now familiar voice of Daiki to see that he and the rest of the dragons were with him ready to aid in any way possible.
“At this point I’m open to any suggestions, I’ve gone over the books but nothing has even come close to what I’m seeing here.”
Tsunade then handed the older man the papers detailing the condition of the three young women.
‘If there is anything they can do to help it would put us even more indebted to them for everything they have already done for us’
Shizune thought as she watched Daiki slowly look over the papers, only to close his eyes for several moments in thought.
“Tsunade-San, I have my suspicions but I cannot confirm them at this time, for now all we can offer is to use seals to work as a bandage, it will not stop the condition but it will slow it much like the seal that we placed on Naruto to slow the poison.
With your permission, we would like to place a seal on them as well.”
“At this rate they will only have a few days to live, if your seal can extend that time until we find a cure for them, I would be more than happy to do so.
Shizune, please lead them to our patients, there is someone else that I need to check up on first.”
“Tsunade-San, if you are going to see our young friend, Bishamon, Akio and I would like to join you, the others can handle the seals.”
“You think he’s connected to it too don’t you”
“In directly I do, I had warned them before entering the cave that he was leaking unstable Chakra, it is possible that it entered their systems, Cho will inform me of her findings on her end but until we have more answers we can only speculate.”
As Cho and the others followed Shizune to the a quarantined room, they could hear the voices of the three women screaming and cursing from behind the door, demanding to be released or begging for help.
Outside the door sitting in chairs along the walls was Hinata’s father, Hyuuga Hiashi, Sakura’s father Haruno Kizashi and mother Mebuki along with Ino’s father Yamanaka Inoichi.
The moment that they noticed Shizune, she was rushed by the concerned parents, all of them asking about the wellbeing of their respected child.
“Silence your selves, we are still in a hospital and you will conduct yourselves accordingly or I shall show you the exit from the top floor!” Cho sternly warned the slightly panicked parents.
“Thank you Cho, as for your concerns about your child, we still do not have any news at this time, our friends will be performing a seal on them to try and temporarily limit the effects of their conditions, if there is any other news you will be contacted, I recommend that you go home and get some rest.”
Shizune opened the door to reveal a nurse removing a needle from Sakura having finished sedating her, just like Ino and Hinata.
They were each strapped to beds with straps tied just above their elbows, another set of straps tied down just above the knee.
Chakra suppressing chains were used around their wrists and ankles preventing them from trying to escape, once they were all inside Shizune closed and locked the door behind her as the nurse left.
Cho moved over to Sakura and began to use her medical jutsu to scan the girl, she noticed that Sakura had an elevated temperature and her face was flushed.
Her breathing was shallow and irregular, but what caught her attention the most what that her hormonal levels were also being affected to extreme levels.
She then repeated the process with Ino and Hinata, once she finished Cho moved away and faced the others in the room.
“The original findings are mostly correct, their chakra is imbalanced but it is not causing the unstable mentality in them.
I do have some suspicions but that can wait, we must place a chakra dampening seal on them, while the chakra imbalance isn’t the cause it is affecting them.
Shizune-San we will need your assistance to monitor Sakura, Akako will observe Ino and Kameyo will watch Hinata while the rest of us place the seals on them.”
Cho and Juro stood on opposite sides of Sakura as she looked past them in an obviously drugged state, the two cut opened the top of her hospital gown covering her globes of flesh, Sakura’s erect little nubs stabbing into the air proving Cho with more information on her physical state.
Hiroshi and Kaemon stood next to Ino and repeated the same process opening her gown in the same manner, Ino had slightly larger breasts and her nipples were just as erect as Sakura’s, again Cho took note of this.
Hisako and Kazuo standing next to Hinata, opened up her gown revealing her mountains of flesh, just like the other girls her nipples were reaching for the sky and clearly swollen, Cho took notice of the odd abnormalities as she analyzed the data.
“This is most interesting indeed, Shizune-San did you or Tsunade-San check their reproductive cycles during your tests?”
“Eh? No, we didn’t think that such a test was necessary, did you find something?”
Cho then lifted the lower half of Sakura’s gown revealing her panties had a wet mark around her pussy, she then looked over to Hiroshi, only to find the same results with Ino, Hisako revealed Hinata’s lower half revealing the same condition.
Kazuo looked up to Cho gaining her attention.
“It would appear that in a way, the three of them are in a hyperactively aroused state, almost as if they were in heat.
It would explain Kiba’s reaction towards Hinata to the point of almost raping her, considering her emotional attachment towards Naruto, I can only assume that in her mind she has already found her mate, but that alone would not explain the other two.”
“Perhaps something happened in the cave that they were not comfortable revealing to us, if Naruto’s unstable chakra entered their bodies while they were sexually aroused, it could have triggered something primal in them due to his primal state.”
Hisako said as she watched the others tending to the girls.
“Look at this, it would appear that there is more to this condition than we first suspected.”
Kaemon said as Cho moved over towards him.
