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for Melek in Olum

by samptra

person Leasan
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When will you update???
I hope you didn't abandon this fic, it's so lovely!!!!!
Please, try to find some time to write!!!!!
I really love it!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No lemony goodness.Why have this as an adult rating?
person Agacissko
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eww...what a fluff..:P i enjoyed your fic until the teddy bear appeared in sasuke thoughts...man, hes a guy, a shinobi for god sake XD in your fic he acts like some pussy..even sakura isnt so "omg!!! teddy bear i love u" oh, and he must be really dumb if he didnt linked naruto with "him" especially after so many hints: shuriken, blue eyes, naruto almost killing messeneger :/ i bet he'll find narutos sword in following chapteraz and he would wonder why "he" keeps his weapon in narutos apatment..oh man i though ke was kinda smart :D da biggest OOC ive ever read lol... idiot Sasuke dreams about geting all the plushies in the world..ugh i see a barbie, or no! i see a ken..i radher dont wanna know what happpen next..u killed me with this plushie idea..anyway i can kinda (only) imagine (lalala) how this fic is gonna end up :/ "oh naruto i luv yaa! -me toooo!! -lets make sweetswteet love!!blablabla"
yea, sorry for nasty review, noone is perfect so m i but regardles major occnes i liked the naruto-hero idea :D finnaly something new! oh, and i like your style :D sometimes u missed keyboard butons and i read the line, than I haf to read it twice XD but ussually it worked heheh. it would be really great if u wrote more stuff like in chapters 1-6 or so :) yea ^^
person Aniko
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...that's it?
THAT'S IT?!
I WAS SO DAMN DRAWN INTO THIS FIC AND YOU ENDED IT! YOU!
yooooooouuuuuuuuu........ =.=
continue...CONTINUE I SAY! ROARS!
i want more naruxsasu action YEAH! >=)
your story rocks...do not EVER discontinue it...=.=
person Naii
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Get on with the story already ! its good but it pisses every one of when a wrighter stopes in full swing of the story an d not say so or do a continuation. please update ASAP.
person Mint
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaahhh ;_; It's so hard to find a good fanfic with an uke-sasuke. And you write ever so lovely as well, so... if you didn't notice, I'm really sad that you haven't updated in a while.

Anyways, I hope you do, 'cause... hm, I'll sell you my soul XD.
Please and thank you - tah!

Mint.
person Laur
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just too good, so please....for the sake of my sanity, continue.
You've put so many wonderful images in my head, im itching to do fanart. I swear.

Er... yeah.

Incredible story, i cant wait for the next chapter!
person Zassmy
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where did you come up with the name Melek in Olum? In Turkish Melek means angel and olum means death. I must admit that's why I read your story, which is awesome by the way!
person Inazuma Ookami
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! The thing is... the paragraphs got a little messed up and it's now difficult to read. I'd hate to see such a great fic get less hits because of something like that. You really should fix it. *nudge*
person bara-aoi
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^__^ i like it!!! I especially love how you've dipicted the older Naruto. And Saskue is so cute, i can't wait for them to get together!

please update soon!!

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