All In | By : momhuey8 Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male > Naruto/Sasuke Views: 1711 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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PWP warning – I was part of a writers’ group about 20 years ago and I remember a guest speaker telling us “Don’t fall in love with your own writing.”
I didn’t know what that meant until this project. The beginning of this chapter is pretty much PWP; it does nothing to move the story forward. And I don’t absolutely love it, but I like some elements and the interaction between the boys enough that I just couldn’t bring myself to shitcan it. Well I actually did shitcan it, then put it back, then shitcan it, then put it…you get the idea.
Anyway, humor takes me more time, because the rhythms and meter don’t come as naturally to me, I have to play with syllables and wordcounts. So once I’ve written something that turns out fairly amusing, I have as much time invested in it as I did the whole rest of the chapter.
So, advice from a published writer (not me, the lady from 20 years ago) don’t fall in love with your own writing. Whatever! Smut is always good!
Sasuke sat on Naruto’s chest and stroked himself. “Are you watching?”
Naruto nodded in rapt silence. He started to lift his hand and Sasuke slapped it away. “Uh uh. No touching. I want this to last longer than three seconds.”
Naruto pouted for all of one second until the movement of Sasuke’s fist up and down the pale girth distracted him. He licked his lips.
“Stop that.”
“But, Sasuke,” Naruto whined, “I need to…”
“You’ll get your turn.” He stroked himself several more times, his breath hitching. “I’ve been thinking about what you did before, about bringing ninja arts to bed.”
Naruto’s eyes widened.
“I’m not sure I can compete with you, but I, too, find myself inspired.” He stopped for a second. “Now shut up and let me work here.”
Naruto stilled and eagerly prepared to allow Sasuke to do whatever he wanted.
It was all he could do to keep his hands to himself and, indeed to keep from coming prematurely, when Sasuke finally found completion and came all over his chest and neck. “Sasuke, please.”
The brunette swayed for several seconds, his hand wrapped limply around the base of his softening arousal.
Finally he looked down and eyed his handiwork lying in pools on the tan skin before him. He slid down and stretched out along the full length of Naruto’s body. While resting his chin on one fist, he used the finger of his other hand to lazily trace through the puddles before him.
“Sasuke,” Naruto whined again.
“Sh.” Sasuke swiped a slippery finger across his lover’s lips. It was enough to distract Naruto for several seconds as he closed his eyes and licked enthusiastically.
As Naruto savored the taste and feel of his lover’s release, Sasuke continued to rub his fingers in the white mess on Naruto’s neck and chest. Sasuke made one final poke with a finger and Naruto’s eyes flew wide open. His body had suddenly become lead.
“You fucking sealed me? With your cum? God damn, but you’re sneakier than a Rock Country Oinin.”
Sasuke was no seal expert by any means, but he did know the one seal that Kabuto used in his surgery to keep his patients still so he could sew them up. Kabuto, the sadistic fuck, had used something that would restrain most ninja but not dull sensation. He’d known more than one ninja who’d had full blown, invasive surgery while completely conscious.
“Good thing I’m not the enemy. Although I don’t suppose you’d find yourself in quite this position with the enemy.”
“Actually, bastard, they were all enemies.” Sasuke raised a brow. “Well, since they weren’t Leaf,” Naruto said, grinning, “technically, they were all enemies.”
“All?” Sasuke narrowed his eyes. “Is this a large number?”
“Large is such a relative term.” Naruto grinned wider, relishing the opportunity to dish a bit of revenge for his current immobile state. “Speaking of relatives, I’ve been wondering if you don’t have some out there somewhere.”
Sasuke arched one eyebrow.
“Well, see, if we put all my…well, uh…anyway, if they were all in the same room, an observer might think they were at an Uchiha family reunion.”
Sasuke leaned up. “And would this room be the size of our bathroom, or the Konoha meeting hall?”
“Er, well, I missed you a lot.” Naruto grinned.
