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Sasuke's Decision (Rewrite)	By : squeaker Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male > Naruto/Sasuke Views: 1061 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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- 1-Sasuke's Decision (Rewrite)
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HI HI HI!
So, this is my rewrite of Sasuke's Decision, which I wrote way way way back in 2007. That said, when I wrote the original, I was basing it on my then current knowledge of the manga and anime. So, here, Sasuke never defected, they are older.. etc.
The lemony scene still isn't that awesome, but, I have never been that good at them anyway. :)
Anyway, I hope you all like... would love reviews for this one, to see if I actually made it better. hahahaha
Ja Ne
Anubis
Also, this is cross posted in at least two other places...

Sakura ran to the training grounds, hoping to get there before Naruto and Kakashi showed up, so that she could have Sasuke all to herself.
“What luck!” she squealed to herself, as Sasuke came into view.
The Uchiha turned and smiled at her. “Sakura, I’m so happy that you’re here,” he said, “There is something I have been wanting to tell you.”
“What is that, Sasuke?” Sakura asked, dreamily.
“Would you want to be my wife?”
Sakura squealed again. “Of course I would,” she said happily, “Of course I would!”
“Sakura….. Sakura… SAKURA!!!:
The pink haired girl turned and glared at the person who dared interrupt her moment with Sasuke….. and saw Kakashi.
“Yo, Sakura, you look kind of out of it…”
“Huh?”
She looked around and realized….. she had been daydreaming again. Damn it. “Just, I will meet you there, Kakashi –sensei,” she said, suddenly feeling depressed, “I forgot something at home.”
The jounin nodded and continued on his way, while Sakura sat on the ground and pouted.

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Sasuke frowned at the sound of annoyingly loud laughter and rolled his eyes at his teammate. Said teammate was laughing and pointing at the Sanin, Jiraiya, who was currently on the ground, blood pouring from his nose. Turns out that the Ninja Harem Jutsu was just too much for the old coot.
“Honestly, you are an idiot,” Sasuke growled, “and you wonder why no one takes you seriously.”
Naruto cocked his head and stared at Sasuke. “But, but, but… it is soooooooo funny!” he said, “I mean, look, he is still babbling and bleeding.”
Sasuke did have to admit it was kind of funny. ‘It would have been funnier if it wasn’t Naruto the old coot was perving over…….. wait, where did that come from?”
“You are still being an idiot.”
Naruto stuck his tongue out at the Uchiha. He was just about to help Jiraiya up when Kakashi arrived. “You’re late,” Sasuke deadpanned.
“Sorry, I had a thought and it ran away with me,” the Jounin said, “Naruto……”
“Kakashi-sensei!” Naruto yelped.
Sasuke watched as Naruto tried to explain why the Sanin was on the ground, barely conscious. He was laughing to himself, barely managing to keep a straight face. Kakashi shook his head, sighed and looked at Sasuke. “What happened?” he asked.
The teen shrugged. “They were already at it when I arrived,” he said.
Kakashi sighed again and knelt next to Jiraiya. “Hey, old man,” he said, “Are you all right?”
The sage sat up slowly and looked around. His eyes lit up when he focused on Naruto, who had moved to stand next to Sasuke. “That was simply amazing,” he said, “I never in my life thought that I could be affected so….. much.”
He grinned at Naruto. “Perhaps you could show me that again, later?” he asked, “I would love to get some pictures.”
Naruto started sputtering, unable to answer. Sasuke growled and walked over to the sage. Glaring, he brought his fist down on the older man’s head. “Quit being such a pervert,” he snapped.
Both Kakashi and Naruto looked incredibly surprised at Sasuke’s reaction. Why the hell was Sasuke defending him? And why does it look like Jiraiya is going to be seriously hurt if he opens his mouth again? Naruto opened his mouth to say something, anything, but Sasuke stopped him. “Naruto, we have training, let’s go.”
He turned quickly and walked towards their normal training grounds. ‘How in the hell does he do that to me?’ he thought, ‘I shouldn’t lose control like that.’
