Pupil of the Serpent | By : Mario Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female Views: 2255 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters contained herein. I make no money from the writing of this story. |
A/N: No real changes to this chapter, either. Not surprising, considering I wrote it quite recently. It takes time for me to realize how much my writing sucks. One more chapter to edit, and then we get to the new stuff!
To my reviewers:
@NinjaSheik: Wow . . . you're really awesome, you know that? I really want to thank you for your support and enthusiasm about the story, however unworthy I may be. Let me start by apologizing for how long it's taken me to update—life has been . . . hectic. I have indeed been keeping up with the manga/anime where I can, although I'm way behind at the moment . . . . I think it is super cool that you have a fan club for this pairing, and I can't wait to actually check out some of the stories you have there. As for this story being posted there . . . . Well, I am honored and extremely touched, although I'm not at all certain that my writing is deserving of such a gesture. I don't know if you still check (or even care about) this story, but if you do, you can expect much more frequent updates in the future, so hopefully we'll be seeing a lot of each other! @Skyrere: Thanks for reviewing! Anko cookies are indeed delicious . . . and Orochimaru is pretty cool, too. ;-) I wish I could tell you how to get alerts and such, but I honestly don't know myself! Hopefully this story will be updated often enough from now on that you'll be able to see it.Anko kept her head carefully lowered as she navigated the narrow, crowded streets, her dark hair shadowing her eyes. Though her mentor had told her to transform, she kept to her real appearance. Transformation drained one's chakra, and while her control was improving, she didn't trust her ability to keep herself hidden from sensory-type ninja. Besides, she knew that she could easily blend in by using the habits she had developed during her early childhood—ninja villages always had a lot of orphaned children, and they were as ubiquitous as stray cats. As long as she kept quiet, stuck to the background, and avoided calling attention to herself, there was little chance she would be noticed.
To her chagrin, however, she found that it was no longer as easy to evoke the silent little ghost as it had been even half a year ago, when she had first been chosen by Orochimaru. Too many times, she had to stop herself from responding when she was offered a friendly smile, or retaliating good-naturedly when jostled by a larger child. With faint alarm, she realized that becoming invisible was no longer effortless. Thinking back, she remembered the children who had been her classmates in the Academy; remembered her contempt for their excitability, their lack of care, and yes, their happiness. I've become like them. The realization shocked her; so much so that she stopped in the middle of the street for a moment, her body stiffening.A/N: I swear, Bee just kind of wrote himself into this chapter. I hadn't planned on using him, but . . . ah, well. If you have the time, leave a review? They really do make me happy . . .
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