Kuro Ran: Black Orchid | By : Snowway32 Category: Naruto AU/AR > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 1865 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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I finally finished this chapter. It took a lot of inventive thought but I managed. I really hope this spar is up to your expectations Smint since I struggled with portraying Minato in a real fight. I studied the manga, anime and evrything I could find and I hope I did him some justice.
Anyways, please enjoy the next chapter. My own jutsus are translated at the bottem of the chapter. For now please enjoy. ---------------------------------- Naruto stared at sparkling blue eyes with defiance; there was no way he was going to lose this spar. Not now, not ever. Minato was an excellent shinobi and it showed; Naruto was panting and clutching as a deep score in his cheek and twirled the kunai around his index finger. That had been a close call. He had managed to catch the kunai just before it had buried itself in his shoulder. He needed to buy more time as one of his clones was still collecting sage chakra and he couldn't use Kyuubi's chakra as stated by the agreement at the beginning of the spar. ~ "Naruto since I want this to be a fair spar I am banning you from using any of Kyuubi's power. If you want to win this; you are going to have to show me your own powers." Minato said with a slight smirk before he leaned forward; breath brushing against Naruto's ear as his hand trailed beneath Naruto's shirt. He gave a triumphant smile as he heard the hitched breath as he placed his hand over the black seal. "Before we leave I'm going to activate Kyuubi's seal; he won't be able to watch or hear what's going on." Minato said and allowed his chakra to flow into the seal and winced when he felt Naruto's fingernails dig into his shoulders; he really was sensitive. "D-d-don't you trust me?" Was Naruto's panted whisper and Minato stepped back and laid a hand on Naruto's forehead; drawing blue eyes towards his own. "I do; but I don't trust Kyuubi. He's a sly bastard, you should know." Naruto nodded against his hand as he stepped back; hands blurring through the specific signs and slamming his fingers on the ground. There was a cloud of smoke as his summons appeared; beady eyes looked up at him. "Naruto! It's been ages! What do you need me for?" The orange and blue frog asked as he hopped closer; he had compressed his size so that he wasn't as big as his father but still big enough to attract attention if human eyes had seen him. "Hey Gamakichi. I'm doing great and I wanted to ask a favour." The toad's head bobbed as he listened to the shinobi's request. "Pop's will be pleased. Wait a few minutes. Ja Na." With that there was another pop as Gamakichi disappeared. ------------------------------------- The wind was cold and it whispered across his sweaty skin and made a shiver travel through his body; it had been centuries since he had last felt the exhilaration of moving like he used to. Weapons; dangerous, sharp and heavy in his pouch reminded him of times long past and gave him the satisfaction of once again doing what he had been born to do. Minato was standing opposite him; five metres away. It was silent, each in its own gauging the other's strength. Gamakichi hadn't been kidding when he said Gamabunta was going to be pleased as the moment they had arrived; the clearing had been surrounded with the entire toad village. "Naruto! Don't get distracted." Minato's voice was a few centimetres to his left and with practised ease he jumped; six shuriken buried in the place where had stood mere seconds before. A breath left him in a sigh of relief and whilst he was soaring through the air he called up four clones; he landed on his feet and smirked. Minato was already charging at him; with his increased speed Naruto could only see a yellow blur; he fell for it hook, line and sinker. In his hands between his fingers were four kunai; making eight whilst one of his clones had darted off to the side with his partner to form a Rasengan and the other two stood beside him and leaped to the side just as Minato reached them. Minato did not stop and only followed the two clones and within two milliseconds Naruto felt their information form in his mind; now it was up to him and the other two. "This way." He yelled and leaped to the side just as his one clone charged with a Rasengan only to be met with another Rasengan head on. It was Minato's own Rasengan. The sudden clash of Rasengan exploded with power around both of them and with another pop his clone was gone; leaving only him. Carefully feeling for his footing, he leapt into the air and launched the eight kunai and cursed when Minato managed to dodge all of them. Somehow he wasn't surprised and smiled towards Minato who had finally stopped moving. "Shuriken: Kage Bunshin!" Minato yelled. Naruto leapt high into the air and he managed to scramble away just in time as one shuriken turned into a thousand and buried themselves in the ground in a seventeen metre radius. 