Hey man, not sure if you even bother to check this anymore, or when the last time you posted a chapter was, but I gotta say I love this story line. The plot (Yeah I am actually talking about the plot) was a little hard to follow at first, but then I saw the bit about that being on purpose. Either way, a great read. The lemon is good for sure, but the underlying godly value of Naruto is pretty epic. Stopping a Susano'o with a single finger? Takes balls of friggin vibranium or some shit. Andromeda galaxy sized vibranium balls. Good story, honestly don't see why you don't get more reviews.
Please come back there's too much sasuke dick riding going on
Amazing story dude, come back soon
This is some good stuff right here I must say. I hope you update it soon m8, cheers
I REALLY hope you weren't killed or anything... (You did mention "real" Jamaica and its crime)
You need to write the chapter showing Naruto impregnating Tsunade and maybe every other kid he's conceived throughout the village.
hopefully Bolt is less of a bitch in this story. Considering he acted the way he did since he was a huge mama's boy and Naruto was sorta busy as Hokage, I can understand he was a little... dissaspointed that Naruto didn't spend time with his wife.
Now, on the other hand, Naruto frequently fucks Hinata and almost every other Konoichi and has impregnated most of those said women... So yea, either Bolt is less spoilt/bitchy, he's in fact a SHE in this story, OR he's just completely emascualted or something :p
Even though it's been a while since you last updated this story i hope you'll come back to it, i know it's mostly porn but i'm really intrigued by how it will end for konoha and the world since no one tries to stop Naruto and no women seems willing to resist.
It's quite a conundrum honestly ^^ they need to be strong to resist him physically but the stronger they are the more they want him.... talk about being fucked hahaha
it's a pretty (very) good story! I hope you'll make more!
Really hot story, very good writing. I did kind of think wtf at Sarada Uchiha - timeline is a bit confusing. It doesn't seem like Sakura was pregnant when Naruto beat Sasuke in their fight, so it's hard to see how she had a kid with Sasuke afterwards.
this fic is absolutely awesome! i love it, i also thank you for being helpful enough to add a timeline in :)