“What I do here, I do as a medic.”
Kaemon then gently squeezed Ino’s breast and as a small stream of milk started to flow from her nipple as the young woman also let out a low moan of pleasure.
Cho began to process the information then looked to Hisako and Juro, giving them both a nod. They too squeezed the breast of Sakura and Hinata, revealing that they too were lactating as well getting a moan from said girl.
“This is most puzzling, regardless we must place the seals on them now or the damage to their bodies may become irreversible, not to mention the psychological damage that may already be done.”
Cho then looked at the young woman on the bed as she concentrated on the task at hand and silently though to her self
‘I hope that this works, this is the only seal pattern that we have available that could help them, if not they will die in the next few days.’
The six dragon warriors that were beside the young women began to make identical hand signs while channeling massive amounts of chakra.
Juro, Kaemon and Kazuo each slapped an open hand on one of the girl’s stomach creating a twelve divination sign seal, their golden chakra glowing over the various signs and symbols.
As soon as they were finished their task, Cho, Hisako and Hiroshi slapped their hands in the same location creating a nine divination seal over the already existing seal.
“Excuse me Cho-San, but why do you have an even and odd seal on them? Wouldn’t that create a disruption in their already unstable chakra?”
Shizune asked looking at the other woman once she finished the second seal.
“That is the point. The first seal is to dampen their chakra, while the second one disrupts what chakra they will have, just enough that it won’t kill them.
This should allow them to calm down just enough that they won’t be driven mad, or have their bodies shut down due to an over load of their cerebral cortex ultimately killing them.”
Cho watched Shizune process the information and began to take notes, making sure what she said would work out, only to see the Hokage’s apprentice smile, clearly agreeing with her assessment.
They stayed in the room to continue to observe the three women and make sure that no new issues presented themselves.
Daiki, Akio and Bishamon had followed Tsunade into an underground bunker of the Hokage fortress and the old man’s thoughts began to wonder.
‘If my calculations are correct, then Naruto should be somewhat himself again, it’s a good thing we made that short stop. Knowing him, this would be just what he needs to snap out of it should the need arise.’
Turning down another passage they arrived at a large metal vault door with several seals placed on it, Tsunade made a few quick hand signs and released them, she entered the room followed by her male companions.
As they entered the room they found the area Naruto would have been in was unusually dark as many of the lights appeared to be out, Tsunade walked over to a set of light switches and flicked several of them to no end.
There soon came the sound of something metallic rolling along the floor, in what little light they did have, a pendant light fixture had slowly rolled at Tsunade’s feet.
“Naruto?”
She called out trying to see him in the darkness, the only reply was silence.
Daiki casually walked up to the edge of the darkness with a knowing smile on his face, both hands behind his back as he held a small brown bag.
Tsunade then lit a small lantern revealing Naruto standing face to face with the elder dragon, his primal features remained unchanged.
Naruto’s wild hair was shoulder length with red streaks, his eyes while still the lovely blue housed slit pupils were narrowed, his upper canines clearly sticking out his mouth and his whiskers were twice as defined.
He radiated power as his physique had thickened making him look like a god, both to be admired and feared.
The blank look on Naruto’s face showed no emotion behind it as he and Daiki stared at each other, Daiki slowly presented the bag to Naruto and opened it up, the smell of ramen quickly started to fill the small room.
Naruto not taking his eyes off the old man began to sniff the air several times, his eyes brightened as he slowly looked in the bag to see its contents.
“Naruto-San, Teuchi and Ayame have been worried about you, they said even though it’s a new stand, it’s just not the same without you there.
I told them that I needed an order just for you, sufficed to say that I am impressed that you can eat as much as this, they made every one of your favorite Ramen dishes, a total of ten containers just for you.”
“Ayame ... Teuchi?”
Naruto asked as he looked back up to the old man, clearly in thought trying to place the names with faces.
For several moments he stood there looking at Daiki, then his face lit up in a smile.
“I remember the old man now, and Ayame-Chan, they were the first ones beside the third to ever be nice to me, and they let me eat there like a normal person.”
A single tear then fell from Naruto’s eye.
“They wanted me to make sure that you get this food, it’s been a while since you last ate something.”
Naruto took the bag and moved into the darkness of the room, Tsunade coming closer revealing him sitting on the bed as he began to eat his food.
“Naruto, we need to do some tests on you, are you ok with that?”
“Obaa-Chan?”
“Yes Naruto it’s me, how are you feeling right now? Has your memory returned to normal?”
“Things are, fragmented between us, Kurama and I are sharing memories, but he said it should sort its self out soon.
Did ... Did I hurt anyone?”
“The only so called people that you injured Naruto, were the cultists that took the child, and you fought admirably in protecting him, a feat worthy of acknowledgement.”
Bishamon said, his voice clearly full of pride.
“Hyosuke, Is he alright? Did you get to him in time?”
Naruto’s voice was now full of panic.
“Calm yourself my friend, as Bishamon told you, you fought admirably in protecting him.
