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for An Awakening

by BigE2955

person Anon
schedule October 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You are a disgusting pos.

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Maybe it's a bit odd of me, but I enjoyed the Satsuki blowjob more than the Mikoto sex. They're both incesty, but the first is a lot more innocent. Mikoto is basically a blown out whore already, so there's not as much impact. Plus the whole dead thing.

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That scene where he just slaps his dick on the table - gets me every fucking time. Kek.

Oh Kushina, you minx. She's not really one of my favourites, but the way you write her here has me practically bouncing in place waiting for her scenes.

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The mention of Shisui sent me on a tangent. Realistically, Sasuke and the girls can't keep this a secret forever. Especially from Fugaku considering they live together. Are you going to have them get found out? Because that would be some real drama shit bro. It's not like Shisui and Fugaku can just be dicked into submission, and incubus or not incest is still incest. Will they get thrown out of the house for it because they refuse to stop?

Very interested in what might occur. Please don't gloss over it as 'different standards incest is okay', and please don't make it just NOT happen.

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Satsuki is so earnest and cute she reminds me of Himawari. Her scenes are always great to read. That said... she's not really that stupid, is she? Sheltered is one thing, but being so bubble headed and ignorant is kind of sad. It's like taking advantage of a kid.

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

" Kushina grinned at him - a distinctly odd look, considering her mouth was jammed full of the monster he called his cock, "

You son of a bitch. YOU JUST HAD TO DO IT DIDN'T YOU

schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is a really satisfying story. It is slow but that also means there is alot of good development and longevity for the scenes. I look forwards to more of everyone, especially Kushina and maybe Kurenai later on. Thanks for the amazing erotica.

person ElChapo
schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ehhh lol. Can't really get on board with the idea of a female Itachi. But that's just me lol. Everything else is pretty nice lol. That shit with Kushina and Ino was hot as fuck. Hope to see more of Mikoto around soon and I definitely wouldn't mind Tsunade joining the fray lol. I like how this Sasuke contrasts to how you normally portray him. While I greatly enjoy that form of Sasuke just as much as this, it's refreshing to see him so inexpirenced lol. Great chapter bro. Hope you update soon.

person Anonymous
schedule October 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'd like to see spotlight get an update, the premise seemed interesting enough.

person yukio
schedule October 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Dude, plz update Loveless!!!

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