rate_review Reviews

This is a step up on your earlier works. Even though I know it's dead in the water, I liked how you approached the smut viscerally. There's actual force in the words I guess you could say, rather than Sasuke simply saying he was forceful.

Now this was a good chapter. I really like this story. Interesting new girls and a penchant for complete filthy dominance. I really wish it hadn't been abandoned.

Ahh, that was clever. Quite a bit of dubious consent there to trick her like that. Still, it was a good shot. I hope if you ever do come back that escalates. Tricking is all well and good but there's nothing quite like a good old fashion rape mindbreak.

Someone's been busy.

It was a pleasure to work with you on this.