rate_review Reviews

I understand that this is most likely just a prologe chapter and you're just setting the direction of the story but it wwould be nice if things were a little more fleshed out/descriptive then they are right now otherwise great story so far can't wait to see how it progesses.

please have Jiraiya take a turn!!!

I hope the grammar is better in the future chapter .

just found this story and its different. looking forward to see what happens in the next chap.