great chapter, you should update it more often
Keep up the good work!
That was hot. Is Tsunade going to be in this?
Uchiha sasuke is still da man .keep it up bro
Nice chapter. I wonder how you’ll continue with this though. If you’ll have Hinata and Ino added, or maybe add in the older women like Tsunade, Kurenai, and Tsume. Or go to other villages. Update soon
Great chapter my buddy can't wait for more!!!!
Hinata next !
Stylistically this feels like a blend of Naruto's Fetish, In the Manor, and The Lone Wanderer. We get the cuck themes, the grittier political angle, and the mass harem. It's probably my ideal story and it's a shame it hasn't gotten the love it deserves. That said, I don't mind that it hasn't been updated in a while because that means you probably don't have a lot of hard sketches for it and my input might actually change things.
Anyway good chapter. You went balls deep in things right off with Sasuke having conquered his first woman. It undercuts Temari's character arc but it gives a good hook to get us readers interested right away. And you can always come back around to her later to develop her if you want to make Realpolitik a bit more in depth in the way you're handling In The Manor and The Lone Wanderer's Remaster.
Going forward though, I know the next few chapters focus on Karui. And that's fine I don't mind. But if I can make a suggestion - as soon as Karui is done, you should shift right to Hanabi. I'm not saying that solely from a fanboy perspective but I think it makes the most sense. Assuming this is roughly Boruto canon, then it's Hanabi and not Hinata is that the Head of the Hyuuga. That makes her a target on her own.
And what do we know about Hanabi in Boruto? She shows no sign of a boyfriend or ever having been married, and she directs all her maternal instincts at Boruto and Himawari. Assuming you mean to keep this vaguely compliant with Boruto as the years go by in the story, then Sasuke getting to her before any other man does and breaking into her womb/heart would very neatly explain why she seems to have no romantic inclinations of her own. Simply put she has no desire for anyone else, and she has no pre-existing attachments like Ino (who is at least dating Sai) would.
Sasuke is actually pretty amusingly and surprisngly mysogynistic. I'm not complaining about it. Honestly, it's a realistic character flaw and one he should have considering the premise of this story and his general personality. I mean he's a complete and total sex god, so him labelling Karui a slut like all the others fits.
Anyway beyond that, I've said it before that I enjoy the fact the Karui got away. It's proof that Sasuke isn't totally infalliable even if he wins in the end.
I also really enjoyed Temari in this chapter and in the last one. She's been getting a lot of detail and the way she's developing is endearing her to me. She's nothing less than a ever more loyal cumslut, and they way she rationalizes that devotion in her head and the feelings she goes through as she does it makes her enjoyable for me. It tickles my personal preferences even if she's not best girl.
That note about Shikadai made me think though. When exactly along the timeline is this? I mean, it can't be that far since even if he's born Sasuke and Sakura aren't even truly together, so Sarada hasn't been born either. Which is fair, especially if you diverge it to the point she's never born. I wouldn't complain about tht.
Speaking of children though, more breeding plox and lolz. Most of the time it's pretty inarguabe that Sasuke can't get a woman pregnant. It's one thing if he impregnates a single woman like Tsume or even a widow like Kurenai but a total clusterfuck if he does it to someone like Temari. That would actually be extremely interesting to read. I mean on the one hand, if Shikamaru dies at some point then it would be odd but not illegal by any meams for Sasuke to decide to get Temari pregnant (or at least stop caring if she does).
...and if Temari does get pregnant but Shikamaru is still alive, you have a pretty dark storyline you can get into. Does Sasuke push her to abort the child to keep their secret? Does she divorce Shikamaru and move into seclusion so that no one realizes she was having an affair and then fudge the dates of her new baby's birth? Does Sasuke becomes so coldly possessive to the point that he arranges Shikamaru's death himself to protect the future of the Uchiha clan?
Man Sasuke is a real tyrannical asshole, heh. I think that he's gambling with fire here running out on Karui like that. Yes, it soothes his ego but he also gave up a very easy chance to conquer her. She was giving him access to her ass, and he could damn well force her to moan out of sheer skill. Giving into his pride like this is taking a risk comparatively that she might scrabble her own pride back up and refuse him totally. I wonder if that recklessness might eventually come back to bite him in the ass.
That said, I also noticed you've got Sarada puttering around. Which is fair but I don't know when in the timeline this is. It's can't be Boruto start since she seems to be young and you mentioned that Sasuke and Sakura are only sex friends in the last chapter when Sasuke and Karui were talking.