'That was dangerous' was all he managed to think before he felt a searing pain on his cheek and just managed to catch the shadowed kunai before it buried itself in his shoulder. 'Not, yet. He couldn't release his clone yet. He still had to collect more sennin chakra.' He told himself calmly as he brought his hands together in a series of seals; this technique he had only mastered after he merged with the Kyuubi. "Fuuton: fuyu hyaku no senbon!" The wind element technique was powerful and worked in distracting Minato. Naruto gaped as Minato's hands also flashed in a series of seals as he prepared his comeback. "Fuuton: Kuro kaze hekki!" Naruto watched amazed as his technique was stopped by an equally strong wind barrier and cursed colourfully. He was embarrassed at the fact the he had forgotten Minato had the same element as him; he was blushing in his embarrassment but promptly forgot everything as his chakra spiked and washed over him in a comforting blanket. His sennin chakra had just been released. "Sage mode already?" Minato huffed as he dodged to the side; Naruto was fast and his taijitsu stance was something he had yet to see. He frowned, he was going to have to play this carefully. That wind barrier had just taken a lot of his chakra and now he had to deal with the problem of Naruto having just increased his amount of chakra. Sharp blue eyes searched the surrounding area and a smile split his lips; it would work. He summoned the amount of chakra that he needed and flashed through a series of seals only known to him. "Nani?!" Naruto yelled as he felt as if the air around constricted his breathing in an immense amount of pressure. He was breathing harshly as chakra enveloped him and a sudden dizzy spell cloaked his form. Naruto groaned as he held his head only to falter as the ground was taken way beneath him and replaced by a large lake. He wasn't fast enough to summon the chakra needed to balance himself on the water's surface and promptly fell into the freezing water. It was cold and his mind was still trying to figure what the hell had just happened. As he managed to climb his way towards the surface he found Minato already waiting for him. Naruto shot him a glare as he found his footing. His shirt was sticking to him and water dripped from hair and fell into his eyes so that he had to continue blinking in order to clear his vision. "What the hell was that?!" Naruto yelled as he called up two more clones. Minato wasn't attacking him so Naruto assumed he was giving him time to recover from his shock. "My special space-time no jutsu." Minato said with a smile; he had just transported Naruto onto the large lake that resided in the village of the toads. The surprise of the cold water had nearly caused him to lose control over his sennin chakra and now he found that he had only half of it left. He was shuddering as the wind picked up around them and rustled the leaves before settling coolly over his skin. Minato was going down with him; if Naruto got a fever it was going to be the Namikaze's fault. "You are so dead." Naruto yelled as he sent his two clones forward and straight towards Minato; both carrying a giant Rasengan. This would be enough to distract Minato whilst he used the last of his sennin chakra with this technique. Minato's eyes followed the two clones and he had no choice but to move to the side with lightning speed; he had never seen a Rasengan that size and just before it slammed into his chest he grabbed the two clones, who were running side by side, by their wrist and used chakra to add to his strength. He watched with satisfaction as they flew through the air before disappearing along with the dangerous technique. He drew in a sigh of relief only to start as a sudden, very loud, high pitched sound invaded his hearing. "Fuck!" He cursed; Naruto was forming another Rasengan but this one was different. Way different and by the amount of chakra that Naruto was pouring into it; it was going to be one hell of a danger if it got anywhere near him. "Fuuton: Rasen-shuriken!" Was the shout and Minato had just enough time to form his series of hand seals to transport him away from the spot where he was standing; straight in line with the advanced Rasengan. There was a large