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Disclaimer: I
don’t own Naruto. Never did, never will and so forth. Everything belongs
to Kishi-sensei and as I write this, I burn with anticipation for his next
manga chapter!

Summary: Sasu-cakes
finally gets his long awaited answer.

Annoying little
Author’s Note: This was only intended to be a review response update
but I had this urge suddenly to write this up, mainly because it has been
playing in my mind for ages. It’s obscenely short, I know but it’s
a little ‘preview’ to what is going to happen.
Again, thank you to the lovely Kayoko for her beta work.

~ ~ ~

“I used to be afraid of the dark for the longest
time,” Naruto started, “For as long as I can remember. It’s
pretty embarrassing but-”

Sasuke rudely interrupted. “I thought you were going
to tell me the truth, not your childhood stories.”

“Shut up and listen, dammit,” the blond snapped
with such an uncharacteristic finality that made Sasuke do just that. “If
you don’t want to listen from the beginning then just get the hell out of
my apartment.”

With a sulky look on his face, Sasuke sat back and waited
impatiently. Naruto lost his glower and continued.

“Anyways, I always hated the dark. I mean, for a
person who’s lived alone for all his life, you’d think that
I’d get over it, right?”

Sasuke never knew that. He had always thought that
Naruto’s kin died when he was around five or six.

“It’s just that, I always felt that there was
something there with me.” The shorter ninja waved one hand in mid-air for
emphasis. “Something…how do I say this, lurking in the shadows just
waiting to get me. Sometimes I’d dream of it and I’d wake up,
scared shitless. These really fucking evil glowing eyes floating about in the
dark. I could hear this voice in my dreams too. The booming voice of doom, like
something out of a grave. It
didn’t really say anything but I could still hear it. Spooky,
y’know?”

It didn’t appear as if Naruto was actually getting
anywhere with his pointless rambling. Furthermore, his teammate was speaking as
if he was reliving a particularly happy memory, slightly unnerving Sasuke.
Briefly, he speculated whether a psychologist would be more apt for this
situation rather than him. Still, he decided to keep his mouth shut, itching to
get at the bottom of whatever Naruto was going to conclude with.

“It was like a presence. The old man Sandaime used to
have ANBU tailing me every now and then when I was younger so I thought it was
one of them, but it wasn’t…”

Why the fuck would the
Third do that? To watch out for him? Why?

“…I guess I got used to it and then I just kinda
realized one day that even though this presence thing was evil and menacing, it
kinda protected me. Like a guardian angel…” At this Naruto
unexpectedly sniggered. “My mistake. Guardian demon. Sorry, inside
joke.”

At that point, Sasuke honestly wondered whether Naruto had
lost his sanity, or whatever of it that he had left.

“I found out what that presence was when I became a
genin. That Mizuki teacher told me.” –there was a pull at the side
of a swollen, upper lip into a sneer- “Gosh do you remember him?
It’s been so long!” The sneer widened.

Sasuke barely remembered. Something about the man being
imprisoned for some obscure reason and Naruto turning up in class with a used
forehead-protector despite having miserably failed the day before. Instead, he
asked suspiciously, “How would he know what it was?”

Naruto pulled his musings into a completely different
tangent, ignoring the Uchiha’s logical question.

“That fucker tried to kill me. Iruka-sensei saved me
that day by taking the blow for me. I was flabbergasted.” The
youth’s sneer melted into a soft smile. “I mean, it was the first
time anyone’s actually acknowledged me.”

This time, Sasuke’s brows drew together in a
displeased, confused frown and he held up one hand. “Hang on.
You’re not making sense.” He looked up, meeting Naruto’s
bright blue eyes with his own. “What are you trying to say? Why would he
try to kill you?”

“The presence’s name is Kyuubi no
Kitsune,” Naruto said matter-of-factly.

At first it the name didn’t register in Sasuke’s
mind. It flashed into his mind in a matter of seconds and the tight features of
his face relaxed with a low chuckle. It was quite absurd. “Naruto, that
was the lamest joke ever. Do you really expect me to believe that?”

Within a short moment, Naruto had crossed the short distance
between them and squatted in front of the sitting shinobi, slamming both palms
on the mattress at each side of his knees. He leaned in close, invading the
other’s personal space.

