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Well, I'm sure as hell looking forward to more of this.

Thumbs Up.

Please tell me you're also posting this in fanfiction(dot)net, its really good

I really like it so far and hope you keep it up.

This was a good read. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Though, I do hope that the rookie genin are far more competent and mature than their canon counterparts.

I also hope that there is a seduction process from either pairing. Take it slow and work your way up to full blow intimacy. Also, mix it up. Don't hesitate to let Naruto or a girl be the aggressor in a seduction.

Until next chapter.