explosion as the high pitched sound increased; water becoming a fine mist around them as the Rasen-shuriken finally ran out of chakra. He looked up to where Naruto was and wasn't surprised to find his professor slumped; hand on his knees as he panted for breath. He wasn't in a better condition. Blue eyes traced the damage that was done and just hope that the toad village didn't mind the large crater in their clearing nor the fact that most of the lake had been turned to mist by the force of the technique. "Damn; that could have been dangerous." Naruto panted as he leaped forward; swaying slightly as his sennin chakra faded completely. He stopped a few metres in front of Minato. A smirk in place as both of them fought to catch their breath. "I fi-fi-finished your technique; Yondaime Hokage-sama." Naruto managed to pant out and winced when he felt pain travel through his limbs. "Naruto." Minato said softly as he stepped forward towards the kneeling Kyuubi container. Naruto had lost his footing and was struggling to find his equilibrium again. Minato didn't know whether to be proud or to be angry that the technique turned out so dangerous and going by Naruto's body language it wasn't only dangerous to the target but to the user as well. "Minato?" Naruto asked as blue eyes shimmered mischievously and Minato immediately cringed at the sight; he had walked straight into Naruto's trap didn't he? Naruto gave a foxy grin as he tilted his head to side as if inquiring something before bringing his hands together and formed a Ram seal. He was going to enjoy this and maybe Minato would enjoy it as well... "Oiroke no jutsu!" Minato frowned, had he just heard right? Sexy jutsu? He was trying to figure out what was happening when he saw smoke surrounding Naruto. He waited for it to clear and felt his eyes grow wide at the sight before him; a possessive streak racing through him. Naruto was kneeling before him, but he was not the Naruto Minato knew. Oh, no. This Naruto had gone all out; he was really having a difficult time in keeping his nosebleed in control. Those shapely, strong legs were clad in black leather shorts that started just by the curve of Naruto's ass. Several heavy chains surrounded Naruto's waist as a semblance of a belt and his feet were clad in heavy black boots that rose to his thighs. Minato was finding it hard to breathe as he saw the bare chest displayed before him; glimmering in the golden sun and two nipple rings glinting teasingly at him. He wanted to lean forward and play with them but he couldn't help himself as he stole a glance at Naruto's features. Bright, innocent blue eyes lined in thick kohl and those whisker marks were darker than before. Giving Naruto an ethereal glow but what stunned him the most was the mass of golden hair; it was long. Pooling around Naruto as he sat kneeling but it hadn't lost its wild quality; still sticking up in places. It didn't make Naruto look like a woman but rather a beautiful creature that could make men and woman fall at his feet with a wave of a finger. However, his attention was attracted to the glinting collar around Naruto's neck. It was white leather with a black strip adorning the middle; chains decorated the several rings that were in place. "Master." Oh fuck! Minato lost it. He hooked his finger around one of the rings on Naruto's collar and tugged. Naruto rose gracefully; long blonde hair winnowing in the wind as it moved with the gentle caress. Minato didn't hold back as he pulled Naruto into a harsh kiss. Fingers buried in soft luxurious hair as he explored Naruto's mouth. Pulling Naruto's body closer to his; sliding a thigh between Naruto's legs and hiked him upwards. Simultaneous moans erupted from both of them; the air was electrified by their passion and Naruto was pushing Minato further away from his self control. Tongues clashed, teeth nipped and lips meshed together in a claiming ritual that established ownership and love. It wasn't long until Naruto's lungs were burning with the need for air and he was forced to pull away from Minato. He nearly yelled when he felt Minato yank at his hair and bared his neck. "M-M-Minato! N-n-n-ot here!" Naruto whimpered as he felt teeth sinking into his neck; right beside his collar. It took all of his power to push Minato off of him and then he stared straight into lust glazed eyes. He bowed his head in a gesture of submissive behaviour as he gripped a sweating hand between his own. He shuddered at the sudden heat that spread throughout his body. He felt the last reserves of chakra drain away and he was forced to let the technique go; luckily this also pulled Minato from his daze but it didn't dull