Sasuke raised a hand and shook his head. “I don’t think I want to hear this.” He nipped a full lower lip. “In fact, shut up.”
“Dick.”
“I have something else to ask.” Sasuke crawled up so he could look down into Naruto’s eyes, then he activated his Sharingan. “Let me in.”
The smile fled the whiskered face. “No. Don’t ask that.”
“Why?”
“Kyuubi’s in there. If something happened to you,’ he said, “it would kill me.”
“Naruto, do you know why Orochimaru wanted my body? Specifically?” He watched Naruto bite his lip. “The Sharingan. Like half the universe, he wanted you, and knew that the Sharingan can control the demon.”
“I do know that. Jiraiya told me.”
“There you have it. The way I see it, we’re made for each other. Now let me in. I’m not planning to engage him anyway. I’ve better things to do.”
Naruto continued to gnaw on his lip. Sasuke speared his fingers through the silky hair and jerked the blond head backwards. Then he fastened his lips over a sensitive pulse point and sucked until Naruto was gasping and groaning.
“Let me in,” he whispered.
“Huh?” When Sasuke looked at Naruto’s eyes this time, they were unfocused.
“Look at me. I want to play.”
“With my mind? That’s not as sexy sounding as you might think, bastard.”
He knew Naruto finally relented when the path in became clear to the tomoes in his eyes.
Faster than thought, Sasuke found himself inside Naruto’s mind. The first thing of which he became aware, through every sense in his being, was the demon. The visualization of the seal presented itself as massive bars on a black, depthless cell. He studied it for a moment and then was surprised to hear a voice not Naruto’s.
“An Uchiha. Delicious. Come closer,” an impossibly low voice growled from beyond the barrier.
Sasuke flipped his middle finger in the direction of the cage and proceeded to look around. He wasn’t sure exactly what he was looking for, but he hoped that with his blond’s unwitting help, he’d find it.
Recently, a session of meditation was interrupted as his mind wandered to ways he could drive his lover crazy. When he’d remembered the mind-blowing experience with Naruto’s chakra, he contemplated on how he could use his own ninja specialty in the bedroom. That’s when he remembered what he’d learned about the limbic system in the brain and its role as a pleasure center.
The brain was something all Uchihas spent a fair amount of time studying since the Uchiha bloodline limit was in the eyes. Sasuke’s study ended with the death of his family, but he had learned some things.
A trip to the family library and he read that parts of the limbic system played a role in sexual arousal. He also learned that electrical stimulation theoretically produced great pleasure. When he considered his ability to see the brain and his inborn skill with electricity, he decided that this whole process seemed made for him.
He was mildly bothered that this section of the book had a tattered ribbon marking its place and experienced a repulsed shiver he imagined either of his parents finding this information interesting. Imagining Itachi’s interest in it bothered him even more.
Now that he was in Naruto’s mind, his plan was to keep the blond in a state of arousal and find the part of the brain that had the most activity. But as he reached his corporal hand, he found a decidedly deflated erection.
“Dobe, relax. It’s fine.”
“Are you sure? Is he bothering you?” Naruto asked in an anxious voice.
Sasuke growled and sent a gentle heat to his hand, using everything he’d learned about his lover to bring him back to hardness.
“Do you like when I wrap my hand around your cock?” He smiled at the twitch he felt against his palm. Naruto liked dirty talk.
“Or do you prefer my mouth?” Naruto made a small gasping noise. “You like that don’t you? Fucking my mouth?” Slitted eyes started to drift closed. “Keep your eyes open.”
“I know you like to fuck me in the mouth and then pull out and shoot your load all over my face.”
That was doing the trick. Naruto was panting now and he could see where he needed to go. A section ahead showed an increasing amount of electrical activity. While he kept his corporal hand busy, he studied the flickering mass before him. He reached out his visceral arm to the spot that seemed to be the center of the activity and stroked it with a finger. Naruto gasped again and almost closed his eyes.
“What the hell was that?”