“Does it look like I’m joking?”

The chuckle died abruptly. Sasuke’s mouth thinned into
a grim line and his eyes narrowed further. “This isn’t something
you joke around with me, dobe.”

“For some super genius, you sure are stupid. Add the
facts up!”

Sasuke pushed his face closer to Naruto’s and hissed
angrily, “The Fourth sacrificed himself to kill the Kyuubi. It’s
written down as a well-known fact in the public archives.”

Fucking absurd! The very notion was laughable! He refused to
believe that his brain-dead teammate housed the deadly entity.

Naruto suddenly began to laugh mirthlessly. “Demons
don’t die. They can’t be destroyed. They’re immortal! They
can only be contained. No mortal can kill them!”

The way the blond pronounced the word ‘mortal’
sounded foreign, more guttural as if his voice had changed for someone
else’s.

“Nah, Sasuke, the Nine-Tails was sealed into me that
day. I mean, look at Gaara! It makes sense ‘cause a baby’s chakra
pathways aren’t developed when they’re newly-born.” His gaze
darkened and the laugh weakened, his sentences pouring out of his mouth
heatedly. “Give me a break. The villagers didn’t hate me
‘cause I was a troublemaker. I only did that for the fucking attention!
They hated me ‘cause they knew that one day I would find out what sort of
power I had inside me and use it against them. So the Sandaime forced on the
law that the whole thing was to be kept secret from me so the newer generation
wouldn’t hate me for it. Didn’t work much, let me tell you that.
Don’t tell me you’ve never noticed the changes in me whenever we
were in a pinch?!”

Naruto fluidly stood up and took a step back while Sasuke
stared wildly as the realization hit him hard like a punch in the chest. The
blond’s hand rested lightly at the tattoo adorning his stomach before the
fingers clenched tightly upon it into a fist, leaving faint scratch-marks on
the smooth skin.

“Now do you understand? Why your brother and Akatsuki
want me? They want to extract the fox’s power for themselves.”

Naruto took a deep breath and looked down at his feet. His
gaze appeared to gravitate onto the rag-doll and he toed it reluctantly.
“That’s why I did what I did with that Council Member. He was all
against me and kept influencing the others from letting me advance in the ninja
ranks. So I had to do what I had to do. I know it sounds bad but Kyuubi
said-“

“You talk to it?!”

His teammate had the decency to look guilty. He started to
babble again. “Well yeah. We talk to each other in my head. He’s
that ‘friend’. Well you’re right, it’s an It. But I see
him more as male than anything. He isn’t all that bad. Sure he’s a
demon but he cares about me…well only because if I die, he dies
too…you know, because our chakras are joined up…”

The unobtainable questions to his thoughts regarding the
issue dramatically unfolded themselves like bold black words on a piece of
paper. The puzzles fit perfectly with each other. It all made sense now. He
said the first thing that forced itself into his head, the words tumbling out
before he could stop them.

“You fucking monster.”

Naruto’s face crumbled instantly and he squeezed his
eyes in obvious anguish. A pained grimace formed and he swiped his hand across
his face. The transformation was so smooth in its subtlety that Sasuke
didn’t notice at first how the joints of the boy’s tanned fingers
pronounced themselves further, giving them a slight gnarled appearance. The
nails lengthened to talons and when Naruto opened his eyes, the blue had
disappeared in favour for a furious red.

“Want to see how much of a monster I can be,
Sasuke-kun?”

A long, gleaming fang revealed itself when he smirked
coldly.

~ ~

TBC

Right, review responses for chapter 9 and 10.

Harukakatana: Why
thank you my dear. I do try *grin*

Vampchick: Well, I had the thing about the necklace
in a more metaphorical sense; He acquired the necklace where what he believed
then completely clashes with the methods he uses now. So it’s more of a
conscience/guilt thing which Kyuubi squished. Gotta love that fox. I doubt
Sasuke is going to come to terms at how badly he was acting towards Naruto
because you really can’t change your personality like that overnight but
yeah, Kyuubi exercises a good
amount of influence on our favourite blond boy.
I don’t have anything spectacular planned out for this
fic, but thank you muchly for reviewing!

