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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Goodness this is just too good. Nice family Naruto haves...not. Oh I would have slapped her back. How dare they try to force poor Naruto to go with them. Glad that he was prepared.I wonder what he's gonna do. Whatever it is , its gonna be good! And the evil laughter, perfect.
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June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really nice^^ Thanks for the post!!!
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh I wasn't going to rwad this, but I changed my mind. Glad I did. This sounds promising ,Naruto with some pretty cool bloodlines. Nice.
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! He must have been desprate to let Orohimaru and the others know what he discovered . He could've killrd himself! I think this occ Orochimaru and Danzo are pretty cool,I like it.
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I decided to read this. Its very good. The way Naruto comes off as a weak and dumb ninja when he's really strong and smart. Brilliant!
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June 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!! I like the naruto almost killing himself part^^ So in this story his family is again the evil one!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next^^ See you again!!!
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June 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok I really don't get the end of this chapter^^ But I guess that was your intention^^ I'm not sure if I like the oocness of Danzo and Orochimaru in this story but I will try to keep an open mind and I will wait for more!!! See you again soon!!!