Really great man
Plz update
bro a good story but that cliffhanger was really painful.
please update.
updte please
I liked it a lot, and I want to read another chapter, when will another chapter be released? I need to find out what happens next, will Kushina have affairs with other characters?
please update soon
Wow. That was hot. That cliffhanger was a bummer tho haha. I hope Kushina gets with other man other than Kiba. Preferably an OC character lol
This is amazing. I love Kiba-Kushina, cheating fanfics. If I were to give any advice, I'd just say to be careful of some gramar and punctuation errors; also, be careful not to feel the need to be too specific in some cases (e.g 'over Kiba's right nipple'- over his nipple might have run a bit smoother), it can make the wording seem a little awkward at times. By all means, I dont mean to bash your work. It's just some casual advice I'll throw out there in case you find it helpful :)
Overall, I'm in love with this story. The cliffhanger has left me feeling really impatient haha. Please keep up the hard work! I can't wait to read the rest!
grea,t even if you left it in the best part that cruel :´(
continue like this my friend.
Can you do a scene where while Kiba and Kushina are fucking in her marital bed, Naruto and Tsume are in a love hotel? It's like how an H-manga ended, with two friends who didn't know were banging each other's moms.
HO - LY SHIT, man i need more of this ASAP, really, really good, you are evil dude, with that cliff hanger, i can be patient, for a while lol, i hope you update soon