Macy: Haha, an
evil cliffy is always the best when you’re an author but as a fellow
reader, I can also sympathise! Hope you liked the next two updates *smile*

Kai: *evil, evil laugh*
Muahahahahaha!

Roriko: woah woah *laughs* sorry the update took
months but I hope you enjoyed it

Ezj: Yes, yes they are. Thank you for
reading J

Vermillion Spiral: *purrrrrsss*
my ego adores you too. But quick, stop before it grows too big and explodes!
Thank you!

Lady Samurai: mmm
who is using who, I wonder? *grin*

MultifacetedTune: My
evilness shall spread across the world and it shall make everyone endure the
horrors of cliff-hangers! Muahahahaha! Well cliffhanger answered, for yet
another one! Sorry dear :P

Maya: I try, I
really do try with Naruto. I just don’t believe that he’s that
innocent, or as completely ignorant as he is usually portrayed. He does get his
moments of ingenuity every now and then. Thus, why I added Kyuubi. Always did
enjoy a darker Naruto *grin* And you’re right about Sasuke heh. Thank you
for making this story a nice exception!

Rika-Chan: Sorry
that I made you wait too long *apologetic look*

Tenohikari: Go
Naruto! Use that ass wisely! *snigger* Thank you for reading!

Ayonoi: Yep poor Naruto indeed.
Though mind you, his conscience seems to be leaning towards his demon more than
anything. I mean, the demon isn’t asking him to destroy anything he cares
about…right? *snigger* Poor Naruto. And how can Sasuke resist Naruto! He
was always in denial!
And as for the banana… we shall never know *wink*

Suicidal Skies: Why
thank you!

JadeTiger: hah! I
know the feeling. *gives you cookies to calm down*

Juli: Mmmm I
know. Our little Naru-chan can be quite sexy when he wants to be. Ah well, that
made Sasuke fall hard. Like a sack of potatoes. Thank you for reviewing!

Editor’s Crawl:
Sniff, and the chapter after that
took god knows how long. Will you ever forgive me? The story is exclusively
SasuNaruSasu in its conclusion. Kyuubi is an element of persuasion, a catalyst
or something to that extent.

Diane: No, thank
you for reading this story and thank you for reviewing!

Serafim: Woot!
All the way from Russia!
Thanks!

Twistedneko: Nah I’m no prodigy. I just enjoy to
write. But yeah, at this point, Naruto doesn’t want to extract revenge
from Sasuke. Cause he knows, that if he actually gets Sasuke then that’s the biggest payback of them all and
it just means, he’s won with Sasuke. Of course one of the steps for this,
is to control Sasuke’s big fucking ego.

Ryuukotsusei: lol, no no hold your horses! It’s
not certain whether he *is* going to become the Hokage- it’s only certain
that his candidacy went through for review. Sakura is … okay. I
don’t really like her but I don’t hate her much as I used to.
She’s getting better in the manga…even if she did become a
mini-Tsunade. Glad you liked the fruit scene lol, I hope that you equally as
liked the smut chapter! Though I’m sure you must have given up on the
story from the lack of updates.
To be honest, I didn’t really watch gay porn for
pointers (cause porn in general cracks me up whenever I start watching it)
– I like researching for my stuff though and it’s different ideas
that I accumulate with chats and reading other fanfic stories.
Thank you muchly for the review!

Nissie: *laughs*
I did that with the fridge when I was young.
I still maintain that this story has absolutely no plot
whatsoever. I can’t write epic fics to save my life, to be honest. I
appreciate you liking my story and reviewing! Hope you caught chapter 10.

Nicole: Yep, the
story goes wherever my perverted little mind takes it …. La la la la
pervert yaoi-land…Thank you for reviewing!

PierrotLeFou: I
loved the way Naruto was standing there too! I mean, I had the mental image
just burning itself into my mind….had to write it down! Hope I
didn’t chase you away with the lack of updates!

TenshiKaitou: lol,
we must be psychic. Well hope you enjoyed chapter 10 and this chapter. What
Naruto is trying to do is quite simple. Get Sasuke!

Tachibana, Yumiko: I
just hope you didn’t lose or worse, removed the bookmark because it took
me so long to update!