the lust glazed eyes that were still devouring him whole. "Naruto." Minato said as he pulled the blonde into his arms and nuzzled the delectable tanned neck before him. "I know." Naruto said as he rubbed soothing circles on Minato's scalp as he tried to calm the Namikaze down. He heard a chuckle and smiled before pulling away; well aware of the possessive grip on his hand as Naruto led them towards the clearing where their crowd of toads were waiting. "So; who won?" Gamabunta demanded as he saw the two figures approach. When Naruto had been transported towards the lake they had lost sight of the battle and they were curious as to who had gained the upper hand. "It was a tie." Naruto stated clearly as he leaned against Minato; his strength was slowly returning but he didn't want to be separated from the older Namikaze yet nor did he want to acknowledge the dirty trick he had used in order to win so he called it a tie. Since both of them were drained of all chakra and were panting for breath. Scrapes and bruises visible on their skin and blood mingled with their sweat. "Hmmm." Gamabunta nodded before leaning forward so that he would be able to look the two shinobi in the eyes. "It's been a while since we saw such an amazing fight. Please come by anytime." With that both Minato and Naruto lurched as they were summoned back to their house. -------------------------------- Naruto sighed as Minato helped him through the double doors; the spar had taken a lot out of him. He was so out of it that he didn't notice as Minato led him towards the living room and pushed him onto the large couch. A comfortable weight settled over him and Naruto looked up; blue eyes locked with blue. His heart was stuttering and his breath hitched audibly in his chest. "You didn't think I was going to let you go after that stunt did you?" Minato purred and Naruto stared with wide eyes as his lover removed his sweat soaked shirt and tossed it to the side. Tanned skin came into view and Naruto blinked owlishly but relented when he felt fingers curl around the hem of his own shirt and pulled. He hissed and Minato leant down; bodies slick with sweat touched and Naruto keened. It felt really good; better than anything he had felt in a long time. Fingers trailed over his torso and fumbled with his draw string pants before divesting him of all of his clothing. "Minato." Naruto moaned as a slow heat curled around his belly and spread like a soft breeze through his veins; it was cold. It was hot, it was everything mixed together in both extremes. His mind was sluggish but his body was fast to respond to the touches Minato bestowed on his body. Soft, lingering touches that were too little to cause the friction he needed but also to hard for simple teasing. It was perfectly controlled with chakra and it made Naruto arch back as pleas spilled from his lips shamelessly. "Please, Minato. Please." He begged as he felt teeth tug at his nipple before biting down harshly. He couldn't help it; he screamed and arched into the touch. He lifted his hips and moaned as it connected with Minato's cloth covered erection; he was seeking contact but Minato pulled back. "This is your punishment." Minato said commandingly as he buried his fingers in Naruto's blonde hair and lightly tugged at the strands; his cock swelled at the little mewl that spilled from Naruto's lips. "You are never to use that technique again unless I tell you to." Minato warned as he leant forward and bit at Naruto's neck; marking what was his. He suckled at the spot, enjoying the way Naruto leaned into him and scrambled for purchase against his sweaty shoulders. He was finding it very hard to control himself and not bury himself in that wonderfully tight passage and taking Naruto over and over again. He regained his attention when Naruto squirmed beneath him pleasantly. "Do you understand?" His voice was clipped but Naruto hardly seemed to mind as he nodded before grabbing Minato's neck and yanked him forwards until their mouths clashed in another bruising kiss. Minato purred as Naruto yielded to him and invited him in; pulling their bodies closer until their bodies rocked together to create a rhythm of pleasure. "What do you want Naruto?" Minato asked as he leaned up; fingers tracing patterns across a toned stomach before lightly gathering chakra and tracing the seal that was present around Naruto's stomach. Naruto gracefully arched backwards as another loud moan spilled from kiss reddened lips. Naruto was finding it hard to think, never mind understand what Minato was saying to him but he knew what he wanted. With blue eyes turned away in shame he begged. "I want you inside; please." He