“Did you like it?”
“Fuck, yeah.”
“Good.” Then Sasuke began to experiment with different spots and light touches of electricity. Soon Naruto was moaning continuously, and Sasuke thought he had the area mapped out fairly well for now.
Without breaking eye contact, he scooted forward and then lowered himself onto the now fully engorged length. He moved up and down several times until he found the angle and the speed that would best serve them both.
“Ack. Gods, are you trying to kill me?” Sasuke couldn’t answer as he struggled to remain focused on his goal in spite of the sensation swamping his own brain.
Standing before the organ that was now vibrating, with flashes skittering across the surface and penetrating inward along the bright red arteries and bluish veins, he brought electricity to his hand and plunged it into what he had decided was the hypothalamus.
The reaction was instantaneous. Naruto howled and, breaking the seal, arched his body off the mattress. He grabbed Sasuke’s hips in a bruising grip and held him pinned to his groin as he shuddered and jerked.
Sasuke was lying on Naruto just as they had started, his chin propped on one hand, the other playing with a pink nipple.
“Sasuke.”
“Hm?”
“I love you.”
Sasuke’s mouth twitched. “That’s just the endorphins talking.”
“Yeah.” At Sauke’s raised brow he grinned. “And my dick. And my balls.”
He traced the smirking lips. “And my heart. And my soul.”
Sasuke licked the nipple nearest his mouth. “Does that mean all those are mine?”
Naruto pretended to frown. “The dick and balls, too?
“Especially those.”
Naruto squirmed as Sasuke moved and sucked on the other nipple for a moment. “Tell you what, we can work out an arrangement. I’ll come up with a sign-out system.” He slid up and brushed Naruto lips with his own. “After all, I need them more than you do.”
The incident Sakura witnessed in the forest pushed her a little over an edge. She waffled between absolute heartbreak over the loss of her beloved, to wondering if the situation was indeed what it had seemed to her and Sasuke was just protecting Naruto.
And if it wasn’t, what was it? Male hormones? Surely nothing beyond lust; two people who cared about each other didn’t beat each other into sexual encounters.
Then a thought occurred to her that made her lose sleep at night. Maybe Sasuke was afraid of Naruto. Maybe he was protecting the monster out of fear for his own safety.
She couldn’t get it off her mind and found herself scanning the area for their chakra whenever she was out. She needed to see them together more to get a better understanding of the situation.
One thing was certain, if Naruto was mistreating her love…she clenched her fists until her gloves creaked…gods help him.
Sakura found many opportunities to watch the boys. They were always together and left the Uchiha district nearly every day for food shopping or training, and surprisingly, several times a week for tea at the same little tea house across town.
They could be seen walking side-by-side completely lost in conversation with each other. She would have been more resentful at the relaxed camaraderie that seemed to exist between them if not for the regular flair ups of…something, that she witnessed.
She watched them at the tea house from a distance. Sasuke sat across from Naruto, his look was intense. Naruto’s head was dropped into his hands. Sasuke glared even harder. After several moments a small crash could be heard from farther inside the shop though she couldn’t see what it was; the two males seemed to ignore it. Naruto’s shoulders shook, and from the look on Sasuke’s face, she suspected that the blond was crying.
After another moment, a feminine shriek was heard from elsewhere in the shop. Idly Sakura resolved to find a different tea shop for when she and Sasuke would eventually go out; this one obviously had vermin. She quickly dismissed this train of thought in favor of enjoying Naruto’s obvious upset.
Just then the blond looked up and swiped at his red-rimmed eyes. He looked to be pleading with Sasuke, but dropped his head back into his hands at the absolutely venomous look from the brunette. Sasuke poked at the table viciously and Naruto nodded without looking up.
After another full minute during which Sasuke’s face turned red and Sakura wondered why Naruto wasn’t bursting into flames, the blond’s head shot up. His eyes widened and then dropped closed while his fists clenched on the tabletop.