Akio intercepted the blade before it could reach the child, and used the same weapon to kill the very cultist that threw it.
You are a respectable warrior Naruto-San.”
Hearing Daiki’s words seemed to calm him down and bring out more of his personality.
“Naruto-San, Tsunade and Bishamon need to do some tests on you. The level of contamination from the poison and the effects of our jutsu could have damaged your body in ways that have not yet been detected, will you permit them to do so?”
Naruto gave them a nod as the two approached him, Tsunade placed the lantern on a chair and increased the light so they could see him better.
Both medics began to scan his body as they made mental notes about things that stood out, it only took them a few moments to make the scans, Tsunade then drew some blood from him while Bishamon checked his eyes using a small flashlight from his vest.
Once both medics were finished in their tasks, he quickly finished off the remaining food in the bag then looked at his guests.
“We will have the results of our tests concluded by tomorrow, Naruto do you feel like you are a danger to any one if you were released?”
Tsunade asked as she narrowed her eyes at him, clearly asking the questions as the Hokage and not his surrogate grandmother.
“No, some things are messed up right now but I am in control of myself.
I’m guessing because you asked me, it means that something happened to me during the jutsu.”
“That would be an understatement my friend, your mind was sealed away to make sure that you were not driven into madness, during that time your primal instincts were in control, you were a wild animal but you killed several dozen cultists that threatened not only you, but who also attacked Sakura, Ino and Hinata that went in after you.”
“So I only hurt the cultists, no one from Konoha or any of my friends?”
Naruto asked, looking hopefully into Daiki’s eyes.
“You have my word that no one else was harmed by you.”
Naruto then gave a long sigh of relief, a small smile then spread across his face.
‘He is finally opening up, at last we can see the real man behind the mask.’
Daiki thought to himself.
“How do you mean that things feel messed up? Could you explain it further?”
Akio asked, his voice showing more concern than normal.
“I can see, smell and hear things better, all of my senses are enhanced, I even feel physically stronger than I used to.”
“Your body has changed, growing more defined than before and making your body three times stronger than normal. Your speed should also be effected by that as well, the memory issues should indeed pass soon.”
Bishamon stated in his most professional medical tone.
“That’s awesome. Hey Obaa-Chan, can I leave now? There are some people that I would like to see now that the poison is out of my system. I have to help someone with a school report about my family and clans.”
Tsunade gave him a nod while she frowned the moment he called her Obaa-Chan, she then made several hand signs and the sound of metal breaking and falling to the ground echoed off the walls.
“You are free to go Naruto, just take it easy for a while because not everyone is going to react the same way when they see your new look.”
Naruto looked at her with a questioning expression, he then walked over to the bathroom and turned on the light, the blinding rays at first hurt his eyes but they soon adjusted.
At first he just stood there looking at the thing in the mirror, and then he began to touch and explore the changes in his body as a look of confusion appeared on his face.
“Wh-what is this? Granny I look like a monster now, people are going to panic the moment they see me like this.
They’re going to think that I’m going to go berserk or something, or that I’m going to go on some kind of murders rampage or something.” He blurted out in a panic
Having left the bathroom as he continued to panic as he held his head, Tsunade walked up to him causing him to stop in his train of thought, only to receive a bear hug from the older woman, magically ending his panic attack.
“Idiot, do you really think anyone is going to care what you look like? Yes some people will be shocked at first, but they know you damn it.
The people of this village know who you are, that you would never allow anything to threaten this village or its people, it’s what’s inside your heart that the people see Naruto.
Don’t you ever forget that!” The older blond said in a calm yet stern tone.
Daiki smiled as he listened to the words of the Hokage, her love of the young man in her arms was clearly that of a parent child type of relationship, the way she cradled him in her arms clearly showed how much Naruto meant to her.
Tsunade holding his shoulders stretched her arms out, creating a gap between the two of them as she looked him in the eye as a small smile spread across her lips.
“Naruto, always remember that you have people here that love you, even if you are a moron, Now get out of my dungeon before I change my mind.”
Naruto couldn’t help but smile as he quickly left the dungeon and was now standing on the top of the Hokage fortress looking down on the small city still under construction, the street lights started to turn on with the slowly setting sun, his mind racing as he thought about all the people that he needed to see, his friends and loved ones.
He was just about to leave when he felt someone familiar behind him, a friendly grin spread on his face as he turned to look at his former protector.
“Bishamon-Nii-Chan, I’m glad to see you again.
Is there something wrong?”
“No my brother, I simply wished to inform you that I was proud to have fought by your side, and because of that my honor remains and for that I thank you.
But I also wished to inform you that there are several people looking forward to seeing you again.
The priestess and a young medic are both hoping to see you soon, Shion mentioned something about you making a promise to her over a year ago, and I believe she wants to collect on that.
Both women are together in the eastern wing as Tsunade’s personal guests and have become rather close friends, I recommend seeing them first.”

HOLY HELL Ch 19.
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