rate_review Reviews

The grammar felt awkward at some points, but the missing of quote marks " " on the start of a few sentences made it almost missed the start of it and it felt hard to read. 

@CuriousWriter: Thanks for your comment, I am not a native English speaker, so to write these stories I have to use online translators. because of the consequences that change my syntax in the translation process.
I appreciate your comment, but I would like you to tell me the things that make my story "hard to read".
 

Kind of hard to read this one. the story idea was good and interest though, still like the Uchiha one bttr. Hope more of that one in the future.