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January 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you on this question. but many people write about Naruto and his harem. it is frankly boring. I want to change.
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January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is like almost every other Sasuke/Kushina fic out there. Please, try to be a little original.
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January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely not like all the other Sasuke x Kushina stories. Which of those stories have lines like "She can peesing"?
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January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
author probably has some serious issues with naruto or sasuke or both of them
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January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry if this sounds rude but can you get a beta reader or something please? It looks like a good story but the grammar, weird sentences and poor spelling make it hard to enjoy.
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January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see the next chapter
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January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story man, I like the concept of it, I would like to read more of it. My only opinion I like to add to this if you write the next chapter can it maybe be where there in the house instead I think that would be an interesting scene.