Nishtiman: Glad
you liked it, even my non-existent plot *smile*

Angel of darkness: uh
oh, you gotta be careful with Kyuubi there… he might bite. Well,
he’ll probably bite a lot. And lots of other terrible things like that.

Anon: So sorry!
I’m not abandoning anything, I swear! It’ll just take me longer. A
whole lot longer. *sniff*

Blipsblop: He’s
gonna get it good :P

Tricycle: Lol, I
know. The OOC is horrible sometimes. The reason why I tweaked the OOC and the
villagers’ feelings was for a more dramatic effect in the end. I thought
something along the lines of: Okay, a traumatized/affectionate-starved
childhood even if you try hard to hide it really bites you hard in the ass when
you get older and, although he gained some recognition, there still are a lot
of the older generation who are suspicious. Perhaps they thought that Sasuke
ran away because he was influenced in a bad way by the demon Naruto. I agree,
he does go OOC every now and then but it’s too late to change the
chapters. Thank you for pointing it out though J.

Gasa: I am the
queen of cliché and randomness!

KARAKURI_NINGYOU: I
didn’t stop! I just went into hibernation! And I’m totally head
over heels with Kyuubi’s male form too!

Dakara: *evil
evil eviiiiiiillll laughter*

Kayoko: Damn you
woman, don’t you have anything better to do than re-read my whole story
despite the fact that you beta each chapter anyways!? Lol

ky0kichi/ kt0kichi
(cause I’m assuming you’re the same person?) : Don’t
worry about our little Naruto-kun, he’ll turn the tables around :P And I
loved it too!

Fib: Whether my next
chapter was a knockout or not, is entirely up to you to decide. Thank you for
reviewing!

Lucifel: Thank
you!

Akira Vadel: lol
I didn’t see him as reacting like that either. And then, my perverted
mind kicked in…Thank you loads!

Jinx: *dies from
happiness* I’m so glad you like it so much! *happy glittery stuff
floating around*

Someone: dead god
no, I’m not giving up. Just took me half a year to update!

X: heh, unique
huh. I suppose it’s quite possible with the way I decided to portray
Kyuubi. Thank you for taking the time to read it J

Yumi: *bows* Most
appreciated for you review.

c00ki3: I’m
glad you think so. In relation to your namesake, I present you
with….cookies! *passes over the Naruto-shaped cookies*

Anon: lol yes, me
and my crazy yaoi writing. Can’t get enough of it.

Some Crazy Pyro: I
do hope you read the update. Thank you for reviewing! It really does mean a lot
*ducks as a glittery red g-string whizzes past her head*

Kitsu: Hm, it
wasn’t really my spirit that suffered…if was my work-load. I was
really really busy. Thank you for the concern though!

Anon: Welcome
aboard to the crazy/weird ride that is known as my story. I’m glad you
think so, however I do apologise for my lack of updates. Hope this satisfies
you J

Jane_lane: *throws
a chocolate cookie at you and runs away fast*

Tenohikari: Thank
you, thank you!

Fyredevyl: *laughs*
No Kyuubi isn’t trying to break free from Naruto. They’re slowly
becoming ‘one’ so to speak. Naruto will be fine; he’s got
Kyuubi on his side! It’s Sasuke you should be worrying about hehe. I will
be updating sooner, yes.

Beeku: Hope
you’re satisfied with…another cliffy! I am so cruel! Thank you for
the review!

Vox: Unbelievable
isn’t it?! *chuckles* Hope the above chapter answers your questions. Saankyou
for the review!

Devious Lil Devil: *falls
backwards from the overload of praise* My dear, are you sure I deserve all
that? I was just doing my duty as a SasuNaru smut writer! As you can see with the above chapter,
while there won’t be any direct Kyuubi-goodness, there will be some
indirect Naruto-Kyuubi goodness. Which I hope you will enjoy. I appreciate your
reviews, take care!

hyperkaoru: Glad
to have made you happy with the update J

Hitomi No Ryu: Not
going to end well for whom? Sasu-slut or Naru-kun? *snigger* Our poor little
Slut-cakes. Thank you for reviewing J

Sas-uke: Mm, yes
indeed.
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