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• The 'Vicious Circles' Saga	By : LadyFlame Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 956 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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• VICIOUS CIRCLES SAGA
  
  BY LADY FLAME

  Yes, I know this is poetry, but it is narrative poetry... please give the story a chance!! Just think of it as a series of drabbles, and if you only read one chapter, then read the third chapter, cause in my opinion that is the best of the three poems written so far!!

  PAIRING: Kakashi/Yondaime
  
  FIRST PUBLISHED: 30 April 2004
  
  AUTHOR'S NOTES: Although this poem can be read on it's own, it is actually the first poem in a series of probably five, which I've named 'The Vicious Circles Saga'. I've completed the first three poems - the second poem is titled 'Now I Am The One', and the third poem is titled 'Eternal Rivals'. Now that we have seen the return of Sasuke in the manga, I shall start writing the final two poems... when I have the time & inclination anyway *lol*

  OH SENSEI

  Oh Sensei, how your closeness makes my heart pound,
  
  As you bend over me to correct my posture.
  
  Oh Sensei, how you make my breath quicken,
  
  As your cheek accidentally brushes against my own.

  Oh Sensei, I love watching your lips move as you dismiss us for the day,
  
  And imagine them against my skin.
  
  Oh Sensei, is your hair really as soft as it looks,
  
  How my fingers itch to touch, to caress.

  Oh Sensei, how I wish you would teach me something more, something primal.
  
  But I know that is not to be...
  
  Oh Sensei, hidden I watched you in the park with your wife.
  
  My heart breaks, for I see you holding hands, stealing kisses

  And I know my beloved Sensei...
  
  That you will never love a boy like me.

  # # # # # # # # # # @ # # # # # # # # # #
  This was written WAY before the Kakashi Gaiden... and at the time when this was written, in my mind I saw a young Kakashi with a huge crush his Sensei, Yondaime, the fourth Hokage; alas it was a one-sided love as the Fourth was too busy making Naruto to notice. :P (Yes, in case you haven't already guessed, I'm a firm believer that Naruto is Yondaime's son!!)

  I will be your friend forever if you go back to the top of the page and click review... feel shy about writing a review, I'll accept 'I like this, it's cool...' :D

  love Cara (aka) Lady Flame
  
  HOT by name, HOT by nature.

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