said it and was waiting for the stone to drop but it didn't. Minato only hummed and leant forward before pushing his finger in Naruto's mouth. "I don't have any lube with me so this'll have to do." Minato said as he pressed his finger deeper into Naruto's mouth. Naruto complied; tongue swirling artfully around the appendage and wasn't surprised when another entered his mouth and another after that. When Minato finally retracted his fingers from Naruto's mouth they were thickly coated with his saliva; some of it leaving a glimmering trail that still connected his tongue to the appendages. He nodded and shifted; spreading his legs a bit wider as he waited for Minato to settle between them. "You ready?" Minato asked softly and when he didn't get an answer he leant forward and nibbled at Naruto's hip. He got the reaction he wanted as Naruto moaned his answer. He himself was getting impatient so he tried to stretch Naruto as quickly as possible. Said Kitsune container was writhing above him in an attempt to find more pleasure. Minato watched as Naruto bit at his hand to stave off a scream and chuckled; he noticed that the Kitsune container tended to do that a lot. As he finally pushed the third finger past the tight ring of muscles he was loosing himself in the sight before him. Naruto's body was so sensitive and he had just found the most sensitive spot. "Naagh! ... Please!" Naruto panted as he tried to convey his need to his lover even whilst biting at his hand to stave off his screams. Luckily Minato seemed to understand and Naruto sent a silent prayer of thanks to whoever was listening and this time he really did scream; both in pain and in pleasure. Minato had buried himself to the hilt in one swift movement; leaving both of them panting for breath as they attempted to try and find their centre of gravity again. "M-move." Naruto stuttered as he felt his pleasure spike though him; he wanted more so without thought he lifted his hips and shifted. Minato seemed to take the hint and it wasn't long until nothing around them mattered except the feel of skin against skin and tongue against tongue. Naruto arched; twisting in pleasure as he felt even his toes curl. The pace was fast and hard and uncontrolled; it was feral in nature but Naruto didn't mind. He leant forward and bit at Minato's shoulder in order to ground himself and yelled as Minato shifted and changed his angle; hitting his prostate head on. It left his mind reeling with pleasure as he begged for more. "Minato! Please!" Naruto moaned as his nails scored down Minato's back before grabbing at the Namikaze's hips in order to bring them closer. He was so close to his release and looking at Minato he could already see the beads of sweat gather on his lover's forehead. His sudden climax hit him out of the blue and Naruto's world crashed around him in a million pinpricks of pleasure and heated love. "Ahhh!" He couldn't stop the scream from escaping his lungs and he could no longer feel the need to care at all. Everything was happening at once; heat filled him, surrounded him and claimed him and Naruto felt his pleasure increase. Muscles tightening further as he rode out the last vestiges of sanity before losing himself to the pleasure completely. Black danced at the edges of his vision and Minato's form flickered in and out of his sight. He clung to the body above him; needing the reassurance that Minato was real and still there with him. ~ "Naruto?" Minato asked concerned as he felt Naruto's arms lock around him in a fierce embrace. He had seen the sudden fear in those bright blue eyes before Naruto was pushed into his climax. He himself was still dazed after the pleasure that had wracked his entire frame but didn't move as Naruto clung to him; he simply wound his arms around Naruto's back and lifted him against his chest. How long they stayed like that he did not know but the moment he felt Naruto's erratic breathing fade he carefully slid out of Naruto's warm heat. Picked Naruto up and headed for the bedroom; even if he nearly stumbled up the stairs as his own legs refused to work properly. "Better get you cleaned up." Minato said; smiling softly as he headed for the en suite bathroom and gathered some luke warm water and a wash cloth. ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------- 1 - Fuuton: fuyu hyaku no senbon --- Wind Element: Winter of a hundred needles. 2- Fuuton: Kuro kaze hekki --- Wind Element: Black wind barrier You all know the sexy no jutsu; Naruto modified it a bit *winks* Hope you like. Thanks for the read and please leave me a review I really appreciate it. 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