Naruto stared at his friend’s back as he walked away. He then turned to Kakashi, who shrugged. The Copy nin helped Jiraiya up and dusted him off. “Perhaps you should watch who you perv over,” he said, “Who knows what may happen to you next.”
The sage nodded and walked away, mumbling something about a new plot for his novels. Naruto and Kakashi then began to follow Sasuke. They saw Sakura run up to the Uchiha and promptly attach herself to him.
Sasuke glanced down at her, a little put out. He didn’t shrug her off though. “Sakura, do you always have to be that close to me?” he asked.
“Well, we do have to learn how to work in close quarters,” she said, “so, let’s get away from Naruto and Kakashi-sensei for a little while and practice.”
The older teen glared down at her and pulled away roughly. “We are a team,” he said icily, “You have to accept that we all have to work together… that includes Naruto.”
Sakura backed away from him, just as Naruto and Kakashi caught up. She stared at Naruto, a little confused. “What is wrong, Sakura?” Kakashi asked.
Sakura answered, but Naruto didn’t hear. He was too busy listening to the voice in his head. ::Well, kit, you do like him…. A lot….. more than you should a normal friend, ….makes you happy that he shook her off, huh?::
‘Shut up, Kyuubi,’ Naruto snapped at the demon, ‘I don’t need your crap right now.’
::I think that he may like you like that as well… did you see the murder in his eyes when he punched the pervy sage?::
“Naruto?”
Naruto could distantly hear other voices calling to him, but, he ignored them. ‘What do you mean?’
::Well, the fact that he did punch the pervy sage, the look in his eyes and the fact that he can’t meet your eyes right now… hahahaha… I think Sasuke really wants you.::
“NARUTO!!!!!”
“WHAT?”
“Are you all right?” Sakura asked, “You looked really out of it.”
The demon vessel nodded. “Ya, I’m fine Sakura,” he said, “Just thinking about the yummy ramen at Ichiraku.”
Sasuke stared at Naruto for a moment before walking away. He worked studiously at not looking at Naruto, staring past the gates of the village. The other nin left him with a feeling that was becoming unbearable, even though he couldn’t quite place what that feeling was. “Damn it all to hell,” he muttered, “What do I do now?”
“SASUKE-KUN!!!”
Sasuke jumped and turned around, glaring at the owner of the loud voice.

“What do you want, loser?”
“You were staring off into space, which is not normal for you, I thought something was wrong with you,” Naruto said, grinning, “Were you thinking of Sakura?” (said in a singsong voice.)
“NO!”
Naruto laughed and started to walk away. Sasuke steeled his resolve and grabbed the blonde’s arm. “I need to talk to you after practice,” he said.
“All right,” Naruto said slowly, “What’s up?”
“I said ‘after practice’ dumbass,” Sasuke said testily, “I will tell you then, at my place.”
“HEY!, I am NOT a dumbass!!!!”
“Just …grrr, I will tell you after practice.”
The younger teen nodded. Sasuke let him go and they ran to catch up with Kakashi. Sakura glared at Naruto and then looked at Sasuke curiously. “Shit” was all Sasuke said.
During practice, Sakura kept looking over at Sasuke, the same curious look on her face. She seemed to be trying to figure out what Sasuke wanted to talk to Naruto about. Kakashi had to remind her a few times to focus on what she was doing.
::What do you think Sasuke wants to talk to us about?::
Naruto rolled his eyes. ‘He wants to talk to me, you dumb fox.’
::What if he wants to mate with us?::
‘SHUT UP!’
The demon went quiet and Naruto was left to practice in peace.
Kakashi ended practice about an hour early that day, citing that he had to go and read his new book in peace. Sakura rolled her eyes and called him a pervert. She bounced over to Sasuke and smiled at him. “Do you want to come and have dinner at my house?” she asked.
Black eyes focused on her coldly. “Why would I want to do that?”
“I hate to think about you all lonely,” she said, “Besides, my mum always makes plenty.”
“I am busy.”
She pouted, but noticed that he was looking back, not really paying attention to her. “What did you want to talk to Naruto about?”
