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by c0p13r

person OneRingToLewdThemAll
schedule October 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

lol anon, people aren't shitting on Kiba because Naruto banging his mom is the morally right choice but because most people on this site are just tired of seeing the same uninspired "slutty Kushina/Kushina takes a genin team" prompt playing out the same way and because smut starring Naruto as the main character/"stud" has become so rare it's actually a breath of fresh air when it finally appears. It seems these days 99% of all het fics uploaded to this archive are variations of male characters turning Kushina into a braindead whore to get back at Naruto for x reason. At first it was original and ground-breaking but now it's uninspired and cliche, specially because the focus of the fics shifted from genuine interest in writing smut about Kushina to badly-concealed and mean-spirited attempts to bash Naruto. Like, fuck, these stories put more effort in finding new ways to describe Naruto's suffering than in the sex itself, and that's exactly why they never get more than one chapter. I mean, it's so obvious that once their hate boners for Naruto go down these so called writers realize they didn't put any effort whatsoever in crafting an outline, let alone a full plot, for their fics beyond "Naruto sucks, amirite? lul". There must be at least more than fifty canon female characters in the Naruto series so I really don't understand where this "every story must be a variation of Kushina as the whore, Naruto as the cuck" fixation comes from.

You don't like Naruto as a character? That's fine, everyone has different tastes. But let's not pretend seeing the same shit. posted over and over again isn't a problem. Seems c0p13r is the only author on this site willing to innovate. Try his "There a hole at the hotsprings!" fic if you can. You'll be amazed when you realize Kushina isn't the only MILF worth writing about.

person Siklos88
schedule October 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

There's so many Kushina is a slut stories for Kiba and her genin. I feel like "Stop Teasing Us Sensei" is already the best that concept could ever get. In my opinion, should just stick with Naruto/Kushina stuff, but perhaps I am biased with my mother/son fetish lol. Tsunade being the Sensei is an interesting choice, not sure if you plan on her taking the slut role or not.

Looking forward to more regardless!

person KushinaWhore
schedule October 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Make Kushina a slut. I've been wanting to a rendition of "Stop Teasing Us Sensei" please let that story come to life. With Kiba being Alpha and Naruto being a cuck

schedule October 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Finally... finally we get to see some variety other than the constant Yaoi fest we always get in this website. I mean seriously I can't blame Yaoi authors since they are so dedicated to writing, I wish half of my favorite authors shared that same work ethic.

Anyways I'm in love with this and can't wait to where it heads. I did see the cuck tag so I am assuming that Naruto will be cucked since Kiba and Choji have already been hinted at potentially hooking up with Hinata and Kushina in the ass might I add. I would really like to see Naruto get cucked but please please make it a more slow burn story. Stories like these are thrown away after merely the first chapter. Please dont the motivation and finish the story

person iwannaknowwhatfluffis
schedule October 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

"Finally... finally we get to see some variety other than the constant Yaoi fest we always get in this website. I mean seriously I can't blame Yaoi authors since they are so dedicated to writing, I wish half of my favorite authors shared that same work ethic."    @RiasWaifu  that is because yaoi writers behave like a zealous cult of missionaries. Spamming their stuff is their mentality of "Yaoi must have the most on this site! i dont care if it is quantity over qualtity because I must have my fetish be the overwhelming amount on any site! Yaoi must dominate all asdfghasdglh;kjg". Honestly they have had that mentality in all fandoms for the past 30 years. You can admire their obsessive zealous determination, but that doesnt take away from the fact they are obsessive and zealous who favor quantity over quality just to dominate any website. And that is their top priority, it shows in their behavior and attitude.

Keep up the good work C0p13r! Thanks for the variety.

person Anonymous
schedule October 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Slutty Kushina has always been a personal favorite of fine although I prefer her ending up as a broken sex slave to someone.

person Long time First time
schedule October 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Please don't bottom out! I want you to write part zero of there's a hole in the hotsprings but I also want to read more of this story too! Will Tsunade test Naruto and Kona's stamina personally, will she make them complete against one another for special favors, or will she educate them enough about ninjutsu and how to woe ladies that she try's to make them pick up a drunk Anko and take her to bed or something... I don't know how I came up with that last one but please master give us our cake and let us eat it too!

person Anonymous
schedule October 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Kushina always should be slut

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