It Was You, Hinata | By : Rockrgrl4 Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female Views: 1843 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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So…..
I am so (100x) sorry! I have been trying to write and update, but I never noticed that it had been a little over 3 MONTHS since I last updated! College and work has been keeping me busier than I had anticipated, but that's no excuse. I will definitely try to keep working on my fics more often, but words cannot express how sorry I am to you guys. I know you're excited about this fic and you have all given me a lot of support, and I hope that continues. As a way to make up for my horrible, horrible lack of updating, here are two new chapters. I hope you guys enjoy, and as always continue to enjoy my fics!
Love you guys!
-K.
Not too far from the southern border of Suna, three shinobi were huddled around a small fire in the desert. The fire was small because they couldn't risk being captured, and due to the nature of their predicament and how that affected their chances of survival, a small fire was best (although the three wished for nothing more than to throw a few more sticks atop of it for a greater source of warmth). As the three shinobi were quickly discovering, nights in Suna were absolutely frigid.
"Damn Raiden, couldn't you have found a better hiding place? Surely we could have made it back to the hideout before now?" A male voice sounded out from the dark, teeth chattering viciously due to the cold. The dim light of the fire was barely enough to cast an image upon the face of the speaker in the black of the night, but it was enough to illuminate the key components. A proud chin jutted out, which carefully complimented high cheekbones and small, narrow dark eyes reflected in the night. A scoff was heard on the opposite side of the campfire, and gruffer voice responded,
"Did you have a better idea, Arashi? It was either this or sleep in one of those ditches that the Suna scum are digging…you know, the ones infested with snakes?" The small amount of light given to them from their fire barely caught the slow revealing of Raiden's wide, sickening grin as he continued, "Feel free, though, Arashi, to leave us and go sleep with the disgusting, potentially deadly, slimy fucking critters. And I'm not talking about the snakes, either!" The man added as an afterthought, cackling with delight at his own joke.
Raiden continued to laugh as Arashi shot him an exasperated look and removed himself from the circle, walking a small distance away and unrolling his sleeping bag. Apparently, he had decided it was easier to just leave the older, more idiotic man alone than stay up and try to talk to him. As if trying to subtly relay this message to the source of his annoyance, Arashi turned so that he was facing away from the camp (and fire) when he finally found himself situated in his sleeping bag.
The last member of Raiden's small entourage could only remain completely silent with her eyes closed, giving off a heavily irritated vibe. It was as if she were praying the two idiots in front of her would shut up so they could all go to bed already.
After a few moments, a very acute sense of normalcy returned to the group, and Raiden grunted, "Did you do it, Chiasa?"
With her eyes still closed, the only female member of the group responded with a curt, "Well, obviously. I got imprisoned for doing it, didn't I?"
Raiden's eyes narrowed, settling on the brunette and he responded with a sneer, "Watch your attitude with me, bitch. You're lucky we picked you up or you'd still be stealing bread from the markets in shadow country. You know, since you were alone and orphaned on the streets after your weak fucking family-"
SNAP!
In less than an instant, Raiden's form was suspended in the dark air several feet above them, supported by an invisible noose around his neck. A sickening crack had already echoed throughout the area-the sound of the man's neck breaking-and after only a few moments, his disfigured body crumpled to the ground.
Without even moving an inch, Chiasa's eyes remained closed and her aura returned to its former calm. Silence reined for a few precious minutes, and the two partners took the opportunity to bask in what they had been deprived of for so long-absolutely no noise. Not long after, Arashi dared to speak (albeit quietly), "It's about time you did away with him."
With a small, genuine smile, Chiasa once more opened her hazel eyes. Glancing down at the pathetic creature that lay in front of her feet, she gave it a smug look of triumph and disgust before averting her gaze back to her new partner and replied,
"You know, you always were the good one, Arashi."
The Sunagakure border patrol found Raiden's body the next day, naked, with buzzards pecking at his flesh.
Bitchinnn'. :P
You all probably think I'm crazy, adding in a small chapter like this. :P Weeelll there's a reason I do things like this (if you don't know already) and it's not to build suspense! Well, okay…it's partly that. ;)
Actually a majority of it is we just came off of a very long, romantically-focused chapter. The plot needed to further develop between the romance and the villains, and I think I did a pretty good job of doing this little mini chapter!
IN CASE YOU DIDN'T GET IT:
Yes, so far all three are bad guys (well, two now!). Raiden was their leader to start off with, but since Chiasa killed him, in this little mini-fic she has displayed her dominance. Not only that, but now Arashi and Chiasa sort of have a small understanding between them, and what is that from? Why, their mutual discontent of Raiden's former leadership, of course! It will be interesting to see where this takes us, ne? :P It's the classic tale of the overthrowing of the abusive power…only the twist is it came from within a small group of villains. Now we are confused as to who the real power is and who will emerge as the real leader in this partnership!
If you are concerned about the length of this chapter, don't be. I will update tomorrow again with the next chapter (which will be longer than this one). I'm adding this chapter in now because it is a good transition chapter, and it advances the plot and really lets us know how things are going with our antagonists! I thought about trying to add on to this one either before or after this little scene, but you really can't do it. This little ficlet (LOL) is serving its purpose beautifully, and I hope you feel that way too!
GOMENASAI FOR NOT UPDATING SOONER, and like I said, I will update again with this fic tomorrow, okay? :3
Thank you for understanding, and I hope you enjoy!
-THE KAS.
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