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update soon please thank you

that was nice^^ I liked the konversation with the double meanings^^ Can't wait to see how they will react when they find out he is blind^^ See you again soon!!!

Stop spamming Yaoi stories i don't have anything against gay people but i don't want to read about them

lol Naruto questioning Kakashi.

One thing about your stories though... Naruto is so skilled and powerful at ridiculously young ages. It's like his life stinks but his skills and talent are overwhelmingly easy. It makes it seem that things will always go his way in battle so there isn't really any tension when reading about his fights because of course he will easily win. It's like when you watch a battle in a movie... the viewer is tense and into it because there is the possibility that someone might be hurt or killed or they will have a major setback that with set up the next problem in the story. All the tension in your stories focus on the relationship issues between Naruto and those around him but the fighting scenes do not have much. Just something to keep in mind as you plan out more scenes. I look forward to seeing your writing develop.

A very authorative Naruto? I like that. This story has a lot of promise. I'm liking it.

nice new story!!! I like handikaped thig^^ Can't wai to see were you are going with this!!!!

next chapter please

Can't wait to see how he gets involved with Kakashi.

Yet another great fanfic. I just love it. The only problem I can't decide whitch story I like best. They're all so good!

I agree with Misatos Pen Pen. Kakashi and Naruto would be a mmm- mmm! Yummy.