“Hn.”
“Well, if you change your mind…..” she trailed off.
He ignored her, watching as the blonde knucklehead came bouncing up. Sighing in relief, he nodded to the hyper nin. “Come on,” Sasuke said, “I need to get this out.”
Looking confused, Naruto allowed Sasuke to lead him through the streets of Konoha, to his apartment. The Uchiha avoided all of the major hang out spots. He didn’t want to be responsible for Naruto’s untimely death at the hands of his fangirls.
He hurried Naruto up into a large, lavish building. The blonde gawked at the size of the apartment, jealous for a moment. His apartment could sit inside of the sitting room. “Wow, Sasuke…”
Sasuke smirked and pointed to the couch. “Have a seat,” he said, “Do you want a drink?”
Naruto nodded. “Milk, if you have it please.”
A quick nod and Sasuke vanished into the kitchen. He came back out and handed a glass to the smaller nin. Naruto thanked him and then looked at him. “Hey, Sasuke, why are you being so nice to me?” he asked, “Is something wrong?”
Sasuke thought for a moment, staring at a hand painted picture of his Clan’s home. He was quiet for so long that Naruto started to get worried.
::He is just going to confess his undying love for us::
‘SHUT UP!’
::You would figure you would be nicer to me.::
The blonde growled a little. Sasuke heard the noise and looked at him again. “Are you all right?” he asked.
“I am fine, I am worried about you though,” Naruto said
‘Here goes nothing.’ Sasuke said to himself
“I wanted to know….what you thought of me…”
HUH???
A slow blink and no noise. Sasuke took that as a bad sign.
::I told you Sasuke likes us.::
‘Shut the hell up, you dumb furball!’ Naruto growled back, ‘I seriously doubt that that is what he meant!’
Sasuke watched as Naruto seemingly argued with himself. Shaking his head, he grabbed Naruto and pulled him closer to him. “Naruto, look at me.”
Blue eyes looked up into surprisingly blood red ones. ‘When had he activated his Sharingan?’
The thought quickly flew from Naruto’s head as Sasuke leaned in and kissed him gently. He was surprised, but, chucked all caution out and began to kiss Sasuke back.
::Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke::
Kyuubi started to chant the other teen’s name over and over again, while Naruto placed his arms around Sasuke’s neck, pulling him closer. Strong, pale hands ran slowly up and down Naruto’s back. “Sasuke?” Naruto whispered.
“I have wanted this for a while,” Sasuke said, his face now buried in Naruto’s hair, “I had so many other things on my mind though and I was never sure how to tell you.”
::Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke.::
Naruto was struggling to pay attention to Sasuke, as the chanting continued. Kyuubi noticed he was being ignored and got louder.
‘Shut the fuck up, you stupid fox!’
::Sasuke-kun kissed us.::
‘NO! He kissed me, you overgrown puppy!’
Sasuke stared at Naruto for a moment. “Is something wrong?” he asked.
Naruto laughed, embarrassed. “Not really, I am being distracted by a dumb puppy.”
::I AM NOT A PUPPY!!::
“The demon?”
“Yeah, that thing.”
Red eyes bled back to black. “How is he bothering you?”
Another embarrassed laugh. “You really don’t want to know.”
“Hmmm, all right,” Sasuke breathed and started to kiss Naruto again.
::Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke.::
Naruto moaned softly as the raven kissed his neck. He could feel the lips attacking his neck turn up in a smile. “Wait… Sasuke….”
Black eyes opened and looked up at Naruto. “What’s wrong?”
“I feel the same way about you,” Naruto said, “But, you do know what is going to happen, right… the villagers won’t be all too happy with this.”
A frown appeared and Sasuke shook his head. “I don’t care,” he said, “How can I prove that I don’t care what they think?”
::He could always be the one to tell Sakura that he is off the market.::
‘That would be way too cruel to Sasuke.’
::Would give me a giggle.::
“Just… treat me the same as you are now, in public… that is all I ask.”