Finally he opened his eyes and glared at Sasuke, who now had a satisfied smirk on his face. Naruto slapped his hand on the tabletop and poofed out of site. Sasuke’s smirk turned into a full-blown grin and he picked up his tea and sipped. He actually laughed aloud as Naruto poofed back, grabbed him by the elbow and poofed them both out of the teahouse.
Of course, if Sakura had been closer she wouldn’t have been quite as satisfied over the exchange.
“This’ll be good practice. I’ll put a chakra marker right here under me. See if you can trace a path through the water in the ground and find it.” Naruto dropped his head into his hands and sent a spike of his chakra into the earth as a beacon for Sasuke to find.
The brunette closed his eyes a moment to find his center and then opened them, ready to feel his way around the earth underneath them.
A few seconds later, the teens heard a loud crash as Sasuke blew up a table on the other side of the shop. Naruto tried not to make his friend feel badly, but he couldn’t help laughing at the ruckus twenty feet away.
Sasuke poked the table. “Just stick the fucking marker back in the fucking ground and shut the fuck up!” He got an even more constipated look on his face and clenched his fists. Another several moments later and they heard a shriek from a lady sitting three tables away.
As she looked around frantically for the source of the shock to her ass, Naruto was laughing so hard that tears were dripping from his chin. He chanced a glance from under his lashes and saw Sasuke glaring at him from across their table. “Concentrate. This would be really bad if you kill someone.”
Sasuke face was transformed by the fiercest look yet and the table nearly vibrated with his effort. Suddenly Naruto’s head shot up; Sasuke had found what he was looking for. In a travesty of Naruto’s bedroom trick, Sasuke found a particularly sensitive part of the blond’s anatomy and poked it with a sharp burst of his chakra. Second’s later he caught the distinct aroma of sexual release.
“Hey, bastard! What the hell?” Naruto frowned, trying to escape the wet spot in the front of his pants.
Sasuke smirked.
“Fine. Lesson’s over.” Naruto poofed home.
Sasuke grinned and serenely picked up his tea cup. Two seconds later, he laughed as Naruto poofed back and jerked him up by the elbow and took them home for sweet revenge.
As Sakura continued to stalk the pair, she wondered if the two went to the teahouse to try to come to terms after a fight or when they were pissed at each other. The times she spied them there seemed the most antagonistic.
Like earlier today, they were sitting across from each other at a small outdoor table, and they were obviously arguing. Although she couldn’t hear them, they were leaning toward each other, their eyes blazing.
Naruto stabbed his finger toward Sasuke. Sasuke crossed his arms and turned away, then abruptly turned back, poking his finger onto the table top. He continued by holding his hands up and ticking items off on his fingers.
Naruto looked triumphant for a moment until Sasuke tilted his head and said something else. Naruto slumped and Sasuke raised his arm and pointed down the road. The two got up and Naruto followed the brunette. After a moment he started making faces behind Sasuke’s back. Sasuke whirled around and glared. He said something and Naruto rolled his eyes. After throwing his hands in the air, he grabbed his crotch and made a lurid gesture. Then the two were out of sight.
As with the other encounters, she would have been sorely disappointed if he had been privy to the conversation, as well.
“I gave you the last two blow jobs.”
“Yes, but you topped the last three times.”
“No, I didn’t.”
“Yes, you did. The training grounds after lunch,” Sasuke ticked on his fingers. “And this morning in bed.”
“Ha, see twice.”
“You’ve already forgotten the porch rail last night.”
Naruto’s face fell. “Oh, yeah.”
“Now let’s go.” Sasuke pointed toward home. “You’re a blow job behind.”
Naruto followed and stuck his tongue out at the back of Sasuke’s head.
“I saw that.” Sasuke whirled and poked Naruto in the chest. “For that, I’m topping tonight, too.”
Naruto threw his hands in the air and rolled his eyes. “Fine, you know you can’t handle this,” he grabbed his crotch, “anyway.”
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