Just another day in paradise | By : arora1 Category: Naruto AU/AR > General Views: 1478 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 2 |
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La fin.
Author note:
That’s it. It’s done. I went with the happy ending for all the angst I put you through.
You know the odd thing is that this story started out as a PWP. It was never going to go past three chapters and basically go like this; Sasuke and Naruto go to school together and fight a lot. Naruto gets sick and Sasuke has to take him his school work. Sasuke finds Naruto in deplorable living conditions and takes the sick blond home with him. Somehow Naruto gets dirty on the way there and Sasuke has to give him a bath. Smut ensues.
But I have a horrible plot bunny problem, they just wont leave me alone. Heck, my smut turned into shonen ai for the sake of plot.
Personally, I blame episode 7 of CSI. After watching it, I was like, holy crap that sounds like the Uchiha tragedy.’ and it would not leave me alone. The episode is called Blood drops and it has the CSI team finding out that the father was molesting the littlest girl after the older girl has her boyfriend kill them all. Not just the perverted father but all of them because they knew and did not stop him from molesting her and then when he went after her daughter. When she says this Gill makes the oddest face. She had them all killed. Mom, dad two brothers because they let it happen.
Look familiar?
Well, all but the daughter part.
Killing off the entire family to protect one, seemed just like the Uchiha’s.
And I know this is kinda stupid, but when the ship I was on pulled in to Thailand, we were warned that there was a group roaming around, kidnapping and videotaping themselves raping people then posting it to the Internet on a fetish site. That they really like American navy because we get stupid drunk and defenseless.
The world is a messed up place.
But it worked in to the story.
Also, it was going to be a few chapters longer, involving them going to a special camp for abused kids and having Garaa be there as well. Sasuke would not see Garaa as a contender for Narutos feelings but rather go to him for pointers on sex because he is a virgin and wants to be good for Naruto. Yes, Sasuke is a bottom. Some other people at the camp take advantage of Sasuke’s guilt and use it to get him in the sack, and Garaa kicks there ass for it. But that’s all I could come up with and it would have been a shitty ending. So I’d rather stop it here then keep it going to putter off into nothing.
I might write it as a sequel if I can think up a good ending.
Trekiael- I hope I cleared up the points you brought up and that when I said they looked alike I meant that they had the same eyes, a vague reference to sharingan.
Now I’m off to go work on ‘Broken’ which I have been neglecting.
Ja
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