Sasuke pushed Naruto onto his back and smirked. “Of course I will….. well, with a few changes,” he said, kissing him again.
“I would ……. Hope….so…” Naruto gasped out.
::Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke.::
The blonde barely registered the chanting as Sasuke began to wreak havoc on his senses. Strong hands slipped underneath his bright orange jacket and shirt, feeling the smooth skin underneath. Naruto’s hands were not idle, exploring the muscles and skin of the other. “Let’s go to my bedroom,” Sasuke whispered.
Naruto could only nod and allowed himself to be led to the back room. He gave a cursory look around the room, but, was interrupted when he was pushed on to the bed. Sasuke knelt over him, leaning forward to kiss him again.
‘Tell me why I haven’t done this before?’
::Because you wanted Sasuke and no one else.::
‘Oh ya.’
“Sasuke, please,” Naruto whimpered, as Sasuke replaced his hands underneath the orange jacket.
“’Please’ what?”
“Too much clothing.”
Sasuke grinned as he removed the orange jacket and undershirt. The skin underneath was warm and he could feel muscles shift as Naruto writhed underneath him, as well as the raised skin of some scars. “Wondering why I haven’t attempted this before,” he said.
“Not…….really……gods…”
Naruto was beyond comprehensive thought as he pulled Sasuke’s shirt off of him. He tossed the dark blue material to the floor, before running his hands over Sasuke’s chest and to the back of his neck. “I want you to be mine,” Sasuke hissed, reaching to remove Naruto’s pants.
“Yes, please……”
A smirk appeared on the raven’s face and he pulled away to remove his own shorts. He was back over the blonde quickly, kissing his way down soft skin, running his tongue around an aroused nipple, then moving to the other. Naruto arched up, fingers digging into the pale skin of his lover. “Sasuke, please!”
Ignoring the plea, Sasuke slowly continued on his way down the tanned body. He reached Naruto’s cock and gave it a long, slow lick, before taking it into his mouth. The blonde could no longer articulate words, just pleading noises, wanting more. “Last chance to back out,” Sasuke said hoarsely, reaching for the lube in his nightstand drawer.
A nod was all Naruto could give him. “Good answer,” came a whisper, before Naruto felt a finger slipping into him.
Trying to ignore the noises his lover was making, Sasuke concentrated on preparing him. As he added another finger, he heard the first gasp of pain and moved up to kiss him. “Relax, my Naruto,” he said, gently, “Just let me take care of you.”
Another nod and Sasuke continued what he was doing. Naruto relaxed until he felt the fingers brush against something within him that made him arch off the bed. “Fuck, Sasuke, do that again,” he gasped.
Sasuke grinned and pulled his fingers out of the tight heat. After quickly slicking himself up, he pulled Naruto’s legs around his waist. “Ready?”
“Yes, hurry up,” he moaned, “I need you.”
Sasuke moaned and pushed slowly into the blonde. Naruto’s fingers dug into the sheets, as he panted for Sasuke to keep going. When he was all the way in, Naruto didn’t even give him a chance to wait. The blonde shifted his hips, trying to get Sasuke to do something.
Sasuke took the hint and began to move slowly in and out of the tight body. Naruto tightened his legs around Sasuke and moved his hips, trying to make Sasuke move faster. Black eyes changed red again and Naruto found himself being pulled upwards, straddling Sasuke He put his arms around the strong neck and held on, whimpering as that same spot was hit each time he moved.
They found release together, Naruto’s fingers digging into Sasuke’s back and Sasuke moaning Naruto’s name. Happily tired, they lay back on the bed, Sasuke holding the blonde close to him. After kissing his lover thoroughly, he pulled a sheet over them. “Thank you, Naruto.”
Naruto looked confused. “For what?”
“Giving me a chance.”
A stupid grin appeared on the blonde’s face. “I love you too,” he said.
“Can you stay here tonight?”
A sleepy nod and a yawn. Sasuke grinned and kissed the blonde’s forehead. “Good night, my love.”
“To you as well.”
::Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke::
‘Shut the fuck up, you stupid fox!’
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