rate_review Reviews

The sex scene is written well. I'm a fan of degrading insults and rough sex so this is up my alley. But overall, it feels a little weak compared to Konoha Defiled. Maybe it's the abrupt plot or something about the her stream of consciousness that just isn't quite as good. Still good, but I like your other story more.

I have to say it was good kind of wish it was a little longer but still it was good. cant wait to see if there a chap 2 of this and what else temari will get into?